【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 G; _( B& t) s5 m4 {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, W+ g4 N9 A. q9 ], eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( R/ \! ~2 k% F6 }! Z* kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* A- b9 s! A  p% N1 {% l9 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  o% U# j8 g% Q* c1 S: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, s7 H* |& H! _. aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* J7 C" o6 r1 L" ]* t( a8 X8 hI love you I love you with all my heart
) H" |- P; y  d: _% }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 R7 b9 f: v- {. r0 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ [1 b, N4 m) D+ i3 NI’m still filled with fear
4 C5 I- ?5 g4 Z: y7 j' B' r! eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ?- m* c; |6 e# v4 L( I  Y0 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' O. _( n; M3 j, e9 F0 B, k  w+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- [. V8 @  F: h- c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ~4 }9 r& j  r5 G5 L" O2 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 A7 @+ E  ?& _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: @) i" _  [/ H! d& p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ~8 g8 h+ D  R  o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% k+ i1 a+ o% H  {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& }& c( m5 v: p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Z0 l  i- d3 J# i0 }5 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# P5 `9 w5 w( ]6 f( B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( n$ D9 v6 Z/ F( k0 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, u) H- r/ ?0 D# Q/ Z  z- n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* X; v5 q6 s9 j$ P+ d0 t1 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) N; Q4 o3 b  _; d/ r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: \( y7 E0 X- ~/ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  x( C3 o' m9 W& x. ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 R  n+ `3 j% v  A% Y$ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 h* f: u4 x8 s4 F; i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" ^, E# G: f# L- k$ L" A0 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) _1 P2 B% w- b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% }) ]- B& g* R0 e7 b, e. I7 Q6 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) d: o7 t$ U  ?. N, W( L2 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; `2 A" @8 G" T0 r: N+ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
) P- B5 a% }5 T+ I/ i- l6 c* O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Z9 n/ W: z( k4 N# U4 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! r6 a: y/ I" n0 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 F% O  d% k6 S+ z& ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 X6 M3 ?3 n$ P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 S6 y# J" |& |4 p1 I" d我请你剖开它
* k% b6 B  w# O
" Y! {) n6 m& R0 [( g. _8 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, }, d5 u9 o6 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>