【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( R2 \# H+ _) j歌词我附在后面。
8 i& h  e) J2 D; NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, D/ J6 E* S9 V& |& b4 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 b3 g+ y2 R  J9 S/ kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 k& Q# d* r0 i( P" b1 G9 M: G4 V- oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 P" N" ~( H: h6 Z/ PEvery other word you utter is love
( s) t4 D! A3 c8 h) o0 N6 `  H' II really want to know just how much you love me
, i# V3 ?7 `  P* ?4 f. {$ T5 O+ d9 O7 mI love you I love you with all my heart
6 e; d7 J0 H3 p1 |, FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 r8 N6 r4 w2 b% P# ^7 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 O& J% q  A) N; A( GI’m still filled with fear
9 ?6 M6 x- D! E! KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, ^2 v: n  N  Q* _( Z1 P3 KI regret not dying
( V0 _+ w% H$ |4 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ }( J- v  H' i" {; Q, zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  b, c5 {# F3 M1 G: pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ]5 E2 N6 z$ J! P; a9 j6 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 l$ N' b( r% X( d, |1 s+ P# ]3 W8 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( |" f2 ^: U; T' C3 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 p6 d9 T& Z/ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. K* W4 y* m" j! M' _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 M0 C4 v1 a7 n. _: M* A8 P" R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 x$ s2 A( ~/ {" s6 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 v8 W2 a4 X! a/ r! q% s% \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 u- G/ [, W: u0 {5 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 \6 Y3 {8 ?* ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: u3 ?4 i, }  I- x- d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ^8 {$ Z# I* j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& M' J% z- V( |$ q3 W2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 Y. b6 l3 ?( o7 D3 T6 q3 f6 q: J% y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( \$ t% P. }4 W. C0 O, Z# ]5 ~( J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ x  b* F) W1 i! u+ l# s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; R. k) e  Q$ P" o& q8 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" ^- l" ^5 T3 N/ o" U* @3 \7 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, M- h: H3 a# T" [( k2 y- Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( f5 ]# g& n! m/ B9 @# N& _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# j- k% B, c1 V+ @6 f5 y* o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& t1 e$ S' G. y. @; g3 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! r( W  L4 G6 u4 e+ M* x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! W2 o" F, N! D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' O& y; E) W( i) o( O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- ?! v9 p: O6 w4 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. y/ d+ `- T+ o7 e+ ?+ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' ~4 K1 n* B: S1 q- W! U! U3 d5 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Z7 e( Z! G' Z2 C4 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! i3 U7 t8 h& c! y) w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 h& Z. D. j3 B/ J- j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# A( ~& V2 _, I- A( D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 j8 E# p. ^8 x* n我请你剖开它
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) b2 e) u- v- \) d% i0 O5 m5 z) x6 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>