【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. P5 ?2 ]7 q8 m# ]歌词我附在后面。
! v( \0 r) s- h# J  |2 r1 h' ~, _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 B5 @7 J6 C; K0 C: ^( FThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 ?, H- O2 L% e! H) vWith the moon kissing it every night
( P; }- H* u5 e9 T2 w2 @Seeing the sky content with its love
" Q/ c1 |- @) CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* m/ w: x) q5 T$ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% H* _: `0 ]; ]8 [1 z: EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, s' t5 s' C6 p2 l9 u: b/ [7 G" H! QI love you I love you with all my heart
& ~/ ~+ a' K: H8 n  H6 XNothing can compare to my love
8 u% p* @6 k) ~1 c2 k: Q; \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 T: I  N! Z/ c, fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: |0 x! B# o% [% Y2 P- @I want so much to see inside your heart
- F& L' r) r+ v. N! ~4 ]$ TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* i2 C! P" e/ J  d  wI’m still filled with fear
" N9 R6 r) F5 R. `$ |2 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Y, ~" W; h. V, cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  U  o, y  V& }& s+ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 `$ ]" P  X9 B; N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' w0 Q: n/ w6 S" ^* C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ A( @- M4 o$ `2 d7 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( J9 v, _, d, {  |9 n3 `/ f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! Y& ?: H$ [; y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. O& d9 h. \  `$ _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ {; G. A& ^9 j, I9 c& Q' y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( F+ P2 L- F4 B. _% E% O) y# {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q  A* a% e) J* v9 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' n% w8 v) ~* F2 @, J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' F. \- m/ }' x3 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 P" Y2 v+ n, O. A! ?" }, `& p2 r( j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 h* A6 u% H0 c$ Z" ?6 h# {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" y5 \$ J. D+ z0 V8 S- d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ L& Y  D" B! L( k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Q0 U4 h9 C/ n: D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 q! {4 S9 r. ^0 G1 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' y$ p" N+ l# e2 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 c$ z+ D3 e# O& B7 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 C! o$ g& Z1 O. n% t. y! T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' c- f7 q: q# h! M0 |; T. c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ n7 {' X- I8 j6 ^" l4 T$ X2 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: T& Z# A8 p9 l% O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 a& ]3 U1 q4 C: v" v( f' m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 W8 F  ^5 B& Y5 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; [- |, L4 n6 T% n6 p7 `% Q* z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ i- B# k% Z7 I. x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% x" E9 Q) |# V2 B: ~2 ]% a. N我请你剖开它
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8 _+ Z8 `8 b) ~; a7 S6 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M3 p: @3 n; O$ u$ y2 D9 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>