【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \* C$ M: H8 O+ C; u1 [0 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 A5 {  r% P/ VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 @+ ~* a% N! j! k2 J6 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: s: m3 [$ q. K  }/ E3 }% UI love you I love you with all my heart
% R/ R, S& N- M* J& ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* Y. g/ _" L, j/ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 z- v1 t$ I" b( B/ f* t  nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: b4 A" A  l* P4 i, c" hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* G  t1 g, N) |- G* |' \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ]! Q( N/ X( g) kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. @! Q" s3 d8 P7 w; q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ I' e, O' f0 s/ n" A% v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ k/ c0 a8 h( b) A/ I2 X, _* j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Z  x8 f; g) q( ^, ?9 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 h* {9 n, e0 G/ t4 ~8 [0 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ L: Z# \% p# N% J2 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: i* ?! y: K% _' U: B; W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: |; b& O4 Q9 Y1 t4 n* g% W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& b+ V( c" G: O$ K" z/ d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 C# [9 J) H( b, u6 \  [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 E6 s3 J( Q2 b3 ?  \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 H% L  Z) f4 P6 l  I8 ^9 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 V, L0 x+ n0 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ Z. g* U5 n6 |- A) G3 j# V9 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ t' |4 X: f. C8 `1 x. y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ L( J9 q, c; l# \2 i! N* n) X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  _. {& `0 O- `6 h( u! e! y6 i/ s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 C# g- w" Y" M4 Y6 s& v/ A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 k; P' l! ?" V, V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ j2 `2 p5 ~! j  s2 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# q2 g8 X$ C. _! [) E# f& h' Y' }0 P( {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ]$ s: E$ [9 r& k; |: z8 U& |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) W9 w: Y$ g7 z4 B/ \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" k' d' E; S7 H  d* Y( m% V) H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ E$ y, P# ]2 a/ t, j3 ^( ?) t- i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  B; H9 O# n! Q- ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 a4 g% m* B9 \2 j) A5 ^( N+ R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 [' D$ T; W1 Z( d% S/ y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# E0 V) t7 N& T+ R! F5 ~* c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 u, S* W- A' k: q9 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; O2 b0 }' V3 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, P+ E  [/ x; R0 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) p, @. a6 @6 G& r" S3 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, T# V+ Y5 T. ?4 g7 S* q5 L/ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 v. Q/ C- K1 J9 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; d& `) B" S. k, {# n! ^! G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 s- A* G4 C9 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>