【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# z  z' t4 m; k% kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! u. I5 B3 q4 x3 n- d7 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ U6 n8 s, S  r% C3 Y" B; [+ A# ~Seeing the sky content with its love
! L; [# k' e1 R+ h8 r& {( g/ x5 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 V1 m0 Q$ I' `- F) _I really want to know just how much you love me
5 j( i" t) ^) C6 p0 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& g& l4 H/ a& G! v2 R; i. M0 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 R4 W3 U. \# w8 J- z# N( V; R1 \; eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& o" w0 S& ?) _6 V) @5 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& M# _* E# w- [9 ?0 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O& h- T0 U/ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* s" k6 A' _" ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 E; t5 h+ i8 [: ^( {# T' G. F# A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, h3 A5 B; l: t: Z8 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Y1 s3 o8 v6 b/ c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 {! ]& j9 u- |& A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: O& L5 ?& m9 m. d8 J: ^9 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, }: ]) W- g6 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, F/ ^, [0 t% C7 P! {4 l. l" ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 `, R/ [, c; F4 y+ s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. I! W! |; P+ P& o/ f/ m) Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ y( @9 M( w3 t5 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# o0 b0 T# f6 b5 P" f; o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 k2 E  |+ b4 r1 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 G7 h, u' F8 |! d$ [+ T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 C* ~# b. A6 \' `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: [5 ]; Q8 h, A; I5 o& S: X1 s* y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, N% q* D" l5 D) S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. i4 _* o) U" p* a- L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ^: R4 k1 D0 P0 l7 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 m+ g% S0 p: Z/ n' v. ~+ v, L8 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Z$ F  X( w* V2 v6 k/ u: r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ]1 r  y: s- I: h1 ~8 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* j* E/ m% Z5 l1 |; x6 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ H. u4 }, ^. N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 f0 }' D4 ^3 u, F- m+ q( y7 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ b3 ?8 v* x  ~0 c8 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( v0 R' ~- B7 ], E' ?8 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 d' ^. @! ^- a0 @% Z9 ?: e: P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; D5 ~% j" A! D+ Y我请你剖开它

6 I, T3 W; R% D! A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>