【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 j% q7 r, v3 d: dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 \, N4 [; p7 Q. c, KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 b" P4 r1 }/ z& {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% M/ l2 \& |8 Q: wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  B9 Z) ^- f# w% [9 ^9 Z- W6 U" oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  a" d5 m0 b* p  F5 i) XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 M6 ~$ b7 z  D+ S0 ]3 Q4 V$ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( u2 \, @; k7 K7 H: yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" G7 n. Y9 G1 |$ {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, I  f7 I1 O2 h  ?9 m" Y3 o2 r' H# YWith such a tongue as yours,
. ]& B) y" g$ N5 B3 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 C: C5 g  R$ H# @& Y6 s9 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 A' }) e* ^5 y4 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 u0 u' \7 G/ r8 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. m& H. g, h# y- \) B4 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ p+ _; g8 a2 d( n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% @$ b  ~* `/ |  @' l, |1 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) W% L0 @6 \4 h+ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 X4 [2 p3 l5 h, \3 t- u" r4 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& Z4 r5 Y" a2 z, `2 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' c, n- {2 ~% R+ [4 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) x  @/ G- e" V2 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ ^; q% n# Y$ c- G) c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 k8 E& g* h, [. T0 e8 x7 f2 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 L  b9 U/ V6 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; }& P$ @0 i- Q6 W3 m2 C) M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 k- Z! x' ]9 t! l8 A& c' b! P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- S( r, l1 x; X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, Y# o9 D, o" u1 Y) C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ~1 Z3 m" c) k7 E3 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& B6 }9 Q1 s1 _( T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ R8 P4 D8 B: j- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( J# p+ y1 G" r' ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 L* K2 o. y/ _5 Y* a9 G& Y! G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% j( ^* x, p: i! F1 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- f# H! t$ d* m% C! I/ m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- {% V& R. c3 T% }1 s+ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 w# _# E: T( f% o& t! [) a7 _3 [我请你剖开它

% ^& q! H' k$ y2 w2 t  b0 e0 t4 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 Q. E7 h7 g9 p! x7 T: m% F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>