【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 ^0 V8 Z* a# d$ f8 a7 c3 d歌词我附在后面。
% j- J) h  y7 ?$ VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* I% v/ \7 b. J/ z5 ^. CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 [* D+ g2 L, _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 ], y: c( C1 [0 N/ h8 T8 D5 lWith the moon kissing it every night
; d# Z" w6 \5 ]! zSeeing the sky content with its love
. [# e( B5 K( o3 N. SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 @+ N- _- |6 o% G9 d5 c4 sYou needn’t fear anything
! H# }- c* }! D8 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 X' r! e) \; V% C4 _% DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 I: r8 E$ e: J' o* `! RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. [+ h: K# t7 i% w" i  \& FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) p  x( T( `/ W- D9 q" J- R( CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 p- ?- u1 n6 I# P# qI regret not dying
9 F6 N5 D7 ]: h, N2 n# hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 t/ _. C# I7 C' @4 U$ V5 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  {0 u- m$ b( V5 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) B) M/ Q" b/ D2 \- n( h  N' N( @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ C5 D* {0 T9 G! T2 s# K, B* Q" C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q3 R! R' U9 \9 l* ?; y$ [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) Z& l, }" |' G6 M0 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ d6 |5 i  ]  o  {! a) Y4 T) l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 c- A6 g0 O3 m6 H( B: p  a" r- C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 x9 F9 V% E1 W2 F$ I+ }) u+ s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: Q; E3 o$ Y) z2 k2 s! W8 x' z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ `4 N  w8 }0 j5 m- ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  Z9 |5 r) l0 F2 V/ D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 W- o; J0 Z/ o- w* A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ~. i8 f+ O8 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" s2 z$ ?' n; E( H/ r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& h  T1 b* I; b  N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  J- h7 r* u9 M! N# j) g& r, k' {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ]& V$ o/ z" Y, F8 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 d# D* u* ?, A- g; g+ v; P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 l/ Z. }2 f4 J/ a& M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) B+ a, H* ~4 A) Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- I. F: N  p1 x3 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" P8 I" @/ \2 d4 ~! y$ m' G* a# V- R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& b* C( D$ X  F0 i& b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ N4 ?% O! A! {, B- Q8 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 A$ |- Z; i& [* W4 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) F) R5 H7 j9 Z5 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, c* I8 m7 {9 {7 N; q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# B$ ]8 K- X+ L7 U3 @1 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 d5 r' W! `4 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 N* S9 e- v0 |1 |, T  y0 q8 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 {. j) O3 Z- C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 I6 v" Q* ^6 V- C# T3 E- R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>