【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ r. u; H' u4 U; p$ fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ x! F0 P; b3 k" Y+ E; Y3 _8 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 v: b1 t, ^3 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* d/ H: U! B3 M0 `3 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ]& e3 d! X& t* BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 n, J' {8 D+ `2 iI want so much to see inside your heart
+ G9 O' q& |+ s, a  FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* i' t6 p4 N+ v2 f, MI’m still filled with fear
! S  P; ]  p: vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 r4 j0 p1 p$ q) B* rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" N8 u% P# k, \) n- cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 o: u' V4 u- d+ {2 E  k! ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 [; D8 u& _, q9 Z0 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* }0 e3 i& h! B0 S2 g- E) k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 ^+ q) l3 \5 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ~; ]2 N, ^2 c) F$ b" t% d" @8 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( B. |+ O& Y+ m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 G; h& Q& P* `$ {9 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" x$ c% V( d9 e$ C9 f. ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 c( k3 A2 h) e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 d0 e+ S/ |7 v, |) e8 ]* @* n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 i7 W: j/ Q% L/ H1 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 C; {9 k0 ]3 M# v. [3 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' J4 Z& q) j  q0 _$ x- V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 W- [  e& G' S2 U1 \, D1 F: r2 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* J9 {/ Q7 R/ c' g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& I  R9 R+ F6 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 _: A9 e* F3 c! J8 o; a" b7 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 J3 Q+ S! [2 [; ]) U+ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& M! ?/ v3 P% L/ p1 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. X* b5 e8 G6 l+ m, @/ a" x. Y5 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 Z* ~3 u" _& z) }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 r4 Y4 Z9 P4 X( K( I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 ^8 _6 a, D" L2 a; S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 h2 B2 r- g, A9 h0 J. O! _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 j% r' q! ?" m! t" D5 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* [) q/ T5 P2 A* c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' N6 z/ i, J  V( D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 l8 _' {* `- H* N. D3 v3 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# k( i* l9 o9 [1 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. l: F  Z8 y# `7 [我请你剖开它
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3 A" e* s0 f! K3 k) F2 `7 |2 A# F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>