【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! T) X" v  [( P6 c% b, t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. G  \$ J  `# i: d) B9 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% B- ]& K' k: Y' p* q8 iWith the moon kissing it every night
9 K) w; ]2 V$ \: Z, nSeeing the sky content with its love
, N) u& F* z& O1 h/ I/ eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 C7 U6 Y. t' {7 i0 z9 |5 t, FYou needn’t fear anything
( A3 s3 R* O; E, x% EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. G8 v$ F+ ^" O$ D" J9 i( vEvery other word you utter is love
5 @" K* P2 Y9 J! T. GI really want to know just how much you love me
8 m' e. y" }  hI love you I love you with all my heart
; `8 u/ N9 z% l0 rNothing can compare to my love
: _* G) z( N, S* @! o' g1 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 g  B+ h. G; M' ?9 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 r: J: F0 @. ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 v; F, E5 L- K( A7 }% z& UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 X, E* o9 S" j" I* J7 QWith such a tongue as yours,
5 Y  o% `; q/ y+ q( gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- `$ r0 I4 `$ F% \2 c. Y( hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ f) i2 H. v- z( qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ B- x0 q& g7 U6 n0 O6 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; }2 b1 }0 L7 ^' c; Q6 }+ C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( }5 Y4 J! W9 X+ s7 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 b& |1 p( W- i/ S% M$ M+ w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ j# p; `9 V' j9 p$ Q- U1 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! o* f% D( r& @/ u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 J6 o. n0 d9 ~' f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  \( f3 m7 \6 @7 }" f: m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 e6 ~  c0 g1 J5 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% t6 K( W. u: ?+ ?6 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( U) w7 |" e3 ^7 m' |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, v7 {# ~* O# q! I) H6 |3 ^- v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' T$ g  y/ s. u! z. \5 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& m* L- M# `% A8 D& o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. `) z. X, R3 x1 N5 s3 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 T6 v3 e+ B/ ^2 ~8 @' C9 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 |) |% \. v' ~0 [0 U& J. j9 W. Y5 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  x4 B) s, D6 Q3 y# ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' a  Y2 E4 w; U" o- u% n* d% o- a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. [+ [$ P: n# a* D5 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 x( k& B' }2 s  u+ ?% P- h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 T# E7 Y. h) J# c5 h; ~- p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- k) r  [) C3 C4 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 n' v) C! v1 r7 k" d& B2 [3 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 B1 b9 x) X* P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' W% P) a* ^6 C" F我请你剖开它
! P. H3 p' w: j! P4 Q' T0 u. K
; t% d" g0 |9 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>