【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 @( m7 G+ _2 p( J6 B2 E- N6 X, t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  n( P% @- X! k: J4 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) W. E* Y; S2 }2 Z& `6 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 P3 K) E6 ~  w* SYou needn’t fear anything
* P* v) R: t( MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& R+ V8 h1 {# |8 U. hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" P8 ?& e/ z- m4 vI love you I love you with all my heart
9 ^( v* A3 ?% K5 f7 gNothing can compare to my love
9 s' v& v+ p$ b) |- [3 P. u4 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 x$ {' d! Y0 C3 X- u; K% s' mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& T, n$ r4 D- w+ c( _# e. n6 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 U2 q: b  W" W4 n% BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' o* |8 S" p- MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 t7 ~3 |8 B0 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 J8 D( X: r" \: e- t1 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ q3 W- w9 g) s  c+ |! D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) O; V/ `8 W* N) e/ K9 t* m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ H, o' S4 G4 O- r8 R$ X$ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, k- f3 E: J- \* q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ?) |9 Q- I! Q5 R1 M) D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! \) W' m( a) T4 W# i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  D- J: S0 D  c% ?6 f8 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% p2 T4 w+ c) l/ t$ Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% l1 {9 O& S8 c6 f" ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 J! W4 d1 J. m, A+ y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# k2 p# L* f. r1 D% l4 T; m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, P* F) m3 i" |. G- X3 b( `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; F& d8 W; r0 \# ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 f3 R( ^& Q, B: t8 v. |* ?, ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, O3 U! V  w! Q8 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# k* v  G: ~4 g8 Y0 B3 @; z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 m% J( ~; Q+ U2 J. [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 s6 e/ q2 O& Y4 w! L- e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" @; \8 d; ]+ D; [& ]( m7 R8 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ ~( w2 w+ |' X% p! Z; B5 i3 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; l% Q# ^5 U" Q% w4 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 J+ |6 c+ o& N  Y- r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 s4 T& ]5 C- i* `# [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ p% C- Q7 T% \) g  ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% m5 U) E* T) _/ `" c; |' l3 d/ P- ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. c+ d- M; _7 K" S0 ^% d6 S7 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' u/ ~2 y5 A6 f$ m6 Q我请你剖开它
4 k/ P: Q* o- z0 Z& z
; }# T- j6 P" b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( u% t# v9 z; h$ _) ]$ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>