【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 ]% |; }. T; z1 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 _" V6 x! O0 }' w$ v$ sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# E( t1 R( l+ c) T, d9 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 O$ O7 o2 c/ r1 n' uWith the moon kissing it every night
& k2 o2 t# `( g& q+ n% g/ e: RSeeing the sky content with its love
. V* s: Y2 C- z! R4 H+ X6 m( \' WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, d6 `. n2 ]  `0 V7 j' dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# A+ r$ D- c/ o( v, MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' j) A2 a4 r* \0 G" S4 \9 D# tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 ^7 \% {; c8 t9 ^7 f/ EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  I/ y' n5 a/ L: p7 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 G% i5 {1 }# Z: W% L8 Q2 ^- r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 `% H0 r' Y$ c9 o  B# C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 R+ J( c$ N& W7 P+ y* [/ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ~* ?# Y5 L" j  C9 u8 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" N8 M0 m) y" z7 R7 j: j7 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 D* H  i: I5 L% X9 K) H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 S, J0 l" P$ S* i# x. @* o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: n5 T) ?( {- g+ m% x7 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# o% J; Q& f! s/ c2 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 c9 c* V+ s. v7 a* W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" B- Q1 W' u! `/ q- r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# g  W" ^7 M4 p8 G- _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% C+ @' m; x3 M0 M" D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 ?0 s& q2 b" u1 b, R, E' M, u! ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" [) J! ^* O3 M3 ]* i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- {: M! T  j' J# }8 U0 i% x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 |2 _0 Z" a  z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 ^& h' k! W& i5 B2 ]/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 p% \8 z# L/ Z" F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, S& t% ]; b. E9 [( |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 c9 t7 d: L' \2 N* M: U: ?4 w8 A# ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( @* Q2 ^, |& v4 w4 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" g9 W! n2 N) K* a. x  F2 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& G3 x9 H( d# J1 @' ~: q  X* s& ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ P; r9 @" |4 r# o1 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 n& d+ q7 f7 I* E; H5 E0 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- N  q. H2 a. b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# F. r, _7 M, w% }1 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! R. W% ^) W* U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 g" o  _8 t# `$ R2 l5 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 y# X' c4 |6 @7 F4 ~/ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 S2 q1 F& U0 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 r8 w$ t: ?/ d* L6 ?  o# I  |- m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>