【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  t' u0 c3 y) j  RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! U# C/ d" h; L# P0 D% M* H6 @: VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 ^6 o: G+ T6 z9 O+ H/ LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- u+ [3 y4 S/ h  ]3 o- ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; ]# A! Z, w6 o( v( \/ D+ V9 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! @. a# z* K7 o) F' |  w4 W4 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: O- t, |6 i3 ~- z! g' z/ F- jNothing can compare to my love
! r# l" V* T$ a/ C5 V9 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- s  G8 h2 _; F3 g; a9 S4 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; W7 |2 H+ E- d7 @3 h$ L- [' oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 @0 `$ \; m0 ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ d" y+ Y$ Y- r4 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; K' F$ |' `2 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- C% C- ?# v8 ]" _+ T; {( c2 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- s% \6 |1 H$ P. U9 f! M" a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ j' T3 V. S! b% U, I/ e+ U. R+ e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 V' x$ ^  Y& \3 s) {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 A4 l0 [/ Q4 p. g. }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; R/ `$ R0 B: U0 M; ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ v4 _$ b4 M1 y) W% A) l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 S' L8 B4 `" L/ L. S; {- g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ?4 [. j* P  a3 V, P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 N! E/ T/ I- d) o8 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 o: {: B7 ~9 |. f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 y8 d: Q( K# s! k4 V! a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 V# K. Y4 ~+ c! v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 H" ~. w5 |3 S9 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ e/ r. ^% x# N6 W3 z' G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ^4 t5 e6 ^! U1 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! q: s( ?' a" G& p4 ?3 O, n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 J) ^) F8 k3 i1 e  D$ W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 a* P# S# I- c0 }5 C0 Z! }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. D. H- K- }- ]( z) Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 R  ~# k/ A5 f8 G: ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* f" B# o) |4 t7 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* B$ g! N) I# V6 U) b# `! m0 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. U$ d3 r% Y6 t! W  C4 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; w/ z5 B$ R3 S* n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& J) ?- Y& A2 k! L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ P+ D3 Z! e: J' |- P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ X# ?6 c, i, s  W4 n7 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ^; d- Q7 |* U# o, N+ D9 L' }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 t3 ~6 F7 c: @! o6 t* G5 E% {: [/ [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! S* g+ L3 j* v3 g( {0 K+ `+ k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( e( q' V3 g$ {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 V/ x" x& C( r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 `6 M( u  v" @# ?+ W3 D5 S# h% T8 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- B! l5 X5 e" l* m4 B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 [* p2 d; ^4 q. @/ S0 H. H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>