【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ }7 _: B/ Q4 m# a$ {' R; r- c# eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 w- I" y, d# R- j0 B' |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& t" J3 i4 C/ ?% }4 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* h9 r* l8 p% T1 M( V$ Q! MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: @6 w4 x9 t0 u1 ^Nothing can compare to my love
5 Q" y( ]/ _; B; V4 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& b2 P( K7 R7 X, x, b+ T8 TI’m still filled with fear
3 {2 f7 Q( r: R/ B& Y# X% H& KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% @+ K& I6 Z2 o* `. W) P- L3 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 w$ T& \$ S$ J3 @+ y$ `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ^/ O9 z% l6 V; Y( [) JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. A* p$ O( U- t; t  q& D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; L% v, V& z; U1 N" D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ L6 s; q3 u# h% p: s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! ]' ]; c; {' O1 I0 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( W: v9 s9 V  c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; E5 C+ z" Q4 G! N7 u* U# R4 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ _% f& A  X7 E+ a9 o0 k) e. ?" X1 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Z# ?; ~$ E. n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 U- S3 g% L# I* {2 d<P>你无需担心</P>
/ S% Q+ D8 K5 |' t; s: _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Q+ s9 P' [  _& e7 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 [& m8 t% t/ D$ b* Y8 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- o! G7 M% [/ I8 b8 H* l' _% v, v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" M/ j, @) p8 K: ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 H( A2 w7 R( h9 J/ Z8 S3 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  b0 N( k. J: v* D% G' Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 C6 s4 ?# E7 v+ H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 j3 |( u/ A9 z2 {4 d( @) A. e+ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ G! Y8 l9 F- X* T. \6 W' O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. l9 B. U0 f5 E0 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 T" w: I3 I7 A0 {; K, `4 g# Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: l, o2 m7 b3 Q0 J  L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" f5 r7 y" V' n) }* \3 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 \% w1 ~0 Z! d' W' i9 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ J/ e7 _$ e+ y  |6 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% ~4 V% W5 J  _& x! X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Y8 o+ X+ H  a& D* j  }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( O* M0 q4 @: X1 O  v0 V3 F8 [) E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* b; l7 T6 k$ }9 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ L$ _# n: G7 T: @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 e! H2 Z; g  G0 [% W) T; f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ F! V# o- `5 R' ]  Q5 e+ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>