【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: x# f% M( _/ e! Z( n( R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 L! |. f( k' x; Q8 c- AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; f0 k& F: `; S3 w' @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ s! t+ S# i1 `5 BWith the moon kissing it every night
+ b& d3 s1 M# S0 KSeeing the sky content with its love
5 ]* A0 ]! C* a. F4 D+ K5 i9 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 v$ F# }- E* r% z7 H+ L: CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 M( V: i% ^  D- _% C/ \Every other word you utter is love
# X; Q$ f' I. ~7 X7 |7 }I really want to know just how much you love me
7 _' ]- \( P7 mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ^' Y0 o  e+ a$ pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  n. E( V6 @' S) x: gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 c$ W- x, k( H$ iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 W/ ?) Y% r5 x" T  a* M- zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- V0 X1 j4 J( Y7 K  @; v9 F' i5 M$ {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 J: _& d+ n5 Y. _) O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ p% Y1 y4 W4 `% `) D% m" t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" Q( C7 \' X+ m5 D: S: d. X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ?. t  N6 }* g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* `7 d) i8 i& i5 V( @+ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 T! S3 T* N$ ^% K8 ?- U* w7 W; ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# d: w) G6 @, H$ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& Y5 q7 w1 p5 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: G# Y# Q% {- k, L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ m1 ^* p* w/ A" T1 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 i5 y' n2 k- @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ]# |" W7 K! O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% [" j5 B# z$ K/ Y  x7 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: G7 m4 ^: F& K, |( Z3 \0 g. C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 u$ @+ @( k, O$ R* b, N: q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- _& z8 j" I% _* h5 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  Q3 [- _7 a4 b6 @4 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ J; A/ F/ |4 |$ }% u. g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' a  _/ z* Y& B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" Z! \7 V1 }- d) e3 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 T9 P6 o* r7 o, l7 _  `' J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 k& ?  b/ x/ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! n: b8 M/ \; h4 O4 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  X( E1 U) j4 l# w$ M/ [6 ?5 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 I9 r! q' J* B( h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 [2 C/ E. G( r4 f" q! e! b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, i% Q. @! J* P2 u% p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% k1 j$ Y, p8 g% ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" b; N3 l. _7 r" s9 A% a4 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>