【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 L+ n7 o0 r& h  {3 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
" G: N' u! E8 r1 ]+ a* XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ F# o" F, `4 p) n2 o" M3 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 R5 Z+ S  H, C: B! X% ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 r% A- t! s3 R% KI love you I love you with all my heart
3 _' K3 i1 z6 u! R9 `# L- g, @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# `9 O# `# g* X. _$ RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. a) |7 j/ a9 R# N: r' m/ j# cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ^# O3 ~) L3 \2 N$ }' B$ SI’m still filled with fear
, l9 K0 R  r2 v+ mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 D$ D8 W3 A" H" h, l3 t$ oWith such a tongue as yours,
$ p: V# t8 @: lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& m/ f8 T7 V2 x: @7 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' e# C6 U' P! t$ S8 }! k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 q. Y/ ~) U1 W: ^! _  M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 J% O4 c$ g0 [; ]0 U. S. w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Y) T$ R! E# A" D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 a" C% S  n; h* F. `. ^6 J/ r4 v! Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; g# S2 {# r4 s( _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) Q3 B. R& `* ~4 V3 Q( N- \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% a4 W! d- ^' s5 j7 |( P$ C, A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  k  C8 x/ e6 }# H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ^& i' e0 c) f) O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% ~) e* r5 K' ]; [5 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 \' Q* L! T5 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ N. G3 E8 _' e( H0 w; x. w  u% M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& E. f/ t- L4 L% q9 D  }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ?0 A: c  E- C: Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ V( t( [# `: `, N8 U$ v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: T0 [: h  R1 i$ V( |- k. N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 h- S* k$ }. S1 k% j; h" R7 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 q0 i. d, l+ G% T' W7 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- T; {0 v! K0 {) g/ f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ \* |1 O- |5 Z# D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( |# h+ `2 {1 B% W: |* a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ p" i# Q1 V7 b" g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 G3 T+ v0 S8 D$ P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 R; C' y$ Q) _$ q$ X: g: H' z* T2 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 ^+ B8 [% n0 {3 U( Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 S: l& ~2 M% _8 Y8 B0 n# H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>