【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 t* A/ n! o. X5 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ S0 K8 ?" @& F1 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 J4 a  A1 ~& ]5 R! q! A4 d) M9 z7 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" i3 g' r$ d, \* z; o; bWith the moon kissing it every night
2 E! J, v3 u& S7 \, {% ?% ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 v8 f& B" s; ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: i" c$ o+ j. F; KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 k% N" A2 l1 E0 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# l4 v* Q# _% r& C$ i2 E( d; I5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 w& `5 j. q/ q, a1 K  t& n  a4 ~I regret not dying
9 p4 G  v% D" g' D. t' f8 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 {& K# b: Z/ d1 {. ^. j6 CWith such a tongue as yours,
: _4 \, h8 Z' T! a0 J3 _( kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 u0 e/ j' m+ p9 ~, e; PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' w( a  y# |# P3 @* T8 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( l9 F' l; \4 _0 Y# e7 f. J4 k5 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ I2 O  p  Y  X7 x  m1 g0 e! Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  R2 s6 q5 t* r' R, r) o: ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 y0 |8 S  A- B: Q- v* L' p2 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  J1 b- t: h; I# x8 p' ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 f3 u; u4 I: A- Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 E6 J8 s  w, [- u2 L- y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) a3 w  G# K, g; ]4 u) M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 F3 K9 [' U# T6 s: y. U$ R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 a4 @1 [1 k4 W- [<P>你无需担心</P>
" v( Y( f* U2 M& n) K$ o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 P: w. h2 Z) `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 L% M3 k& b6 w# z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, [) j4 ]% X( s" i8 O  S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& E8 A2 W+ ?8 u3 C. Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) l. ~2 B3 m; o& \. Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: w* W" L! J* A6 o4 H% S  J+ ~0 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) Q5 e, A: b; E% w( u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' \) \6 K. X% D9 w. Q4 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 z$ I2 M4 r( y$ N0 g$ |$ i- ]/ J+ U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 k, Z: Z1 C/ G1 T( M$ H: E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, r- C1 ?2 w9 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ u( Q) h+ j5 u, A! ]2 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ p# C) h' ?. e, B2 ?0 u) q# L/ i! _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# h/ x2 v4 p1 w" j1 P0 x1 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ W0 {2 e7 I! s" K" w<P>I regret not dying</P>
! O9 J" f6 _. L/ t# W' s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 E. Y6 f) @, I3 Z, }, |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: O4 J; n; q0 ?/ Y' T7 d6 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: s4 v  f' b; P* d; Z1 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  U3 G' a1 ~/ z% b$ n- j& h0 ^6 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  y1 {# w& N% C% x3 U( l6 t( i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( p6 Z( g& Q- n' w2 N2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& q/ _8 ^( v& J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% h: e8 ]2 z2 a8 A+ B. Z, q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>