【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 v9 e  ?, L7 A8 X- J歌词我附在后面。
8 K+ v. ~6 Q0 D& v4 Z) VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' F, h* c5 l. f! i' [. Y$ F( x2 p; U/ ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 w9 f/ g3 Y3 Y3 {0 B6 s/ G' [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# W  ?, }+ A  d0 c  L5 h7 d* VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! e: o% x2 M) H3 O% K; V- IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 r4 n( H' m* R! x+ \! l2 c& g9 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& i1 U2 _: q( W: Z% f  k- X  ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ?( ^. f0 }( p0 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ |) k6 w( K) G! j& lI want so much to see inside your heart
4 i; e3 z1 p# I' R+ C* T. wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& {/ b5 d! o7 p( u# v4 M% DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: M/ A' \6 ], L3 H" ~I regret not dying
) k& i6 z% U1 }' S+ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 I4 G, w7 ^  N1 T0 G- TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) I9 F7 [( v+ O0 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ m9 d1 G% w9 I0 g1 A" W: Q3 e1 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) X2 b7 F7 `: w; l- `. M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 D6 t$ Q' c$ X4 |$ ?) X8 |6 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* ~7 ~* l% F# f, _- ~- Y+ N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 l' M( R4 [; {; j$ n5 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 d; `" V4 R' t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Q2 R2 f# m2 N9 p% T, i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# h: @- j+ M$ y% C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 w! N) P4 l0 n/ ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; U0 t' z, }( z9 s" b1 m% q8 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ l# X8 R# c9 [  i" B; ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ G: C8 W( z3 ?# z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ^# |# [( r8 p9 i  R$ l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& A! B, |+ R, {+ N8 C1 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  z' c! h$ J% ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# q  i( h: D- c  P7 ~1 C! q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ \/ R1 v5 ?9 F# Z4 V( z6 B( O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% m7 X9 c( q# }7 @6 ~7 g  w+ b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! p4 M0 h6 B- v6 b! m9 V; c1 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' V) `/ w7 R$ a1 }4 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! C% X3 W" {5 f3 E5 r9 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ B( x$ \5 X$ K. K, y: I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 \7 h; ]$ P: g, e1 X  n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& q( _6 ]3 _5 u! }, Q6 l- }5 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; P- p9 \2 u" r* X% C( {5 @) g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
. y2 w/ a8 Z) W& B
我请你剖开它
* A5 E/ Z5 v0 j7 E9 i+ |
. b- B  q  I& V2 R9 ^$ f$ F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>