【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( i  w" |. k$ B+ I  nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- m4 o! {9 s! q( WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! {9 u4 k$ y- a6 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  l' g& c9 x1 @* @# @! ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. @% w4 Z0 p3 t# @4 x" C, ~Every other word you utter is love
8 U& Q& q3 d6 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
/ |) s6 t, y, iI love you I love you with all my heart
' ~% M0 k0 g8 B4 `+ \$ S  ^Nothing can compare to my love
: D7 Y+ _' ^' j) w3 Z& D% BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 A; J* ?, P( ~- X( i! VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: P* `% N/ }7 o2 E) VI’m still filled with fear
7 d# R1 @- x/ |: {- D$ mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) a) E) r* S/ q' U( }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: {, B, Q' _; p: p$ J. Q( jWith such a tongue as yours,
1 z2 E% `; J9 @) dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! V. _" X) e2 l5 Q" @' X; Z' I  CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ]# P4 l# ~2 L: {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 s" [- ]$ h+ q: k  T# `- Z) K, b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# t; p9 n/ d. l" U- K3 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ a; A3 C/ b( ?+ W' a7 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' g$ p/ j4 t7 r) `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 W# L3 [% A2 p$ I0 W/ J+ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ k6 o& p5 R. h/ G3 F% ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 R1 I, \0 \" n4 v. I1 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# f4 k/ k% S. {; \" \9 @# \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G# [; W* ?  |7 j2 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 H3 T: ?' n4 B  k5 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; {2 w# D3 f: J) x$ Q' K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, j; k) I  M2 L% e4 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. _2 H% e) o. E3 q, |+ ?# q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 r! E0 p7 b3 C" l+ K( N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" [) E% d! v, z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ h' |# }( a$ g" c8 f% M5 k- z  i5 v0 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 T. v. {$ m) D: _5 p& A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 \- h3 _/ k; r( ~0 K3 G, b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: a+ n/ ]. {8 N' y  s& n$ U9 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. m( i$ Y+ o: \, C0 b3 o2 ]7 l& ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& [4 i! Y6 V- K% T) U9 e+ U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( y+ U5 M9 y$ ?# |0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* Q8 B& r1 i7 H# Q; |) E$ [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, P6 R; P  E* b6 C% r* Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>