【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 D. v3 O/ F/ L" d* i  BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: }! C" ^8 n( t% iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, B7 g- Q. G: G8 S( eEvery other word you utter is love
3 x/ n$ P1 b9 P* n2 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- {* x6 |0 R$ ?1 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ^" l- O) |6 m* }* N% d7 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) J. i5 ~9 a& B9 ?" kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, X% [( g7 A1 H& xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 r! R/ g& l3 x4 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. B' X) u! X2 Z4 @1 e% j( ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I5 w: ^0 A' w# d+ \8 x# {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, O2 H: B: w/ Z, v  r0 I) }  g; e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ k! Q' |& w& i) u$ H7 i$ u9 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ n. u3 X: r7 i5 d9 n, ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) v' J2 B9 v) _' T1 U% f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 P- _( Q/ k' b+ a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ K9 O. \) J% k, L. v8 d4 c  B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% Y$ a6 [' I0 J! r8 j, A7 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# b: n! F  I- s( B0 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* c1 Q, H7 ^& t' P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& R. w6 a& L3 S* F# t5 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* d7 y. V5 s' P% Z0 _) [* C5 L, e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# b7 s+ [+ q9 Z! A: J: ?6 d: C$ Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% a$ z% p% c( E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 Q) n  Z5 d6 m/ c* {- _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 V' F! E6 S+ N3 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ~5 i  u( `0 q2 U  `! y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ E) {+ W9 \. o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 w6 K% A6 S& h4 Q0 K- H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ f7 @/ v0 A# U% h- o  [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ?. w6 h$ ?3 |; Y! r3 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 J2 a; Q, R* s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! N$ Y% D" _8 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 R8 ?6 r6 ~, L4 \+ @9 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- A8 v1 `& A( S* W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ B1 I5 _, z# n2 E4 P/ b0 |7 A* n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 `( E/ @0 O( F, [% ^4 o- I4 Y& b<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ E0 m. N% ~/ y+ R* H3 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' M9 S3 C$ g, h2 C$ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; T0 O) U# w' V3 p" Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 x3 s8 G: w1 V) g2 h% Z& R0 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! A# m1 f* n  L0 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* w6 R$ F1 ?6 W8 D; J% B( S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>