【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% c- Q# P+ b2 }$ @+ i" z歌词我附在后面。
' h4 L) U8 b" u/ N; tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 N/ j. \+ Q) }9 I7 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 ^$ p/ h! |7 P% M8 d/ Y0 [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 d# @, l: l+ Z1 f" iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  D; f0 O" r8 ]; `5 z. n! MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* n! C9 A3 n! G) q9 A+ \$ B2 M& B0 Y- }I love you I love you with all my heart
7 w+ f% P5 u9 P, SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% P* L( F0 [' g- ~# u, vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 h' u3 g/ X# D& \% Q" f2 uI want so much to see inside your heart
8 U( T5 F0 c, ?1 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  |1 E/ \) V* i% m" o9 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& g4 x! m0 z$ y" Z$ pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 X  T; e1 |' d; O! D- }  eWith such a tongue as yours,
1 N3 R, T( x7 K6 O% b8 T! yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: X' j* p2 s$ m' \" X+ l/ SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% y' w- M6 i0 s! bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 Q' v$ a% u! [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ z( _2 m0 M/ E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, p, W; {$ Z; P8 v9 h9 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. C  ~1 I0 `& L4 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 D3 q; ~- _& O' l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; a6 s# B3 a7 d4 S0 [. H& H" h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# d* ~. e3 C) m, J! X( `* n# S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ]' x% R  U8 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 S, X7 \7 u& C% s  K& h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ {7 E) m4 J4 h6 F8 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 c+ ^* ?5 c2 m, ^, d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 W9 q% x6 S7 A8 n% `4 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 r& `6 M, G/ ^) g  d9 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ W+ x/ K* B# m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 S3 _% p6 E- O% ?: V6 s! T3 A0 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ [* ^  b3 C) \- m* y- [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 k4 S+ }* Q6 }" e; p( O/ G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ N2 Y* L6 @- I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 y; \% ~+ ?+ I8 p1 o$ [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' g$ P+ K4 y7 W* u2 |1 z% N/ m/ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ W  W/ ]/ Y) o0 F0 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 y# i" r. a7 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 D) D2 C* ]8 p! [( N# J  p0 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 D( k( ?* `8 c- I- M/ e4 H/ I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* D8 N0 ~) y/ ~+ Z0 E' m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( S9 I6 ]. r/ M4 Z' Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 @# p7 h( X$ ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>