【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" Y1 I4 r; ~4 D& ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ |/ D2 i3 F- h# M, g" |" p) `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# m* |6 F; o4 m* _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# H/ P1 O& @! [0 m+ V& FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( a/ S5 R6 y7 W4 z( h! GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. u4 X# F! V7 d1 N0 O" O$ d- o' }& |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 d+ I) S5 `: l" }3 hI regret not dying
' r9 ]' q9 Q# X5 E& X7 k7 u5 A" {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# N! P! J: q% a; J! E% ~" [# tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 k2 [) X4 r6 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ c" a3 C& I5 U) o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Z) N! F7 [: [- V0 x3 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 S6 ^, q, H+ F1 Q) q1 Q- L9 P! E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ I9 p) l+ M+ M# v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; V( k8 [0 y! q' w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* r" X6 O0 e( t3 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 d0 F( U3 `# d/ r6 W* [- ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 h0 `3 v- C/ Y# M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ~+ I# y& ]* e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 L- d1 U8 l) C: B/ N, A& O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 U: Z) h2 i8 ]4 ]2 b7 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. {$ \: q3 O5 I% u& q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! D* K6 P4 b4 b$ _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ o2 c3 w5 D9 ^# U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& y' i6 _2 w. ~, x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ k- v8 U2 _5 W( t$ a# w) k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 T( g$ g7 K  h1 n4 N8 o1 J5 V9 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& g' x* d9 ~/ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
, n, h( m: `- F* X8 ~4 v- S6 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" q9 s7 w" j1 B2 Y' I0 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! g" M  ^* b+ h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 {# R! ]: z7 m" n+ e/ y5 X5 L% k# L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% O% R9 a0 f7 V0 V& U1 G8 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 U& ~7 \6 k. d) v; ^0 l. K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" [& [+ i# }. z% b1 v# C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, C# Q$ t1 K* |5 I7 @2 k: L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: M4 u% Z5 B5 y0 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 h) Z0 F5 w6 a2 {: N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>