【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& Q8 b( E' |% O: _# y7 C* l. ?" a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 L* Q9 E! g1 C& zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 M9 f" c2 F1 _1 e1 O1 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# L) P4 c6 c! {I love you I love you with all my heart
0 q2 V  X# U2 p) u" D$ S) `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' f9 W( m0 J' n: B" O+ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 o& ?7 _2 @  d' ^% ?  rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" x$ S5 e. c4 p( e# {. C9 g  AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ]7 ?+ d$ A  O4 m0 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. O4 J8 r2 ?6 F7 a( m5 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 `3 B1 [$ `# ?9 m. x7 V  r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( R9 R$ V2 S% M! g" }. ~# f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 [+ i: I0 m9 ~/ T7 E; _2 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 v& V% c% j7 c# Y- ~: j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 w" u# {& p# e. V4 `9 B  m0 J# v& r2 u8 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; U- U, \% P8 g' y$ w8 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ?* h7 j( m6 B% W4 p( t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Q. e9 w; D, }: O* r& N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% V+ A9 g* _2 ~& R/ M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ B: t4 `2 O0 a! X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 o5 q6 D9 z: ~( S& D* V) u( |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, |& |8 ^$ _! a- ?$ |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 w: ?$ `) [  n) X! b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ s: C' Y$ V! o* ?1 w; f2 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 _+ Z% W, O) }- p5 Y% [+ u6 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& w" _( m! {; n, s; `, l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 n4 e0 B# M8 T2 |2 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ N- a3 D, f9 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 @1 X. e" H- ~' h/ ~& D- K# M) p4 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ I; }/ j, d7 N0 \/ c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 Z) ^2 x% C% l1 ?# @8 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% P7 s' x5 w9 Z9 I$ s; w) J' V- m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ C8 \# @7 Y; `# M. y* K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' m, `: g& D# y# S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, E' |. L, b4 Q% K# o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>