【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Z/ P1 Q: _( i4 C$ qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# z0 P3 G6 a# fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 t  z; Z1 Y/ NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  @9 g2 j$ ~. k. g5 N5 w% R# P1 t  zI really want to know just how much you love me
& n/ y( \8 Z- b7 Y1 _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- {/ ?# f9 M5 G) o6 }6 ?1 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& @/ ]6 S3 o' P, w' Q8 ^/ iI’m still filled with fear
! _" w( }7 L6 o0 }7 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 _6 ?& |  O0 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, [6 |" x' H& r. V9 lWith such a tongue as yours,
, T4 G' z+ o5 h% U1 u! @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" j( D- q! y& A( N( h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. {7 M  J# _: Y- Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) L. G9 ~7 @% R! P5 w4 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 O5 k1 M6 y+ w+ A) _" t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 {& `% ~5 s% x+ E, Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( q# i5 ]# \# q* D1 ^9 Z& x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h6 c7 P! _* w. B8 E# e6 t" }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- t6 j  J, v6 N7 G8 {5 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 }. S: ?$ F7 o- F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& n( G/ T# q) j- V! H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ^3 Q1 e! W7 C- r+ j& y0 q& o3 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* X) Q% b' l5 X5 m% t  t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 D7 z/ D9 U0 w9 w0 w" U* Z* [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: l/ `& e2 `9 B* _. v) d# X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% l$ j5 A; b9 d$ U# Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- I/ @- `$ m5 I( y3 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ~. ~% F5 r; Y3 Q6 M% N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' {) j, I' ^4 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- `) m: H  L" R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 o  v! i/ {5 X- |6 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 f1 v+ Q, C/ _6 G: X) E# T) L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# j! w* P1 K' ?7 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# a# }/ {- m! {' x  t2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! I  ]) k$ J5 O) Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 Q1 r- m( u8 e$ @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ]8 J3 i5 A! O6 `/ v/ x; a5 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 u) n0 H# n3 |3 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* H  r' C4 |; j6 P& J, w5 S; d# m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>