【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ w  O& ~5 _8 M" X$ O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# e& P1 J& _' x, y# t' d( ~" nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% Y# n; K( w' Y2 [) G. LWith the moon kissing it every night
7 }5 @* K* D! j% ^7 d2 G, MSeeing the sky content with its love
7 w5 o. Z2 Z: Z/ QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 I# m* o+ g: N/ p7 X0 N  PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, [( k  s0 v' z% r& W7 v3 mI really want to know just how much you love me
5 z+ ]3 |& E' g# w3 ?* e0 x* `I love you I love you with all my heart
8 A- Z! v9 h9 iNothing can compare to my love
, @* C; P! N! R& d9 O' Q4 b2 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" q: j8 P" y" c- h3 vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 z) x1 ]5 W9 F6 I% k- G8 k4 L) {; ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ W" {9 P$ R( D/ L6 c) ^' YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" b; }5 n) I1 r% ?4 I- T7 |$ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- H7 l$ v" e6 ]) U$ p( e( g& U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, v; V! q9 y6 T7 ?7 h5 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- H  i: _0 `+ X- J3 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: t; R* O6 f8 S$ `7 u& Z' E8 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, r! X+ H8 }3 {  {0 j4 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 u+ |  Y3 U  h2 o- p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- L* ]0 J& E( L! R/ I! u) g& C% W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& C% j% }0 J! S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* B* y' m# ~( @. f2 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" c9 L0 O& R/ @4 z1 q$ g7 X$ ^<P>你无需担心</P>
" n* Q- F6 d, J& X- K- Q7 O/ i1 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, }4 g# P  O4 b* n+ E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 p4 G% b: D. e3 B1 C2 m% H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 \7 S' l; K& v6 T5 G: q# _1 K5 _  t" Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 V9 v  u$ w; w6 i; D7 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 b% s" T3 p) T8 z8 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# u/ C. t5 Y" N1 W' y( z( I- e6 Z3 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) H) n5 H+ S) w( Y3 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 u/ k2 W# m6 W" _& ~9 r# E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' B! ?1 A# c" u* n% W* N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 r: R& E! A- g" J* x/ `& w, Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 I2 G5 W$ H9 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& t4 s1 w! i. ~! c" r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>