【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ S$ a) P" C# T9 A  _& @4 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 Q4 {* c3 }. Q/ m6 u( `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: T2 B& M7 i9 v0 M! R6 s$ BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ {" Q/ U& G3 b% x+ s8 ISeeing the sky content with its love
* S: W- O: y$ Y# O2 S- ]4 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& H0 {3 t) {4 d* fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& G# o: ~# W& m/ cI love you I love you with all my heart
6 r% `$ t; _$ R+ w2 v& xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" i! ]) p7 ~9 x# r# _5 m: XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 G  i. x  {! u& e- A7 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) s( a% ^, B$ z& a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, u+ f; x6 t  X% M  d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  g7 n0 _- O% o- ^' N/ a6 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 k/ A& u) c1 l% `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ H$ j$ B; Z7 Q9 }6 ?* K/ Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: X% ~& @; s& d! C6 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; C- W2 I7 T. [+ M) s$ P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 N2 |* s, E  j$ ^7 m% \& l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( r& f# B0 I) x' B: a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- X: d1 U. a6 a$ O3 n; W% d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ o, o# U! r. Q3 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# H" [: j6 U3 C4 J" `4 y. a( G: Q& M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" g( c  r& c( @' f1 w7 S, q/ j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ?$ i9 q& @0 ^. D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. y' ?* j" D3 l0 u& `4 a. |) }. q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 p, q% P! z4 n. M8 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 n" f/ T: W& ^0 u& {; f6 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! [1 }% a; y& n  |4 E& K9 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 n( P6 \; E2 M+ I! N( V* r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" E! D% Z4 I5 m4 d* i( t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- }1 B  O2 x) R& x; D8 B, S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ?2 ?) R  u7 g3 e1 @8 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. D  k) L$ _# N" \1 K" k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. V# {/ r) d: z: I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! c5 o8 v* D, _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' }: U- _; U$ i, D$ c! ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 Z( Q" Y. S4 `" o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>