【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 X5 k' G$ B" iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ @& C- u0 k. B5 j2 s  H1 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- t6 W$ f  N( u: ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 O6 R! ~- ~  R, x3 ]3 T/ c$ tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 i; n4 y: H" `/ j- i" `I love you I love you with all my heart
8 @  E" u+ \8 X8 b. d) n# cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 k3 t: z: H9 M5 `- PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ N5 @& p' P' ~/ K+ T& gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ D" u5 k6 D) A3 E: kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  U5 d3 H$ ~3 B& g+ F" v( [& g3 UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, [. C" F. L! q  _) qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 L8 M4 n* `2 V% n- a0 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- u' N1 e  a: a) q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- H  m& X" e6 O6 T( D' |* C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# S8 @* N3 b  u* B' V6 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s1 m" x3 y+ h3 Q1 w; g- I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, q; v& P& l3 {* m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  N; b  G& H7 Z. d6 a$ e& a- [$ f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- k& m8 K/ ^2 j; ~* G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- r9 i( V4 U, {: A7 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, v* M: c; P& S5 v& E8 U) i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 d) T+ v& j) c3 J3 \/ F8 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( m! F, y( ]' ?% q3 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ y" q- Y, V5 U4 V. W. a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ]1 W) }2 R' F) H* ^, [# ^& t6 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' v5 U4 V% |6 M1 b/ ]0 a& N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  m+ A$ ^1 j* {" m, W4 Q% D& f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" h  @: r6 ]" _/ V) F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- h* v0 Q# Y, j: I9 \- O/ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: K0 M+ r) k, X3 X' `: Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 A- N" s5 m' i( t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) I6 P  w# o) O- ?  w- a: M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: V! [$ C! n4 M9 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
  y  x- i# t$ |3 t6 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  y& p2 d7 r* U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 Q9 p8 s% L. }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ]/ b' ]$ b/ m: n. r9 M' z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; w9 ~# R6 k% d" u  n, n1 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' y; G% p5 `9 f/ R" l% }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  i: B& ?9 b. a& C7 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* E  I+ Y1 @* r& W& U/ p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 S) X$ a, X9 s( x) K$ z1 f" g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 K/ p. `' a  X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 B! Q0 l% k* v+ ~( [5 b$ Z, L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>