【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 {8 v) d. b. L" z8 A  eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L1 `/ t2 U/ }+ G( m2 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  o; Q: C" ?2 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, L# s/ ~# f* Z/ u, ~% UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 I5 W9 O7 i! N7 ~3 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 c: G5 @4 u# R. }) T) y! {% nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* ?2 T+ V. R7 o( SI regret not dying
9 K1 S* I5 _+ \' Z/ oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, L' W1 _. O( N8 b+ jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ X( S. g9 }7 m/ }6 a! D! Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 I3 F: R+ q  L1 B/ O  h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 O! ^% T$ y/ T+ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; b2 q1 h2 Z# h8 N7 z$ B1 O6 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 f' F% `' e1 A9 H9 i. {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# X3 `& R: g% L% Z$ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B: b' B$ F" Y1 e+ V1 K$ p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 E5 I/ {% v0 S/ ~# J( d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 B- k. I0 w. ?( l# I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ V8 o3 ]4 b- ^) V+ X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 U/ T, T9 W2 v" N3 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& _8 B" G; h$ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 Q: s  [: S( _% d* J9 ]0 H$ k' C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  s3 V9 e0 _1 R& s+ Z/ F* H+ [4 c8 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 C% {% e9 V( A/ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% j* Y1 m8 r4 M- e" A0 {7 t3 T; s! g+ D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% x  Q7 |) N5 K$ {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 O! p9 h! `' e  H0 X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 [; s5 [4 g) T6 g( d* B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& l; G# V9 S* r! r6 F# m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" J' ?0 p/ d; G2 A) b+ F  h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: R7 V& ~2 I9 q- o) I. ?% K3 q; U<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V8 w* q( ^9 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  b3 x3 j$ R& _, ]: e5 Z* y$ q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
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) J1 I+ N& x* {9 g' I! s# S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; S+ w; l* Y4 c) {- h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 X1 ]4 c, d8 P) P1 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: h3 S$ J! I, N& `; h4 ~7 G" q% D3 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  G: v2 `0 u, Y9 Z& L3 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( z3 t2 k' q# w1 O0 V# ?5 D# q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 S) J5 m$ n& R3 t; Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>