【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* O( n8 b# u8 o$ G1 {! d' _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" I1 w* F# k/ T' `# C/ ?3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- B: l1 B/ q$ j; S5 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 i9 U/ @; c9 M3 `0 ^) g4 GYou needn’t fear anything
) K2 l! t0 Y# JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 F0 t7 t) i: J* J8 Q$ g& xEvery other word you utter is love
! @% o. W" r0 k+ L. X! T: fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, e8 d' w1 n# F+ gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ?( V4 c- ^/ N+ G$ SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 X' @  J* ?8 m8 pWith such a tongue as yours,
% ~# X1 ~% o& _3 p% WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, l% D! x& U  w, XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ \5 p5 l: @! Q. z1 b5 A- {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) S6 N1 F2 A; X, r& y% b3 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* o" W" H& Q0 W$ p" f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ]4 b9 E7 B; }0 n1 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ t# a6 L% R7 c1 v) m+ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D9 f. E3 G, O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 E# F2 R( f3 X# C, a4 Q2 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 z5 |5 b  m* l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 e( C! f6 S3 H$ a6 o2 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 k7 v2 v; n% ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 [( ?' A$ [4 }0 D1 R1 ~4 P6 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 }- q: B4 |( {% H8 y$ {3 L7 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: e0 N4 G' H6 ~/ N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, ^! N+ d2 k; d2 D/ w5 e+ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' Q/ c* M( \5 J4 {& G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ q1 v+ x) |4 w2 d' S( h1 f3 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 n) }' [" w' H0 ~- D4 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* k0 [9 j& c: a) P- x, o- z% d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, x7 z$ v4 b# R; X, M7 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 v, k0 _# x; c( e) {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. d8 i4 F9 Y1 t  B* P1 L/ Y, I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  O+ }' ]% |$ q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Q% c# |5 S" J" X; X0 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; X, e* Z  v: o; M7 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# U& c; K6 I. f# \( M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 @- G* ^! T. Q- j/ Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, {% {  X: f# J. Q' Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 K9 S& Y1 ?3 u2 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# e6 U4 S3 h. o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, r) l; {( \" G3 ]* A) h& Y" O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# ^+ f. Z# Q" \' m* {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  [0 I! c% @7 Y- v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% \$ N! N! f8 O4 z3 H( ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 e* R7 C4 e# m$ T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! z& L/ m1 w" F( I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 o/ h* e% A6 {; o( l9 b5 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! i  H: X  _8 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 {0 |0 ^& ]0 A) {) T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, g" ?' E3 _% X$ c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>