【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. P: o2 Z5 U1 v9 F, J2 h5 ?# HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; a) a; \3 j$ I: D; f6 ]! D) T( j: M+ YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ d" u$ D$ P  k) PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 M* j/ @- Y7 |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 Z" s& a8 u2 l2 f$ L* IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 D& G/ I8 ^) `4 B* `Every other word you utter is love
- y: `, {- b5 ^. D0 E1 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! p0 b+ n3 y8 u( Z4 L5 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ L; {; C: j. c- T; AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 \! P% {8 r! b( Q) e0 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ `4 [- b. v4 [+ k! ^" c; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" [; }* m( S. }9 bWith such a tongue as yours,
- `% e2 n! g8 ^( m0 |# E, TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; ?" E  J3 `; ?. {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  x2 v; t( U% m0 @6 N- b# M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% X/ E' F  |" ?. \* B( @  G" D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 K( c8 u! i4 X  G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" K, H7 [$ [8 Y  h! G# h0 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% V+ D/ c% l; w8 J" O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ q) n5 e$ O; d! Y! G$ s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  U# U% O  q$ e/ d) @: {7 g* ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! L  C8 v" D  X, k; {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 T) y* F! Z4 U7 t2 i( k' O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' b; P8 G+ c2 Y( ]- Z+ [- {2 Y% [$ t% x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- P- D/ f3 h3 z' D5 a# F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 V  ?- n* b1 Y* l) ?" Y* c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 S% a; Z( q9 V% t5 E% P9 x# T2 F- Y: B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( s, a' [# u4 d1 }  h4 `5 q5 \$ _( L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ L. L& G8 u: v6 S- I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& k4 Z* ?9 r* e" K' W( P) s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% o( A6 ^5 l7 j& O) m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' V! C3 f$ B( [: b9 W& B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- ]) M7 F  @) M  Z( S2 a% n. z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  I8 Y- d# s# [; O- P% @& ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" b( L# B' M7 q+ Y) y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; u8 g8 ]" l* L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. n7 I9 j; e7 \1 q5 J7 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- n* p1 ], |( q3 v9 |6 \! I# f- a; i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 U" E2 g, u' |$ Z2 t9 f, |2 q9 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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