【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ w+ p7 w# W& |1 V3 q' J: DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 w1 e0 i1 N; Z; jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# |3 e# [4 h! i+ N& V: _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% S- Y8 X, d6 o/ g6 h2 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' a/ h- I. v- s) ]( n/ y. d0 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 X& I# y: p2 f7 @$ F$ `! i2 kEvery other word you utter is love
3 ~0 H9 m0 D3 o1 L+ FI really want to know just how much you love me
, z* n! o: T% c& II love you I love you with all my heart
3 X9 T. |9 E6 a8 B/ sNothing can compare to my love
4 V$ T. z& ?6 C8 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ^, U; W7 K9 LI want so much to see inside your heart
; d  e: F% q. a! DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, v- S; j6 W( p  N9 aI regret not dying
3 Z% o1 w! @2 O$ }6 O9 x6 @9 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  G6 r- ?9 X& w/ u' [7 I1 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 \! `4 k; G9 t9 i; TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 H1 x/ J8 P# hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 }- }0 M6 ^% n* ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) x; X% V4 u+ l# `) k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 o* J5 n# E4 L- e; c+ W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ X1 `$ {) H2 b5 P; W: S) p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" @8 d& L8 x5 H* C  p6 P9 v1 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' Z& @/ Z& `& Z- I. M8 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Z5 l" B, k$ T6 T' G9 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ~. p  i+ g. V3 B; n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% r/ \' ?! @8 F, K: p' v$ F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" @3 V  |" T; N: B. n# w$ d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ s. l4 O% }2 N: ^6 h  ?$ c: L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% m; S9 x. y) G1 G+ [( c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ {. H, h( _7 O6 e4 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' T7 g0 z* _4 T2 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 b! m1 {+ p( T6 Z, _' ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, I, S; [6 j4 ^9 V8 R) H+ {+ q" g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 i: b' I3 W9 B. Q) r" D' b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 `' e* V" g7 I. w6 i, ~. n, K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" ~* m# a0 x  L3 J5 u! {- T& e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, U/ j1 ?3 X+ S* u& U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) i" E; m+ }* G" z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 U$ D: Q( \5 S+ L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 ^$ z+ P0 T1 x/ u  y1 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# t5 [. H4 y# n# c4 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 A1 b" e+ M, m: w8 @, b- c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 [# D9 W% _1 u. Q3 M" z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# e' f0 J% h+ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 d) N' C8 i/ ~* j$ V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 X' K5 W4 W: |3 {+ z! g# i! x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ]& z3 Z, i) r+ i/ ^- {* H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 |; Z2 h$ E5 r9 Y; W# ^5 K! @8 N" E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% l5 E! F9 t( g% R+ q- ]# ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 U" O, C, i2 j* A) F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 y5 G0 H. h5 N: ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>