【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# @4 o2 b# T8 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  j6 Q' N) N/ RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: B9 }2 H. ^. _# ]' C8 F4 [7 Q( wThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 p4 ^1 k7 p0 i0 r, q+ a# hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, T( D' a7 |9 ]! A% |1 f7 U8 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, o; Z8 c9 m0 ^  I$ o8 y% XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 @  d: W! E! R: QI love you I love you with all my heart
% h+ f, v& N! E% m) a8 w4 vNothing can compare to my love
; Z0 m+ v) s- ]5 R, @, }" T: u# @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% L4 D+ V6 ~+ AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 g& u* |; K  a6 A9 \. `. tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 v7 S% G9 E, W1 S6 o% qI regret not dying
6 i6 D4 F6 O5 O8 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' G4 ]9 j! {' }: F1 u0 UWith such a tongue as yours,
% J. F. U! ~( ^& pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ G& p3 @0 e0 K* _- ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 f# b+ t! R' j+ w% x  D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 K' e4 F1 k$ F. t6 o8 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: o, C2 D# p2 o; R  V) G! i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 @6 S& q+ a" s7 c* t) A9 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 P$ `) @: V2 X5 @. u! l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  U0 K( X6 s3 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 w2 }- V1 d& T& d/ p( f) N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; U& ]+ ?0 s% a# t& A8 M; L3 H% z1 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. U0 u+ h* O, ~9 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# L$ G9 Y# e1 I# N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( e; I2 {2 S+ P1 L  T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ b& z& }; T* W. j; f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 I/ M+ {0 H5 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) G1 u" I2 C$ n& {1 ]1 d  o: J5 O# S4 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" K. H! S  B# h' [1 ?0 E' Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 l# ]  G* ?4 H' e, m' B( \( C: ?. k! R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ]# c9 |) l) a" Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- @% w# l; t1 p! Z( d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  n8 [$ u9 Y# z- T9 C1 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% A  d& J1 ]" I, m1 `5 t; s: [0 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  f- a: q3 X9 u  U  x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; P# T2 H- |$ u, A) `5 j2 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Z9 a, E! m4 ^* d6 N% C' A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ~9 n3 N4 {( s( d3 V2 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ C- e, k) v' W. X9 D. j& ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 {4 ?9 h; x+ V! O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ^% P- v; E$ J( D+ s  e3 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- [" q$ }" s, X8 e) g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( e5 w& S) G5 ?$ R5 P& X* c/ f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# x, Q. E9 n+ H- u. b8 f, }# G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, K4 |0 X. ~/ u: a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- I; b5 B! M% ?  {+ U/ |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 e, G! t) L2 Y6 ^# [5 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% D) H" A/ ~9 \6 u" @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 c! ]% x. O3 I. w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' c! ?" m' P  k0 `! D( |6 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ K/ U4 h' J4 V5 c% n1 Z: o8 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>