【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& O+ U, ^+ M9 z& H3 H; lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ W% P9 n3 y+ d4 t; A/ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: D% U3 m9 }8 C* m7 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 E/ o; [( ~+ c8 n* VWith the moon kissing it every night
8 d2 i& L' N: L1 t( RSeeing the sky content with its love
( o; k2 P! n& UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& z+ @/ d+ {& g/ X% x, a1 x- T) B" r6 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( P4 p2 B* N/ Q. ?. B% CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. K7 r6 R# w5 e, MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: [1 m0 u6 U% g% s; j( XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 B  B  O" |/ J, \I regret not dying
- s" }2 K8 I/ i! q) a- LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 C. V' @- R  SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- P/ R6 O6 q: i& yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. j# f9 ~% Q- M9 P* m9 c; }. F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 j9 V% O( D+ m9 g5 A& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* N9 b) Z) Z) {. x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ R9 G6 K5 T* o( ?% [- R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) H; A8 Y5 T/ z5 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 o+ `+ u4 M/ W  O9 q+ b0 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 n! X. a" c2 c  A1 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! i  }; M- E8 W% k7 s  e& \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 B- {" V! A& ]8 V& T7 {6 T3 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& C2 m5 i5 l* Y: Y( N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& I) _2 ?6 B9 W2 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) x2 `) T( h1 ~9 R& d. n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# T/ _8 {4 Y! M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ?% a: @# G" F5 B# t+ K4 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" p- _, j1 ~( t5 u& @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: S. g6 `2 X# e  p( W6 w1 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" }! k# a; F' ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" B6 O- c6 n7 l! S- v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ]5 V% v1 u- V1 p/ H& i: v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ e5 H8 t1 g6 ]% O) O; v3 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 u& b( u* N! i& J  A9 l: I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 X$ K2 O. V& D" w8 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; N6 w. f4 O/ ~& Q/ w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ _! P/ s5 B" F8 _5 `) p. Z! S9 r6 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* U7 B% u2 A9 j  _- y/ y( f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- W3 _; Q4 _) r  j! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ v0 A! s/ ?; [- Z) _- b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! X' V1 G( E; W* V- B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>