【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# t& Z; q1 I0 ]1 C: M, {: R) n5 E歌词我附在后面。
- G5 c) `5 w$ lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ P4 ?/ M, B0 X* S& f* XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 x5 D+ r/ i% m/ z* k) C" KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 y- h6 n# t# O4 h  n, G, NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 t' b- S; r' c7 E/ S1 o6 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- H, G1 g4 b$ qI really want to know just how much you love me
  n/ v- S9 V# \& aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 |9 K8 R. P- B' H% G- H( nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% E( c# g9 _8 ~9 JWith such a tongue as yours,
6 \# e4 p( l$ j  v& ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 [  n' u' A' b$ AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 P- i' I. w8 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* q& J1 p9 D+ ]1 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 f2 z6 \+ K! H6 N1 t8 F- C- u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; o# e, k, {/ q8 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 r- K+ R) Y$ P9 K& D2 w; G# ]2 v, n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 w  G5 B7 _+ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' i& u1 d' b; X8 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) t4 D2 T+ T; [2 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: E' x! y  d. j' G' s; X3 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, O' ?0 Q$ @' Z$ Y, v/ y+ K+ s) _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( S6 b/ |/ s) s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ S+ }1 f4 }5 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 F% e! [7 e6 h% @& \: u7 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# n! D# [( ?5 |3 e. _8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 D1 ?! i! J- F! O/ \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Z! X! p0 M8 m  B+ a' v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  V& Q# O+ k/ K% Z5 G9 r( w$ _( `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ]  I4 [8 T7 I9 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- R$ B1 N7 x: V! w  N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: T2 [0 w- k8 E: B3 P( c- B. n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 k1 N1 W! o& s5 M; R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# _" }9 q3 a; T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' H+ N% p! v0 J# e( `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& P% y2 u) u  T) J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ~2 }4 v& ?! F7 k1 q: H8 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# C3 U+ G" @1 L) \, Y' |( [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 k" e3 L# G; v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# V% G1 r2 V2 m$ y' `3 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: G9 @2 X* ], `; ?( Q3 n* K" E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( o' E# E; w2 Q2 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: i" z4 ?" ?7 X- ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>