【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 _; C( R& u; N/ \0 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 S) t$ u" c: O6 I8 y1 U9 \8 g2 D2 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' j- u6 ?0 O" R, Y; sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( H( ~! R; `- [+ R( u* CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 [  F( k  J& x# Y7 y, o5 N# @: Q; |The sky is happy down to its soul
6 H, }( w5 z' ]With the moon kissing it every night
' i: D& I  E0 \: ]5 iSeeing the sky content with its love
9 N9 d7 C+ o9 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* N+ P; X- v* _! v6 T: ~& L8 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 M" O7 U2 \2 t+ aI really want to know just how much you love me
% k: u9 n- O' ]9 G9 yI love you I love you with all my heart
5 Q. N) Z& n/ s2 ANothing can compare to my love
+ G9 J) c* ^7 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. M6 l0 O. l" k1 N1 v3 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ~: X2 b, ?* i+ z' R4 xI want so much to see inside your heart
1 f3 M( O. P7 s- a$ o- V- I% u. lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% B- O8 `% R6 ~' ~6 i: O7 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" R) L! t& }% M& Z# ~3 i9 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 A7 b6 T+ N' Q8 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' _5 y$ v/ H* t/ W  T( W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i7 R; k, w, w7 z3 Z) K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' R& D4 m9 V. o# ~, g/ R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" @* a/ s4 U5 L3 J' L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 B# O2 K1 S& }& W7 w# _1 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& F$ i. m" E, |9 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 r/ ?8 r# ~$ B/ s# K. F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: G$ ]- Q  o& _$ Z9 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& N2 M9 `* F1 h* l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 E+ Y9 }1 o; s, B! a$ n  r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ^6 \9 J" C2 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 O% \( @8 v, L* j/ \0 w- c2 T# L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* w% X" \2 k2 Z3 I5 O5 S4 }0 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 e7 y, _7 v5 T5 q9 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 `" \0 Y9 K- ]  {3 i) o  I9 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 l: ?! f: g  E% Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" F/ }0 U( t" w( v+ H  T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ x. D  J/ C: [% N1 l. c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# d: S, @, j, B6 P- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! `. j. j7 p5 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 e2 n/ N% _; O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 \2 s& W, }$ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' _" a# X4 N$ S0 M8 P+ l; e- T8 R& B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 W2 Z' }. G, j  E  ?0 L! s4 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 {* F- r' x- W1 Q6 R; }# b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ R9 P; X# w4 U6 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, s! r. M  }5 o4 L! Q5 h# |<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ C" P! }1 x. j; x* t8 S5 v: B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; a$ L1 p  S. }+ w# W- \3 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  G; ^) @8 o0 N$ T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! b/ A+ B7 Q+ C6 D  n: E# L% D: B# b0 \' ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 Y" x. k( s# Q1 N# M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  @% T8 @1 c6 {5 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* u: Y3 ~" e* F1 P9 n  [& ]3 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& z3 M0 h8 Z& K0 D- j# i4 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ R, @1 Z0 j, N7 M/ O, t$ U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! O" ~7 Y# e* l5 k7 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>