【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* ~; x& p- z% x  i* u; n* AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ]3 d' r9 g9 C2 `$ I0 T1 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ D/ z. J1 J: ]" y8 a7 I2 u% c0 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% A! w0 N" D! a3 x# J* sEvery other word you utter is love
; m: i: l, w* p$ O4 K" b+ AI really want to know just how much you love me
3 W: G# x: W4 B( K/ l, ~4 ^! b3 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ L* s$ k; k  w: pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% m- Z3 c4 S+ o6 W' p8 V1 u: bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 J, ?( ~6 a4 m/ Q, ]; I9 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ k7 Y$ r, L# rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) x* B( f% d6 {$ |6 Q6 D8 ?) WWith such a tongue as yours,
/ Z4 [, C" j4 u: {8 G% eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; t5 b: C+ v9 _1 J* p$ a: ]# m  lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 T/ R$ |; f  T6 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 C- {3 m5 ^2 h1 O( `) I; B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ q) L' k7 K# U7 A% I# [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 n, M2 D& p2 u/ Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 q6 }% J. x6 d9 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 I% ^3 h5 O3 m& @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 I; [2 t4 ~& i7 ^0 U. T/ ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, F: T5 G/ |4 p, D* F+ i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: f& y5 }; V, m% M$ M4 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 A9 a4 z/ _: Y6 h8 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: E' [3 [6 C  Z6 {' S3 {; \& l: y<P>你无需担心</P>
- A7 Q2 h4 P5 |5 q, X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# V! h* v9 l1 {* P/ t  R( q: |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ `1 k, g% F0 k: P& B+ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- y* f9 z& L. W9 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! t$ J/ J) ]( T1 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ^8 Z; {+ f( Q" d4 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 C: ?: {' B- n' ~: ^+ u* D1 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  j+ u% T3 e. p9 e' n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; {  q- z$ \$ n: k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ l" f2 `% s6 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Q( ]# ]5 Y% i8 ?& r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; P# q+ U# C: h$ X0 O) j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 C$ S4 e2 {8 p: i6 Q' K, J  ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* P9 L' _# w6 @( \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 Z; ?" F7 c& `, {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( Q) R% z7 p3 {* W- U% w, m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 N" x' ~  C2 W( f; k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>