【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 \  `* `5 U9 U: G5 N; o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) d! \# ~% d4 A; {3 o! Z" {7 z) pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: M! t& ~3 V, D+ C8 h* Q0 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 C* C8 b. D; {0 V( B& M* v. {* hWith the moon kissing it every night
/ R* j( g2 ~6 PSeeing the sky content with its love
  G. ~6 ~6 U; V. j2 Z( KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- u: K9 l; M7 J# h- z+ H8 ~) Z" `You needn’t fear anything
  I/ t0 e. x8 Y, O' C3 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ?; i9 j! D+ f( B( P1 t' jEvery other word you utter is love
" Y; c! v; R9 n0 E6 P8 U5 l4 aI really want to know just how much you love me
% _3 J1 I; c! u- ?, k& A* QI love you I love you with all my heart
: }4 D) O$ M( B: y2 t! S% R+ ^7 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ e* W' F) W" T& k* [) l  pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) p( L! _, S" z. _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# J4 j3 r2 D& U/ qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  m$ l' E" Q; h2 @' a8 c5 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ |, d, g0 R$ n2 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 [3 O/ V- \5 Q5 E( Y2 K* d# _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ G) q5 ?* a- H6 [9 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  F: o9 Z3 D/ \, H, M2 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 a! `6 C* @" ]( X, ^3 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 N2 P/ t' Y0 k: R. @4 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ z" [- V+ D  t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. M! S0 Q4 A* n( i# w; B- @9 }4 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, d8 w# V  g! o) ?0 }$ X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! O7 f/ f) {4 c8 S/ K3 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
9 U6 n: k% G; S6 A. F$ h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" O% X3 G6 c$ |# o( H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! J1 z( L: w, P1 U1 J& x, V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' j$ E+ P6 q, ~- ~, M; t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, b, F& X; M; N. ^5 L# H3 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" c6 }; }/ O8 s4 s9 `- `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Q  u; ]" M  Z9 G7 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! r7 o/ ]! y; x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, r8 n# k- J6 g0 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" N' `+ F0 E9 r- [% m9 z8 o( L  S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( y( s0 r* I4 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 i! N  v! W7 P4 Q, X. T! i& T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- T' X2 K* ?9 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; S" c0 B, x" i7 w* g5 R- s) \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% m! C8 x4 h& H1 e* k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 {3 X) n3 p% c8 m6 j) c. a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; l7 s  H* R# @) z" ]$ M3 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }9 Z* h7 \6 A- G$ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# ]! Y4 G  m4 u) m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! f: o' f# Y4 O- v3 ~. N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" ~$ _( C, @* l0 g4 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ E! w* `5 f2 U; c/ J- q: G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ ?- \3 n9 C" o$ L9 `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ k( w) n4 s) [( c% n$ A! q6 |/ H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>