【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 T2 L1 a0 ~5 l5 Q" u歌词我附在后面。
1 X- w' k$ {2 D9 H. |- j4 V* UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* m& n9 M3 }+ n  c- P' E0 S5 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  o9 y* ]2 |2 p% ]5 @2 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! ~9 }& a5 p. l1 g) j% TSeeing the sky content with its love
; O! X6 h3 V4 t( H  SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  s9 O7 c" ^" i/ T8 e& VYou needn’t fear anything
! }* c% T/ Q* z' PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& w% t$ y7 o' ^$ ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 d% @3 V) c- R$ C! ], S6 z' UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" `( c8 Z" x' L2 l% M9 DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  z' V5 g+ v0 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! h5 n4 Q/ l& rWith such a tongue as yours,
8 L$ J' c7 I6 q8 c: X& X+ nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& x  h: d9 Y/ B% t9 L6 k/ o3 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) \7 ?9 @& r/ r6 b7 o, E& O- A1 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 |, F: n0 U1 w9 d! A6 @3 b2 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) f3 F: s3 I- M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! t* w% |/ W  {6 J4 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ g. l; h" J) j9 O1 w! ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 Z7 R- t( ]3 ^' \, ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# Q+ x" z9 D5 `4 [# E- V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 T% {  z2 e8 [* |, _/ S) s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# V8 W8 A* {# }4 {4 B0 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& U9 G# Z- u1 ~4 K  R8 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" N  Z9 m% Z  o$ O8 x1 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% J9 G- u2 O6 z* x$ V( N4 ]2 \1 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! c" ~/ L9 a( l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. P0 V% i3 x  ^7 T2 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; a8 R3 b; N7 P" _- h2 q0 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 O+ G% n+ p3 t" i2 Q' H1 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Z% X' m: v2 m4 P2 p; o# X+ ^/ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! f3 w: L  ^/ n# z$ h2 ^# v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* w, ^# v" l* V+ ^5 o5 r. P0 V2 a9 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) ?/ e: k& n6 t5 H+ S( ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ A2 G! J' t+ M" C* }8 F3 a' |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! @! H8 U! i1 Y# H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# X/ v1 U; c; }  }# g) S; @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 U  a) E, Y5 ?+ R2 O3 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' _. D! R- J* u+ Z% i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ^5 {8 F  J4 ?8 w1 O  b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( A; Z1 W0 M( v5 Z6 X4 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 ^$ Z# A6 ^/ t: Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ?3 Y/ ]: [" A  l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( F/ _) i9 w) Q4 f1 S" _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! V. W& V4 Q/ J6 {- b! n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& m# A0 J( v2 [8 C0 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 i' g1 H  B9 f5 T, c& V+ Q我请你剖开它
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$ B; R. f2 |  n. _$ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" H) t" l% Y  a, |' z/ H& p, ^+ U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>