【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 W' L# k& h* P' i: }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* d& c# T1 B5 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) D1 B1 {: |6 w1 r+ p, a, [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ i! F8 q' j: t2 L9 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( D# q# @  \5 s1 Z# V7 o- FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 c$ h9 y9 e+ T- u0 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 g# p' J5 n! \. e! ?! A! yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 r" z8 j3 D& ]6 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: s, Y8 s; N$ a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) B# M% G! T- {% c, B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 E0 l5 y- f+ e1 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 a/ N9 d  M. R$ E3 d, ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# N+ L7 s6 ?% g- b0 }  R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- y& U/ r, ^( @6 {" n/ X) \1 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 f8 d( ^9 x9 p: L' c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- B' I) _* v2 G/ b3 m2 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. M, t) N# S  V5 e; _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& y/ U; c7 H  G! N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" D. ^+ c; r# b+ a. ~( h& E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! r; M/ b* D, w* O2 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- p9 O, f" n) m" Q- M8 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# K- v' i' c* l4 A# b1 g% I+ L& N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* c3 O4 \  z8 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 o* t7 O4 R  z) Y1 j1 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 u& h3 ~0 l7 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* X! B9 ?. B! x9 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Z. B0 f) P. g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  M) V$ |+ ^/ O) |; H6 R( g2 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# U8 a. K9 N& n" k5 O! b& Z  e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 o  C  S2 L. ^: K1 m! s( r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 {' Z4 J! @/ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- l% t, }( ]' h; B0 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>