【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& m# {& s' a% j6 O! MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 {/ o: A6 A- a9 |, qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ]8 {" p" l5 V" QThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 o2 ?% K- @3 q0 Y8 ~4 VWith the moon kissing it every night
2 R- q, x" D" g2 B+ b4 USeeing the sky content with its love
& v: W4 [( F2 f  CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# c% z% T1 b- `6 G' c. @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; L' L4 j) F- r! \, S5 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- k8 c3 v8 I$ `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 [  a( l* }8 @: I) P# [: lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 N6 p- l& c! {- @( {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 m* r# |( J5 ]  y& l" uI’m still filled with fear
$ ]) m1 p) T$ m$ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 d: W. n2 J* |* ^# V6 ]3 L* {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 _* X2 H1 O' yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ d! \" g7 J# c$ d' fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 U9 v0 U5 ^  N1 T+ s+ g+ {1 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  [5 g7 Z+ E" W$ H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ k3 ^# r& t4 Y3 ~8 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& F- ?  ^+ }, i- C) a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 C( `; O$ T* [8 F4 [& Q/ N  g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ e1 n- A2 U0 b9 ]; f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 i; c: O" {; p- j& C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ s+ ?  l. Q* `' q5 W0 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 B) F% M: Z& X# I2 T; d+ h+ @8 F0 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- h6 H: e( \  A/ r) u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ^) Q7 _3 d; N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Y% P! \: I5 @0 O9 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; m" p# o- Y! ]. J: `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, h/ L8 B, z( Y7 ^! ?: @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 Z8 p: `' ^% J( V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) r# |6 [) j* \0 ~' b7 D3 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' |( I! A2 k. |  t* T1 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 g" q3 W( f- ^6 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 g3 Y  a) ~0 {+ x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! C' q6 F( y. R* H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 T# t% Z. h& y# _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' R1 P) d0 w# \" \  E2 G) x4 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& m' l7 l, N0 \  U9 J" m' C0 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, E  Y+ J2 j2 Y( H0 d! _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. l  Z8 m. N' X' X$ t- E( _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ p  J2 D+ Z$ F  E' }: t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 c. p, p+ ]4 v9 ^" ?9 \9 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 ]' `1 m* T4 v. j/ G4 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. j  |0 a9 ~' w0 U6 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 ?& D5 z( @$ e) \  d7 d" {# |5 F, c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: T+ ?, I. R" B; Q; x" a' P, X5 _我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>