【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^) [& ^( K$ ~. ?: i1 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; S! x2 U. f* UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- M# b# @, b- f' b  o& ^The sky is happy down to its soul
5 y, P3 R9 B$ IWith the moon kissing it every night
4 o: d& |7 C+ j, D8 U2 C% iSeeing the sky content with its love
# ?. Y; S( h* i2 ~) ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 [9 @! r- f/ P, }. t! S( O5 C9 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 f$ w( I/ r7 V2 E7 K5 qNothing can compare to my love
. H5 ~5 L( V/ C/ b0 r5 `# QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# E9 Z0 n9 G$ Z5 Z! a- nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ {0 o8 b# Z* M1 YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ H# p4 T  X6 x* |6 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- y4 F: p3 d; f3 P8 U( L( K. c, IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; a" i1 ?  {# }: g" K& oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) J9 a& C2 Q$ w' nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' \) ^4 Z% h: h6 e+ N5 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% N  C1 o. B; M6 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ h' |) _5 H9 N: G* [: y4 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 }' d) y' r, y8 @' A$ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 F4 ?1 _" @6 |/ s: N/ f- N! t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: x1 Z1 e% h: Y8 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ a1 m" f( @0 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; f) J; h9 n9 k* ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- T/ z& t2 d+ ~8 b+ L2 U/ f- v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 x5 C' A+ n+ I- y( k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* b  U( B$ z% J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 W% p! H: Z: f8 ^, {2 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% f7 h" [! X* f" w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ O: y0 S+ s* Z& p3 L% a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ J9 {: |( ?1 I& n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# F$ H0 u8 ?% |) t# g. H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% h) K( o% g2 e$ r4 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( z& S' M- t3 n& h, @: {1 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 d# n1 l: U' ~6 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 t2 g; v) q- y# ^: S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ \% l1 `; a$ ~" X/ H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" b& x& G* P6 u7 J5 u8 m, |8 @- w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! Y& g0 G) F3 Q" Z: Z' |+ ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
" S' g; A6 V3 h, i# ?. i; D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 e" ?& H0 Q& u0 W) J; [4 y5 ~" s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, m- r" }; \) A* k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 d4 J/ |) d, P; I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* E" D' Q; g5 L6 D% }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% T$ b4 O% a% s7 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" V0 T/ y9 w! W0 K3 C% i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>