【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ s$ W) I% Z' {8 h歌词我附在后面。
+ K8 b) W" b& e9 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* {# s$ F# Z5 o, x2 f- B/ e6 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ V  q: c* b5 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 o6 ~3 r; K* JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ _; P1 d% {/ h/ ^# u( ?Seeing the sky content with its love
8 c( x) \% l+ TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- ^+ @& E9 M7 Q  O" [' V/ t, k/ HYou needn’t fear anything
. Q3 C. u6 ~0 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ s. g% |2 t. D3 b! D# D. a" J+ FI’m still filled with fear
: W3 ~& w2 z" P1 O' G2 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- K5 d0 x) V$ C. a) tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( g% a8 v$ C& W6 v1 U3 X4 \/ ?: CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( c' H* x+ [- X# B+ q, C, _' ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% g5 ~  g4 }$ P( [( \& x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ?; T1 Y, `4 y9 P$ `& P1 \& J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ C- X) R' h- y+ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ r8 \$ q" a8 a) U* c* V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ]$ E1 I. y" v+ n4 y; S3 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 R( ~8 K! \$ f" f3 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 b" R& B1 `0 B* g2 s0 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 t) ]$ ^, p1 p1 }$ P9 x% S9 q; g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- y" J- r6 O0 Y2 w, ^, J3 C% d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 g3 M3 F  Q; |' E3 f* L7 A" Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  A; `; e. H. V  A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) R: B: w! p5 b' ~# ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% t: m. H2 c( i: z) M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# M. b7 F" A3 I0 B* Q9 ~( g" e5 W) A+ M- E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' @3 X: }, f# P9 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! B7 L. h3 L4 {# S# C) h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. e3 t! h  ?+ k7 _; q0 _' h* m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" ?/ Q& H/ i* Z% E) O7 c$ ]; M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: D* d' Y: [, w( X% ]5 T5 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) F" `! [) |3 ?1 |4 \5 i% B7 @2 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. L' @$ J6 g4 |! a/ v' E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) H9 |6 g- O& S( w; \7 ?( B* O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& j4 O  h: W( J) T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; V- k0 ~. H" ?# V4 ]% T8 C2 P9 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( w7 o5 \% j" t7 s5 z1 k' H. K0 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 c& B2 R' F$ ~7 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ |1 z" S* f" V# b5 x" a+ _3 v; H3 g# Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 h! Q0 Y5 ]" O; ^  k9 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 k% t: S- m8 Y( a( c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 j1 K2 z' ^( }; ^/ L- j2 f, S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 @9 v3 G2 O  N1 l; N# {我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>