【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: ]7 l9 f6 P8 V" o) F6 l8 X2 c  bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 \; N( v/ |8 z7 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
' u# l3 x0 b7 ?  Y6 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. M5 ~0 _( L: e9 j8 p( |/ NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) d5 G# X" o+ K- R6 K+ fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! I* b/ P; L0 QEvery other word you utter is love
0 m5 X: O% R+ U2 Z0 {) G* BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) x7 L! X  F% O" D0 v' H; C4 uI want so much to see inside your heart
* B- r0 j3 Z1 }- ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" `$ Z) D! r0 ~- s$ }9 g& v( UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' ^, j1 _4 E+ UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: i, s/ L( {7 S3 B: b: d6 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% D8 V+ O: d9 B* P9 y/ x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) Y( B' v( q% N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 T- M) t5 Q) n/ H* H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ B3 h$ [) P9 _: V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 r+ {. p+ {+ o& ~9 D# t! K4 H* ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% l. i9 o5 O! D4 s: f1 d9 ~! T( R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 o; _  Y8 ^& R$ z8 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, O, b- C. W# m" n0 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 h' m$ d9 z" x) H: A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 h3 V  ]( b1 @3 c7 c1 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 J; ^$ U+ [! r+ q% `: q, k, B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- P# P* h2 {5 f7 n+ P1 [8 Z4 L4 \1 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ~# B3 \2 Y' d: ^3 ?. ]% ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 U+ T, c" P( I" g3 J# A5 ~, \2 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  c' g6 i  X. l0 w) R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; z  a6 }: L2 M  P/ o4 ^- |$ K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 m9 ~% D8 ?: ~% B8 @! y" @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 W$ q0 u4 F! c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 T$ l; b$ k1 g) F" @2 D6 j- ?, n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 X0 D: w; m5 s8 A9 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& m3 p3 X$ D3 r/ I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. X/ [" J6 b* Z2 r( t<P>I regret not dying</P>
( y7 h$ e4 Q# z/ v( H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, [1 b1 |0 O4 v9 r; r, A: v% e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ o! q. ]: H( j4 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% G8 v: O8 z' C% S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! k! J. d6 @/ \/ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! z/ a+ p( H2 A7 _1 {% [/ o  c我请你剖开它

- }) a3 g/ Q' ]" B4 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>