【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  |0 O* r$ @3 \# D" R; U+ ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 P/ t! a- S* PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% d2 v: c: m6 U. LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% U/ @0 K' T( |/ U5 a. MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; t# a1 |* C# g- J9 J; N5 a& EYou needn’t fear anything
9 \7 ~9 \# V8 P5 x0 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( S& P9 [% ~) s; A  W7 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ z  p% Z: n; _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- Q7 Q: R% v8 F+ }9 R( NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" k8 M/ [" T# y+ R9 I3 o3 w. x* W% _5 EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, y/ k( I$ Q1 c" d, [0 Q2 m& bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 J8 y6 D. r" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ c) F! ]" S1 |( V% k" I$ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# i, Y- s$ F2 E9 `  P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 q) ^3 |. r1 z7 P3 I& }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- ~& v3 s2 r' d" s+ G/ x% x+ R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 P  E6 n- ~0 K9 a  j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ Y; h: a/ V* D6 ~) f, c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# f! t' @/ A. U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& [! D0 [5 s  h: p' x' D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; m% p( {+ V+ G2 `% {* Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* P4 w) V( q$ e7 |" |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" E7 J8 b7 A! Y6 w: w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- |( E# b/ L# G- n( z$ e' M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- e% L* F& A+ X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& K! v, H3 M7 ^+ J# R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 g0 |% G& g4 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, I: E% m% W8 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 b9 u/ R+ a8 T- n+ X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 U" h3 H3 C" c: E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 `6 W/ ?  h" P0 @! N: m, C2 e  D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# M. P' ]( D8 i1 N4 P1 Z9 y2 f/ e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, V% @! F' W7 Q# c  k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 S( V) f9 ?6 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 `/ E7 ]& p* L$ \: f% t/ m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: n5 ?: I5 H: f* w: j* |+ g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 v& Z' E5 E2 p9 G. [: M: M* s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* Q9 e% B; Q( f1 s2 `+ Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( N* a3 e/ Q" m  w  O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. F2 k/ D7 t* V1 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 _; z/ G1 \0 N7 E8 i: O0 O4 }4 l" {7 V# S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% g4 _$ I- U0 J$ M我请你剖开它

+ d$ w. F2 v/ [7 i, w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! o. Y: P7 q9 v9 c- S8 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>