【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ W- F# ?) d1 A" ^; D) TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( f% I' M+ w5 ~$ F0 W( \9 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* O! o! b5 D; W" @2 C1 UEvery other word you utter is love
4 q% }  q1 u& ~# WI really want to know just how much you love me
; p* e  |8 T  J$ ^* Z& ^I love you I love you with all my heart
4 h, h8 P4 R& ~& M% G1 RNothing can compare to my love
. X/ c5 ]2 d: r$ hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' y# U" x0 p9 F) w8 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' Z! h, s1 |2 ^$ Q" k( H2 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 I" E, n5 n" A, v  [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 G# Q( h/ a0 N2 z4 L, RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 B8 v8 |( ]1 M2 ?7 o- `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 ?: s1 U2 B+ A$ i* C7 o/ s  IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* q+ [1 K, f& ]$ _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 ]& y- R- `3 t# t& e* y6 s' ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" B1 p8 F0 W$ c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 Z% S& }( I/ Y1 A$ V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. v+ F9 R, U' l: \  X1 A: {( X2 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. S5 G7 b2 N/ [6 ?3 \- O7 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( @* P. m# L) z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ r: b  O" k! Z0 M5 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 J7 j( d" Z* v; [! k- Y) p7 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. \4 u% m) `2 r, m/ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& S7 P# d3 E9 q  e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) n5 l- B; w, K2 f1 M& ~& s" x- O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' K4 x6 d# |( w1 {8 ]( L; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 N0 m! n, s/ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 A# t: \" c' r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& a7 B8 m$ u! Y$ f+ [# [' w" j% R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) }# i% R% A& z: C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- C+ }" |; }- Z' P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 {  {2 z, z, b7 _- T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. T3 k0 G' [: v- W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; V4 e4 Z7 L  T* F0 g6 I2 ]$ H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( I! e3 n5 W/ Q' n) j: Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ j! [8 Q- g  E4 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 V3 U1 o/ z1 S. w% o9 W5 i, q" g# C: y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# @9 @; ^  r* ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 M1 P9 [/ i& ~& D/ q8 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ }3 h. R, \. d% K1 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 s) X' C' ^* I5 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 q, w, |7 l( {& Y2 S$ l4 |' t+ S. m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* l$ A& [1 F0 K8 x; P- y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 x3 r/ @$ v7 O' O/ A) X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>