【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" x7 @( q0 [& C1 R, vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 F: c) n" t& rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, B1 o, h' v( J. i7 v  G7 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  g9 N! G2 U, S5 d2 A- X5 J) U( FWith the moon kissing it every night
0 m1 N4 G$ I& t, W9 E/ r  ^, aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 z3 E$ s$ I# i3 s7 _$ ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ B# N) {4 f6 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" @+ w7 N: V! l' E1 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  A& u* W  W7 n% XI want so much to see inside your heart
; O9 E1 @) F+ G4 Y: hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ I  L3 o( b$ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 Q$ N$ s6 }) e: K, CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# W5 X6 O+ w: I6 `) S8 `, d! K6 L/ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; x4 n, _: ?* I* p- J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: R  M& h' b' P- L# _2 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ P' I0 l3 M% ]2 M2 T& c) P. E( b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% P, q; P) r9 w0 }, R  v* j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) d+ ~3 y4 s: h! |0 i& e- \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 i/ x5 h( W, j5 I: n4 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: E# ~1 [$ c+ `" u2 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 s$ F0 p9 }# }: r4 g# i1 y4 w# P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ [; `0 z0 z' k3 T& _' H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 `& F% V& a: w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 A" Z; Z+ \+ h2 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 j/ B) V" b* n1 s* Y. N/ k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; S8 X5 ^4 F8 z, L' J+ U7 c5 ]1 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 C0 ]7 H4 m2 ^0 W' z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. x& ?* e- Q4 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 }5 e- s6 H+ g" a7 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) Y& N5 X: |. d4 T( p  _9 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* h2 Q0 R; Z. B& v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# l3 h4 a2 D% o( X* x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) d$ g2 z! a& H. [" N6 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 G* U( d2 t3 ^2 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 f# B6 ]' w" m' h* r6 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ H0 U- k* S% H2 K. @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! U. b& A/ p$ H' z4 X! i. x! ?- }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' U7 A+ z0 g, k* k/ u+ F  {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 \* _/ |6 I% q/ D: }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# v# n0 S! h5 P" e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 k  R4 Y5 p& H6 q9 ~( K3 N$ Z2 I) L% {. v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>