【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 [+ W6 A2 n" O4 e3 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ Q; R* z9 H# E9 o/ T$ t! c9 o. ~+ e% |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; L1 d1 F) z" i# GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 k" P- }# n' g- Y5 RYou needn’t fear anything
9 n" X" K- R; G) J, a: _- f& |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; D0 g! h3 B+ C# YEvery other word you utter is love
" E! Z6 m5 q2 K1 `, [3 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ p2 O# ?3 J4 nNothing can compare to my love
9 m" D4 k, i. N, k9 K0 M) c- MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Z- ~5 O/ _0 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 H- T3 I! z5 z3 [I want so much to see inside your heart
3 [7 R- R* x; `) E: X: ^8 d1 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 d$ W, w  o3 w- P; NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 l1 G' F- ?" X% HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 R; g8 Y( ]* ?( U7 f) UWith such a tongue as yours,
0 `) W5 f! s" W) M% e; N1 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 H. R/ J( B# ~6 a7 k- K) F* t9 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 [& t' b8 _# m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* ^9 m" [- z' R0 _% f+ ^1 b8 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 E1 G% C  x: P7 n9 N0 B) W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% E/ f' \; i) a" X5 x' y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 e! D" r. [& X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( J9 y6 Z5 k5 c+ @0 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. p* U% h$ e  L/ ^6 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 [4 I/ E, z5 e6 I6 s. m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% }( q  I" u. ^& j; j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 |' J5 u+ A/ O( j( G) l; Y3 N5 H! q  ^<P>你无需担心</P>
0 s; x0 f9 N7 w2 p6 w2 _' ]2 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ I' t$ c/ M  }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% W1 p) i0 L3 Q9 W1 {% e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ @  R1 s+ k0 }8 F" a9 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' r5 p/ t6 I  b; W1 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @' `9 w2 b6 |* C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 i0 G; R( b" t/ K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 Q$ p$ s7 p9 j1 r1 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ z* d- f3 J; p1 w: J+ D2 M& b5 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 z6 v: p6 V4 U$ d4 P+ L4 ^4 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( t; I0 J# c2 e0 r8 g0 z* B$ ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 w* k0 e8 Q" E8 T7 i; Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ _" h$ S+ v; \+ d- j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 L% }1 b" T# _- r$ D* V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 ?; W: x! Q- {- {0 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Y" G" q! b9 [" l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 G6 N% O" l3 g1 D6 T- |7 J# s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# A( W; v. x) t1 O0 w  \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% z' L% E/ J$ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  B4 E6 V1 E- @- ^$ T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  U6 n. T" f6 ?6 Q; X- d2 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 K6 Y' w* k6 [' ]; ?6 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>