【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% v( p( K" W0 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
" c5 A7 P- I& X5 l+ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" D( u4 q; V; b& X; c9 S, CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" K4 N( ^6 V  Y, h# p% @  _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! V, @8 v4 M3 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" T$ L8 L  ~; w; O$ bEvery other word you utter is love
6 A% f& a8 b( X% U& i- _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 [+ R$ ]  J2 }! P7 \9 Y' KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" z4 E- _  O: r) l8 r+ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# b/ N2 F. z3 c0 ~7 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
" v1 x% B, d* O6 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  s# b5 Q* U- T8 b' R9 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ Q7 }: A/ q5 RWith such a tongue as yours,
5 P9 p$ O) C/ L- W* OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" {) W" I2 D1 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% `" D; |$ l  N4 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 I/ v+ O+ q% a0 \8 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Q5 x. S+ K0 g$ ^7 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& I+ F2 H& o. W7 f* i& g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! l0 v% K5 G& _  P3 \. d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; H5 X. G3 a1 n# ^& Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  ?; ~( c. t2 @5 _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 E8 W+ }, P2 |* k& p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 X/ z; h+ D' p5 w  {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 `; v0 Q2 Q( ?( }9 I# v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 B$ P9 G8 p8 Q$ W2 J: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  B0 O1 l9 o' ~* y" k+ y' k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 g9 u2 u) s' z3 u, [4 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- [' h- T- C) c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ e8 n3 V  ~0 w' @4 |9 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Q+ {, D, g9 p  |9 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- A6 Z- V) ~  z2 h5 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% V: P) H9 M0 z3 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  H: V" }4 x  ^, R5 k4 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Z# c- V5 \! U* l6 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% x( m; E5 k5 h  w5 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 \- m$ q# d) z$ W1 O9 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
. h. W- A6 Y6 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z4 I! o* }1 b5 Q8 ^' ^! z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) l+ |8 b4 A/ r% T3 E. }8 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 U  ~' ]2 ]& w8 O  ?- @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, ?8 {. W3 e& ]9 Z! z4 d% }2 L7 K6 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 ~$ t( e6 o( {* f' G6 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' R7 J* h( n% {) H我请你剖开它

! @8 U' m5 c9 z  {% `3 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 E2 z! x6 `* s. t" M, v- c( |" S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>