【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 }- T. n7 [( S& K& L0 l; Z! FThe sky is happy down to its soul
  V1 A4 K2 s4 C3 J- k9 b* O" GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; y- h. _- k$ vYou needn’t fear anything
( I% m+ I/ A' G6 H/ f$ I. ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ O! B3 x' `$ ^6 Z8 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 c7 V1 p& X! D( v, QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 y5 i8 E: M+ a$ ?1 t# IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 i* [" V( ^& n- G4 ?* ~7 JI want so much to see inside your heart
  A( Z# R  C* l$ O& Z. lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( |5 C9 L9 p/ C: J% j3 r+ H- F) mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 l. T& B1 n9 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Z0 T( ^- }0 ?. D* l# \8 B2 P7 G+ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ~2 G' ]+ K7 m+ _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ]/ s" m5 a  w9 U. C5 L4 [* Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 s; _! |: s. C& Z! h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 @3 ?# H) ^$ V/ P& g0 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 g* T5 h( l1 I, }+ L/ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# C, o2 B- C6 v: n: R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 z$ ?1 e/ n6 c# B/ M0 j' g% {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- u# t+ K3 F3 L/ S( ~8 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 i3 V4 |6 r) c" X% s7 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 n. o2 u5 N! R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 U2 `9 H" M1 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 u3 x4 r- H1 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ P0 _6 M- t! X: x! E$ X+ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: O0 W3 }8 W: z9 n. G5 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 a  U% ~8 V& v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- g* H* [. M6 g$ G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 y: x6 r9 t  j# F, W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 K/ I: O0 p* [9 ?% G; w6 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 w  \& e  ^1 {* W: m$ c# E, X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ G7 o$ u9 D' Z& B9 t4 W0 K4 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Q4 y& d; \8 ^7 M8 d* h$ [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 K" |7 x3 ^* M# _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) N( |/ C3 [) V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& D) Q7 {3 p: ?. ?6 g' m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% i5 g: F8 F& {7 l8 g& s2 X3 d: {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# h; k" n7 `5 p& B7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Q# i: f7 ~! x& Q2 O! {# F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# }5 c% D5 T+ ?6 p: N" @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 d- \; k& n# |4 E# v' R( w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>