【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, w  k  x- p; a5 ]歌词我附在后面。
8 F, f$ m. W5 S- f8 d6 \6 N7 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 l. Z3 @" t7 w" qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( m% u2 U; P, f7 v4 i+ ]" HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 r" ?2 ]" x6 J4 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ l# [: x/ o" H% M1 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- Y5 f. v5 j- N* P- j, m$ LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 A3 L. V! ~8 m1 J- m" e( aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, ^) p9 C$ o9 _" MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* p) @4 m( o2 a. a3 }. m, M) a$ pI regret not dying
4 A" Z+ L6 z' l7 Z( dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: T4 g% y3 f8 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 `( [/ R+ V9 `: v2 T1 R) i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- B# P+ W7 U6 r9 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ?1 }- m. M  X( T7 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# g( K) g( |& C  m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. u! {% J8 A" j# f" e( |/ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 r. m! W  f( [' C8 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! y* c9 G8 o, q+ t3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 V2 ]" q- V' _) e; q8 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ G7 o! `  x" P1 N7 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- t' n7 j! |; d% T$ M3 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ m1 S) c" j! j* K# `) b! {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ I4 Z  W3 R: D5 A8 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% j# A, u8 ~8 w8 K2 R" w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' [6 l; t! O3 Y' w) Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 u4 Q0 {. j% P: e, c2 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  S. g4 X" v2 o2 @7 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 E3 T1 O  }5 Z9 b6 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 a1 T3 X7 }! @; @* @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 ]7 f( |7 }  M' x& U3 x8 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
  y# D# r' |: z- u0 u) G# K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( V4 V( C( d1 u/ u  k. i' U/ N8 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ S+ e5 D% Z/ o  S2 W; c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' i1 l( ^) [+ g/ B: A  G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 k1 e" w9 Q) u3 j0 ^7 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 x* g( h5 P8 e% `0 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ p- l3 c& i4 s7 x& `( H& }. u8 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 Q1 s5 x& l0 S( m8 r我请你剖开它

2 E) _  G  d) z. a  o! O0 i+ D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( m# i3 A1 {% }/ {1 o* D" ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>