【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# f; T$ A2 t1 a; |- m6 c- ~2 ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Y! x! b1 u& ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# f5 B/ z% ], G' iThe sky is happy down to its soul
( w- {9 ?; H+ ]$ x. DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ t8 P4 N* `2 ~$ i9 y  y, aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. S' t" B" J1 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' l0 \/ ?5 R$ O5 S2 QI love you I love you with all my heart
4 @$ p7 e- d# ]6 u% U( N; n+ pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& C6 l8 F8 t0 ?, Q8 |: V0 g) YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; a: g7 F1 a: L( D$ {I regret not dying
" X- h  ]) ?: {, X$ k$ E8 T1 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# p! _; ?! z4 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! s. _5 `& E+ O, N: `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ \( k: w# n5 }. xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! i* [2 k3 I" q6 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, k2 t( _) I& @, Y' N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B( i+ r- h7 a9 g3 x+ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( g0 E  h/ L2 t% H  D9 \" G+ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ V. k( G4 R- ?. d! m7 ]2 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 |1 u  ?0 A  u9 `2 w- J% f8 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, z* c; z$ p8 _, Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- }" T. S' d1 g% t+ l. r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# \. a& f# q5 e5 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: W2 r9 G! y8 v# Q+ F" _9 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% a4 i  O& B( _- B2 Y# X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 G: Z' i6 {* y1 Q5 X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, j9 e; \$ _* h+ J, n6 P( |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ^. d; }/ P9 A' F, o" c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ~6 U7 q. e9 E( E3 s& e5 p, d: c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, X9 `& }- ?$ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  t/ [4 w) W* P$ z7 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. B+ w$ w) n& ]% O9 E6 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. D9 C/ w! k& ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 N$ L! l- c/ y  l7 F0 e: _. N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 B- @/ ^8 F/ {0 ]! R) G6 R3 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  j% Y7 L  w- a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ A9 `0 {0 S& i1 j) ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 @( C- _) R) m4 R4 B8 p5 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ j+ E4 [9 G% M9 r0 P7 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t  a  E0 P: f7 F3 J/ i' Z1 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 Q! ~3 L5 f- G' ^# e0 {. |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 v& i& e: l* j- z7 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! E+ M0 x5 P! D6 H) ]我请你剖开它
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. H# U, d5 R8 `% G; u% K9 D6 _$ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>