【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( T3 B1 j" V8 l% d: ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 ]2 F- k; i- b  d. M+ N9 K. yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 e" L) n# D  n8 b4 W/ p  d' KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ p9 t0 ~; N0 s! f3 G; sThe sky is happy down to its soul
, _1 _6 N9 I0 X1 s; _# V+ L* sWith the moon kissing it every night
. K( l# n/ ^4 X; HSeeing the sky content with its love
7 _. N* f" a! E. J. iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! r  X/ U5 ~, H2 x9 l8 DI really want to know just how much you love me
. e  }8 p8 i2 H  L& rI love you I love you with all my heart
) c: Y2 j- q! I4 U/ _3 A8 H. U% ONothing can compare to my love
9 Z0 \5 N9 V7 L4 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 L) k5 t" W. N1 ~* ?9 XI want so much to see inside your heart
" J/ f9 P: Y" c) a, N! p/ ~+ N( rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- r: m4 @' V- V+ u7 _4 q( AI’m still filled with fear
3 d) C" n5 r+ Z  z0 l& }, OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) X* P# Q* r$ S0 m6 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# G0 a5 D1 C( N2 d' QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' q7 _( n8 Y8 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 K' {5 @9 l1 e! O9 v* F: O0 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 C7 I) |% x' I9 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 C, ]* M  f+ t3 @7 y/ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" E4 Y+ p4 g$ H% c- `0 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ }% I4 G) T$ B4 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% v( ?0 u8 j0 D1 ~- h: A5 [) l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" @/ y% G/ U$ S* W6 d2 ?( O/ t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ~- C# k  S; y! u  \8 g+ J8 H7 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% Y/ p2 J4 G' `9 @+ s; K5 k. ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( ]$ U$ C9 T, [8 X9 P3 u2 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 e/ }; R7 G; D' u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ K$ A+ w8 K+ B% e5 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 B( a, a+ j4 i& F5 c+ v( ?* ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 W# I- Z% k5 c& S: V3 H/ q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ P9 z" T( r3 T* F/ O- x/ a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% g( g# ^5 S3 V. p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 h. L7 a1 V) q2 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 k5 q/ |0 N5 U! d0 j& J+ ~9 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ s/ L, z! E2 l1 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( }1 e$ e- w3 G% W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j: _+ g! E# {3 U3 [) ]/ Y% ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! W9 {+ w; Y7 W; w1 _: D' P& O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ]* h# d  C% P: `% I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: O* G1 G/ Q) ~4 B* C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; s# l! k' _1 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 f+ `6 I" ^; `4 Y9 a& Z  c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ B& C" \# L+ x9 A2 f# G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 A5 r" i4 @) J% u0 c& F" O# C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. C6 V" C( ~2 `  X$ n- S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# ~: w8 G4 b" J$ c6 M& r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; R/ _8 z- B% A) J0 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>