【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# A4 u6 x+ ?" x) pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 U/ v4 D# W8 `  E6 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 ~( X3 Q7 z( {! n4 y3 J& e3 \Seeing the sky content with its love
4 |. l  S1 H, D( m* i* v6 I7 Y7 r& GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. n$ Y* n# K9 v6 L$ g6 v/ _  |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 O$ m& S9 f! t  X* V- }Every other word you utter is love
- m7 L& a" K0 B0 Z4 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( \* T( S! a) s2 y. X/ v1 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 x( m8 V" T, w3 g; M  q% d6 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* X* B$ S! h" mI’m still filled with fear
- P# `0 a2 R7 o; gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' }. L( t+ L3 S  K6 q% c/ GI regret not dying
( Z5 }2 w* b" E. ?6 S; SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 X/ c) v  n' C2 H: V2 H7 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* e7 Q' C$ T+ x4 f% K8 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 y( `+ I' S, R2 r5 C: R% l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ g& i0 \- [+ P- u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 {$ a3 h& X- [/ m" W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ ~* x7 [& Q6 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 T& ]3 `' h, B3 d1 Q7 Z$ @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 J1 N* S8 {  L9 w: a2 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 Q( A6 Z7 s2 ]( g5 E  E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% h) I' ?7 F; a: b% ^# q' X+ ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 O* B2 Z+ ^, e" d$ i0 n: W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( e( {, |" e4 I' c  a<P>你无需担心</P>
3 t4 W3 j& }0 N  G. r) ^2 H; }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ y3 e( ^0 ~/ i. w5 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ]9 W$ K# Q$ M% K& }+ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 C/ ~) s0 }$ E- G& J* v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% e1 B7 G$ H" x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, ~+ I  Y0 w$ H" C+ t2 B/ ~+ k7 ]( m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ q& E% ~: f  U; x8 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 _# s- l$ M2 W6 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) c% n) F: Y( ^& \% w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 \$ Y% c( c( i& z' M" r9 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 _# M% w% p5 z9 o4 R. j4 j, P, n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ F1 P, H7 E* }( ~$ D  O) @7 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 R$ M- z1 k# C$ M: Q6 K7 Q/ `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ]! o9 n4 j; ]* h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 G  h0 N- n1 Z' p) a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) P6 `! I7 o, d% Q. R" u/ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 t5 \5 q3 x( N$ F9 ]2 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  l7 R8 Q1 J# I* ?& C, [7 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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