【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# M7 S  }( ~! F8 G3 ?" i2 L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: t+ j' w6 g7 Z3 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 u5 [- K/ V) p- J5 Q+ M8 N+ l$ l/ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# b" d+ W2 m: t$ A9 f$ MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 D/ x$ ~; y% C5 T5 ^% V3 {You needn’t fear anything
$ f, d0 {9 }5 H( c! OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ]  ?  Y8 S: aEvery other word you utter is love
" C/ k2 Z7 @9 `& N3 ~5 |I really want to know just how much you love me
* o. O8 M4 |$ M8 ^$ KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 `% `3 O4 ^) {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) k: F9 W1 b/ f9 T6 s, [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 Q( W6 L! _3 I' }4 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ h3 ]; o7 p% F/ N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 q( o% I+ z2 W- z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 m& P3 b3 X6 ^! b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 w) J7 \; J8 i& E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 m  m- p/ W, L' L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 b5 q; A, F, h  \) w0 J7 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ O& j$ J- R& H; L/ D) _- F: s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( o8 t; m, U) h  Y* n- z8 H. V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 t/ f; b" y) z9 |0 S" o+ u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ S$ w, F4 {) }9 e" j6 A9 Z# U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 _6 q" h( y! J& S* H# H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* L  W" g5 `$ n! b  H/ t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ j% y2 P' T3 o& ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 u8 E/ c' G6 b% F9 n3 k' C( U, v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: N* _; ]4 k3 S% ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 e% P' L6 c; ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# h; `: ]* p: i) |  b" |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. E* y+ s( q0 `/ t  ^, k5 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% s( q+ ]6 ?% i( t# M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& S7 x6 O# D/ v5 F6 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& q; P* v- v8 U1 n0 d1 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% A, [9 S: y& R: v9 k7 O5 ~8 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" H, n8 D, `  P4 y& u7 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 o- i9 U2 g  _6 [8 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ c5 g: R1 |2 ]  C; [8 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. v: K7 G+ C' _: X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- k5 f! Q  m  i' ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; y8 {" u9 X  O' E$ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 L6 A7 V, j/ U, B4 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 m6 g( b$ _: |2 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& A7 X, ^! D$ T2 n9 U4 E; R5 V' U  m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>