【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 S* q* e+ N3 A% }* E4 B; gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 W& T4 j: O9 A' uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- R+ }1 }0 D; [, BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 X2 w  @3 r% j$ ]0 a- Y. TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ V7 O0 A( Q: J# Q% K9 x, TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) V8 `) N% f' j# IYou needn’t fear anything
4 j9 Q9 P: I5 z7 e5 S- S" EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 e$ W, W8 S( b4 x! hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ~0 e/ t" i- K, J5 A! RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  U8 X3 f8 C  jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. c8 |, \5 u; K* C" ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' Z8 b! s( F' }9 {+ ?! }$ U; R* t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: W/ `; y2 [4 H: ?/ ]: F5 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ k+ q) Y* c9 m; {/ |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  d% t; j  h3 ?$ P7 [: o# B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ s) Y+ i6 P  H( u( `1 @+ q+ v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ y. p2 X2 I2 d: B& N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 _; w; q( S- \* z2 H3 s0 @& Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 c9 _( N5 w* m$ m% {3 }' v<P>你无需担心</P>
" V; D0 k. Q: |7 T" c& D6 z+ n0 \) N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 b( @* `+ @8 x% ^  Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 K! s7 d" c( W5 b& h8 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 q9 v) {# v' a2 [# n' x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 a9 y+ a9 J, B+ |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 U, _$ R8 i7 m; x! }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ x6 \9 N# ~& f# Z4 e7 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 z1 a2 s: X! Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 |, d0 x5 l7 z* r# n  p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 n# ~( e5 h  y& Q% P/ J: Z1 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 r- G1 |: d; P2 _5 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' S, g$ ]( l9 e/ p  K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 y  j* b* n  S: R5 C3 S- }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' ?0 X6 H8 ~$ u; |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 X, k, O( O' S" T0 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. M. {1 a- c, N7 A4 O4 k9 l9 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 k! z( u2 I8 X, r# g- b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  f, S9 n, P* |: g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* }+ w/ S1 h3 {" L. ~) g" c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 N5 b8 j# |2 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 S( a7 s. ?  o+ n% I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 E$ m7 d. X% d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 M0 {! [2 i  {. ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>