【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 V1 N& j6 _$ L" BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 P7 P2 M) ^5 C4 T; fThe sky is happy down to its soul
' c. W5 @8 @7 T. o9 F4 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 u  Q# v/ e, WYou needn’t fear anything
& d0 b; N! G( L( vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ t% D* n! u. [$ W" f& L  EEvery other word you utter is love
9 z$ _  w/ X6 B9 {2 }$ F8 W: Q. _; W1 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 _( I# I8 I1 Y; F0 r5 L' @" O3 a/ {" }2 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 \( h7 A! g  g% |- X, v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. g0 S  P8 k7 Z8 w# x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q8 p3 N' C$ s" y+ B6 q. S# ^! s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  o0 o, m: g- i, U( B! k& e& c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ^' i4 c+ G" P/ Z* \) N8 x4 m, o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ z/ J' V2 e5 I* n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: K) c7 v% i$ z' Z" U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: F6 `0 c. ~, O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 J5 [& V" o! ?7 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 U& O8 o- a9 ?/ J) z$ O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! c' c" l* L5 @. I& t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& a  ^1 g7 ~- O# C7 D4 c0 f# A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ]3 q" {$ c: \! m- o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ l; U: t) v0 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 n- L/ h% A9 p6 J& Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 o8 E# a- s( D9 h/ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, C( a% D4 A: e8 P3 s+ h! g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ w. w" T0 I! k  ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 O# p) q1 y' G0 t5 X8 @! ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) `- g8 m5 L. }$ C# C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 L+ c9 f5 v# [5 d) f# Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; q( n# ^: \, D" |; E- H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) _' J7 [3 E. O3 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
  t" ]+ m* R! `3 u3 Z; q  a$ S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 ]" N$ }( F) A: t* s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# D6 Q- N2 `1 ?  R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& S/ T  ?7 |: M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 b) O0 l3 ~5 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' \+ Z  d! x" y, I" |8 X/ p3 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ~* v) Z9 L9 T9 H: M+ J! J9 A- t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. T' v& H. i0 d5 ~* M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) y6 c0 Q- s% W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& d8 E' E; t. s% Q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>