【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 e! j! V9 V) W$ t  Y歌词我附在后面。
$ ?3 K1 P# o0 N. P1 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 O6 E  {, d, f% pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 j( h% \2 y" Z" J2 v6 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& d% C, z7 m" s/ z5 jWith the moon kissing it every night
: Z7 L$ Y( n# r: d$ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. |/ e) M+ v3 o' B! d- v) uYou needn’t fear anything
! _3 c1 M# b: `) n' j3 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 Y; S( E' k8 REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 }! s5 T% A+ DNothing can compare to my love
+ H. P; K  R/ s4 ]( w% ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# F) Z7 j; X+ F2 c/ w: jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 F( n2 A! p, T0 U5 c" K8 }I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ?7 T9 r1 g+ e$ @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 G6 B" k# K6 p5 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 F  i9 [- M) r" ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 e' V3 a8 O5 W8 }* _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) S) C$ G* m, v; GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# P5 W" I8 Q! G. Z5 w% O0 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& v8 O4 b$ b1 r9 O: H  n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" r6 z3 w# Y( X0 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: e" k3 Y7 k" c* X  T+ s3 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Y# q% e" M; s3 x  u5 P" W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- B4 q  a, ^8 K- l* f# n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 y  ~4 D$ E' p; d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ]+ \5 n7 b( @9 K: @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; x' q% `( [/ f0 x6 ?5 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 h% C5 \1 h; H/ t# Q+ t0 p+ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 C5 @) @  d6 L2 P6 \: n1 ^. ^* C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- a" n+ A# e" L7 J$ k6 l  @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 D& C+ G7 p% N7 e+ ~: N3 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! i: C$ f  s+ @- I$ T7 T  h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 I& p" p" S: g( a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 l  @- T" ~- l: P0 u1 O3 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 B% z% v' Z: y+ O2 Y& C( b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: I8 o$ Q$ S, q: {1 q$ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# o* O. Q' B. L- B- I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; d: O" f( U( Z2 I$ U. J+ R' h& }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: u2 T4 [3 x" n! }& l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  L/ k8 Z) O" ~+ C$ @/ v4 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
* j. |' X! R4 N: Y4 ?$ ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 y8 U; S% C: ~, G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; H& d' k3 l+ E7 P' w$ }0 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 v' g/ b# p' K0 {! t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 Z/ O/ H* u* s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- L' v1 |: G9 p, b2 y/ D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ J' f, d% v* q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% O( U4 f8 _" o+ L2 v5 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 ^# H; n' d$ z: ~5 X3 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>