【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% r- c6 B# T- z  E. }" u; I8 G$ ]$ _0 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% K* v6 p4 q$ j+ d+ LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: D: o' T) q8 [: mThe sky is happy down to its soul
% e% m& J, w% D+ E4 e8 N" ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ a+ T; T' R% o. O" E4 ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 k3 B2 R, g2 ~1 \) M( r. r8 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ _; S; E& w9 D- b& PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. @3 y, M4 h$ I. `$ AI want so much to see inside your heart
, j* g* _2 W! o  lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- k/ K# A" F& b. kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ |( G6 C" p, }% ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  x$ b4 F/ P1 fWith such a tongue as yours,
" ?  V4 e# q% H1 g( I. mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 o0 y; t3 i0 l7 m+ L, }& o* C% J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 |+ `7 f% J4 d* O& K  i$ R8 ?7 \( u1 x8 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 S) M( K+ w) q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& F! G1 o+ Q8 ^- o) _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; P( q! G: C( f% V$ P3 l4 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 O$ F5 d4 Q& I) p3 }  ~6 j  z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( T0 S( @7 \" B' s; L* C. h5 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ _: f, x* [* z6 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) L7 {/ |/ F2 _# {! A# c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ _% D) X4 M" S3 S6 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 X* j- [7 I3 d4 e; ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% t$ H& c; \# M1 R4 K! p! ^0 u) Q" F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 ^( X  t$ q  G/ o; g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ E, V, i$ X7 }* P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- l. ~/ p* o- p% P- v+ p. z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 t6 G4 Q* Y& ~% E7 `; h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ]7 I1 b( Y2 h9 w0 Z; r! o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! N- h) U1 `4 U; i0 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 }6 Y5 j& A- r' B4 x+ a! D) f& p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  }$ N/ ~! `4 r" X; q8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( f( z/ j: r' Z8 [$ w& K; l8 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! V+ c  k+ B' w8 {: U9 l( n. |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* U9 l0 m4 E0 W% ^5 V7 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" @5 Q7 b& H& t, q8 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# B6 N9 k0 X, h& S/ ?! f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ A5 [' o+ J* H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `! V' ]+ r3 @. E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 e) R0 C+ r2 L, I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 ?; C( _& L. b# C- T7 e# q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 h# T: }: Q: ?* @# @  U8 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>