【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! e) |3 `" A  h2 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! N2 q0 p$ ^/ Y9 v. U1 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, y6 a' ]3 T0 y. gWith the moon kissing it every night
4 R& i% M' ~; J' dSeeing the sky content with its love
" a) C3 i: w- b! a* V: QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' G8 P. [. S7 Q+ _% {0 _; yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  {$ ?" u8 J7 e; nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% L  P( i, a; ^5 y' e. ^  KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; T9 N, n" v+ l; x& u, N4 aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# a. l# I) W$ D% Q+ S$ B! iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 i+ t4 E/ O" h- K+ a' M4 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. j2 l! @# o4 e3 \: W- RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 d/ _1 l; n# E# zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, v. k0 m+ f& y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, g( L6 D7 a$ T8 ?+ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Q0 q& V- c1 z3 i$ s) D7 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ G: Y  a; w- R* I9 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 N3 [, m# X: {* B) L( x" J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 L3 N; }: F' H3 f0 E3 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 v% p% c' x- P" O) k4 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 y* S2 b/ H% H0 Q, D- A1 ]+ N& I  v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 M8 r! ]; k# u% n" C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 g1 ~4 }+ c6 o$ L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 b2 u$ @% [6 Y4 z4 q5 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. z4 I$ ]" j  d6 B/ J2 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) W0 ]7 M! _1 k- f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# s; R3 Q& i4 g* w1 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) w6 m% V0 q: R6 {4 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ A( a: B7 B2 w3 p1 b7 W9 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. G; g. v7 O( A( h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 k2 s/ ~3 u; D: B+ U5 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Y5 p- l  y- F  M% ?5 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 Z; [" D5 r9 l) {' t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) p) f3 }7 V: }5 r5 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& T' ~) z1 e$ Y* D9 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i* B$ K* b- a( q' k3 ]+ ~( X+ I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 U2 z" o- A) \/ Q- B' i+ l2 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ x! m6 E: M5 K, _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% b1 V1 |6 g& h6 C, y0 y* q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>