【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ A( t: h3 L! }: ~, ]' Z( JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 r+ T. \6 ?" \1 t2 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ n. c( F8 V% q7 ?' R: xWith the moon kissing it every night
6 o+ a4 d# [2 n/ O/ P% Y9 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
7 R' _- {0 p" X& k' KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 U' Y; ?3 J2 U: c' V* WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. \2 i  q7 r  N. m# QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# `3 X: \6 q3 y; k! xI want so much to see inside your heart
6 k# v6 V' L! }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ y0 B$ k- q& \% e+ CI’m still filled with fear
7 y" h( ~. e3 N7 r1 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  j( ^4 L. H5 P# {. W/ T- EI regret not dying
6 S& t* y8 w# ^4 x3 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' n5 k7 M3 X4 v0 kWith such a tongue as yours,
: S) R% M% M  T1 |+ a. l, G; PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 ^) e5 I) _6 N5 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( C; p2 M! h& y9 X; S7 ^. X% {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! J! z6 @0 c2 j( q/ F/ {+ ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- t5 j, e# m6 y5 ~& u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ~7 `8 w+ t' i: m0 d" f4 `' F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% x) p' O# G, Q% n9 r  m3 L6 |- \* d2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z0 u  y! i/ q) \( u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ W' l# }+ \! ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! q5 p% ^1 s- s2 n# l( M$ H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* D& D" T5 x( N, C) X2 [$ e- [  t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 F. a/ l( t* E/ N& X5 O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& T$ v0 m, [  [$ a+ T$ l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 ^4 i+ b" u: ]* ^! d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 q" R  [+ h: M7 E2 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ^% G* v7 v# T. C. b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( D6 E- N, O* j+ r9 ~9 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 T7 V$ f" ?( L5 \7 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 J1 g+ F3 r; a; K8 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# r. i1 W  i/ @! F. d: I; d2 N6 ?+ ~% k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 d3 J! t( j6 c% \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ t1 K; z- C3 g& s, X4 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% d# A; r4 o( J: [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 |; d7 V# c1 V  q+ B# U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: W7 p- N9 M9 z8 u" ]0 A) B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 ~, ]. }% z+ Q2 o6 _' J' M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  N! I! @1 Q: A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 d# q# [8 w; \0 i) F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 A8 `, C9 L2 h! f8 M2 N0 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, Q" l: I2 `+ N: J& Y' M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! q1 t1 ?9 J7 y" b2 c! i5 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. E. Y; z* ?# g- T9 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 A0 |1 s6 x" I: P3 L, P/ @- ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, r8 D* d& u1 Z& O& E我请你剖开它
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+ W% S* U+ y+ B, z1 v1 T! W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>