【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ ^) _' d) j; h6 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 S5 r  K/ R& l. h. _( L6 g' bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 [4 l! N9 F$ L- P& QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ]  c6 D3 c  v/ O2 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ \$ S' I( l! ~0 l) A& Z- d  IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' z- V1 R8 h# uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ m$ }/ O, B- P6 vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: w# v- N0 h% K5 j$ k8 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Q) n0 c; Q1 e" KI’m still filled with fear
7 V# D; T) W, [* d9 N% XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, g0 i& y' u8 B' D$ ]5 ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 H: Q0 G; E% \# z9 N7 _4 N8 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 r0 o  `7 \6 U* K4 i% S+ _8 T& h& U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ X' ~! Y3 I' h# J1 }9 }9 R/ g2 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) m9 K2 g5 O% E0 i0 H7 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* g( w7 @2 }3 M6 D3 t; I6 x2 |% }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 E; y% ^$ U+ w* L8 m  p% q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 u1 T# W: w. N3 ]% J: e6 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: |1 p3 _" E5 l4 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 x. U! Z8 ^" }1 J7 d# r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' p1 f. N; d" y  Z0 a% j# o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, G" ~# N8 |9 V. f, [, n4 T" i, f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 x/ w$ G  C0 L) j9 u1 x2 y& O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' u+ h5 [( p4 o: ]) I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 X6 O1 v1 v. s: z0 Y6 P2 c<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ?( {0 N4 I9 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ L% X. H9 _6 P1 b! l  c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 N5 _3 J. n. w2 O! R& s% s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' d' I( v7 Z; v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, W& ?3 a: y4 [) E6 `/ y5 }1 m6 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 y2 @& Y0 N( o( C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  C5 d6 M* j9 q0 ~3 k; @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 B0 `: R" A& w2 k- L) A( Y! T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 m. a$ u' m: X" e) q6 R1 n1 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* \4 c8 e" p- I- |4 w, g8 [5 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 N/ U2 O1 x* j/ }4 H( V) o! ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 D- p2 O1 u" N3 @' Z% F4 ]& k: c7 o( \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 y, P# J2 a9 h8 K0 t2 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; d+ M" D7 Q% S) v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: O2 X$ v/ j# z% p& ~: `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  o4 B; p8 S2 {  q6 b' p2 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; H' K6 N6 A* [9 d1 G8 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, e; [3 b. K' l! L3 u1 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& E+ l7 _* f3 C) l我请你剖开它

! ^' K) Q" B5 `4 ?, ^3 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>