【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 R& c! }9 F' i歌词我附在后面。
% x* i4 J, @9 H$ i7 F8 A& xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 A; J  m* ^% {% [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ P' [3 [5 S# O  c6 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# m4 v+ m0 k6 r5 i8 T0 }/ B1 _5 B4 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% v  u8 d* p! w- |. ]2 s5 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: y2 w3 c/ Q2 n1 Z- o1 i( {& ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 C( P$ R  q$ S1 ^: YI want so much to see inside your heart
+ m: B. V8 ]" Y$ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' J* Y" A+ m% n! t! H# |9 T' a8 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 I  {) U4 X& B) p% B! MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' g! X# g; y  X. eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' d) y, l% h+ f8 g+ T: t5 d6 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Y( O& f7 ~2 _; X$ B. u7 c0 G7 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- `5 Z7 E2 `2 K/ D( K  {8 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& a1 c1 q( n+ b. v8 i( b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% E8 L1 |8 a2 V1 V! Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* c7 l" i3 y: ~) \; v4 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' c0 x; u; s) Z0 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ k1 j  m/ v! J4 S2 u. Z; Y! T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 X8 N; A! w) _9 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* i& b# U' n' }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 h7 l4 G4 Q  M$ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 X, k1 @* F0 f4 A0 W- u0 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ ^9 y# q8 h& |% P7 G5 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& F) t) P5 k, S9 {% @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, C% e, W' z, m5 j! Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& Y8 s( c: w% V/ s5 o: x! ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 s- A, F* j6 s8 s9 Y6 u% e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, p- }( f9 a/ L/ ?" ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  ~& x: T0 B# ?% a- Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 V0 w8 j* c$ V- Y" I2 h' R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  g* o) O9 D. m' m# z* y/ }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ J% y! z" e% r8 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% m1 I4 x, R$ J+ c) P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! H% v& ~5 ~, n' `9 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q6 c9 i0 q& q: W% v4 x3 A; @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- S: S) ~! b0 D' W% X* K! Q# ^# y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( T/ Z; ?; _+ H( [. p/ B7 m# v& j7 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 Q7 ?" ^* V* Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>