【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& Z( R# G! b! z$ \# wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ \. S! G$ `! Z% ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' }. x! k4 z# T5 o& g3 S9 `" BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% v+ K; f2 p( K3 p# A/ C9 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& ?2 `- w+ e* n( GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; k+ i9 a) h2 O! e4 B8 F4 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 ^$ v8 ]0 p) OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( k" h$ s- A. Y0 |8 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
" G. p5 o' R' z# Q- L5 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! W" `* n+ J& w2 {0 w* jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 I; j$ V2 D# {: m6 z1 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, F+ `8 z' L0 O/ [With such a tongue as yours,
7 R' k2 j( o+ i" |8 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ ]( J) B4 q* R% y& u/ Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  L! p2 z3 @" y: H" T$ ~& I! V2 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 U+ U2 f, g! ^3 I- k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 h" {' A% b/ ?6 Z8 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 X4 ^( X: s  n  d( I" t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: S& a" g  g) F1 X5 x/ N$ N' y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ?3 f& a* l1 a  c& A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( O( o* t- x9 O& u3 g7 X! @; a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ H/ X+ t9 V0 H/ f1 o: h) h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" h6 q8 H" _* E7 S$ \! d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 z3 M* g2 G/ T+ [% Z+ r# T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 B* T% V# }1 n# M1 f& ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 d3 M  v( w) K; G3 {0 ~' R6 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& }" {5 X. x. N4 |/ s# y" o1 ~) t& P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  g: s% k: T$ P3 ?; a% s. A. w' ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& y4 C" P9 t" \! R2 o' F& a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; l0 X) k& G$ ~, C6 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: s, p/ i: T3 Q3 o8 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% D4 ^, n1 ?; _( h5 |$ b- c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 }+ F7 X: f) A; q3 [4 w+ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( w% ^7 L' y$ s8 j$ F& L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 |1 h# o2 p( F, ?. B. f# h: C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; P8 ]- e5 X: k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 V" j: n3 N/ t8 Z" ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) N9 H# @& v4 C; G4 e( \7 e: s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! C& W) ^1 m. h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 |4 I% l! o7 w) F  g5 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* m7 b; ], O& P" h/ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>