【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 Z4 q/ U# _' [  u4 ?! L' h+ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. M4 {% u# X" ?, y1 \$ jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 D. Z+ p# A( ~* c/ G! h" `* W7 qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# a# t) a. V9 o" fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 f8 Z8 c9 T" S" W) O* O  a4 T9 z9 n9 CEvery other word you utter is love
) U& {( j# N3 z5 yI really want to know just how much you love me
4 K2 V5 x; m! W. Z5 R! BI love you I love you with all my heart
. O2 c+ b! P( bNothing can compare to my love
) }: o% O9 W$ Y: J/ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( K% @% g$ H2 Y4 [( p! sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. s  ^: P1 m9 C) {- u% m- }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 \3 H" }5 h% H, c) sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; z0 Z. s) T; n  G8 g' mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 m& j+ L7 |7 w/ N4 O* t3 g5 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 [# J) |) {$ I9 [: r+ u( B! |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ O% k0 [; h2 }* A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 L+ i! D/ N# m8 }% ^- q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 L% y% @* q% ?% y- V5 |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i6 M% U  Y' o# D$ h  Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 p, b5 i5 \* C% \. y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 p, S; ?" {! T8 @4 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! j) {) b2 t( j  Z$ Y9 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 V' Y7 P! b( U) x4 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" w; {8 j- m( o+ }4 R: C. @3 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, \1 f( |+ y* g" s6 w* D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ e# i, B: G+ b  t- {- o, X. ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# A8 z) M* O9 u; R, L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* N' S" {! K* H' g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; l/ b" X  G8 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) Z3 t* A9 [9 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Q2 Y3 \' {: _$ y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- H: c- I2 r1 a; j3 p5 m1 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& P! n3 y! f/ `; H& ^: g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* H- {" C. a% ~& W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& `! J* F: m# B( w/ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, q7 N. c5 F, l5 F, ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- p  j  B0 k1 x& R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. P( o) r$ Z; i3 L4 l2 ]3 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) T2 U' z' t1 b. Q* W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ \8 k' {8 e. T" x" b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ i8 k+ E0 V# G+ N0 a* Y( ]" y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! G$ U: z; ^3 s$ q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>