【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 p$ D, e9 _7 i! c8 s3 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% o; D" f# n+ \+ k  v: G( TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, z4 w" C" F: i2 r2 E/ y3 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; ~: J2 ?8 d( G1 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 }$ h" V! m  l/ Y4 w) sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ]4 }* s2 D% t/ NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, q1 H6 M" e# _$ K1 c( a  ~& Q7 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 Z& i% R- @! e0 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& Q# i$ l& i& b7 x1 b( K7 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) C( Q5 Z$ T0 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' m4 |) N# U/ P9 l. d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* G) f% F- P# s' j4 [/ U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 S9 {9 p  P0 E& W# `* W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 ~* J7 P6 T* A1 g) Y: J2 L- Z8 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 u/ v' Z6 K8 b' _( o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ B$ `) i% Z/ m, [$ S5 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 g7 c7 c4 T+ Q% a* }+ q" x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- Z8 t- q  k7 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  Q" j3 A, j# \9 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ^( T$ z: g& o8 \1 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 f3 g0 A8 ?/ _6 _+ ]6 Y( I0 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 c7 p0 I! v  x* L5 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# \* _+ |& o1 y+ j1 e: p; ~8 @) ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ u" ~5 v4 D5 y! L0 Q- a4 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. [3 [! R4 F1 |. H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ `: d3 n% D  Q! `0 W2 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 }+ U- S% Y7 i1 [/ E5 L3 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 B& U4 S1 _+ \1 I) _* o: ?9 ~$ R" S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ U' a' f7 M7 L2 z2 j$ X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 L+ q* p3 Y; R. o9 V, j7 R% f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& t5 M1 I5 m! ]$ N! u  l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 j% H# @7 C5 ~) B; }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 v1 }' `* J: V) {# ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ g" n2 ]* T% T2 r- R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' Y* T8 @  L. c$ |4 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 u6 W$ R' l/ g: o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. C1 c2 r$ K# n, o' H$ `1 {6 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 i/ o0 v" e' t! k% z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 m. t0 L6 N6 y& P% ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 q* }  ^! Z! {2 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' v" K; l# x7 l" X: p+ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) n7 K7 m  Y) N0 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>