【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- J2 _2 ], n. H( ?7 w8 A) ^0 [- X$ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! Y$ t# G6 K" f, ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ?  K$ [. p; N) p. GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. h2 K' A% f0 \/ p+ o: r' l8 K) jSeeing the sky content with its love
: ^$ V! f" x# Z% F# M8 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& `, Y' W! G, s( zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 e) _0 C- L  T9 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 ?4 p% U# {6 G8 E% f" |! INothing can compare to my love
' _$ X8 Q, Z* ]0 n5 U# TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# ]- t2 m3 m& [. ]  V6 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 S; ~7 X* U) d# {7 h' \1 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! ^4 H2 L3 \  q* a- hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 z" B/ q  q& G: Z% S& U1 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( X: G& `) T- X/ c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 U! J! c+ h, U  k2 V! g' ?, G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: }4 a( [7 b6 f! o' p( }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, I: @1 z/ ?( I+ \8 i" ^4 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' ?7 j. ^4 w$ J- k+ x( R9 ^0 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& y: p. R& T; q: R! U* H4 f# a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 q, }3 f, S6 ]+ K& h* E* F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ M$ p& _9 I) o% G+ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, W) [) |  n% p" Y9 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ T: V) V* s! ?) H6 Q; ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J) I$ M- U! |3 y- C5 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' e* L) j5 T$ L& ~- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 q4 X- L, C; H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) g. P6 P9 @/ [/ b/ n! h+ W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 h9 \! Y1 N3 N( X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& M5 m1 H7 g5 z2 p, k! i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* f9 j: |2 a8 v, _) F1 w/ W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( F5 O+ ~# w; P: M3 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) _, Q8 x& h/ V5 G; \$ l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  b1 c+ R3 y* n7 c/ h# ^: m, i2 a4 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 j8 e* E. c' f6 M' W0 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ m( S  c! m$ {2 Z/ I! z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 I! n& k& C# [7 |. ?. }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  v, ?0 `! @2 K  t. O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>