【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# r' B5 a# M' qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' j' p' e0 E7 S9 b! i# S+ G" S% Z3 Q! EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- N0 `, f- j* D4 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ]& `5 n: \/ b- s3 Q! [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' F  X" C. S1 W/ H. }" TI love you I love you with all my heart
' \8 `, e! f# j& XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* G. Q& i5 @; ^, FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 T) F% o+ g! L# u6 a, o# O+ c% OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 p, t3 Z) e2 K. J' S5 \+ Q+ oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 L+ R8 f' X: ~8 bWith such a tongue as yours,
' @# Q  [, a, r  b! W% H# y# E; ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& l" A% G7 D1 N( |" @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 c; D0 o' |2 w$ l' p, d7 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' e1 h$ k4 _0 u6 U0 C* r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  e: B7 `& l' v# p" }3 E, y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ]+ c5 h! v* p/ w; }/ P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 v2 k# ?! l" J1 G& T* M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ ?& }, w( }+ b( o% `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 \9 H& X# X# y5 R/ i8 N5 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ^' M& J3 r  N- ~7 ~9 z6 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  U) x8 K+ M1 x6 K# |2 A0 ]. k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 J, b- @3 M4 v* M" D$ _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Y  R! {" K( ~- @$ e, F, X4 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, Z* |$ p: u6 t7 w+ `6 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# a8 Q% k; L1 ~0 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 ?1 C! Z1 K0 Q# o1 P# n+ z" H  H- ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; t8 Q" e: Y1 ]6 w, ]% A! F<P>你无需担心</P>
% ~1 M6 i+ \( Z! g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 r' |. @6 H" @7 w" j4 m5 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  U- Z8 u$ J: ~8 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 `( m" \$ P: c& V; y" z3 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^- @$ l' O5 X. ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 O& ~4 u4 R: H3 V) j/ i; t  L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ~0 j; y8 `! M5 {8 j" g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 ?5 h# s6 ?$ O  Z" ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ u' z, Y6 f, L& w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. W( I! O5 _6 K/ A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* v; f, V3 H" C) D3 v' a) {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 m8 J1 i3 x* b# z# u3 }5 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 n% R, v/ V0 t, T% ~! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 a) z  q9 u0 o; S6 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: U, K) F$ }% w$ h( v- V6 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; q* n8 E+ L. P7 M7 x% w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ [) X1 k5 q$ H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ a2 C& ?  L2 Y6 G0 i' I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 p9 Z" ~* i9 K: H3 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  ]$ _5 X3 j) m1 e# w8 c7 Q8 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>