【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 g, ]! \0 P2 l) y# t* _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, B, T1 m0 Q; K$ s; PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 V7 z; U  M, P) R5 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 P6 J+ c4 o# X& F, EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" S* Y* L; g& Q1 I9 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' \# d# m+ u# U( s9 r. O9 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, X0 o! \4 p" m* Q9 A6 z( a- Y2 R7 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! j; n% p5 P0 U+ YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ^$ t3 z3 Y$ @, u. DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" h' |: |5 p' X4 B4 R7 M1 _7 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 {/ p& H2 i1 A1 p6 Q5 _3 W4 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. L! c8 T/ C% p% b+ P# I/ g1 x) c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) R" J; A. R' {5 _  Y) `2 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# u4 O1 M) P4 U3 Y  V; }+ ?, d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ~+ U9 |9 a* \$ A. v1 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, s/ k4 d# ~; w# t) t1 F. {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 }) G6 h  t0 Q; l( i/ H7 T. P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 o# Q) U" Y" e5 o; d( w$ ?% b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. E  r3 e' T" E2 C. t9 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 F3 q- ^2 B& ~# l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 v+ @; K" m" j8 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 @! r7 J9 I) H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 k9 p7 v1 ^  Q  V/ v, o; {; n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, c2 A7 U+ }0 p2 n9 q1 {" E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 A/ B3 w: N+ `" x! I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, @5 H6 j) l# Y6 s+ s5 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( O; K  Z6 s" R* f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ l5 ^) x3 e7 G, j! v. U. ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' R, h' s& V, A! V, u4 T( C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. N9 f0 H9 h, _8 p2 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ \: p0 v) W0 y/ N1 w" c3 E( v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ p% J0 _# ]  B! j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 k! F* Y# k1 l1 \+ n  w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: s: B! r2 J+ W7 V3 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 E( ~9 C% L0 d" `8 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 x9 M/ [+ U* p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: T! P2 n4 J2 h2 r2 i4 H- M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 K5 g, j9 s& R* U9 J. \2 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% k; W: \2 K  q3 L* ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>