【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* r3 T/ b8 |( N' F- gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 s' g0 W, k8 O8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
" q1 ?' p9 G- TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* A0 b# ?, b- ^  y9 p. S/ eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ |& A5 q4 c. D# P4 D; OI really want to know just how much you love me
. w! h+ x# L, ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 I  k3 W" }0 @( }$ pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ A+ k& v% L; J& bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# [/ L( F: N( T+ R8 vI’m still filled with fear
  f3 D. M  g  g- b8 @# G6 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ?, F8 M4 b! f* wWith such a tongue as yours,
/ F, O# C( A2 H0 _5 ?7 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# Z% P# ~, Z/ }+ e5 ^* GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 l5 O6 C3 V) y7 N0 v" fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ W- L9 D/ _6 o2 @$ J( c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. J1 m* f# {% q' S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ]# @; W: s9 ]- A0 i. D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' u; f! B4 _% }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 d3 f) n1 ^) L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 x" h2 X- }5 z) C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; t( b# t7 w3 T' Q2 I* a4 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" Y9 o. b- x  g4 B$ j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  K) W5 \; \- |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. f. q5 T5 f7 E0 N6 s; k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- V7 k  A) ]4 G' g5 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Z5 v9 H3 M: {6 V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 Y, g5 K4 c* }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# x" P. o- u* r, e7 i( J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 @7 v- D2 V0 U% L' g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# J) _; u. A+ S1 x" L' u6 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 |1 F. a* \; _+ Q! ^1 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, M5 L" p! {! o: g* r  a6 j7 R$ i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, Y0 V5 W& }/ e: v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) [# A0 \4 i3 L+ O$ |( Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" X5 |, _+ W) K; }* t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' j4 {: t4 H- L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. p- F3 g7 r: I; {# _) I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 |4 X; s: i% i: ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ f- B5 B1 P" h& v1 ]) ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ g0 p$ K/ Q# m, B: h+ ?! z: {; _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 J) _3 I7 s0 D* H2 |. B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! k( k+ i- Q2 E# F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 Z- C2 m; j1 w& ]) p1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. _& X/ @+ R4 c( K, j; z- d0 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! F  ?0 X! {7 }) r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ u5 j/ B* i  V. c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ]% \! Q( t  x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  C2 i1 w+ I3 d7 q; |$ }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* ~1 A  U! M. z  B3 Y+ ^. b" i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  O* X$ d" m1 f0 b# r' i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>