【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& q' ^8 n+ y$ F5 g  }Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 }/ n2 A3 z/ b: T& HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( C! k! i3 b# w% C( [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# H* d/ ~4 g1 T! n! W4 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 v& u4 t" H5 u  ^7 G/ K! bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' S' Q" _) P& a7 m: y* k" {: LI really want to know just how much you love me
; q. ^/ h) P" e" v; F; L, U1 dI love you I love you with all my heart
/ ?8 t' O% q" A" @, ], `) c( SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% n4 v% U$ C! T) MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 J: n5 L9 l/ E( j; @2 HI’m still filled with fear
6 T* x4 W& f. O, h6 S6 u- `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ P: R& t1 S6 V3 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ?  x* [8 V' W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ K2 o4 n* v3 U5 _0 _' g% s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 B+ Q6 x0 b' v4 V  _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' U- ]' j/ g+ L3 \' P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- K& B0 {2 y. q, P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* K$ L) N9 M, w+ [8 W7 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 N" N. H3 C& @8 Z1 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 P4 v2 {+ r; t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# j9 I' A7 L$ c% l/ E6 ^( M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 q2 Z% t: C- [. b- D( C" @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 K/ `$ J9 G+ ^% o' h/ R" Y* S3 |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  M  [7 N  |4 y' T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" x; J3 ?) |2 ^7 R2 V! d1 H! u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 @7 Q1 S* G( }/ u: o# l$ T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. G& L* b- ?0 S0 u$ A. }( k& d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 h3 x/ u! n' v, K8 o9 V( f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ c2 x! K2 U! ^- c; \1 u9 S% u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! @; w9 ~4 x! e# ^% o. o6 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 \/ H  h+ o# H& d* L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- w5 h9 M1 D$ P, X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 n! A7 Z5 X2 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; j* F0 ]" m5 b5 y6 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  {, S  {$ `( D+ z8 y* p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 O1 R# A% f  s$ F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 q8 ]2 o# i' S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y/ w1 z, m7 `& w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z: O9 C- j# k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( X2 X7 b* i1 c9 c9 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 Q7 F/ s' R0 `: P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  ^" [6 G( {" {- P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 f5 k' E/ X9 p9 t) w8 K8 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 ^) x1 L- G# v* l7 e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>