【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ {( p1 j% ]- K5 W# qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; ~# A9 [/ d- ]. g: bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: B7 I. S! }5 ~! D( YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* z! d) ]% v5 H' |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: |9 J, j$ f/ W2 yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 z* P7 Z, z, F* [6 II regret not dying
$ z5 V7 X3 l# c- @- A. ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( W- ^$ h+ s7 O1 H* _With such a tongue as yours,
8 s' F' u; ?0 N* C/ u0 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ P# o6 A% B+ M5 g$ d6 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; z* P3 l( S& q6 w  l+ W, H! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 F  Z$ ~6 V3 i. R6 [( A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ R" J( ~& A1 k, Y: d4 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# ^4 K& N0 A6 _& x: a( G3 i. C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ U+ H/ M6 Q- G5 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ~6 Y$ l9 m  J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. r; z$ W# b9 x' x& h2 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* X' q) x/ S. R* Y$ D6 Q2 K* D, h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; r6 d9 E! T( ^4 e. Z; E/ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 F1 s: ?/ N( s  A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 C' w" N$ ?: j7 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) c- m; [/ Y; l% f' i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 V: u6 U- ~, u7 }/ s7 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* R7 q+ u0 Q5 X  B6 U# g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 p0 F+ C1 n$ C( C6 Q& b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 g/ p% V1 _& Y# S0 c4 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) {% s6 m7 A. l: o, e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( ?0 v/ L: \- ^9 B% ]/ \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 [( Y, W& [* D* U, G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 S$ O, |% y$ ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 Q- ?" ?$ ~/ p( B: S* k) E* L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ Q7 U% K8 M: N' y  ~/ ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" l* U9 V1 ?" o* Q6 t3 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>