【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. D* s( x3 f* ~# w# kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" H7 `9 J3 [9 t& S5 Y: x( U5 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) T5 V( i/ _' K" X4 W9 W. gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 O( }' T4 s; G6 G; T; vSeeing the sky content with its love
3 Z  J" L1 k/ t- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' u! ~9 X6 R! NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 r4 `( z! r$ x9 P( m  JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 }- E9 `, l. X6 K& JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 o. m$ Q" }% V* H$ Z8 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* y1 X- s- Q: T* qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 E) R  A1 p) i' X$ L9 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, n8 m! n5 g5 g- E" O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 Z+ w* B3 x0 E- c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; I  B8 z2 _* T: S  Q" V: B* P4 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# D! Y6 R0 t+ Z4 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* c; v/ a, H$ V0 c+ N& s8 g# c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% h: x2 |( H% j1 \5 b, N& y% K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' h) m$ y# C& y: g( s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& `8 Q  [1 P! a6 e, q. l" K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 E/ O/ y+ O3 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% U4 n7 D  i! z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Y8 c" S: V8 G" G2 ]+ ]5 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 a4 r+ n8 P& w) T7 |. q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 M# l2 ^6 j! L6 V0 g7 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ^9 x( z7 w2 T7 ]' h% X3 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 f" w: q* f0 D4 ~$ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) g+ W$ i+ `* w0 c- ?: ]9 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ x7 s8 _6 d' ~  {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- P% W" c2 q, F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, l. B2 F' A$ |4 }$ X4 f1 l  v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. _0 W9 \& G. d5 R1 @; u" c" c: A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 g( E% H( R. A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; w% _. J" C% h# _8 G" K7 P: O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 ^- d2 X1 _  n2 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 t' \! G& r& @3 A2 H+ N/ Q$ W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( s7 ]0 L- f& D& l4 i. ?4 o) e/ X% \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% u3 o8 ]+ ?! o" D& }# E# e8 F5 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 m7 o  w/ X% O6 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
. }! z& t6 X+ h. H* X9 X- m
我请你剖开它

! S7 D2 }8 `3 ~% p1 k& k# I+ M$ n% } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>