【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 D; F. C( x# u. K' H. q9 H- s歌词我附在后面。
/ S, o. g9 P) D+ V- e2 Y2 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 r4 q, |+ a, \1 ^8 S7 @: {; XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# \2 C. @( R8 q8 X' q6 t2 B4 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* f2 y3 U1 M- ^1 Y' [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% \8 U4 G, v" k0 d4 [9 O8 ]+ DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 D1 ?7 ]$ b7 a3 L5 {! g2 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 E+ t% Q  G9 j/ a& }, pI really want to know just how much you love me
! d* L1 b0 K& w" A1 o4 e; wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( q# w/ p- O6 y' v& PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( c5 i, @; I5 c; E1 W) nI want so much to see inside your heart
2 K4 B# L. D+ `' N  A0 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: n- b" |# }7 E4 u% OI’m still filled with fear
5 g$ c2 D- \) x1 t! ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, J$ U! e- ?  V8 b( G$ s% v, l& ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ L( Q$ E4 T5 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, n. @2 q9 [! j5 i, B( Q1 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 y( ?( C2 i8 P6 M* `4 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ r  ?9 ?+ U3 B9 S" {  N" ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, V$ I9 K, O, s  o5 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 s( z- d: A. _6 M7 v- f! s/ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, k1 X9 ^3 P6 e7 z$ x  {# y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) W  s0 [4 B3 U. e$ F- r  G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! j" @5 O+ n) H- f, ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ J% B" k  O' F  _7 W$ F# \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. \; j+ n$ R# s' @7 `2 R# q<P>你无需担心</P>
, l  a9 J; Y) T9 ~7 m5 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: ]/ Q2 H4 l* b  z: r$ {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 Y( D' h% f& ?) M* w5 `8 l& n# Z/ X6 ?7 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ l2 Q( k, i# W0 p( E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 Z* f# e. f5 T0 J: m  X4 I: a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( k/ Q/ S0 _3 n/ V6 l  X; h5 t1 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* L( |6 D$ L8 \& h- n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 m/ i9 J1 r6 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ X+ t/ R! C0 K% U+ |  E& T6 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( O. F, W8 T9 [6 S7 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# D2 |! e# Y2 d$ n. C8 s* P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 S9 Z+ ^: V7 |2 o5 i5 H1 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& K) t0 N, Q+ @  g/ I8 }* o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ t7 m6 C. {; K5 h0 ]  V- Z. A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" w4 F( [9 C3 M" q& I7 j' g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ h# F9 L/ Y8 E% j1 \7 A0 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Q% T% U) O' c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 S8 K9 A0 N9 z/ F0 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. X; N' \; i" x$ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 o: O: I% P# T4 q/ ]) x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 [* h% k* I: A2 F( T* ?; A/ P8 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  g3 E; s0 C) k2 D+ J) v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 }+ f! D% ?8 n* F我请你剖开它
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  @% z5 K! @6 W" r5 N" k2 R8 {9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>