【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* Q& Y: r( C  yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* G. X2 }4 s; z6 h6 @$ n% F# ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: R# U$ M- v# S( z! P* E0 m' c$ @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! w8 ~  t. f" Z8 M( _6 |! b6 C9 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
- `  o- z. \4 a; f! F# f1 D  DWith the moon kissing it every night
. x1 \0 A# c; C$ G" L/ C2 r% ESeeing the sky content with its love
/ @% H5 v1 x/ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. v' R. }/ m+ [8 z. Y! l7 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 _; k' w( N9 o7 _& J* dI love you I love you with all my heart
4 |. t4 l! r9 I, p' _7 I% s: i0 C) RNothing can compare to my love
% d! B# g. m0 U6 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% ]" Y3 g' L7 P, UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ Y$ `- J# U0 d8 |! HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% v$ J9 n4 }! x2 h: K* mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 C: a4 F. E$ V0 V7 {7 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 c1 {0 l+ v) m2 |5 r- E4 A3 ~6 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ M+ u% q0 s; J' ?5 {, L# w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# l4 Z/ _6 h3 A/ ]) {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" s! o. {) \1 h* ~7 r/ z  z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 [! n# j1 }- d! b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ S$ |- `( R  d7 H& o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; s1 g  q% K( \+ M* @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 C5 C; c7 O- Y( M; [( k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 @5 a9 {/ x0 ], V4 o/ _' o4 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ W$ B. M) }2 [/ j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 V, C7 E, G$ Z# y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( H! W" [# U- L! n; Y% S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ m) n4 Z/ {2 j6 ?1 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, S8 L. s/ G/ Z3 B; u, S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 X2 ?2 [& l/ ^# t  |4 x3 v8 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. ~4 ]1 f  F" q3 b! Z$ m9 {+ Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 t* \2 Z# r) l7 i" k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 t2 f$ {& f) L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 C/ ^$ n* y$ U- M/ C# f9 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" g0 d+ Y4 v2 E4 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 x8 m8 j2 ~* [  m6 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: g, E3 D9 i: O, t; m$ l& C* l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 p$ Z" {2 R) E9 [/ n; D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 S6 w9 O# a7 c8 ^: X" F3 f$ y% _% I1 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" Q& L- ^5 d. {  X$ u: E' V我请你剖开它

2 ]* }# N, F% J, h8 g& G" R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 j$ P. \0 V" Z% _& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>