【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 c- z# G! @: L: CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' x* Z; s( H2 |  V- rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% c3 R9 P4 H) ?2 F6 C2 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 V3 \6 a2 F% _2 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 g3 B3 O- b4 _( u4 C" QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: P* t% d5 N) d0 ENothing can compare to my love
% o( h# P& N6 Z# p3 h/ l6 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: x9 S0 B* e3 t% x  Z+ tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% X! _0 L1 P/ P# A1 ^! iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ w  |; ?2 W& Z* `/ GI’m still filled with fear
1 n; |9 }0 o+ m( G2 m0 `3 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x$ g& C5 ~/ o' w1 UI regret not dying
( n( D" b3 S+ k) XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 U1 @% a4 f4 R4 |$ x- XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ~" B& J) a- `4 ^+ Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# A" }( }( ?. U" O& a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 w5 S! A. j$ ], u" o0 Z8 C$ f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! o, s! [2 {- V7 _: ~5 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 C+ M) j/ `0 P/ r$ l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! x4 m3 i# E$ w6 E, n1 y' U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- o; R; v. _: y( S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 m' ~! z/ e6 R7 v* K8 O( j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% I+ V- [3 X# }0 S' e; b) \$ O- G+ X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  X  k1 m$ \$ \& {+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# T9 t8 Z( U0 {7 q  a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 o4 {7 q5 w6 s" m# Q- p$ M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M9 d6 q9 G1 R% J3 s" p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 Z9 K) v3 I7 u, `0 {# i3 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( r2 B, u  ^9 ]$ H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 [8 p; J* ]8 J9 L7 H3 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( l2 E6 ^2 @; w' W( g7 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 [4 c7 E$ [" w) x: h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" a" b. n% j( g8 [  u/ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% F8 u! q9 P+ w0 [  c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ h% a  {* G& G1 z' Y& k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ J' f# a3 t! f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 O6 o# ]2 ]% Q" I8 K! t2 T$ i& n7 M6 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# b% f2 p  U% b& q& y4 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 s' M! p' ^0 Z* E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 A5 u/ S, Y, U# X" w2 J+ T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ K+ n; J+ q) I1 R3 C4 e, V5 p9 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 r; b7 J# Q8 Y# v/ B0 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& B7 W( ?% j& s% ]' l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  u# s# c4 n4 W0 B6 x) ]3 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>