【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# r- O& F7 _% p; L0 k0 S- b% OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: L8 s" V3 P- f! n. vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% Y2 x+ E# d6 D/ ^9 RWith the moon kissing it every night
2 I/ U9 M+ t& \' WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- |9 T" k5 X4 R; r. fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ o3 K  I9 G# I6 m$ xNothing can compare to my love
8 h+ d+ J0 K& v) cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 W* d, f% V$ L% A- JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' S1 ~! T- L1 N; l/ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ j' R8 k9 d: Z; e/ oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 s0 E) U) T* ~8 n/ a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! z( }; O$ E; o- a# }/ ~( J+ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: A! d( ~5 K. V! ^4 w4 S% c4 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, o1 ]& n2 ^. z: ^- h* L, b* t0 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! q; u: K+ q+ ~5 E" d3 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  C4 ^( M7 k: l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ _9 s+ W% Z- n; K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, N3 K2 r/ ~+ o- y" y& d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. Q2 b1 [& s1 z( D8 R: A# [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- D0 ]3 y9 d5 K% d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( u1 I3 M; _  C  S5 ]3 e( u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; K+ a) P3 N9 S1 b; E  g% M7 Q' C1 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 f% x3 R2 u' {- ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! I9 [' G: O. P6 J# A* @/ L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. N# I' t) _! V. u1 Z9 X  b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& Q! k2 y0 `! B% G% s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. O9 u  V( K4 I: \$ H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- w6 @" [0 {2 x- E! |' c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: j$ P5 r5 `! s+ p- R6 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 E- e, ]$ n; N! e3 W- g6 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Q: `6 I/ P0 k- Q! Z9 W( i; N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 L) E$ t$ I" j5 T, D0 `2 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 e% p$ h  O' ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 R$ o0 L' f% q$ {# F8 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 U$ j9 M* i- }$ y# G4 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' I+ y; F7 [, ]: H# K4 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 [) p& @4 T' U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! C% D8 ^6 L" e* C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 C+ `- n/ K2 Z" E" y3 h% p3 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ \9 U8 e8 z- N; W- p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 r& p) c# i- z: p/ j& a$ g3 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  f) @  f% S5 N6 I) z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 D! y6 v, s! d7 Z' A9 R! y) M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# d0 E& ~( O4 m9 u/ M3 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ K# S1 v" l# e8 y9 \* f5 L# H4 @5 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 A7 ~' L9 F6 P0 U& W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>