【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. X' U5 u- a4 C& Y  N0 w9 p/ F6 y3 b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 z$ D9 a. o8 ^( {7 U7 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* x" G  L! M# f3 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) I: T3 T. M/ X. j: ?You needn’t fear anything
2 q% ~* i. a8 }, j7 G5 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( z) o) M* D; MI really want to know just how much you love me
' F( W& i: P  W  r0 u8 a6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- A3 \6 `  F/ l, kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: X" t5 r( Z( u& b+ _1 G' mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; p* ~) ]7 ~3 x* nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; k) w* g- N: O  d( v+ p( rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; O6 f5 ?: x; }  Z5 _) K  iWith such a tongue as yours,
  x3 A" j7 d& H* b. {, W! w& OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ y8 n; V+ o8 V& J7 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 K7 M3 y3 C. b2 [( ^5 i/ }/ I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  [1 \- k- g# v; r) M8 t6 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# a6 y6 Q: `* e$ C% I/ a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* K! ]7 g; y( G8 [% I7 Z8 Q' o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; `3 a/ h' \( I: x* I) L$ l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. `4 \' z: X7 V. c+ U& _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% _5 \6 t5 q( N# f+ g0 U' O* d: @% i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 N, v7 D; T0 Q2 z& i. U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ R' c( D, Y+ d3 p9 ^8 L# @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( L9 |( ?2 `: b5 ]/ s9 T' o* p, Y) B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 A0 A; b0 I& A; w$ p4 h. y& Y  E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" q& _+ u7 v% O* i& C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 P8 U# A% u8 I2 A; _; s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 l2 R& Q" I8 b: a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' K8 \' K4 L# a, ]2 y% O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ h9 _- V$ k9 r. E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* z4 U9 j6 R4 O8 t, f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ q* p/ z* ?* [: F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  u5 s2 C' n# S; t3 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 k% b/ h3 G/ ~3 Q. E/ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% R) a  T/ z! N5 z! \6 F! i' [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# M+ _3 f8 M7 P) J+ ^- j+ ], c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! t5 {# }. u- }( G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 v# O! K$ c- j0 h3 d$ U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' ^2 q. w! ^( A# f我请你剖开它

4 V4 V6 a1 M: \3 Z0 S" H1 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>