【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% k. F; A1 U: h: r0 ?/ wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 `, u5 {; G# m5 l4 @* hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 Y  B; k0 d% c+ x7 ?- NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: F2 g: G# a1 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" Q% n! G% V- nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 P! V* K( b+ y& D$ hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, P+ H7 U& A# YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& Q3 H, h  L) R1 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* x3 k, G9 u) ~: D6 s5 ~  RI regret not dying
8 z% g+ P. r$ _( YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; D, v+ E4 G( _5 ~" B8 q7 f" h6 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 m( g' A5 F- |* f$ A) Q0 ~$ }4 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' k7 L+ @/ ?. f8 A' C% eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) Z6 w2 f: Z, \. N3 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! E+ b- A2 ]' \! F- \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 I* i- _, b7 N, x8 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' h$ u% q; A7 E3 D+ J' s6 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 A9 i, ?  H- h  z0 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 N8 m8 j1 ?5 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 g* s4 H9 E( T; H: z* |<P>你无需担心</P>
' ^- n0 g7 ~1 \9 o4 S$ f+ b; W. V' Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 w6 B& G* o5 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 e; E5 I0 f# A+ p3 Q  }8 f( p0 _: Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 b. y9 r3 R* S: @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 {! a. [% i& f8 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ V, p- c! I& G4 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* P$ b% j, E# ?% I; e7 [+ z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) V& T9 v) i* c$ U; V& l) h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( X1 i5 T% Q. A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" e$ M9 V! R. u7 H! u& z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" M3 `/ e; I/ }' d' |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( c# X" k. [6 @7 u7 _9 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
" _9 i/ C9 w; }. Z* p" S( s! u& `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( g+ N- Y/ @: j/ H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 W9 U0 I2 x% ?4 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% l+ P6 I1 ]9 I& o1 F8 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M6 u# l* o$ p. j- s# f' U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>