【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 _/ Q5 z' }+ ?! |5 {2 N& |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 O0 X* e* N+ k) yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 K  h! t2 w% d/ S9 `' _! u* LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  i9 c4 V) m5 F/ h, xYou needn’t fear anything
5 s* P0 }% D: |/ v( a7 k6 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 w9 `) t6 d6 `  eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. D0 V% q5 S! g7 X; B9 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) \% \7 A. z2 A: d2 `3 Z7 fI want so much to see inside your heart
" Z& u6 C0 [: x6 ^+ YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, h- \8 ~3 J; }7 s* ^: D( wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" X; P; H) x0 H( L$ KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% I( U. B1 u1 c6 H0 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 b5 u/ Q% e% T+ YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. l, @) ~9 d6 p# w3 b0 g$ {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# x% n! I2 H# p- `  T4 ~/ w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 X  S0 Q$ e5 s. w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* s- o( z" {! \/ _. D6 H, t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ l( B! x+ s7 q8 c; V6 b1 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 O4 d2 O5 B1 ]  q<P>你无需担心</P>
! u, {+ n8 b% w5 C' X1 U- n" N) D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* n7 k4 S2 g' e0 _7 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  v7 T" N8 Y/ H. Y! F  _/ d. x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: J- m7 |7 L: @! N" u# w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ `  C* K0 s$ q, Y1 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% X! c" A' {6 z) L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% w; y! d5 l! S0 N! ?7 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. _% a3 O* q$ l. \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& H" `  I; ?6 H' A7 U- k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; {: ^  C( a0 S+ `: A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 P$ }4 \0 ^) h+ v* ^+ S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; S1 N( ]( o! A0 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 F4 ~/ }# I& g6 ?" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# \: U- ~- \+ L: ]  h6 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. g, H% z3 h4 P. a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 T; O9 h$ h0 T% F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 l& r# d7 Z0 l& g! s$ @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; B6 x: N& i0 ]( d4 e6 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% o4 s& U+ U7 \0 [  ~, l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- m& o( M( A: k( [( P# ~* S. l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% w' }$ W. {2 ]1 Q* _1 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 f# a4 {  l8 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 X$ L" M2 S7 X$ p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 p; T  k0 p3 T2 r) ~/ ]7 f% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>