【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( T& t8 w. t+ Q# f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 \9 x+ W" q2 l9 v( b% C+ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- }/ _4 M' R7 Y: p4 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ~3 b! b9 d) Y% }With the moon kissing it every night
* R  Y/ r# H; cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 t0 ?5 n7 G2 s0 `- `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; v" }. N( E$ |Nothing can compare to my love
, y( b. O( m' D) l; cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& l. i& M7 A- k% k. c: J$ B2 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! L: P$ V% `) c3 S$ iI regret not dying
0 N# [( [, p7 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! m% `* q9 C+ `! b- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  Y% i$ K* w+ I' d) q. n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! e9 f5 ]; a6 h+ r& x6 O# ?8 W# F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 M: a% o* i$ H) }' s0 c' t2 \+ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  o% M: A7 f: T- ~+ N+ C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; s; T2 [# d: j, B6 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- J* D) p8 k4 _; S& J4 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- M7 I7 w% O* K$ Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' t! u1 _) P: e) [+ n. @, U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 p' a& N& x- z6 @$ I! ]& J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) T$ o6 V* x, @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) E! O- `, _1 V' `% \8 V<P>你无需担心</P>
: z: o% H4 o. S/ H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 I7 D/ Z; k  U9 w3 e5 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 I! Q0 y; ?2 H; A& m' m$ u9 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \( \# I1 x1 g4 C3 ~7 l9 C. j* F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 z0 l# z; e( R5 H5 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 J2 x1 w. N) o! X" j3 a* H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) m: c9 [6 k# c! [2 P3 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 }) A. f6 ^4 \1 d# |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; g. S+ \! a; l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 f8 h# w# y4 O1 D$ b1 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B. d  Q& S! I. f% O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( P0 v2 n6 d8 H: w+ U5 k3 @- `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 H3 v& |: \; r$ C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ [) J4 }: `" e  o, ^8 _# D2 {, I; Q我请你剖开它

0 L9 n2 `+ T% H( B) c) E- x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>