【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( F& n- G4 Y0 y( d: r( D* i8 l& o/ ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 P* \; }6 N8 R7 ?; xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 `" e3 X' V. h9 _& o6 i$ hSeeing the sky content with its love
1 e$ m4 B7 c, L- v/ rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( X9 i- G: H  ~, T8 q% h$ x( h& VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ s1 t0 R  _7 {% a! P% yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( h, B4 D' \3 p2 `: K8 GI love you I love you with all my heart
7 V  o' F+ n+ c9 z) ~Nothing can compare to my love
- _$ W' a& j4 i! I4 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. y3 J5 k* z7 B9 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 `8 h# C( m. v( Q7 s$ Q. `5 o; l) fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) z* X& q  y. W+ t) v5 B' ^: S8 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- f0 e+ @4 K5 r- c( i6 ]; wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" w* d8 h& v# d0 q" l9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 M4 G% [* P9 {3 P7 r' G/ d6 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% z- |# O% _1 B; Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ a) f4 n" m+ t# d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 E# b: y, g  Z2 t1 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* x5 N- e8 U* @% @0 E% w# }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 T5 S" _8 E) f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 s9 I, S: q; K3 u; e, Z' F" n# _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, C( [( \4 V" C) w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 {$ ]0 m9 f( n/ {" `4 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" m- Z, m7 A' v' W& m<P>你无需担心</P>
* Z( H- l9 ?) D1 E& J+ @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  O" W5 b. z. j+ `" i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 N! L% c- p: ^/ M& m' ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 z, b2 B% k- R/ K( a/ T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 O! n$ ]2 X, Q  P! q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. }/ @# C' I/ ^9 p# e* a0 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' ~: S, J, H6 c% ?) ?. ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 }( r0 f/ i0 }5 L" n, Q* h, V( V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 I5 I5 U* e  g* `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- l1 @. k  c3 w! D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& j5 ?2 R* {7 a$ c' F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% u& b( h5 A- r. u5 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) e+ W6 P4 ?. y: M1 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ [3 X. o' G8 o+ X  |8 e5 |" g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- w, o+ @% S* a) B, |6 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. t& t5 p; Y6 Q# r: A+ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ^8 C$ q+ s, |. I* n2 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 h* F+ P/ M& ?# U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>