【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: w+ F9 P  T8 r# A* O; {+ V3 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 l2 H6 V, _* G% t: K' XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 e: L0 t$ g+ ~5 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ]) y5 j! l9 C' f1 |( W1 {) lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* [6 z2 b* E! _! f9 ?1 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* D3 w; s* f  \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( r- ~) S$ P+ q2 ]3 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 ~6 a6 G. B4 s# k! `2 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 [) J& E( ?7 e4 W0 JI’m still filled with fear
- i% _2 J1 p. E+ B) zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 ?, {5 s4 m) XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( q9 H& O" |( Q/ J: ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 ]  o0 m& I  y0 ?4 O$ h3 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* c* f& L$ Z: w  A2 I5 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 @. y. ~1 k( y$ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- S! u- C; f# p2 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. @! n& a! S* B* W4 U5 l& B1 z5 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ Q# o, D+ W0 @: x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) ], H3 ~, D! G; R& N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" Y* k' C" F5 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Y% h  p% `" O9 r' s6 t  H9 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 @5 r: c# d) N4 C) h1 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* t# |/ R& Q/ O% a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 w8 `& l- O9 q- f! t2 ^# d) \, ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, A( ^" o! ?- [+ D. q8 K3 Q  R: f1 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- R6 H# f" [) n& n- E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) U: r1 @) L. z' y. \3 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, k2 G$ p4 O' {, {4 t- T' o& I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% x8 V6 T2 s/ ^+ K4 _/ H  I$ v$ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 R1 K9 L4 U  N5 k' |% [- X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& I9 i- ~. x4 B; D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' L# Z  \2 E7 i% Z& ^6 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 p5 }6 D% x1 n$ c- z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' T: t: p# @  \$ ~" ?# v8 H& M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! f& {$ U+ q' o+ E8 z4 [2 c/ G<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 E9 F* U9 ]6 C( u  p: |* `' h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 U" ?( a* t, Y1 r7 c+ H, g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 z4 N  a. \8 m% g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 O. h! i4 v9 k6 ^5 \, K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ B1 b$ l- N( ?7 m7 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 X! c' E) `3 w4 r3 U) a% e/ L9 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, ^  u* @/ W% }' [& n5 i5 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>