【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, p, R6 x: K6 w; T! ]2 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 D3 U; e% a! z! h8 P+ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
( f  E4 _3 O& VWith the moon kissing it every night
5 h, I: @' T, H* ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ V; I2 U: F& `# p4 J8 e- S6 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: f' a* r4 d1 T* GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) F/ D2 j7 Q8 v3 e3 N; wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 h% G7 A+ V  x9 w8 J. |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 c: c1 T$ Z! R3 A+ i6 x* F  t, BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 K( f; I4 ^& u) ^% }3 G4 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- [, |. l' u2 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 k% v8 g+ b$ a* v0 s# f. g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ k* j1 j8 _( d+ L7 j+ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* A( d+ n1 |- R) V8 M$ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 T4 c8 A/ r2 [7 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 x$ u3 f& Z$ K: D# G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 G) t, j% V2 t* U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 X$ S3 N4 B( A& D% K. h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' m; |  B* ^3 I0 k! e) F0 I5 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& R) e3 W1 A: E! {  S8 r0 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) z7 q% e+ K1 f$ {; [, O5 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: f6 {( U7 a# h- O4 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" J  r& y/ i  B% B$ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 K7 s; \" b# {5 C7 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 K' v6 D: Z+ Q) r0 e$ V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, U$ D# I; o1 A& Q* p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 w, E8 e: p1 K, |5 K. O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ~& a9 X0 R! k3 n( s$ ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 B% K* V& a, L' t/ e- d) M3 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ x5 J( K1 {* e5 z2 [! S. o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' k" t3 C' m3 B  H4 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" K+ {( u! T' c( ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 X2 ?1 Q( I  A( z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 ?" B. d$ B: |/ Y! h5 `/ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m8 R; U1 ~) G+ N( E! W  V- j. r& N, [<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 p% E1 E  I, J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# c  _3 R5 r" a7 t9 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Q+ o, d* g1 d. k/ {; Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# |; e# u: X8 ^. s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ v5 s2 z3 q4 k0 D" _$ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>