【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# ^% P3 g6 G4 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Z% c8 {9 f7 I" v* s( WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 L0 c) G; I; P( x0 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- o3 ], f$ X1 {' ]" g: S: RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# f' X  i9 ~% L1 P" bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 @0 `7 @0 S6 W& w# M: g9 f6 EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ F$ W1 Z" K4 U0 H+ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" ?  X6 a/ j3 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' |) H6 X! B  i7 v, _* sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# X: ~  R$ h, xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' \- ^; |* D$ t6 E3 U0 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 c% f* X) H( K  ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 D$ q2 W& s2 S% Z# k5 f; }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 [& v$ }) |5 k) M3 [2 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# A$ B+ m% ~$ |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) w. X$ S# u7 X# A! f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ?% M, \+ \/ k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% T$ B0 p' L! `# f0 d/ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- H' F! H! V7 n0 {8 ~! U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& x- G8 h' S; X7 {! _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ {" r6 D7 F7 \0 K4 h; t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 w2 p6 O7 ~) @, G. d( Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 b; p8 w5 }6 g0 \' A6 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" b3 I' C/ q: `6 a( V! q0 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" f7 Y; H2 g& z0 m2 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ o5 }  ~4 F1 V1 L. H! k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ~( T' z0 x7 ~. ?1 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) q! S7 j( ^8 ~7 I$ {$ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, ~3 i5 W$ V5 Y) k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ]8 m3 o! h$ y8 ~1 y+ v- @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 ^1 n3 i$ X1 B- }% M3 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! J' q+ l; v2 W3 p7 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( C/ G3 z$ }' V& a) G9 i7 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ b2 m& X3 p/ `9 o5 H- ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 N8 d. Z% `; J- f9 ?! s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: a# P; Y: s% l! }2 v& w+ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 y$ A. ^" h+ G5 d8 P. N6 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 O% T2 ]- j$ S5 X4 p& u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>