【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. G- C8 r* b' A% T$ V歌词我附在后面。
+ z: f* Q9 J6 d9 A" C; {/ I1 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: P) F$ P% T, c! }+ {2 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 j: [% O7 ?& [. e: b. O/ mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# r2 z5 |4 E9 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 D% x* K' u2 hSeeing the sky content with its love
& `5 D. A: G/ g- PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# M  u5 p" h6 X0 ?. U8 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! h  Z, v( `' O& J, H5 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- K: c9 U  a) V" K$ g* a. WI love you I love you with all my heart
, ]) Y1 ^8 v( O4 h% [7 ^) m* Z& GNothing can compare to my love
2 ~& j, S7 d! p9 J% t( ?/ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 }, [. X6 q/ Y$ J. H; Y- F5 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- E+ `, r7 Q: n; Q% Q0 }! K8 JI’m still filled with fear
5 E6 J; j0 G7 v# s0 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 b0 D9 B6 M& A; ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# P$ S( t* e  c  n. g$ o: C4 v9 kWith such a tongue as yours,
! x' V; i5 T+ P0 L+ W4 Q6 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ k7 F  q: S/ q3 Z4 n7 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 `5 V8 B1 m, L& a6 e: ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, k( j( V4 j3 O. l" z; y4 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ~% p, m! _# F" a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ D1 J& B  p. f/ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  [3 j4 ^; v+ Z4 s& e! U% F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; H( K1 O/ ~, Y: H3 g  b. n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( M2 ?6 T% s( g, F# q+ ^1 S7 j. M) W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 |5 F6 w; E+ ^1 v) i" S. J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& E7 x7 A9 i* ~3 m3 i  ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- E: |, u! b  [5 S  ~; A0 ?, l<P>你无需担心</P>
. V& K; P+ B- F3 a2 H5 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( }" n  g5 j; V5 M! t  ?+ K& x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ a8 `+ J. r% }( }" V8 L# ?6 L* y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; y! [% e9 Q: j3 L1 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 Q) l: \! w! Q8 q& ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 O9 Q! A, Y2 ]6 ?9 I4 C9 V9 L2 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" z2 n. c  v4 C0 i( c0 l: U; c6 h: D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 H; b  M- p/ O! v6 N  v; F0 O: l2 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' c$ q2 M7 n5 G- @9 P* _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- X9 H& f5 w, f2 q/ U% Q) m7 n( W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 [( F6 _, x8 U/ K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) P- j" F  F7 |+ v5 Z: r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, V  D2 @# Q' a7 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ?4 \8 k* m4 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ r3 L. r- J% n; H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 r: w! s6 z, z2 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 K0 N9 Q7 e6 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Z+ M, f" z4 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ], p2 v- J- z% H, L& v; Y& e8 S' [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, D) U1 h0 `8 S. q- q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! H2 B  G2 q' J2 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>