【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 ^# Z, K! t& c) HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, y& w' O7 e; {1 L. nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  J" r4 t7 v5 R0 OWith the moon kissing it every night
* h. W  v1 o* D/ O3 KSeeing the sky content with its love
" x- R8 e$ K5 T7 _& w3 |' N% ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C; p  l3 K7 wYou needn’t fear anything
0 f0 T& {& u( l0 C5 ~; |- i; P& qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 N: z0 S: S) J" [I really want to know just how much you love me
* u5 _0 n: [, E- KI love you I love you with all my heart
! Y4 r7 @; z9 d1 F- D+ g, aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ^" N5 k1 C1 ?1 C" r0 KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 W* h' f+ l5 f8 G1 t# FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  Q# b1 X: ~# O+ WWith such a tongue as yours,
3 f- J* c$ X! D" Q% n4 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! P/ B/ ]8 j3 h* `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* L1 S4 Q6 t( @* K' F( S7 k* V# @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 h% a( L- J1 W/ Y. [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& B, c% J+ ~: K  o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 n4 ?3 \, v2 }( V/ A: x* F7 q$ o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 k4 @" A: |# i: F( t# r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  i) R0 V3 b+ I- y. _7 i) \; h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) \& J! S* d8 E- H- N& `. W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. E% M0 h3 {' b9 S5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, m2 u" N/ j2 W5 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' @2 n5 U+ x7 ~7 {0 I  m7 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: y9 B& ?6 O6 _0 T5 z2 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- ?9 ]0 s5 T! A% ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 |- l. R+ ]) f" s+ ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( H; I; Y9 F/ B, f. J# V3 h# ?( I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! _  o3 y4 B$ \$ ^( P0 {5 y0 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 X5 p2 O4 m& ?; h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" I$ X" B! i$ z7 U& V6 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 [9 a9 c3 G& K) }6 h+ w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& q+ b! Q- z; u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 ^4 x9 j0 p: H% \; M, f2 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ P$ ]7 {6 t  l) w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, q  @8 ?/ ~' ?0 X! l" Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 C' `; l, s9 {* S- k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# T6 Z9 {1 R2 e: b" f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ P8 c5 O) i& S7 Y- j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ L/ C8 N; ^5 S+ j& D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  `& A, |8 X- Y$ \) H- J7 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% J. v- x# g6 ^6 g3 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. }3 T2 S3 u4 u" ?7 D5 B$ M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>