【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' C3 o1 u1 k8 V9 O/ L- Z# LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ H  T% K4 p6 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* L3 K5 r5 `0 S9 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) t6 J7 }7 {0 _0 Q& \) u' kThe sky is happy down to its soul
, h9 N) n! O/ J) ?# \: `With the moon kissing it every night
! n2 U  b9 I; e3 @6 XSeeing the sky content with its love
- P9 k" k. R0 B  PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ `0 h5 A1 n1 @7 ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 n! C: R% t0 j& \; vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 a$ o2 `7 h1 l9 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  u8 _) m# q1 e5 g3 V/ j8 Z8 i- LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& `/ h! g6 w5 F' OI want so much to see inside your heart
3 |8 o# u: Q/ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ x) B  K8 c" [# [; pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 P& V# e5 q* {8 J& eI regret not dying
/ V" P+ {9 i$ L0 e; a3 y2 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 b$ p7 [% V& g/ UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ A# U# S, l% b4 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Q7 P' W$ \3 Z4 z! g% L& L5 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ `7 H2 F/ l+ |5 D; j. ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Z9 m/ ^4 i6 V) I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* Z- @2 ~2 x# A3 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ I7 G3 o7 W5 V; ]& Y) ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 ^; _2 P: f7 P7 ]+ ]2 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" z, Z, i- D& h<P>你无需担心</P>
* |/ Q6 {$ U2 U3 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  s8 Q# f+ x- f$ ~0 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* V" \+ Y; r1 o( L) d3 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  y0 D9 \* q, l/ G. v4 s* m. l' a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 \" F4 f  d9 d1 M* x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Z- L3 a$ Y! t0 b' M& M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) e; e1 j/ ?. ~! _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 ?8 n# M+ p4 b& e  ?( [7 T  `; s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 U, @* e. f7 S* i* |# ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ]+ d9 J& b( `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ?. J8 w( O: F# v! N- o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, D7 ]. }" E/ P8 S& ^0 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  m' W& O' d4 J2 j. Z3 ?# Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  G) R# E/ l' U: u' b% r  \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- U6 c+ i+ R  d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' e4 n( V, l8 r1 i9 F) k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  }8 K6 K" j8 W3 a9 ~9 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 [2 y# R2 e, h- R" E0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 j+ d! h. S- N0 Y8 w# D2 _6 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 W, V5 O" U0 b$ m3 P1 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 S5 \) s0 U5 J' J: r5 i; z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 B5 t2 t# @9 f) U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" ~" _8 i9 Z, N1 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>