【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" R0 q( @: B8 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 C" @4 T2 w9 c# MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 q0 }" n! B& }/ NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ]& J, {; f+ r4 A# oThe sky is happy down to its soul
" y: R) L6 |8 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ X: p) ?5 S% ?1 i+ F  uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 |- \* H. S8 `. oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 ~& U" Z* G6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ R: J7 G  X/ R' t( Z. x$ fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 o- x: m4 M! c) c! i: [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 ?+ p: j4 H$ f& s; P. h, q; p0 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 V2 B* ~! m4 f. Y( k' XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ~. \! R& e/ q  V3 Q' [! J% J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 c6 v3 O; O! P/ A/ @* n, T! D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% X# C- q1 `) f4 |7 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, Y6 g& g( f. w6 B4 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, \2 Q# Q& Z# j. n6 R8 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 ]& s" H6 l2 r6 v. {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 N- R8 a2 n* s0 h3 a; ?/ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ N0 H  G8 d- t% j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 v7 G* L1 {- t5 _. ~2 Z4 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  y0 Y; I5 j* m) Z: |8 B" n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# V1 E% z) h5 N0 o+ a& l& W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' j$ E) e! g6 a- l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ~- C( j1 x( I& L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J. J. @. T4 G' P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, Z9 X/ E) z5 ?, D" I8 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 D% a/ v8 G9 S. x6 n3 K! }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 h: R% p+ G: A# g& i# p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' k* R% E, R3 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 Q* G. h9 H/ d2 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>