【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) }- ^! A0 [, _4 X歌词我附在后面。
: H: \$ h2 t  j2 `/ w* }, wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% o0 H/ D1 M2 O* i2 l" K% UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. {" A  @+ d  l: J2 \4 M2 x6 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 e/ [. [) u( r$ N" ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 b0 N4 N9 ~2 Z+ y4 W  Z# K" x9 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" |- Y3 d' t$ M* b7 S. D( FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 |8 w4 j9 o7 c- i+ W5 EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 b1 Y9 ~+ }" c6 h( L/ k0 Z) LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' T6 {1 z/ w/ E0 N0 O* KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ r: r' d8 ]* N. UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 I3 Q: c& H' i" D. Z$ m" eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. q8 |$ U8 D: f- t" [: s8 {8 D9 q; qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. w! x8 P$ v6 \* O4 L+ o7 c$ X, ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ y# X5 w  `3 v% v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* z+ I1 W' Q" s' x4 Q! i6 O; c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 ~& r1 ~' F: E. A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ P. {# X. w: t0 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% d7 ~3 m0 e, ^& a4 @8 y1 a8 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 W  s9 D5 J( I' N. x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% A* l* \# O" @. m2 @# D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) V/ l5 I- R- ^$ R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 t# W; Y6 S% T: ]( S4 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 J! a7 H8 r  M7 y  C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 a* z+ D3 r& T8 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% v9 D4 w; p" [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! n& V: I( B4 K. v* d  R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 C  V2 X, {# J, R& X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" X  R& Q6 x, y- ^5 ?1 h8 \% J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* h& P* c$ |) k# ^0 M; D* _" \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 L4 m6 P5 B& |7 n9 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: j/ I4 w) h3 |; e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 P5 k) Z5 ~: g0 A; p<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ u8 O+ H0 w6 }6 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- i0 j. i- r/ O, u" e! M: |( ~0 P$ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 h2 a2 ]  j" f9 X' K3 q) L, |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 H4 F# E) \3 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; V; f$ K/ f5 x3 V) U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: f- L: W0 d' _9 y" r! ~7 r# I$ Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, B$ s) @5 ?. _  m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" @( x, M4 k9 B6 ^0 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  `* V& S) y: ~$ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ s" K, K; D* L) Z6 q2 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  R. i- [5 y1 r) z+ t5 {2 ^% k+ \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>