【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ y, V, {2 L9 f. ^" z6 E7 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  [+ d+ d+ j2 b0 [: g7 E3 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 m, t- x6 e. }# Y& p: }/ t7 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 j: F: v( ]8 m4 q5 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( m9 w9 C4 A% ]5 \9 O8 CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 `4 t" B" i' T3 }! r$ \6 y5 ?Nothing can compare to my love
. Y4 Y0 y6 X: E1 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" A, z9 n$ ~  b3 b3 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 G4 @3 Z  z2 k6 R6 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 T8 L& i6 ?, t& O& W$ B4 x# II’m still filled with fear
; B  O% Z; ]1 O) k+ E: cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ M( o' z0 Z. _- GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 u: X1 ~8 h* S  t5 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% D- \; S3 U- o0 m7 e8 B8 c# S& PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 h0 p. h/ N  c5 j8 k" C! Y6 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 y; n- P! j$ F2 U! N4 b0 M  E5 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. Q3 h9 z9 s/ A# L+ m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; g7 G9 v& C% d5 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Y: x. k/ A6 c& e  X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 A& A0 V# w: {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- x- C& c# t8 b! ^) g9 U' s$ I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 K) {7 ^4 U6 u* g. p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 n0 V+ R+ Q3 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& y+ l4 k3 s# J6 Y6 P+ k' A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 e: @! E& N. ^$ ~4 i* e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ E$ G: E6 t8 [7 m. _7 P) c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ E/ n5 z# \, }$ w8 S9 o6 |& X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 j; i9 B9 ~; k9 _6 y$ A4 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ ]! O$ `5 Z. ^" ?3 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! i! ~2 ^7 K; y1 h2 S% b' B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. w" I" y6 A+ x/ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( Y' D) f& h$ e2 U6 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. q/ y* Y; E' i6 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 c5 B% Z0 G0 U7 c4 K7 v0 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: c0 o: ^8 U- s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# h5 W; o$ ~7 M2 T+ t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" x) v) m6 D* c% a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 i- a2 L5 Q" T! K. E( y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 }8 C# A6 `0 p" S1 i, s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ n3 f3 O$ e8 Z1 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 k3 X. }. X  d+ X0 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 P( p' x# ]0 X4 S+ m( I; {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 z$ T# d4 b) s! W% ~! M7 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, j" y1 S$ W, o' g( H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: \5 z8 X0 I% P5 I0 }, d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# x9 l/ p2 k' l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>