【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 Y5 W- s/ c0 D5 q( C+ s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- I5 F9 [: X- F; Y) |. U- {Making the sky glitter like gold,
* {' w' ]$ u4 z( {0 T$ b7 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! `1 q4 {7 r- i+ EThe sky is happy down to its soul
: ~" Y% }$ s: BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 a  B0 ^  X6 F  Y2 u# ^5 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; a" ]7 `+ R9 L: k& a3 H. Z( ]6 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 l. C& w' @7 L/ u' l& q  xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. f) h* Z( r* E/ qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- T9 ^+ g" T, kI regret not dying
) i1 c/ @0 X5 C4 k7 u4 q% }/ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& ~. e8 U- X& J$ g6 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 m, r6 t8 o. M) [& hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: U5 E8 q/ T% E% U$ C% K0 A, uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 ]  U  h8 L; q5 T2 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& R( x1 q! O/ D: C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ F8 o1 z* L/ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" F8 D$ v! _/ p3 v2 y8 P" m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& S  |; i3 P% f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& r+ b. _1 t7 ~, L: I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 i) }  ^% X( S7 Z. `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 j1 n7 r7 A& T; x% Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  U1 _; j; @; ~& S! I) F4 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 i5 a/ }% u6 D9 \& _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) c( R; D. @8 Y) C- ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% I9 [* F( y& R& [9 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  ~: |0 I1 b" y* \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ |9 t7 m4 j7 ]/ j1 F' D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ d. j" n2 {, h, _: p9 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 Q8 B6 p6 d' }0 p( g: `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" \" T3 P) S2 |$ g& |) A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 z7 \: l/ K9 ?! G; c7 x7 o6 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( M8 b0 K! a0 i( n- C. A+ W- C$ L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) B) s( Q) a3 }4 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 j# d3 G3 b9 V2 E( G4 K我请你剖开它
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# Z/ L( d( E8 A$ ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>