【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) {/ o" e( U) `: a& ^# ?6 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 o* q2 A# N% R" n2 C  k# FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; j7 U6 X7 o1 Y( H% Z. ~  y/ z; `7 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: w( I( j3 a0 \8 m" QThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ C9 v' e0 V; x' c" z6 N- @7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
2 S, {6 z0 H! P+ o% |6 _) bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: C! _" {: X. t. N0 o& W" p) OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 a2 n5 y/ _* E4 s6 b& RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' Y, h$ k9 [8 O0 U8 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ S8 _" C9 ^7 U7 s8 XI’m still filled with fear
0 ]3 F9 I# V1 N1 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 R) y' E. `1 [) {9 ^: L+ DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' |9 t. _8 Z3 i/ J8 l4 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; f9 E, E% W7 X$ d7 \  C' n, TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: s, f3 Z: R8 d9 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ R- ]( f% ~' H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& Q1 O; \: x/ E% s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 b6 I. A. ^9 P$ H) p6 ]# q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; x" x1 p/ u, k. m- @* A; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ Q  h* ~' X, l! X: h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 G5 O9 t/ U9 z& Q" C$ ?' t1 N3 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ o" A3 L$ U! q  B; `, K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# O4 T2 G" t* E8 y% m" p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 @0 z/ w" G/ m2 v  M, z- `% u8 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 y, `& G: r- @( w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* y. z; b- e- N2 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 m8 {6 C4 x( V% O* z2 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- J' ^+ b( @. H7 [% x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 X' }6 U( N% p# B+ F; }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: D" W, O% |( S! K+ _' v3 G9 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! B9 k' p, T& U6 |) |) U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; P+ l* ~) ?* V4 r2 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ }0 m3 g9 [: q1 {! M6 X' I9 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ n$ |. f$ _5 s! u% Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% g" t- N* v7 D! c* l' r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* L% H4 I/ M: H" N/ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 n$ R8 z2 I9 U* U& i/ s8 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* F/ B# ?4 j/ X" o* V* a9 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 U0 H( g# i& x5 W- w# ^- w+ E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 j5 [7 }% ]4 w# W+ l) S* I' s8 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- a& [& G( Y9 l" e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 e6 n6 K  h2 c! o2 C. U3 _$ n" l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ z2 b2 z2 P' d" D( L, d" O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( x. K4 T) U* d$ |- K2 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>