【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 Y5 k0 @4 L0 j: W+ M歌词我附在后面。
) R$ n6 B+ B2 F; a; m- ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 o, Q' C) k  TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 ^* y" k+ Q1 u0 L& c. a5 e, PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& O( M0 s. `% K# bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ^/ J4 Z1 f0 ]: i0 @9 @* p) gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# m/ `# R  B: L  X& DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  M$ z+ i( p; \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 U6 a3 G- @( ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% K( |7 Q* R& k; N3 V( II’m still filled with fear
" a" o, E( l' q7 a7 L5 a5 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* h5 c' v, [8 k5 B) q( Z! mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 T- M4 a3 y' n6 k3 i: KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 `; Y' u! T0 c/ v( mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 L9 c4 P. |( d9 o: q0 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ s! P( o& V/ r: M0 Y* k: L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 t  l" |, [6 Z2 G7 M$ B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 g$ H, W, {4 S- [* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- b# s, P1 W, s" V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" M* o3 o$ C& q$ O/ s& `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 J6 M% c- W" Q* Q% l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( v" P2 [* w/ _# M( t7 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  A; U# {, w! a4 i5 F$ i$ e' c. c$ ]: N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. H, N) [" ]# I- L0 g0 g1 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' M2 E, A7 _. S3 m6 _4 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 C$ R1 V: O! u! d& R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% v( t* @2 Q8 M3 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% V2 S' x+ v; ~) \; z4 S6 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# v: e! r& D: p9 m2 L3 u: H7 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ m- P. Z. V! D! c/ P5 V! `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 b1 Z1 t$ {6 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' G) N& l% Y4 F' X: p8 c3 j; l9 ?9 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! _8 s3 q3 @( T9 g9 Z& ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 \. G& g0 f0 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 M7 V5 N( B% f& K6 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 C8 h/ w- C) T1 r+ O% u& M, N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: a7 ~+ N5 W0 {9 G: p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 U, j% \: }( c( n2 c: ]$ Y0 p* g$ G, |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) H! [" w" W, f" g) P$ p/ M4 S. P8 n% D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 u4 f7 [! @0 ~) t6 }  @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" r" x/ O9 |) w0 O# E' a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) K. w/ B+ N! Z, [* w. j- h0 N我请你剖开它
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5 f, {0 C( e$ W2 f" o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' a8 o9 g1 Y; Q8 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>