【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" n9 d; }7 U* t! v- ~) f  ^( @The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 e' C( u) }# z2 X3 `* u0 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 J- l& T) e* h0 i+ W7 V- lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ J: X, w8 c) u5 x) V# I$ `The sky is happy down to its soul
2 M2 J" q# z+ eWith the moon kissing it every night
4 l7 I( l6 j) @, z; b+ xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 K9 a( ^8 c9 s/ h  g2 l1 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) d. k) W% T+ |! II really want to know just how much you love me
) i$ G. Q6 I# `  a+ `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" n! F$ ?1 ?2 Y! Z, {+ s- bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  R( c) n. V  [( ]4 \( vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, I; ]0 @: ]& }& P6 v1 n2 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: N0 f1 O' X- ]0 ?% ~" W) a  h9 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- r- [- N6 m. i" e$ ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 u& M7 X4 }  }6 O4 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 ?: I; G0 u# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 m. d/ t2 L5 a. g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  ~1 V- H% m, K# K% T' J3 K2 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ P# r4 Z# S) R. Y) D6 `1 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; m2 b( u. i6 h3 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 _# d- U. ?6 m* J0 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) I. M' Q; X3 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' b; n1 N! z% t: h, W: Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, x! |4 u" k( k- {7 r7 A' F. n1 D7 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ i9 R$ {7 p& s1 u0 ]) o# e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 X3 e3 I1 c, L- i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# \& l9 g) e1 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" y: A- h' E- M  v. T! @3 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; z- @: q* i7 H% S# A2 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 r' M8 ?: K" z* |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, n0 k) }  {  Q# V& |! \6 X0 x9 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ d( a  i4 g# @# r0 P* g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! C- j% A+ P, ]  k% r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* `/ Z! ?0 H. ^6 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 j: w2 ]/ a1 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ ~0 }- x/ R# y; W1 i# I8 Y5 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& W+ `: b$ }' S4 m9 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# ?- @0 L# a2 ]  w6 l8 C, `( X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. I+ h8 B6 W, D2 D: [8 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) D- U  w% E# Y9 x+ u7 |4 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& J6 V: K9 ]6 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( O& I6 H( f  [! K$ R* i# E9 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 K) d  o2 K; @2 w$ g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 u2 Z2 c; x- o4 O1 ^- V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>