【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 C+ S& S8 J) H: K' Q! rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 U+ Z& i5 f: jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% k& ?8 y5 M# G& E, p9 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. N; e- z" C  x2 C$ F! o3 h( M1 R1 y2 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 w$ @. J) K* [1 C5 a3 U0 I* VYou needn’t fear anything
/ y' b2 _% T6 T- a" Q; k, w- v5 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  v7 W: z* n! `& Z; F# G& S! hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 \/ _/ e& C3 A7 z  L" |" mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. t0 _/ S  H" a1 y3 @6 R; @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. L9 Y! P/ ]5 a) TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  g7 L1 ?" J6 _3 y+ ?I want so much to see inside your heart
+ c& `+ t' I3 O1 }1 e- AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 j3 c- K: ~7 t6 d* |% SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 u) g( t0 c% a7 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& s- R- y8 J" h) {% R$ _3 l" k& xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& _# L+ J, _( N% b& e: [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" {, y) p1 z+ g* O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 P+ J) \9 r. ?8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 W8 n) y5 q$ P/ H9 Y8 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 a' ?. z0 |' A% A& Y7 y7 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 ^* T9 B' k0 U1 f5 A- v& E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: D& r* {; q6 w2 N% A! N$ l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. F) I( D5 R" U/ D% s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 m* O; u9 [/ x( |  p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 X% O* z$ p5 ~: }4 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ y0 O5 Q4 c9 d2 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( p2 y7 y4 w5 J$ s4 u. L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ m  ], Z9 \: Q! m% F+ ?" Q7 c! g- u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 c/ W5 w9 T7 u! |7 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" t$ e6 p5 R2 R" f5 L: L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* ~. v7 q& [7 p# B; l4 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! B) P8 }4 T5 z' i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 y8 p( s* j3 |9 O3 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& T0 R4 W7 s- T+ b1 D) O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) {. U3 B( V7 c* A& c% E# Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& T; Z. X. J9 l" S/ e' G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' W/ [2 u9 _6 C% c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 a. D" {+ \5 _5 D. D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: X) y0 Z0 v: s9 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 U( R; ^4 z  Q" v% s$ P& R! I6 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 g  G3 a: @$ A8 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>