【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" ?1 s$ y6 h, o5 P& N" WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  L, Y6 ?/ r+ y) x/ Y3 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* ^, I1 K- O" W* |" tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" a. X2 [4 ~5 a' lYou needn’t fear anything
8 V/ q  D) E! x. I8 o4 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 v! K( p- K! ]' bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% w; z. a/ K) B2 N; {7 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* F6 J; _; ~- x  R9 T9 |0 YWith such a tongue as yours,
( b* g. n9 l/ `, u: xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. W3 W* D" G. i$ w& k& P2 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ l! y9 a# V8 w3 ^( e$ b: A. ?6 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% p$ D- M* `; {- Y. C: R: z4 B- r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 N8 t* I8 J. l* D! K; H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( e) [' q3 o0 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 S9 h  `1 {" |# o& w/ t8 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 b! r6 l/ l! s1 d: E% E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 Y1 c6 L) X& q; J. d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 j& X& {% j5 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  ^- C9 r7 l& x4 e; A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* W* P- e! Y$ G% a: x3 g& {8 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- n% Q2 H: |' `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! C& W0 L9 n" g2 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* X/ M1 q3 O4 ]; z0 [( I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 \: `5 q# c/ c9 U2 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ m2 e- @. N- r, v0 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, V# C* p3 i7 I+ x. x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 z8 j) P/ V& o+ @+ T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  j* o; {( M; X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: |8 w/ e2 K7 ?9 w  Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: r2 U8 x4 Z7 ]3 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 h- _1 H+ o1 E0 l/ X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ w% k, q* {" e$ U( U& f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, d  `) `) E* L1 [7 m5 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" J8 G. g) }( k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ~9 t8 t* |6 E  ^2 ~% _: V$ O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& R# Y# W4 q5 M8 F8 f4 W9 A0 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- a+ y0 N6 N+ d1 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. F2 ~$ e& |1 p& m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 g# m: x& e. s% Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 N2 m$ U* g, C, u' W: r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* \. [6 e" V! l% n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 `: }, Y( y* r" j+ q' O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 I4 o/ c& {( i: i- v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>