【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 x! C' r) j1 T  v; L  a: T& d歌词我附在后面。
! U( V: J* }8 }' iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& \5 x* b& i4 b$ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& T; {9 ~6 E+ ^4 e( B7 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 r; t7 F6 i: B( mThe sky is happy down to its soul
% w5 z9 A! E  C- W9 q" I$ F* z) bWith the moon kissing it every night
% z9 I+ n( L+ F; w' c4 SSeeing the sky content with its love
; e7 L3 F" N, FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  a5 H7 ~' W( v4 iYou needn’t fear anything
2 ?1 u8 R) ?/ H8 D$ gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- q, [/ y- M7 m5 m6 ]7 q: d' BI love you I love you with all my heart
  O  C5 ?! o+ ^! V; c# M8 l! z; Z$ m0 P8 |8 ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 Z. d2 `+ q# [/ XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, l& ?8 J0 |% A6 H5 II’m still filled with fear
( n0 C4 |( q6 G; M' B2 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# }9 i+ ]  N. u/ A1 HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 n. C  U$ Q* C) lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ^: q; |- z2 ^' c) f8 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 V. I( Q) H- _) A! L4 s+ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; Y6 I8 s0 K# w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ P/ n. j  B& p. z* Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 S/ L8 M' @% t1 j  f' R5 }/ }: T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, p% p) ~" n! e% Y' Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 g$ N5 n3 W4 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ B8 \9 ]' e9 V6 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- I& ^$ c* g- q: V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 D* m! D- I# V4 N' \" i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( {) S+ J8 D$ A8 H, q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ J1 q" ~: Z; g; T( P1 U) m  I* p. `( Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, P$ s' h1 l; t1 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( ~: B4 L5 P8 D- B" N# C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 S! J0 F' ]1 O# k& ~8 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! f3 n: ?' E' i2 [+ ]3 q6 O5 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 h- H2 H# R( b# l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 k3 b6 _! l7 u! v- ]  M  q1 u' ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ?0 {% D2 f4 B+ }1 ]: B<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 N$ L) @$ d  l0 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ |7 X) k. ]1 N' W$ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 N9 y1 V# i, Y5 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- H. E) [+ F9 P9 q2 E" J$ l# w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* \8 {( [% D5 H; \. K8 {9 h: z) Q5 ?* I我请你剖开它
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2 t9 ^2 T: u/ T4 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 m. F' r, y3 {8 l" e/ j1 e; d. B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>