【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( D9 i2 W0 `2 D% m, p* F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ L4 i' c; s9 E+ j2 T6 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ h) j$ w) b9 F: d( ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 [8 ^# C9 T3 @( ?: MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 `/ U# }. G4 ?+ Z9 ~* X7 _  S, w; aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 u, S, x  s8 u  aI want so much to see inside your heart
9 l+ p  A/ ~2 X, b5 j* `9 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 x$ d* j. H. _( \" v* AWith such a tongue as yours,
& Z% n& H: N! F( c+ Z9 @; x4 F9 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: R/ g1 u. I# t: F2 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 v; f% i; _5 i; c7 H, c5 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  U; s% u! }/ o+ z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 [: p) r5 l7 g# v1 h! U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 V- N  ^: J' s0 Z3 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 \5 Q" J) P8 |& F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 R% F9 ~) i2 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 S# b( Q9 C9 }3 |; A) f6 U- _, d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 @& E) `3 y# f' o+ N  Z& y% Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 X2 Q/ Z& `: t+ x3 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- @3 F9 o8 D" x4 d/ [# m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# I, c, w7 }/ w# z/ {/ j% u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 d0 X9 y4 Z0 D( o7 i! C0 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% a8 i/ a6 H/ C2 I$ o, J% ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 J8 T9 D/ I2 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
% K) h0 M* V; X% a# D3 b& X$ O, z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 T' c6 R; S/ d- u0 w! v. W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! p& [( r; @. J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  r4 K) g9 v0 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ I5 J& ?5 d0 E9 W: M, S2 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 z9 g6 y. G) F# F6 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  {  |$ K  C  D7 V& ~! G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& s4 d5 s/ j0 t1 Q- I+ z* A9 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: O* h2 C( g# a( z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>