【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 e3 J; N$ B- o: [5 w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 S1 h" V, W3 U( ~, n5 k% R. T) wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 J# g% f9 ^8 ^+ Z! h, H: p. KThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 \: n) L' o/ m; Z0 lWith the moon kissing it every night
( i' s7 w- r3 ]9 B) m  C0 P; nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- A- h" S, B5 o' J& AYou needn’t fear anything
: `- y% e( s6 J% gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 {/ H- F: F% ~' ~4 |6 @6 v! e$ ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 }, M) ?8 @) M: e' t% ~Nothing can compare to my love
! |: {, }  H+ O, S# ]6 O/ eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, }2 V3 {1 c: |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 T/ X' t7 y% s! Y1 h( S8 vI’m still filled with fear
! {/ A: A/ q! Z% QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ M4 E& a# G4 F* E/ [% eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 C  z) O' M1 v! z% ?6 Q0 R2 W' IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 E8 D' t9 }/ O; `2 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ A& w2 t9 P9 f. C5 h$ g5 o  t, O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 k5 E: u8 S& _1 @; Z( B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ W' e3 P/ @- j# w6 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- X6 L9 U. J+ Z. c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. _1 B/ _! s- W0 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 {1 W. P+ k) B2 V* m; r2 r8 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 M( d! f: v: r% z  _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 @4 f* T  h) C5 A) m" b+ ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- P# j1 {& ]8 @2 F( V, b, m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 d( C; [+ b9 O3 n9 [9 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, e! t& E7 M1 `( p* S- H; M8 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ z5 f# V' Q3 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" M: U9 q+ [* T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ K* ~3 D2 D2 }, p9 f6 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ r) W  r( x  `# k8 j8 G. N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. S. `1 E: v2 \8 a4 ^, }7 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( Q! F( D* ]' U; S9 T; j2 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 R+ e( p8 d6 ^$ D9 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Z2 e' ~5 R+ j8 w: g7 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ B& z+ M3 q+ j" [1 K: ^( x0 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 Z( |( v3 C( f7 [4 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 N1 R2 N2 o) d4 U2 u, R" G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 t3 L, M2 F6 [! [! L2 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! G: H+ {# ]! z& A+ J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- [2 `4 G! D4 I% n- L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ v- T. w( S; J+ Y- n) D! `8 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
( z! Z+ }& T3 m; T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* h& x  N! `2 D: S3 j  a9 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 [4 Y' k. ?0 r* W$ c% f* N) j. m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- Q. x4 z) l1 O1 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ]( p9 Y; Z$ S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 m! w0 n+ `9 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ]% c/ Z1 q2 R5 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 n9 Z6 }+ ]9 X3 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>