【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 S, H) k: P+ K, f. ?: y5 ]4 v歌词我附在后面。
" t4 L' c4 z) U0 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* f; Y7 X) f; T2 J, a- z& kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- E- x& Y' Y5 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 Q$ E# I9 N* w; PWith the moon kissing it every night
3 ?9 n' @2 L' n4 [& NSeeing the sky content with its love
7 U' z1 [# f( V9 j% W/ LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' L% b: U  T# j% u/ V# c5 \% AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 {% L& p" b9 X$ z: bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 A: I2 b0 a2 oNothing can compare to my love
- C0 ^6 K+ R" I5 e4 o* aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 p( X* c1 I6 D; @0 E( H, k* f6 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- {- a7 U, y" V# B. F/ V0 r' J: wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' M0 {# W9 O- R$ K7 H' LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ?' `( j; A/ @I regret not dying
" j9 k8 T& E' QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: U6 i7 M! T6 Y, t& F) Y! x1 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ U( @, O; }% _; N& I1 N0 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 \9 i* [! D; c; J; Q' Q: b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ^  L8 J% ]; d4 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- e0 W& _  x; A. u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; L( P; l& q5 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: e& m2 i- k" Z! r& U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) W6 {, a1 ^1 @7 Y# F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 h: u" A# W' q  i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  W7 {6 Y) o- T$ g: N/ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ x/ t5 W3 d8 o; ?( }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 o0 J) S8 c) S! Y0 B) f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; C9 m4 q- [$ @/ x! v( H4 k! e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& p8 `1 A" g# t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d; S' F) E1 R7 J$ d2 @) R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: C! O; o, V. L% j* Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 a) K) L  s( W( T  p. ^0 N1 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ~" R9 J+ J0 h9 H6 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 k' }6 r- |& \! ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, {: F' |! A: b' d7 J2 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ?* V2 H3 E! C6 e5 z, ]" s" S3 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ S0 D' Z% x/ r8 h( {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* D* G, Q& K2 w! n" S1 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 C8 O" k7 ]- k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( e: m- Y0 r4 g" }5 e我请你剖开它

% s0 R/ [& Q6 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>