【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 S( V- [- {9 o4 {歌词我附在后面。
2 m- w2 M. C- N) XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, x! I3 q" i. [) ]8 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 \! l( N" \4 }2 Z: n* LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 F+ r' |2 n$ A8 M  U9 O  AEvery other word you utter is love
8 {4 Z3 P4 Q$ Y" O5 T3 cI really want to know just how much you love me
6 B! }& g& M. n- \; UI love you I love you with all my heart
' d) Z6 j$ M1 e, gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 f8 e+ F' r! K: z6 ^4 e) q* ~: iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) e. R6 n/ ~% kI regret not dying
8 E( X. X$ {: Y3 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 j& F' Q- S, O) B  o" w, E7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
0 S% L9 M* t5 R: u; P1 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% `6 {$ p$ h# F% J7 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( b  X) k' q; T' L. B- |5 E+ pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; Q9 w# E/ h+ K+ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% C5 N' q* l# k: M" X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  p: v5 \3 H( @" \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) \- K1 _- {% o$ T9 W+ T" J* q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, g+ d, a# H, |7 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' o/ K' h* e9 E3 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" B. q, q& H& L. M/ S; Z' p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 |% @+ C- `4 y  I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. N  y; A! B1 [: m' y9 P- N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ^7 |& }4 x2 d8 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* j! P  C; N9 G% E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( O4 b% I2 j) t% ^* S! b$ o3 j3 Z. _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 `1 g/ o0 o, N$ T$ F) g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 a4 j9 \6 s9 i- Z$ y0 b5 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 m* H' V# z6 ~$ \. B5 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ @# x/ P2 G; P9 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ z# q! i4 b) |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% i# k4 M2 ~; e- Z# l9 q2 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: g* p( q4 j! P( i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i! I- ?% @$ B: r0 H% F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 s3 M4 P$ O7 R' u, k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) D- a% X+ r5 Z; @8 z: M5 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 d# y3 ?' ^2 p3 M& V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, X8 B1 t5 }9 _% b1 v: y3 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: a+ `9 t8 o) i5 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: ~6 L4 Q+ g1 `& j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 w0 ~% y8 ~2 L7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& `( j) N/ w8 S7 N" g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 h; }: m) d: Z" l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  R- h6 Z) d8 b" ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 B6 L% y0 L7 }7 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- X% ]% B+ p/ |3 M1 s) s. M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>