【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  @* @' w1 w2 F. N+ x' Y5 W9 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 {. z7 A) a7 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 I9 a- P" [! v  cWith the moon kissing it every night
! O6 |- q, E3 r% ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% m" T% V2 ~# ^/ A3 a6 ]- `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  @9 w  r  ~; n0 N. N0 S: w7 z$ {I really want to know just how much you love me
3 \* J% T) i& c  WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( ]1 Y: C$ N( P, B* T8 ~9 c+ p) `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& J4 P1 T( U5 v; D. z# XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( O2 ]. X/ y% F5 N5 G4 L& t- n: pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 z4 e1 S4 Y$ R. V* P  Y0 \5 J' r2 Q( ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ D$ z. x/ {. d$ }5 M) h/ cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 G- y0 H. i6 {2 I9 g( G) k. R" KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  j; R" N/ a$ ?3 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) F# D/ M  U" N# L. g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& I! ^( \2 q: \! \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# W( i' C" F. b0 p( w$ d+ X( {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 L( s3 C  x$ g( B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ]' ]& i( |; u9 k5 s% Y; \- d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, |, v/ ?6 E+ [, h8 o5 s  _. X9 u* k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 G! P. ?5 a: ?8 j4 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 r) M2 f" B, L% C  L) h7 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; X( U: N4 Z" A" F/ Z# k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ _. N2 d$ d' {0 ]" l6 p8 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 S+ I, A1 w; e. {, ~: z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ C0 @2 ~/ W7 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. U" A3 X7 z/ l  q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 a2 `6 X! x- A3 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ _0 ~$ n  F" t* j# y1 l+ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# Z9 N9 S2 A& R% n) w' g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 h& T5 j3 e9 h5 J3 d' W2 W. J2 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 h8 J% Y% ?3 k) [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 t6 b4 u( h1 x' ~3 a) B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! V" V& C* O% A7 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 V% g) A4 U! Q& h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) l7 h1 Z$ Q- ?% X' }. h' G) F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 C3 T. d1 T5 @0 d  K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ q. X  o3 m' j( s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: p1 e/ T' s; r* W: t; ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ E4 X, `: P' [我请你剖开它
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$ Y& ?$ a& a, O7 D/ h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>