【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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. B) k7 O& F( W8 I( cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% ^" E  A# N, w  t% oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
+ ]5 w5 g  u) N4 Y- T; N) j* A深藏在我心底的那句
0 s0 v1 L. S- e6 }& L0 v2 A9 G我愛你  

: k  G5 g1 @, N, E/ T" i5 O" ^8 ~3 PFrom the first moment we met,
0 o  _2 f9 o0 C) J$ _5 M# G# y8 y9 HI already loved you with all my heart
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7 O3 b$ ^, V2 d6 R# [! D在遇見你的第一刻
/ |- G1 F: p$ }5 {, V+ s4 ]# x你已經深深的佔領了
5 H* M: m# x# E* _. B; P我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
, _! S; |, ^- m/ }' Y  xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
2 c: M( n$ P* I8 F3 R還是不能肯定你的心意
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( |: G( [& B3 F+ @5 K, YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  _: M9 a+ H& T$ U7 z凝視著你的眼
1 c% i1 X0 y2 w/ x2 ?搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
5 c% R! k" a: D% B" }* }你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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2 Q8 N% E! h8 C5 P' j愛  簡單的一句愛
! t* y: q7 I0 c6 `# K為什麼
4 i4 N5 ]7 M: v" l3 Z4 E, Y如此難以表白?
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: h9 T& J  e6 [* c5 u- m( u, {7 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 Q; q$ m$ y# {也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

$ Q) h0 @5 k7 z! A" Y% XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
+ w. L% N  o. @  M% N讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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) m0 E& K5 r' H6 c& x: l不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
; f" u6 L# N. ~" a/ g托付我的愛
- e7 X4 t0 h; R% @收在你心裡
( D) F4 [; n% I
Love… just the word love
: k3 f% q( M' E/ E9 ^, x+ O1 \- IWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
0 S$ k1 i9 y+ c為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
7 q. S: l) ~2 L( m8 f卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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  S4 n( ]2 e8 w; |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
2 N8 P! u3 t& d; m  a( H讓我向你表白
4 Y2 Y  [* p' C, N/ a2 I% U我心底的秘密

0 r1 _- {, b8 _0 a* OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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0 j! [( Q, D& E: ^5 xCan I entrust it to you?
) r- }, w. D( K- HEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
2 h: |$ r3 i$ P# v4 z收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
# R, l1 f* l$ D% ~  Q, qEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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7 q, l3 b, X! R" D8 m对唱曲参赛译稿
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/ l. J9 A4 I8 c( X' Y) E' \The moonlight is shining brightly,
  r! |2 y# B$ D; kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

+ \% `5 `( I7 M- _0 O皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
  q1 ?! g( T) c. v凝視著星空
: j# j# Z& q; ?- Q6 v& L/ n我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- a, p7 [. k7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
8 ]+ L2 [/ I& t5 H- `5 P+ s% t+ w月夜陪著我一起沉醉
' Z3 P% i& w3 A6 o7 c& k月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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7 q' r8 D* l4 j( _It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

& j1 A7 D. Y0 T我心卻充斥著憂鬱
6 U6 J3 f  T9 X: ~- [, C$ W害怕我們的愛
9 M$ B* u) @) @8 a! e; b+ s終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
! X; ^3 |5 |0 t# H* @) wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
6 \( f* w& D! e3 U5 ~, _% k2 p堅定不渝
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8 G8 \0 B: k$ L) h. I- ]% U; OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
# u" U: W4 n# h9 P2 Y我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

# ]6 C. {' Z# [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

; U- k! L/ C4 g. m: U我的愛 全心全意
9 J8 R; X! O  ^; k" v. S你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

8 R$ J5 x; n: FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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$ ?8 m5 Q/ `5 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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3 d2 G1 Q5 A4 I% C5 HI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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% n8 J2 A. D! X' c7 v7 A% x0 KI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

  N: x" ~/ e) J4 c2 T( U4 }我歡迎你將它打開
' m5 |' a) a, N9 t6 A我願意用生命
- ~$ ?  ?& C. o來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
+ U, O  P9 V4 f& K/ Y8 L/ }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

. @1 c- I5 _  S1 f. T我依然滿心憂鬱
/ K/ r, b- n' V2 k* X: a% \你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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7 F3 J; [) X* k5 T/ m7 rI regret not dying
2 e3 b6 K- r' M$ |+ j" W% G9 RI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
. N# h6 i3 b2 q; Z( N我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
. g; m: A" S8 N! i; Y+ E你的言語都跟不上
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, J. B: W/ f) _& nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
6 l6 e* N4 J; B  L+ K我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
1 b/ y9 \  h' \1 Z: f9 I9 h; ~! N愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒