【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) ?' H% |3 u# P6 C' U* z! IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ n7 q) @6 j8 D5 n' C: e1 i4 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 X7 u" e$ G! t! w- _& MWith the moon kissing it every night
0 I! B. c+ u# T4 S$ ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 @% |8 s9 ]/ Z8 X, u& bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Z# S8 n$ j$ }* q, S. GEvery other word you utter is love
+ I: S& X  |) {! c5 b) UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# k" d+ i2 C0 o9 x0 o2 M8 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' x" ~/ _) z$ W$ P# d1 Y" RI want so much to see inside your heart
8 X- r" y. ^' P7 B. [/ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 R2 Y% D. k7 W* Y6 P& ~9 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 v. V# a* P3 JI regret not dying
# e, H( E: I6 a' O; v3 H3 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! Z% r$ g, d$ l/ d4 hWith such a tongue as yours,
# f$ l) Z# o% w) N/ r% Q: a( BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ q! S9 \/ M, Q9 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ s# n) g0 m3 m+ B3 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 D0 e7 k) F' G  Z- ], {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, k7 w9 D0 ?% A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' U- W0 ^3 K+ \% X( y* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# j! d. T' V8 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* o2 e, m; m' ?7 ^2 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 @! ^: \9 O3 X4 \1 R) I8 e+ g<P>你无需担心</P>
# S  L( G- r0 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  f9 Q9 g' B: h0 g# x( f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ u% m1 M% v& k/ [+ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) Z* [2 b1 F2 U; x& p- M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 j$ O& Z+ @+ c  E6 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ d$ w+ _. ~$ Q0 `8 K4 n/ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 L$ n, O5 P2 o% O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 d7 u# C" C8 @' E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' Z& W7 u1 v' N  e2 Z3 |$ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 Z7 G# A$ t4 [+ {  R8 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 q0 t2 t, p9 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% _  j6 x5 W5 ~; ^- j  H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t3 G1 d; i/ h( ^: J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  G$ c" n. l' ~+ H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( _- E/ ?" y+ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( m, I+ x2 x( J# C, c8 a5 I) V" v% p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ^8 E' c5 E8 k3 r4 b8 V# n, i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ b3 }; ]5 ]9 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 O# u. R1 }1 \! \9 r  @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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