【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 L) I/ e. n! y) Y8 @: I3 V0 O歌词我附在后面。
- T: o! b0 |4 n+ g1 f0 J4 [- j6 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' e9 |# v7 w2 _' i# V, PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; i- O% ^( E& m: @5 m8 H& L2 G/ t% CThe sky is happy down to its soul
& b+ [6 ^- ~, s9 R7 i$ r: TWith the moon kissing it every night
+ u: m. U& A# {$ dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 Y: B8 P6 z' d. cYou needn’t fear anything
0 I% W3 x: t/ {7 P2 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 }( Y* ~5 Z# M/ l8 W; Y( AI really want to know just how much you love me
" y% C$ r0 G$ n- i9 [: u; wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 d# R! }: i3 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ G8 [/ S5 S3 c/ a5 R3 K" [/ K6 ^With such a tongue as yours,
  V0 ]- p  v3 i& o9 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! D/ M/ d, F4 G/ B  e6 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 G8 {* W: `& O- z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 h" I0 q% G* O- E6 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) B1 p" T7 U2 a9 J" u) ]% L9 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. C+ n- I/ m. }' ~8 ^/ l* E( o" }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* ^2 V3 E, n' x$ ~% K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 o0 i* D% U3 P1 k7 d8 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" W$ q% p' F0 b; Q- ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- x: t1 T. A" @0 c# ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ~4 u8 k8 k* Q7 V  x1 C7 F) b" E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. k. ]' O2 S, q% y- a5 Z6 N& M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- D' s: i, n* t5 S- E4 o( i0 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! U) @% w) \6 h# E" Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# m+ \0 y6 g, N, h1 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 \: Z! }, k' j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 X* C5 D% c6 d9 Y8 |+ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) ~) m1 u- @3 t: J! m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( z' n, r% S" k; @0 ^$ Q  L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 f/ P# E! p3 U& q' C0 l4 m4 p8 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( X. T  d. E% Q/ x: Z8 K! w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 b2 d- l- g7 N+ {& J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* w6 |& ^# C  |5 H; R; ^& g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* A: G: A& m( J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B4 j( ?* ^6 r; l$ i: \/ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* c! W/ h+ p' P5 E& P0 Q2 z8 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, j# q* S* `! g8 Q; i9 x/ `. x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>