【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" z8 F2 B2 P0 f: @7 [# gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 K* `  n5 T1 y3 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ y6 [" O: B- u8 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( z9 |+ X4 ?) w* m- PThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ {) N1 @* b; v; NWith the moon kissing it every night
+ k& z/ t, @; QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 Z; T: m% P* o+ M) k% XYou needn’t fear anything
* A) p: E0 Q, k  u/ \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. I, h" w& M) WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 R+ I2 V2 Q" ]5 g2 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# q* ], {: W/ }2 d- ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 m# g3 A# h9 ]  x) f" _I’m still filled with fear
4 Y( m8 [1 m! E7 s% _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) p+ ]$ @( X  g8 K3 K4 Q5 y, \- T+ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 J5 M5 f( u9 O1 \# f" P5 O! D* }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ~& T1 ^0 l% O- aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 d, [( \+ \8 ^: t5 X' m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- T; ?" s; S- F% V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" C/ w" u$ I1 u0 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 O" p7 t( u) Q. x, a# b/ x6 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% Z( d/ ^# m5 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 \) u! |6 e4 b0 S& e7 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# n- Y$ m8 N" |8 T# {7 a0 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 ?3 M5 W- e4 O9 Y  _2 K9 d6 Y, k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ s/ a7 o( U5 k0 ?! K- M& |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ f: I0 D" F9 g- H8 i. h$ c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: a" M9 z: A, `5 r* S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" T# B/ j7 [- @. L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 S) d! K8 L1 j0 `1 {* ^2 m, t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Z" R% M# T1 ~+ X4 X6 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D; t/ V3 ?6 g  w$ `$ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 Y/ J2 K0 }! }2 Z* D/ F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# C) J- i: w' q7 q; U( m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* G3 N% }& t& C* ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 [. x2 X9 g5 s; T$ [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
1 z5 |3 F& B7 j$ Y* A9 N: _
2 F4 U: \: [% s" [6 g) D我请你剖开它
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0 p( Y( Z2 {1 d+ }! {7 P) ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>