【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" g5 J7 t( V7 {: ^0 I* J  _歌词我附在后面。
7 D/ Q$ s* O! ?& `- E  AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- y! a1 \9 Q* |' f+ ^: hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ~! ~0 c) G1 E5 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 L! k1 ~  M5 L4 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" ~$ ]/ u3 W- B7 ]. I, s2 d3 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! m+ L, Q; K9 Q; s" J4 R* u5 M1 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ U' Y$ @" J- E6 p3 O! q, v; R' YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  h( _8 J) T. x1 \8 XI want so much to see inside your heart
* K4 n! |8 [6 ]2 o3 ]# L# iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ O) {" S2 x) B  \) qWith such a tongue as yours,
9 e8 v8 y4 S5 K6 v- C1 j( LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ F' |2 z. d& [  S2 g1 ~, v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 e& a+ l9 n" ?  c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 a% f! c% k  r: K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  C: ^9 Q  \6 z1 H) H9 w6 s5 c& Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ~  R8 n+ K+ K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 ~! I: D% C) }* v4 ^, b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ @( q0 G5 O# z. C" t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( l6 X/ J2 O' U2 Y. p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! |6 Y( A7 r# R0 E/ X5 o) r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- P$ D& f( j( z/ l" d# l4 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. m6 c% [9 s, u+ l! L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 P3 b" u! |" K: [4 u, L5 ]! z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: s/ F. X0 P8 F/ A1 \+ q8 [" v4 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' W( L! J1 h' }( I# E! j( M: A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. j( W' n5 y% ]) @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 p8 N* N+ g  M) \6 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Z. K  k6 r: l- c2 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 z0 q$ b1 I: Q4 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ A5 ?3 L" k: z  \* I, E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' z: _; i5 ~2 D6 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 w0 Q. ~, m8 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& y' a; C: z; r* B4 [5 a: U- r% F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& i# q/ g/ u. x' [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 Q7 }0 Y5 c2 N8 w! S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& k' a, \$ q5 }% P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 j; ^8 u% F: a! k9 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 \! e5 P6 i3 H6 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ z# I# g) l  b5 q0 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 J) U3 Q+ b3 z0 v4 Z! E8 t6 n& c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ y! ]& m4 L0 w1 J" R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% F; T+ @: y1 h9 F5 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: h8 b' R" s1 P1 m2 z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ H! s6 `5 _/ y# ]7 \7 K我请你剖开它
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* r# T8 C3 M0 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>