【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 Z1 x' Q/ p' d6 W& xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 m$ y( @+ i7 }1 u  \; L* IWith the moon kissing it every night
( y- R6 E6 U, N+ o0 j; U8 z; uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: U9 y3 x7 `" n1 R) ~  ^) ^You needn’t fear anything
5 Z+ |  c; ~& F6 ~) G, K( A* ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# \/ c/ ]* c' P) X0 R  uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 @8 ^5 @1 R) k8 L! `) `* \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 F  J0 y) s8 t$ k1 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* }( P! e! y# C1 M9 L) E. r7 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% }  o: J& Y  B" DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& W0 i6 ]5 R/ l% {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ G- ^4 w( x% ^7 _& a1 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 L; C; |) ]# ~5 ?$ }- k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* z6 w0 E1 v! q% H" J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. A3 t: D/ E( g0 Q0 `$ ^" \$ Y$ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 e* s9 ~# ~* r# z3 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 l4 ]" Q! C/ K0 `6 H# G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ^+ x9 \  ^9 y8 Z7 |6 ^: ?9 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 ]' K% x. K; v7 M/ c& q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 R- n) h) K: i  r4 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% m; o. h  A* P% Q3 q( l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 p# Z0 \6 M- `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 F5 p- E) b* X& e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- p& N0 x4 f: c3 n( ~" A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 b5 @1 J3 ]2 s) w5 N" M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% F' Y$ S3 l8 w. \- `) A/ S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 z9 S# c3 p7 M& P  l" W+ ?0 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 H1 |4 x) z; t. T- Q! A, b& }% c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- @) ]. ^+ _+ j( W0 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ^7 m' k: t+ p8 X) V; |- b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 F, ~; p: J1 n& o+ x" C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) G! V1 s2 {) _! ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 x1 j9 ]9 `- \" C" `8 l6 V3 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 J9 O% B% U2 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
; T  m* b( D# Z8 M; R3 N. ^9 u
我请你剖开它

2 g+ H6 m  }/ q6 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  A( e0 L$ I: H  A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>