【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 G7 }4 L* M* p+ \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) Y' b5 C* Y! U1 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 @% t: o( |" @' cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. H9 ^& X! c1 G/ q8 n8 @, `. @The sky is happy down to its soul
! w2 M, M& i4 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. L0 }+ x( a) E5 o5 {6 U; X$ m) [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- x# z  U# T; mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 G$ y0 \; f6 N8 \2 T8 S7 ^2 {; bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 c/ _2 J' S' a! b' g1 ~) A5 O" [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& v( s9 G& i9 `, q- v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 ]( A* z' O& z: H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) o2 F  a# R5 R7 ?/ C& h% G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 B" M7 |2 G/ B* w$ S; [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 ^( _' A6 d' y# H1 |% Y5 _# V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ \  U3 S) x& m/ }- ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 I1 }7 F7 T; P5 L0 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 u* n! [0 U7 ]# k; S  r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% p5 {( i1 R$ Y4 c7 k. Y0 u4 Y- w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ g# ^$ A) y8 Q7 o. c6 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ G# c5 j' S, G: I% i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 s4 L3 r2 O2 }" p! p  d$ M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- }+ V' e* X0 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ?) K2 b. g5 ]( ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 X& L+ J* a% h9 Z  G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( u6 g& G, {4 ?6 N3 `8 C1 v+ u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 y0 Y2 ~1 |  x- }' ~" T0 i7 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Y# p, _+ A( G4 H1 H) a4 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ `& F! ?6 a+ E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 B; I1 r' o& f8 \3 r% F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- [% Q- J' P! z- y* }! n( I0 H0 ^$ e( y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- Q8 @8 w; R, n  `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 D9 q% T: @4 K1 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" V# v' w1 ^6 X9 O. c: ~. O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 I) J% K4 A: z- }$ _) r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" v( U  r+ c( N! E1 |# Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 O  q1 n& v, R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! h; P7 s" e6 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( D! s6 d. c7 ]) m& X4 d# M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>