【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 [8 N: C4 l- S0 Q6 T" w9 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 j4 E# T: ?6 H4 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ j) t+ w2 N1 K) C. U" F- OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 z1 f# y6 e' I: a/ x$ IWith the moon kissing it every night
. W& @8 E+ D( r  L& x1 qSeeing the sky content with its love
2 M* r7 ]6 J0 v6 j) o5 Q5 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; E& x6 H: c8 O" x) j  i) JYou needn’t fear anything
, v' A* H# }7 F* pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 m6 I& o, w# Z( R) A# MI really want to know just how much you love me
( N9 V. w' j# i! J& u9 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! _7 Z2 g* l: G& d, M0 Y( ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  c- h5 `( N8 x6 MI want so much to see inside your heart
( ]! Z/ q0 ~, X' xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 d" h6 D/ x8 P- I5 x1 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 n0 e) d2 k1 q+ kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% W& t& P% g0 P0 @0 ]5 O& LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 m1 P1 W' ?# e- WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& T2 K1 E$ h$ ^0 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 L& C' a7 N2 S1 ]* b' z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; w8 t. B" ?# J, J1 N! K4 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( u  A3 B' X& z5 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% d" F! X+ _: y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: Z; W; v- b7 B+ d$ O8 b3 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 O! p* z6 ~. @& {) O2 P$ b<P>你无需担心</P>
$ l# j; e! S! j' k4 ]; J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( g7 T8 `4 U& |8 L: ^$ @# M/ u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ]% h* X& a- @- S1 ]  K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 ]! T0 G5 L( m. }; a1 l* j, @$ |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% F0 \  B' ~" K$ m/ J/ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; L% Y/ [' `( B% t* K" u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 I# I+ A) @" I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z$ j4 |) f& I* V) v4 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 e% x: b, o3 E+ d9 y9 ^2 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! d# |% o' E- _! w- `% k; D- {) e& e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, U3 n/ E- K( a/ u+ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: R' m1 r5 p& z! D4 i6 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 \7 Z3 `/ e0 L. X! u1 e1 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 K9 G0 E% L* D# V1 F: _' R% A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, ^% n) @( G3 m3 O& N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ Z/ b, L, C# N- h- q& t$ `! L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 q6 h6 g, Y0 Z: w5 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 o0 _, k; q& E/ x6 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' }! M. U7 }1 k' L& I0 O& D# U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>