【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 g& \& O) j# f歌词我附在后面。
; E6 v! C  g4 ^' q5 L) Q# n2 s/ W; IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' z# ]. {7 a* _6 Q- QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, C9 |* }3 j0 B1 @9 t- |# b$ [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; {/ `" M' }: Q) L0 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 f9 v) u; R9 J5 p" TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ O" w! t; Q( ?8 U2 P4 n& iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! }0 P( P4 `) `9 o5 q! Q. YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% `1 i; R6 E) s4 O' J; MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 u2 G3 E0 w+ YI’m still filled with fear
8 Q+ G3 x$ x( xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 B- |1 W3 H$ R6 c( R2 Y) t0 V8 o4 qI regret not dying
* K, l3 T: w3 c) R* A; U6 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; i- _) }. e, k; Z+ X" A7 `( _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 l. L$ b& q! FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' K$ c0 L+ Z( B1 p7 K% ^4 U5 D: J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 n1 ^+ x& p6 }/ _# C9 d6 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. O* \$ _  c* H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 o7 c$ o8 I7 v" Q2 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ?) t3 C$ i2 p4 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 n5 p; G! V  q' }6 i, f: h7 P1 a  B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 d% V- }* s# b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ I* L' }+ B7 D/ `. Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; C/ Z! U4 Z- m' J1 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ [1 L$ y7 M6 ~, a0 Z2 x7 a$ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 h2 k0 p: S% t( y  P# o) q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: h2 _( b+ j5 m0 D+ ]/ b8 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 z8 b/ l1 X4 v1 t3 u3 H% ^" F  [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ p8 {* c3 V, `; F, Q" c0 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' y. }7 N8 a  b; ]: v: ?( @3 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 U! o) l0 w) \3 j) B$ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 i. ~3 _+ R+ V5 o* @' R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% |7 S' P) N5 A* a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. d" T, g5 F9 g, z, s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 d& Y3 S7 o; G) n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Q. `  J+ g; J* H, }+ A/ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) U. M& L5 l8 i# J9 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' Y! r) t  U8 k: k8 t我请你剖开它

1 k$ X- c8 K. D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>