【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* v# q/ }# I: P7 ^2 D) EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! ?4 X  Y5 e" B% ^* Y5 v- g; TWith the moon kissing it every night
6 A1 _# I+ G  O2 ^) JSeeing the sky content with its love
' F- Y& P+ K5 J. @- uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 q! @% r( L9 g' v: P9 Z9 H" r2 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) N' D* }3 `; N& z4 AEvery other word you utter is love
! a7 U4 q! V4 n- {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) G8 L7 l" O. ?5 X/ ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ h1 Y$ J% [2 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: V# L; N' O7 x) S% O% ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ B8 K% C& S+ a( bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" v/ b1 T) l- }# L# K; WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 S( {% {' X' P# j: MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& `0 c4 w4 O% K- k# s  U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I9 W9 ^2 }1 ^8 u% S- u; M* d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, Z$ H' z, z; {: E1 R8 ?3 T" \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ]5 f  @' z' p/ n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- ]" S  G# `2 G3 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 z' s! n! H9 v0 d$ O3 c. ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& [- i" N7 n) u+ k9 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) o; n# |& N* ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Z1 A! W: [# Y8 @) W  _0 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 I0 R4 p" d* f6 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 Y8 K+ Y* B# S2 r4 x1 e0 i, z$ Q* g/ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Y$ V8 a7 S  N9 I$ {0 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  t$ {# {* N1 ^( x7 C5 U8 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 K; P" c9 n( G1 `1 o! m& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ M6 o7 Y$ f5 y/ {) ~) Y' c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 [" a$ ?- E( V; }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% O, J1 _  S( K. ~5 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: a3 q  Z# F# _( e4 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& }0 x: A+ J2 Q0 E/ d2 [, Q# c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 o9 v5 _) T% c. M# f, ^, R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- h: r$ E- k1 F4 D, i8 c* z  \9 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& ]& z5 {1 _( A% s8 J- w- w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 O: }! y: J% R3 o' e  D# V0 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 |& q1 P* r" G1 i4 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# c1 ^% l7 z& `+ S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Y8 s9 d8 p# w$ N1 A5 J" c) K7 J; T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; e5 ~# r* S: V+ K1 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 P2 \7 D6 J  B$ I& y# B/ k* u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- f) i7 N' r1 Z1 F! v2 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 Q4 g  C/ `% g4 E5 @" ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>