【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 l/ E9 y, b- F  P5 z& |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& E) I# R$ U' H8 v6 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 [0 l$ H3 J0 }! g" u8 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& e3 w, \) q) t9 |' F0 Q0 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ?% \( O( J8 T& iEvery other word you utter is love
, \8 y0 B& o' t$ JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& Y: [) A# c3 FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( _% c$ [( B" x' a: r& ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 x8 h1 t" A5 H0 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 z1 |8 y& c! s8 p1 C, UI regret not dying
' e# g% Z' T7 _: }+ c, V! H; Z+ K' KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 m8 t( }% D* o. J  v6 @9 |With such a tongue as yours,
. L" g7 e1 N& `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ?' V  D1 ?8 S+ C/ D% iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ G) s( ^6 R" d" {) k7 d, Q* |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: L* O3 Z5 {$ n  `2 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 R) r3 f2 U$ B# j0 l  l# ~; B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' }7 C4 i' u  A4 ~7 S4 N1 p* J# F9 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 e3 R1 l+ k) ~1 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& J9 _+ S& a" [6 A6 s4 I' W/ f+ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 }( h* p' s( w( }7 D+ Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! b9 |+ v( X- n" J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 F9 p/ x8 D$ t+ J$ `* [8 m* Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 u% w; D+ V& F( n$ A<P>你无需担心</P>
* ?8 p) D# \2 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& ?; d9 C5 i( }* J5 T+ h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 Y2 f: H, d% @) M7 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: H# H: s* v+ P- o1 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Z9 Z! T8 v( L( f) z. i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. J7 p. G$ {+ _' f, |) b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 r$ x4 Z( K* }% Y& d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. F# _' G3 @- j3 u+ W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 n) b5 E% @) Q7 ]4 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ^, W( b- @& I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 w( p1 U! D3 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 e/ C8 n! z5 r* \3 t; h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, W- S4 q* ~5 j& E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) v6 l3 g7 V- G' Y7 G8 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' B. e: O/ I$ R$ t$ C0 y; E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 L& A5 g3 `7 C7 j$ d% B9 V1 _; a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, A4 b& h1 P6 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" N7 n' `6 y! k; x6 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>