【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" _5 m' T# T" v0 ~8 F1 A1 P, \: ^The sky is happy down to its soul
1 W% x, ?& q3 n4 P/ R, p4 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 T, k4 |0 G) Y9 U5 X- ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- b! ~* V+ ^, |; I; \: bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- X; Z3 p0 s! M! t. u! k* V  n- u. }I really want to know just how much you love me
; v3 s; t1 d$ f3 O, gI love you I love you with all my heart
5 L+ q. X  \8 e& P0 S- u6 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# ?3 T3 p& T. W  K3 AI want so much to see inside your heart
0 A: [9 E$ v# _) }# Y/ q7 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ]1 @) D) L/ M# |6 Z6 Z: p2 |I’m still filled with fear
4 j5 z# T6 B2 o8 a8 Q# F- G- lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 o( o: a4 s( ]& d' yI regret not dying
) h- C  d, v; n8 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 m) m! x9 A' y* u* ]& R+ uWith such a tongue as yours,
) c1 {2 V% J) BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" {( O3 j, `. |: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# N5 H. l4 g7 f1 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* |7 H. H  \$ x! g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 x& D% }4 {/ Y* I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* t, M( ~# ~/ G! L! Z) X% A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  I& X1 x" q5 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 K7 s+ G% @  Y* f+ M# l' I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" r$ |& ]& U9 O8 q& j, q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: l; D7 x/ O4 b( r4 e* b: H+ [0 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 u% \8 ~5 e' q' S2 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) \& x  V, F# S9 [' p( ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 E. v$ v9 h8 K  x; c: G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 b/ o" [" t. m. M2 |# N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ M: W  N' v% [( k# o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( `' A. w4 A- X6 f7 k6 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- P6 K& ]& {$ Y0 h# J# i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 j7 T/ Y- K$ P5 A+ V# t% y- ~; G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) X- S( v3 Q) y( P* _' ^+ W2 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, C5 Y/ w. [) Y- @' V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ k' f) e( @! A% m+ k  C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ~/ i7 ^  A; r# o5 h9 s9 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 b5 S; `: V/ o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 E- e8 s- D" ^4 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" _6 l- G2 Z8 A4 {" s# {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 z; H  w& F% T3 g5 R, ^1 R" L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 O: R* N* J1 Y' `/ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
! @; V: v- t2 c8 R) B1 l. A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" N# x" L% {, q- i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 C4 p8 J' }# K8 Y( u! |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! p" C) W9 g6 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% p; j1 B) [/ G* a' x2 A* A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, W0 z8 z+ A4 P) Q" P( u1 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>