【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' s  R/ y  D7 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! o6 {3 |: X! y/ W3 k% q4 _# {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ?0 v' w+ u  f0 ?& C1 ^" FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 z8 E4 z* w' w/ MWith the moon kissing it every night
+ ]' Z2 B) a: g- ]1 Y$ SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  }/ o# X& i+ p" p* xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 w& l" @' W: s# y) @; x" I4 @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 Y+ ?2 c3 W! i! B! r7 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 [5 f% a3 j9 s, h: U8 E/ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( t) D+ E2 ?8 u) V+ @( {9 WI regret not dying
% c" U0 `, x2 V6 Y! X9 D" gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# e7 F; X+ f& l8 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 M  x) ?1 M' GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ A* T, \( v! [/ H- ]: A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% W, L. [  @0 h( [$ U# m& G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Z; K9 P# x' L/ {5 g7 Q4 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 z; H3 }& z- Y. i1 X5 l% R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( a) o: z6 ?! ], o6 p  S4 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ b5 l. H  k8 E9 K% ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ]$ X4 y4 c# V& G/ E; L# r1 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* S1 I+ }/ C5 P' ?. `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 \' g( W8 S9 @# P: Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* _  F3 U- w3 H6 I7 Q( w8 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 d( v" K; }+ p8 d3 {<P>你无需担心</P>
- `& B* \& P$ X+ l8 S# i# H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) [# O3 Q- d( E, v3 ^3 l: R' H1 M# f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( l& T  ]; u* q1 U3 ?& ?( _# s* K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 d2 |) Y& n& M- L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' p: v% _! J9 ^9 Q7 c6 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 x2 t2 P5 D3 x% z4 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 A1 x( Z, J! b0 B1 Y& e! Q. N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; N* t0 z6 n9 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 Q. H) `7 u7 z: |+ e$ E7 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; K8 o# {  [5 t1 i; `$ b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 }7 D1 ]# `9 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% i/ d( O8 b) X( d4 P2 i' C$ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ]" L8 l- J) u( Q7 K, G8 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>