【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 y3 K' U4 v# ^2 ]6 g: ?* i7 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ~' K& S" [9 h2 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 X" |* n+ w. Y" {" L; \8 i9 v# dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: h3 M: l: f6 kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ X& J/ b- J+ S! Z  V4 Q( T/ EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  R0 i( t- j, xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( }4 S0 J' J) z; E5 \/ |/ o) ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% m2 x2 c; {0 Q% II’m still filled with fear
( C6 e# l! ^8 S; aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 W9 p" y  u2 A7 R; `- NI regret not dying
2 Y; y6 `" i7 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 p2 F6 }* H1 G  V* {  AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 H! E3 T3 n0 m0 ~4 S  QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 G+ f: z" a1 J, G7 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 S1 Q1 D# P3 z4 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. \+ c4 o9 r. i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, _; q2 K# s( ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! e2 `& b2 A, G: F7 a: r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; v. h, [/ `) s* j/ D# I, L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! S8 C& `9 Y- s; m+ m8 ^" C- e- q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 a, H0 \$ P7 K; e+ p6 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# Q( d" |+ m0 x6 N* a* w; p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 A( ^) H/ c1 X1 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 K) ~5 f: S9 K% z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ T* m8 m: m- R$ v: \( M4 Y1 G$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 u- y! \' r- ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; K2 U* P; Z/ m9 t* j/ g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  y( H: U0 n# w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 f8 d4 P. f* N4 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* w% i& Z; h6 G6 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  f( n+ F0 T. a! Z/ [8 Y$ Y" ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. z- `9 _1 F5 j7 y5 b# x% l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- Q2 u2 f" ^. Q8 G# m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: @# o0 X/ f% E+ K. k, C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 l; T4 t( ^$ }: s( @. v! Z# W& B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 |; l- q3 U! O5 J6 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Y) K8 T* [8 P, l$ L0 C" `! t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 s: ~+ W2 }! N/ l* A1 @& o  N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ~/ }/ K8 @) ^- R: S7 e: v" |( E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ]* z! B% k: }2 X+ Z+ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 n% }+ W# g- g2 v, j9 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" m1 N! t3 t: @3 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 Z1 O  S+ K& ?4 Q5 g4 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ I' \; h) V# ]* h8 R  t" B% G6 i6 i: c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>