【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: Q, ^/ H1 g  b7 r" fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% Q- D- y$ r$ R, A8 T( q' K) BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! K: U0 R# O7 ~# B- [" aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 T# ^1 I/ ]/ J' j' A6 p( xNothing can compare to my love
: i, i0 X, ^) @. H# k/ M+ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& A, a& H: ~+ U  u- t# w( ]; v9 o6 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! S6 e+ {- U) m) qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; @% t; D0 d2 l- d) U, ?& j" gI’m still filled with fear
' P# ?% e3 @+ u* KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; ]5 o5 h  ^% {2 K9 ?. ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ ?$ A' f; ~& K: mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 I, ?) v& ?/ URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! l$ A1 h: I+ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. p( a. `, @. H5 s& S0 O# l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ u4 c' f6 [' x! D* W# `2 f% j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ a5 V. ?9 P5 A9 q. }+ q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" i+ i0 v. q0 w4 c8 G1 L* h& f) s/ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" K3 e6 W1 F+ m% a, K2 t9 g3 B; K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 J. `1 _" ~0 l4 y0 K9 l7 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. W+ j/ n2 Y) p% t3 ]5 I2 p# t: X- P) L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! h0 M: B9 P. Q% d- |3 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- U* V% L! p% q9 N7 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 y/ y% w" {2 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 k! t+ W+ H. \3 g7 I# M  q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 |  ~+ A4 R0 D$ f, E9 X2 a0 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ c2 h& C% H$ a) j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 y1 V: x9 ]. L7 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 ^9 D: n8 g, S( o+ e. J0 `* h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ Y1 {, q& q$ {- M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# G4 h. w* g2 P# U9 d9 W6 r$ t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! _* j+ v6 f9 r! Z5 V: ~& k" }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ^) V8 U  Z' V; H( s1 c2 ^2 g: m4 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* K9 Y3 x& C& `' N# C6 u+ w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: E6 t- y, o/ X! ]1 @+ X, @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! Z2 J8 \8 G, X% a0 j$ J  x/ f1 d* I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: c9 o/ I0 z) n" U2 K; r& i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  ~3 o: }: v/ L' ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ w* [* L; q# ]) F2 m$ |: G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ^% Y4 ~8 U8 M5 D# ~) @; u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 }" ]# E" |) G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>