【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- |5 S& G6 K9 x* b1 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
. i- X2 c) a' U  k/ }  CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- o3 V' Y+ C4 f& K) Y  J) v" d3 F$ C+ FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ i% @* j% z, J' ^  P: h8 l1 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) [% q, N( K: `( DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- ]# }0 [  z- O% D4 R+ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* S3 q9 y% Y) v. M3 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- F; w+ ^) D3 b5 N, i8 q) U  jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 s3 X' w2 \/ e' `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: I  X# E2 u& D- ^4 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ o# `$ i. u% U/ tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 v. h: |7 [0 ?* x/ M1 fI regret not dying
& |; n6 W5 {, F0 M4 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 c2 G6 K7 \4 g- W( URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 |; x" u6 G3 N$ K* {$ c! f9 o$ a2 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ [7 R: t% c  k2 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ T4 J7 C' v3 p$ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# t0 j; W& O6 ]/ p* f% G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ q, j" R4 e! [7 g8 N* I8 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 Z6 ]# h" H2 r  r: M4 Q1 m8 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 c' p% G# v: H+ C8 L% L: y' M# m. v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 x3 A# O( I/ _9 T/ x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 ~1 r, Z9 z% I( }. U6 R1 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# P4 y+ X  x$ O% ?) S& s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: R8 Z# }5 ]7 a& D- {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ W- U: I  K% v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( v' s# [& x& J5 X* G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! W8 d9 @9 i1 x1 U8 L/ I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( v4 R. J' s  v/ j( n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: e% F6 ?7 R: c" g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% P/ p: D% ^6 l6 U2 V7 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" }  ^& }6 Y3 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" p; T: _; T- Z. M! }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 v. K- v, k  A9 u3 H0 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 K+ w8 {# [, Y# D$ O% j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" [9 p8 V1 Z4 N( l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ~8 n, f( {$ A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 E/ _9 U% x, b1 u+ m7 w2 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>