【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* R* S- T( J' Y- P, C+ z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ r( G1 ]& e/ FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 S" a* S: [1 P8 E; p* TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# u- X2 h- c- ~6 i9 B# d! SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 N* a5 ?# V! q$ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  d+ f% R; s1 ]- @, BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. b! H- ^+ F5 m0 d1 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. n& u; ]- W3 X: Z+ N- W& U9 y2 R( e5 WI really want to know just how much you love me
$ j" Q8 B5 J; j4 @9 C( Z7 Q" C, II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- ^+ L" e& w8 a+ d' a7 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 E) y1 y2 `  ~" v& P2 cI regret not dying
3 a/ l4 n# m& HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) Z4 \6 M0 ~! F5 J; @) @. {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 _4 ]! r( B6 f8 d6 d) @: K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" s9 s* }2 `+ p7 m, G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 R- R5 V/ O4 W# b1 P0 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; R4 r- O0 l8 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ]' i$ B7 V& m4 ^9 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- I- e; M2 f5 t" ?) V( p3 n+ @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 P$ q% e$ Z1 y  E1 r' [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 ~, x; T+ J3 {4 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, p; L4 h& u- b9 Z, G. B: f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; ^# s4 {- G/ T+ j9 U( J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 a, N" z2 N3 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& O/ J5 _' P$ }0 G$ x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  p1 E% ?* v5 a2 H: r$ v/ u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 h/ }: y% \; l- x  w2 t6 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ R% \9 [. L$ e  w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( c% i" R6 W! u0 R; N6 l- O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 `) x1 ]& k$ I1 r% Y4 N! O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ I# z, e) v6 U' X7 p1 S8 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" t! r% z- H1 Z; K6 u) {# p3 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 X6 K, x4 e' g  H3 _' M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, h, O! F3 \# _0 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* n4 F' s2 k8 b( F, O6 s1 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ C- G# ]& A* n# X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# N3 f3 u* M2 Q9 s3 e5 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ U6 V! M8 a2 C我请你剖开它
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( _0 U9 |) M: s0 i  S" s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>