【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" l/ u2 r$ {' jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) N- F4 L" i% sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 p0 [# l: r# T0 `. GYou needn’t fear anything
  \) ~  Y0 T6 r5 J3 c( \+ u' _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 b" o% u$ Q4 ]( rI love you I love you with all my heart
& C. N4 X0 J  NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; E  T8 N3 D: o4 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# Y! q* t$ t3 w7 p6 U3 WI want so much to see inside your heart
+ X: i3 ^9 J8 V, fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ?- l. {7 H$ S: E9 FI’m still filled with fear
6 ~6 {3 ~0 X0 T; \  RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' C* h( O$ G9 E) v  B/ Z3 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ d, I5 A' j! ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 [- u3 {8 w& o/ I3 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- U: Y/ ~' j. V! Q2 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: D9 V6 ~# G2 j8 B9 ~& O6 d9 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# h& E3 P/ f+ P- S: [% l) m& k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* c1 u; a/ D/ l3 W. _2 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; F2 b; w3 W! @2 N- v- w8 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( t' y$ y" G; P. M) N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; h( l/ i# z" x  `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; a2 @( b; b2 ~- Z3 I/ o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o1 H8 M" t$ b8 @  U1 ^' P  d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ f! [- H7 M5 `- F$ E! q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 B7 K6 v6 r, F8 `/ {9 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 _' x$ H5 P; Q- M- {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! y# X4 S9 Q) n" `! ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
; m+ j3 P6 O% T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 n. E; }0 r3 A4 `+ [. m; r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: v* x# M' c) L! C8 _% F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 e6 z8 ~9 L% O, C% }$ i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `5 `" M; T, Q% d7 D! E3 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' i: U; v7 X) @+ a- j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! S7 A" j% ~( U4 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 @" V# ~/ ?) t  J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 O4 q% {- M8 X! S, ?# r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. W2 {; C% F' B, B我请你剖开它
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* }+ v2 I6 M: } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H% p# a6 y, N2 ^2 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>