【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ h  L/ n+ c( v/ d  Z0 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% A+ t) J( D9 N3 z, @( DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 @' N' J3 h% A" H1 i# P& _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 _6 |' f- Q  H% ?& H, S# x5 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 e6 r) {4 }5 j9 t# {The sky is happy down to its soul
6 }1 o- ~( ~# J/ J. ^7 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ N6 `* g! u5 o2 f2 Q1 w* jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- }# Y) c" h+ yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- u6 L: L! o& C& W& R6 k+ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) ~3 m0 a: h* oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- e) X" l# M8 d' y* bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 r! T! b7 z8 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ _0 @& n1 T* I  F( d$ R# l, f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: V" Q/ ?/ E% y+ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 D# s. R  H6 N$ G+ W6 N3 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( D0 P% Y! O; [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 c& E& ?; P9 u2 l1 v6 {/ D; q. T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 {! h& L) H% X6 q2 c) i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 c/ F5 c1 A5 t1 P0 W( t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 C, m$ W. O: G- F8 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& d9 s- V$ Y; |. A( L<P>你无需担心</P>
  I9 U$ ~# x: Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 U8 }# ]0 B- K# N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 i! q. }7 g9 R% O4 }$ F  S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 ~: d3 ]6 [+ I' h0 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 x$ z+ g; `! J- H7 h8 H6 B* l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( Q; J5 i3 z. @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Z' W  m6 R& d/ ]9 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 ]0 d  T' _! T& R, w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 O9 D0 S* c! n- h& s! r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 r/ ?4 m0 C( W, v7 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 c1 a8 P7 V# f5 k, q* Z& j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( p$ |5 Z! u* L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 s0 g8 B- U: n; S* a- M6 b! W' l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& L- X& P3 x( l3 ^. W1 `4 b( Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 \7 Q. Q/ ^; A- n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; j7 ?8 Z6 x6 m* L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- j; _/ a: L# H$ {7 v9 Z, ^/ l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 w4 J, s8 k6 ~/ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ K; G! l/ R7 t2 R) ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! A6 e& O9 y* Y$ F( o1 Z& `7 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: y1 y/ `- L! M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; G+ g  B2 \; W7 i* l- U) G( o7 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* R% v# A* x9 c7 L% Z0 q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 G4 v4 {: k4 @# U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>