【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# v$ [6 b. w4 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ q' e! J3 L3 i" j2 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ^0 D0 `( S5 V* \/ R2 sWith the moon kissing it every night
; h, u5 |& N+ o6 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  I& {, F* q' f, ~/ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ Y7 R4 E  A6 SI love you I love you with all my heart
* k7 z, J8 X! ^( ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 P6 S# E0 O4 o1 V5 T# z% s# VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* y& _) v! u( oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! Y, G5 f' N7 F. V: |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; x& c' {% h3 S) E3 s! a, x& Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, j8 S/ i- b5 h" o# q: ~* A$ u# S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ p0 o4 h$ b" q6 r9 S: l5 D. R. }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, f0 o3 x/ [! m4 {. N0 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, Z1 j0 T2 h0 c9 R) k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- d# ?0 g' {- \7 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! U( F8 C8 S& j! f9 L& E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* k. v: k8 \- F7 N/ `- U7 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" i1 T! B+ g+ A! v  H. ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 W7 F, I4 e; n' c1 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 P, y, J6 c: j7 s" W  X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 q. D" M/ z7 A& @7 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% ^8 B- m9 j0 ^' Z; _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& m7 T) G# O) `$ G" _2 s4 |% j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' k+ \* m; d% Z  w5 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& j/ P. F( E# ]4 l1 v5 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) t) h! |7 M! J; I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 q3 r. A' L/ K! W( ?1 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 b; W. m0 c- B# x7 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  }$ b( a+ I1 r# l: M, B' I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; H/ y* B6 p5 r& h  P, d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% P) m# \: N& @! j! z; n+ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: ]" \# C* H3 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. [; i) [" ^0 h. I" x) y' o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 w# r. N! y% u& n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% w! J1 f6 S7 u- l0 W5 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" G+ A1 Q( M9 r! N5 P) b+ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
# g0 f" ]( m% \( z: X7 E# ~0 Q$ H  d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l- y! \8 h4 A+ D( K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ~/ P$ ]+ V3 N; T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- P$ b" H! n5 I3 I" G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 r' N5 S8 M4 P( o: N. {' P$ ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( p! ]* Z6 d9 Z; @" ], G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) z4 n( N, Q7 m; ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* C9 |3 `3 w# B- n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( B3 B5 }! K" X, |/ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* k( W; A$ }2 p/ B我请你剖开它
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0 z2 T% {+ j. A' Q" }7 M. Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>