【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 l% Y. K( y0 Y5 @歌词我附在后面。
0 F' N  P9 h& TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! g" b) H% T) k) L2 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 x4 C3 K- X! j. e+ G% SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, f7 _4 y8 b' Y- kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# I3 T  V) \! \# p- e- MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Z6 r9 L* [5 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& p4 }) a$ Y5 R  q) O1 T5 V. X: R1 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
0 H, ?, x( x3 Q( V7 Z1 @0 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% Y, P# t7 q# II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' Z  Z- P7 ]# ]8 |" g! h* I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ _7 Q$ Y0 ]  u  g8 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  ~/ I. s; `- a- R6 S4 c  K/ t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* A2 d& ~7 F1 `- B. \6 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; t# G0 r/ _1 H) [! ^' f6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 D: b  k# |' w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' D& z: v# d# j$ Q7 j% R3 R- x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ B0 J2 H% k* _( A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ Y* I3 ]. }: ?! o- q6 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( p' v% |# q- y( D2 [  s* g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. j$ `- z  T8 m/ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 \3 w0 q' i7 x2 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 l- M6 M0 S2 e9 c5 X! B. W2 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% z" o6 c1 X& u. [/ ^/ w  E6 n$ \* ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, K, |+ U1 q" L& c: i7 V3 K0 H& V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 K) X3 V+ S* @; x) a  b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' u  k# S+ O  Z0 D3 E! D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ O0 C1 h: e' Q6 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) v# z. m8 n7 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, F+ D# E) w7 `3 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 m: p5 ?& y' }; d! L. O: q: V, y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ~  L6 Y  C& W/ ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! V3 G  B; H3 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 I# ^) @1 \9 U/ G8 F$ _5 e! ]/ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 O' {6 ^9 e# ]8 T) b/ c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' v5 J* S4 X4 K' Q0 `3 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* f3 c! K0 \# d, o. b. a# n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' h) E$ `3 |1 e/ z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>