【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% A" V! r/ |% f& sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, a# I2 z% g  [2 A# F& }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, p& M: n8 g* l5 y1 y4 g4 y$ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% g# N" h) |3 O; Q5 p# A3 V4 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 v$ I( w& C6 B- `( tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- T1 R* {& n( J9 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" ?0 s- X' s) b; WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' l4 b" T- H* o" i2 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, {7 p. G, y, u5 Q; i, UNothing can compare to my love
; `3 X$ }" }8 N3 g: _9 e0 t0 q7 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 u5 o$ ^" u8 |; r( I# ]I want so much to see inside your heart
! e7 m' e( B6 Y& e( OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ |# E; Q) c) m8 |5 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) }0 d3 M# X0 y; o- jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 f9 U! R% F$ n0 Q4 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# o  J. X; g/ A' P: aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* }; M* |! {/ L4 l( i* v7 A+ O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 Z2 I, c* _+ X: |. o( X. Z& V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. x1 x- y" T% q$ Y1 h5 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 X: V/ n: z. ?0 ]( ?' j! E9 i1 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, J4 y9 y% a+ a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 Z; J" ]3 e2 X; M# {- [; j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 i( F$ k2 `! n. Z% G2 |' s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ?- \: M% Y6 K) A6 H8 _! X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' K  W" q4 o. r1 j7 s+ `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 X6 D, X: E& @* A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ P; h2 L" t/ r# G9 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 z! w; b6 g7 B) ^  i, j) x. W, H<P>你无需担心</P>
+ d' D+ H& a9 M5 w/ d; n3 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' |$ R0 Z" b% z9 v: h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 B" K7 d0 {" q; V2 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' T! t# g9 m0 I. N3 j. S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ c" C5 m% v- }0 B# X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: l9 ?, G( \8 _! z5 {& P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) X0 y9 ]$ u9 I  n6 O( M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' F8 f$ v0 C0 l9 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* u( n2 y7 w% B: J* l. g( n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# ]: I) b- ?1 C' @) M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- w  Y+ D; H' w% y! T  U/ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) w  l' S4 l1 c/ N  ~+ u$ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ]; Q# _( y3 Q# V& u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>