【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  k1 a0 q8 Y8 D! E; ^) d. pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 R, U- \" \! V; r9 KWith the moon kissing it every night
& d5 Y5 u1 [4 |3 b! TSeeing the sky content with its love
+ r# p. ?9 n1 G  k2 ~# y, j: TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' R' o# \: m( l; x% F' @/ jI really want to know just how much you love me
8 H: C" ?  S/ ^( ~6 N! C; LI love you I love you with all my heart
5 J( _1 f$ p$ ~# W: ?( YNothing can compare to my love
3 l! L- c; B  N- [7 }) k9 Y! }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' d1 y7 O* v- W8 [2 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ |3 \: @- b8 b0 n) O+ J+ W( zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) A$ o! r& [( I$ \8 v# UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 c! z: b  j& }7 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 v1 C) O5 s. G+ zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 ?4 ^5 s  }, `+ J# y+ X2 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" }' G8 h- F$ ]- T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ g3 @* s- R$ T2 ^$ {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  N8 e9 ~8 b* q# \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ]7 S9 }1 G' p/ j9 i1 a7 K4 D! y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 |5 D8 H6 S3 s/ O, C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" m/ @% q- M. O& k9 L6 J& {! O$ z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 V7 O7 m+ F7 q$ x6 }* y, h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, }" @. @" s1 ^/ [/ B: A# _* A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! U+ \1 M. K: b! R& H<P>你无需担心</P>
9 P$ W, ~5 k7 a- D& d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ k/ e' t$ n; }$ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) z1 K) \. F6 K4 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 L6 G! \3 y/ q' L+ v( ?4 o( |6 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 ~4 l% F% g+ v% t" J) s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 b8 O; e% K$ o  G! d: `( ~/ [  H4 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ^  A& y8 X; N( q8 r7 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 @( @5 s9 w; E1 `8 A9 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* i1 Q( l( L3 Q6 F7 x+ j; v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" c  B3 d4 A( m2 e$ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# r( f3 `6 z5 {0 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ?9 V) x: Y* q7 b! A4 ?0 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. Y( a1 A# N/ J9 i  ^0 B7 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% F3 n7 a9 Z8 n. U; `/ G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 A. L' V! c5 K. A5 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% p8 |( C$ i& q4 G1 x; K( k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 u$ k5 `8 x) n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 F$ ~* g% v9 Y7 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>