【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 V6 O# m% t5 p! k" e8 S, p% g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ]  f# o5 g  l+ C; A7 K9 h; tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- c# e! ~* J9 w& s9 G5 Q' Q  kThe sky is happy down to its soul
" S% H6 |1 j+ M" J* g/ v: a$ `: y5 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ a8 G6 g/ r+ ^& [; BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ c' u' b5 k: X% KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( x" t& l; e* j; r) c3 G3 U: qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) C4 v7 u- g3 M2 J$ |) x6 `; eI love you I love you with all my heart
; _( R3 ~5 }/ m9 sNothing can compare to my love
1 N$ h% ^/ z+ l5 k2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 A  `1 |1 c* _6 v. rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 N: f4 `) o& S  eI’m still filled with fear
/ y# `4 H  s7 K/ b( U0 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) g3 h4 R- B( `* i4 y# j# D* E* n8 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: h& p/ U# a* n" P2 J3 z5 W5 }% l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 {! g: _6 ~) O5 l" C: E: ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ t, g& K" g6 S8 [8 z( ?" {% u! Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 {: N: D5 P1 M" s- L1 c: w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 H, j+ O" t5 W4 ]- J. }; b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 s( }0 W9 N2 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* e4 u2 ^, y8 T2 P! g# p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ?( d% C, H8 [3 p* B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" Q( K: K" ~0 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ M& \' Q4 p4 v6 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# G* T: `- Y* q0 A( k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, C: ^( \3 D& ^6 \7 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- t1 U7 w. M8 f& y" d: I% X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% v" V" p1 a" N+ T+ D! k! g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, w/ |9 P2 Z( G9 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' C5 V5 L+ B1 w/ W& @# ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! X* {7 j: _+ d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 g  M- e! r' C6 w% O/ l: `2 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 T9 s) [9 B" v, H7 }: C0 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ J  M- P- z6 L( D; f$ t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& g! U% g# V! q2 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% t* U" H! r  h7 k) v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" Z2 e' b- A' G* ^( A! v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ g, b3 f& |4 c" ]! Y, r, d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- u0 I  ], v( B6 l* o9 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" |0 @2 n* M0 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 k4 v" M- ~' V0 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>