【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 [1 Q- ~5 i; ~4 F$ n5 F: T( K: OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) M+ {6 Z7 C" C& o3 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ P* j; n: o# b" q  L2 V# W3 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
' b, T1 W' H, R0 Q& o  oWith the moon kissing it every night
: C+ {% W! E% _1 |0 FSeeing the sky content with its love
: A% J/ e* }+ L) g# J& x# y1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( v: s  [0 @+ j" v* [3 ~3 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# _0 l7 ~: _( q& P) eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! T4 p/ ]% Z  f3 M& T1 k- j' L- ?Nothing can compare to my love
  Y; N) C6 O+ t. T" A8 _0 x8 T  jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; \) x6 F0 ^, V5 I2 X4 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' G5 y" ?, z3 T4 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ~+ d6 P; m' U" o/ pI regret not dying
* H; y% @5 Y2 u$ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! d3 O; Q# s/ _; t  v0 @1 f6 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 A5 i! |2 V: |7 {0 M- y1 o: j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; _( C" ~. Z* \; k& P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" T% ]3 M) D5 i' K  H4 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ [1 _* ]/ ~. ^$ _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 p0 [  O' D: M1 h# p$ P6 j. v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" B! k5 |' a4 }, s7 ^- \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. c! z2 t/ X! n8 o6 W: z: o+ V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 g, u9 P9 b: g# g2 W) k7 r6 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; r2 `8 c0 }  h8 Z; z1 T  U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# A( r# J0 M" \' W# {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 _! H9 e" e7 o/ [  T5 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 S9 E$ K; Y( c7 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& x9 G: T" f" c& i. z* h4 k8 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# W6 \1 l. R% W, o% d8 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( v$ ?% M* N  F% t$ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 k" j3 A/ j2 d, g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. e1 V" y- Q, I0 g" H5 p( X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ Z/ {' n+ b! P' B) Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ]' b  o. r/ }2 `2 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 S  N  \. o( r, X# }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 t5 s  f' c  v2 r3 ]$ E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 }& m/ Q( ?9 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: `, ^" t4 X/ E' _3 E- d) S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. X" }6 }/ v3 L: s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- x8 K! C& k, n" R4 I我请你剖开它
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$ c, ?( W* x& n$ _5 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>