【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" W9 k3 I8 ~  y+ XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ]% `3 `9 i; d; ~# n6 Q( @: a7 Q7 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ D6 V4 h6 \+ p# kThe sky is happy down to its soul
; W. W  n& s( k5 h2 D; \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' h, F& h- e( M( }. G$ Z( nI really want to know just how much you love me
5 S6 u( V0 u) J8 YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) [3 r# S  A6 g5 J: J' N( [: bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  T3 v  z# F: X$ L! ]2 O: kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ }4 O$ t7 O# ^9 q/ ~I’m still filled with fear
! G" `+ v9 s& U8 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, z0 t) L& n5 @( k1 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# M6 Z  d* B8 }5 u' n, h( ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% ]2 r' a# n/ S$ j6 ~4 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: [2 V" C2 {% |3 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: j; ~& I' t+ L1 Y5 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* O+ E- w5 a! y; j* Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) y4 i. }6 v+ L$ p$ b7 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 i& S6 Y, \% i' d# W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 x; u$ J9 T$ f7 w+ p3 g) z! _" c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) z  S! H" ?% _8 @# c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 b: C9 U2 h/ G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& L/ G5 ]9 a- k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 w3 ~4 F, L: V; c6 o  c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 C1 V, G  u, u. P4 l9 I$ u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 m2 }' a6 ?4 T* H0 A4 Y' P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ^* T* c1 E' G& @" x9 w6 h- d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) R& Z6 k' \/ ~$ F8 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 i3 n) C2 _* N( ~) s4 u# T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 m4 S5 @" `) s9 o; s7 Y& ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 c1 I3 H+ e  H4 v3 ?4 @, }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 }& q4 r& I% q7 u$ n- W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" T! T% T7 H3 c% o2 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 b- o7 ?" T/ r+ O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: L) B% w: o* z7 u( ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 e9 ?( Z5 \' w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ Z+ k; [' \: G  _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. E9 N8 L; s6 ?2 J# f5 u' o6 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: o: d$ j$ h' i" a2 q' k我请你剖开它
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% |  B: C& V1 p" |, X0 K9 I+ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# S: U9 K+ a; [/ P/ L5 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>