【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* E: ^' |1 G) w) g: C0 G; pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 V5 d! L8 Y! Q# g8 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
' @4 D; O6 \; ?6 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- r- b  c7 r. KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, G* \9 E9 b" U. XI love you I love you with all my heart
5 ?$ u7 A# g8 cNothing can compare to my love
; U4 W1 n3 W1 S) r' oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 w, P9 q" F/ x4 I, m# f  T) }I want so much to see inside your heart
/ I' [% `! C# m" g- LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" G# g. Y% i+ m1 ~I regret not dying
. v  f1 p5 }" F: H7 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! Y' l% k. d% _9 k! gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- M- X5 o; ~& {2 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& m* s/ b) {" e' m, e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 j: ^" d3 e$ Y$ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) T; o$ k5 m( m' M# j$ g/ R- Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 q# `; y6 `6 q' w' j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# t; j% a5 }# ^' K( O# O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% C) x% u) @6 n, G! @- i1 p; V. X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ p& g, C5 i3 w: ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& J+ P& ?0 J9 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ t. F* g' X" }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 K/ I2 b" \6 H$ x0 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 s5 e! I  p: a; X; i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ x0 e1 q0 S, R7 X4 |* B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" U/ n! ^# c6 f5 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  {9 m4 \# I; {. a9 U. Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 ?! F+ D2 d8 u  P# I  L# y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ~: [: P3 G" M% z7 Y+ q: i7 l6 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 z# g& |) V7 s* A  s8 b6 b7 O+ u. ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 a* s7 a, n; r) K# X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 `4 w$ ?) [1 u" U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& d+ ?# b4 T; `) e) l( Q* L0 M% r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Q% c: h+ x5 U1 E, T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: N; x: t* a+ z  N5 h. H+ l1 p: I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( A, X! Q$ d1 `& Y6 g& S5 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 P9 i/ S' i" }# D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 b$ Y' W, y+ o* N3 M' V$ L) N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) g) l% @3 Q6 \/ G6 d+ K' C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 m. L3 q7 h& ]( Z$ t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>