【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 P2 f/ D% [- R; HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ L7 V, _8 d+ p2 d' _* a0 z! jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 H3 p$ h) N8 \( E) n4 R! j# O& PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# d3 |# ?3 D" e- i* J- a$ |I really want to know just how much you love me
) n1 A0 r  V' PI love you I love you with all my heart
' n! T# P  L7 Z1 ]! L. {+ FNothing can compare to my love
0 H/ {6 ]& c* f& y$ f% K& GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" F6 O# C( v/ q, B5 C; QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' i8 c8 T2 W- D2 \6 @$ A5 II want so much to see inside your heart
6 T" g* E2 f. Z6 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 l$ V/ H. F; zI’m still filled with fear
( K- [% G: p3 Y7 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 T# A/ a+ Y3 S1 A1 p5 z0 R, _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" p. O# i# `: P! k& Z- uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! B$ P6 d' p2 r2 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& x9 D3 o+ i6 D- R! Z+ w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# i9 b; M! o5 p+ l, y) U( q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( X4 D* c+ u" \, i' y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 {4 }1 i8 t6 s3 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 y, X! q, R7 L/ u9 Q0 a" E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 Z8 X) [# L4 {8 a: ~, b) M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* i5 V: W5 }' u2 C% _; P2 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. B' _7 j) X# T' g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ w: P. w/ D4 g  a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- P1 T7 S# R: P8 I5 U0 w7 z8 R7 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 e6 |. q4 ?. n8 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& S2 |! {/ I' m0 H" j9 x1 k0 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( m, m/ g% L+ e" _. n) N. ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% {$ G! i# d+ |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 q: ~# g0 l# D+ I" T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) z( i, |1 r" u: l# `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: r1 u* a$ c8 ?9 B7 l. G. z, `% L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; H# t4 z' B7 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 {- X5 n8 A" ]# I! S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% R6 J0 n2 j5 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 c5 j" p) @1 G* W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! o+ k8 i; a6 B8 u; k* e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. X% c* p$ F$ W4 i' ]6 h$ s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 L% a  ]9 l8 m! e0 c* c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, |" _) ~# X% x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>