【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ w" @- ^7 w0 c8 ?5 i/ k4 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
, B* u; {, O: a  X. `; @Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 }2 s1 m. Z4 q* C8 U# B% DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; }# C& X2 Y/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* H5 \1 C6 ~. A2 s1 v; F9 T& WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( y% J, P0 S% G6 f1 j) L: PEvery other word you utter is love
, i4 C* {/ l' K5 V6 I8 kI really want to know just how much you love me
0 F" X! K2 o- U; v% y4 PI love you I love you with all my heart
" Y4 F+ C& J7 Y# D* v. n/ s$ INothing can compare to my love
) C9 O- L$ t; }* }. H; c# \. _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 v3 [' G( k' N9 _  Q' ]: OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 {$ V: m3 B& N3 p0 ?( d$ X7 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 r7 M3 h) |+ n9 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 T" N9 a+ f6 ]: H4 c. X- jWith such a tongue as yours,
" {2 k0 a4 Z2 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 D5 q4 c7 i* V! w* x- C: C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Z" S6 P( U! F; A* {: ~, e1 ^( l& d  j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 W' Y" N5 s) K9 l5 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. _: z' c7 z$ k3 J& }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  n& n& I4 ]8 L& c& t  r- J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) `$ v$ S3 L4 K9 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 B, K9 K) D  f) {' `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 D$ z5 Q0 F: _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: j1 O8 O$ ~: ]% E: f! e+ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Y2 [4 G0 e" e/ W4 `& B# I7 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* g4 k9 K$ Z) b% l8 `8 f" j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! r/ A) s6 p+ l3 n7 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# E2 I$ Q+ F4 @- I2 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" l% _9 L2 m( U% U. f: Y7 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ L" l8 k6 E( a* [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 e: x: d; ~5 X$ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! K; ?  t! P7 k* s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) `) b0 u5 u$ ~' K$ g: |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' o# U9 s- }6 E$ C# A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; J, ]  d* e7 V, j3 e& g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 }0 Z# n- B/ I4 Z% ?' ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% T- j& W) O# h5 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% [" X( u) f8 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 ?/ f5 V3 d0 n5 l- X+ S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 B, p. X+ m5 \0 g( _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>