【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; s+ ~# @: p% B) Z3 _' s8 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; r2 q# o/ b% U6 u3 N6 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ W7 {+ a2 `, G- k8 K, K0 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* `. s9 N( e, L$ X. M: `$ sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% L! J, H% N9 |- wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 ^& z1 S! K5 q( C5 m0 Z9 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 \5 @. L5 F6 @: B6 @, F/ g! R) wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  i1 Z: J1 v% _; z" V1 H  B, EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! G5 N8 c8 V  SWith such a tongue as yours,
: H2 m5 ?" H. d& f; zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, X5 ]; m% J, ^+ ^8 i' `. Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" V1 a3 q, e( P$ s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 _( y7 p6 h' b" e( O# ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' o0 |1 Y; [/ y( |' M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, @* ^  Q+ n, w; C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) v& I! y, h9 n! M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( U8 `1 `4 a0 C5 K% c$ l/ c/ A- H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& H7 g+ L4 _0 `3 `( a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 U% F/ Q$ |3 J' H6 e4 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* @. N2 i/ e4 S8 G- t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ n5 L7 H: @% ]! ?! X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; C  [+ N& f7 ~, o. n7 M, [: ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# f" L. O1 v1 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 {4 @: _4 w: I0 Y, p3 G& K! y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# O! y2 X/ x( d6 B# V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 k4 q+ t6 e6 w4 H8 p6 M, G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Q+ a8 R9 y1 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( J2 D% d0 V- F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: z7 g9 K1 p3 S, ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' v0 O( N" ?7 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! T& v: K9 o  _6 y1 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, E' B" q. D  H6 s- A, T9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 r( V4 e7 F& p' u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 t# [% a5 S$ ~' {6 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ a+ f* Y2 q2 k; {& ~% J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) G. w/ m4 K+ T5 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& @8 ]6 v! O8 O6 p4 x1 D1 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' k7 {( |  s8 U1 `8 ?! X1 v, G7 {4 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>