【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- t5 k+ i- {  AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 N. D; K. i" @! `* a. VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 X' v1 ~, [% x* AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( W, g: R, {1 d$ H3 U1 _" }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 B* ~5 M, }, p" B* c7 O; v& @( yYou needn’t fear anything
9 I, s+ B7 d; `1 S/ q( n  SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 u2 x6 T" s1 l& UEvery other word you utter is love
  |. S3 F9 v7 Q# u. b2 `I really want to know just how much you love me
/ z: t6 E+ V7 T% p1 ?  r, qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ J  g5 G9 B. L, |1 J. D  gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 h. w3 A% a8 Y( X- lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 }& b5 s% |9 X2 m. I/ mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 {( X+ V3 \. E$ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 U9 g0 e8 p  h5 M7 o- x0 H/ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" c3 u/ S! N: m7 i" Q' h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 S- Y& [2 |& z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) g" W* n0 g: k0 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: |% e% S& p% E3 {" b4 Y0 P, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" n5 I# m1 p4 g$ P5 R) R: U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 `8 c% S/ g! y2 t4 r6 ?# E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ j" S6 K3 E( Q9 u) x- Q% @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# M% ]+ m. L+ l" Y; D' [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ L! ~- r; @3 W+ H/ p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; `/ Q6 g$ y' G7 D& \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( q- L# ?9 E3 G7 [3 M) f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 \2 [5 X, {9 M+ x2 `, ~: e/ Q# |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% }. |# f# o' H3 Z7 [" k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 u: A$ i+ e* c& Z( c+ g% r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* _3 ]. s( R& A6 c/ x. m1 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 S5 f' R; e: U; Z1 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: C! b1 ]3 w1 \, @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 W: G" ~  M% T* S9 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% {4 h3 Q; |4 f' c. R) p! G# v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 C# x; ~6 U$ k( {1 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 f1 c( o3 y3 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 A) m0 N, H. F0 D( |! x1 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ h& G  a% D5 K3 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 K/ h7 u" z4 q" o& I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) L" T! }0 I# X" ~* W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 E3 V- J* M! |% K8 T3 J$ K: u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: v3 x6 h# j% I9 j1 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 `" M6 V% c: c6 b# a1 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* {! W! P1 A, E4 s5 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>