【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ j/ Y& \% w. l5 S2 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 J1 `- M6 ^+ L+ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 z/ b9 o; x& ?" O+ H  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ @0 F1 S# {. C/ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 Y* U0 R4 C: I6 uYou needn’t fear anything
, F6 l6 m. g" qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ I$ o2 E5 O- s  V# _Every other word you utter is love
6 g3 X3 L9 |8 z# r2 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! l+ A- F* X1 Y& J2 _9 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  O0 q6 H) o8 ?: [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% [& b3 q& F+ F& w; e% C# z  {9 @9 yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! X; E: m4 H( H$ Z' L1 oWith such a tongue as yours,
5 J0 d( j# g- Q+ E( fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 J$ i* U6 \+ kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 W; F% b. K/ Q* k/ X5 w5 p4 c4 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 F/ O" T& {. }, d- I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* E' \( H; {3 P) C( u% u5 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: j+ k9 a3 T* y5 @( {  p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 N* `% K' r& K7 O* e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% p6 E) J& d% @8 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( w0 [4 [- r1 O8 o% X( g6 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ?) S4 J- g. \2 f/ F+ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# B! G% W) Y- i% Z9 ^1 e& v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; t4 b: y( H! ]- A! q$ [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ [1 v2 q* j4 D+ S1 b& E4 J% l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( W* R8 V8 ~& y1 T: `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, v; {3 @; m' o# F) `2 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ \- q+ t, I' x. @: r- N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 a- x" t1 F1 W8 ~/ \3 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 v) ?2 g% P: }: W! P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% L; A( A( p' G5 C5 s1 D+ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 Y/ w3 @( E9 b, A" I* p3 {# Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 N0 t( ?9 L- K2 o" Y) ?' _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: h* ~# t9 H; l9 ?6 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 b, E( q" p$ G1 N3 P1 F& j' b* w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 d* R' F- x3 @8 X3 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ n1 k" c' I* x1 ^- Z4 f4 }- x1 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! M. M$ o/ L1 m& j5 @! }<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ a0 c8 B: A6 t+ Q2 `* B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 C  D! E( H  Y$ Y$ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 {5 o, x; o- |; I7 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  U" k3 G; {0 ]( o& t5 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 W6 O! \- G2 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ e6 h4 y7 |+ d& \/ r' b) c% v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% K3 t( I5 J1 ~, F& Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 S, F$ g9 ~$ V! M+ I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" |' b8 x2 I1 c0 R) G+ t* w( p( X我请你剖开它
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  m8 j0 @7 C* n. a5 r  j  d- |8 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>