【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 X7 i# i8 d6 s/ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. n5 q8 k! e& G, M$ m4 a& |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! o1 Y: a; j$ ^( `, U4 x" yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 l0 s: J; d* ]) Y. vI love you I love you with all my heart
, N" q  l9 t9 C/ z- ?) WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 p9 q& M- }: m' GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# f7 |! B# A# V$ G: |$ q+ bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) F, ^! S! U, p) B" I# R1 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 V2 P9 }- S0 _3 n+ u' M8 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" m2 f0 x3 u* [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, A' {/ n$ n+ h8 |5 S0 k, v9 \9 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ q3 W& v8 [( p2 W7 X1 M( Z4 ?& L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. x; G/ I0 c# ]  ?3 L5 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; z" Y1 H2 ?1 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 u" \* P. r5 Y9 n' z: W: E) \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Z3 M, V$ _: T; r9 b6 h* h( v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 V4 [) U& f1 _- I* ^5 i$ ]4 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 l" ]& v# e) l8 |+ B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' F; M( E& V) f$ R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 E% Q3 j  d) q, [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 R6 b$ P' v7 w0 j: U" f$ _8 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% n0 q( x5 l0 Z8 }/ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  Z2 O1 u( @% A5 I" ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 |3 U0 `. \4 m7 P/ B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) z8 V- Q$ g6 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  E0 I* J; O, v1 o, N5 J* }. u& E" v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ p6 I4 r- D  b3 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ c4 n* u. w' W  w! F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* i3 i$ W6 Y% S& ]8 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 z+ U& e$ K6 ~8 s4 w3 f" V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 a& O8 {3 F- `6 v( ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 H. X3 Z  V: O8 B: t4 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% q# z4 l, ~3 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 z5 d8 p) q* w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  B8 i5 l& ?1 [( m: n" u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ P# }4 ]! x8 i: a* X0 i: \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 B6 O& k: o) I: e% s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 W$ I: e9 S5 f% t) K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 p7 b/ l, w/ b% y3 J& Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 |/ c% M8 o. @6 v我请你剖开它
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8 Q( [# C: Y8 z( ^: Y: U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" M# B+ {( F) L+ b$ B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>