【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 @2 s7 d( S7 M+ O- G$ A4 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) y5 x& r9 ?$ I0 ]- c2 J, P/ ~3 c0 q3 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 l& }# h' z' zThe sky is happy down to its soul
) y( o4 q$ b  v' P5 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, H0 g2 H, Y# T+ o' s! B# Y9 k# qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, p& c, @8 Q) m/ REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) p7 B' o  |$ H+ }Nothing can compare to my love
4 A  M$ S' B( O) W2 i5 t7 S6 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; d6 z6 \2 b$ B# s: m" y0 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 Q, G: i6 {; J/ A9 r! B; b. B( R% EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! O5 T7 n% Q/ G4 m  o$ X1 |6 hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, g/ T$ g) x; e& X9 ^: h' N6 k$ q- hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 k6 i4 R1 [" Y8 o4 z. j' P7 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) i) E9 f+ a5 y$ f8 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 o9 d# s' q/ E) b- C' I+ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 J; @# I9 h" q# v$ K2 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; {* I( z2 K. b5 T* w* }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 S2 Q! @) }& f7 A4 D7 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 g) Q- D8 g! C  K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 }  o' F' d8 K5 E, X5 L8 G# C$ j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 U9 I- D' U0 S- i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Z$ p( f/ s! S7 O. g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 P. h4 y$ x5 F6 k; P$ F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 A/ r) l5 v+ c4 [- W" C8 o. R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ G1 q; c1 W% `/ [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  T! e% C8 S# J9 t; X) G; |+ W4 b& Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 w3 A; ]& b1 u/ q# R: ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 `! h6 d' J% w  ?( n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* s+ K' ]$ d3 q- H4 x6 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 B, T- K6 C, A" c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ V) |1 u0 X1 |9 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ~) R! X% s) [3 n3 |' I6 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 m8 D0 Z2 ~8 u9 W4 z% m4 J, e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Q9 R2 U. b6 ]' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ^* b# J( D  q, r. m0 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  P7 M: e& S( t( Y, W  R% G6 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 h( [. \) j1 E( d7 F5 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 H! l( v3 t3 i4 j' z8 M0 Y0 Z" _# R  b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% b: F  v. i# I; f. q8 R9 M% ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' K0 L4 Z1 Y2 ]# e# O) P: q2 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>