【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 [: _) W6 A1 n% U/ q歌词我附在后面。
; G, y# ~/ _: R- WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; f- I8 G1 \5 j$ w4 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 f% j% F  o$ a4 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 Q; G! s6 B. g2 a2 T8 ^You needn’t fear anything
! Y9 o# V9 d4 m. P+ o2 x# B! s8 K: hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; [; @( t+ Q1 I' w5 }% w6 I" FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 A3 z/ ~- p+ \! t( B' OI love you I love you with all my heart
, U1 @' G5 E: Q3 k- I# cNothing can compare to my love
# M: N3 X& t: J5 w" |1 K$ cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; z6 I7 Q9 T2 b1 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Z3 I; u7 y+ S8 W9 G  k  B5 T' e7 pWith such a tongue as yours,
" Q" G, w, ]6 g) v! [1 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# n" N% h9 P- V5 R: s1 J& {6 o* N$ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* m; ?% q* b* }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 a- ~4 ]5 a, T& Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 m. l3 E8 p. \: q2 P1 u4 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ a+ O) Z6 `9 y. M; h3 |: o* ]! |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Z' S9 D7 S, o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- R! \! F8 O$ C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; B1 I2 R3 u$ W; F0 Z9 ~6 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 Y* q+ ~, M- _5 h% i1 V: i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 m( i' s8 i4 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 V* v; a  C6 ?8 g- ?3 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 r  C2 M. p# w: \: J% `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 K, Q' V3 d! `! x" J$ B4 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 L( q' r1 l8 l8 J' Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( K1 }  O4 Q% k. j7 a/ V1 W( C  S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% P) f4 h9 i6 q; \  _7 f% t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ |5 H5 S7 E' S6 `8 T& A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 L1 l3 t0 |& f$ ]( ~# _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' X$ _: }# `3 P3 b2 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 P. |- i. m) F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 A% {4 v& l% n$ {9 [- W' ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, O; B' t% A0 n2 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- }# F5 h% i# ^- S4 y: A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ~7 u' N, m5 X! t+ b* U3 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% {1 x; {9 ], o, t* g" \' p1 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 x' W+ }' ~- }% q+ q" A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  R! C! D" A* Q3 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 {* o/ b/ ]: m6 z) W6 H8 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 G- \* V- W+ W) w" y8 _8 U' H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Y! I8 a: \& z6 c9 a5 {- P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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. p. x( f. `- }* g7 N1 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; c9 C9 s7 m+ M: S* T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 h0 |. c9 S; d5 r% J8 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>