【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- c  ^" a. S. r/ K, VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 f) j7 ?5 K! B5 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) t4 O8 ~1 j0 K8 r6 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 \$ P+ r; Z0 q, y' _, M( {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 x, A2 _1 b  d- t, X- VI really want to know just how much you love me
- A1 B8 D! n% z8 k! G( U1 R  ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" A. ]' _! m. l; @  r. t9 ?: tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 {; k9 A- y) L: T# s' F9 m0 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) q! W- f- O' u- s+ n7 vI regret not dying
; z9 _( ]. d+ T9 ~, ~7 e' P+ TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) v' l  o2 }. H+ q  c$ PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 ]6 t! ]) A9 [" @" Y4 i) z* P; uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% ^1 }+ p8 L6 E' A2 b6 K, |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ H% v9 T% }# b# G5 {6 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 l( `2 P# g2 j# D' ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( L' K' S' \7 I  z$ s5 ~2 m; v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 M" t0 j, n. O* k# p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( g6 Y3 p( i) b& l( F6 l8 u- |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 c; K  V9 P- Y( c% I1 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 J8 f) M0 ?$ Y8 w8 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) i, e: L  L9 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! j1 q9 X: `; r) s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! o6 t9 t6 d9 x/ R8 e! A# u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  }) a" R6 D) @& V$ E: H' E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 F* V% q; s) {/ f0 J* j+ g5 u; N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' P& m4 z3 z: Z2 _% X7 d7 l  g/ h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 ?& C7 K5 _; |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 S9 m6 ~7 b" F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! S+ H: y7 \4 q8 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ?( W8 `; L- M4 k9 T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ K$ F, J' O1 `8 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 z. |" x. v; e4 |我请你剖开它
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0 p3 i0 \1 L1 J. E; j/ t& p+ i, f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>