【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' T+ Y1 e3 u- q- W4 G3 n/ CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& s# `$ G# D9 e6 |) ~( nWith the moon kissing it every night
2 c3 J* A: v7 Q- W; ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& Y: t! `: C# A0 [5 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: D+ T% ^0 L9 S( B0 ~5 R1 qEvery other word you utter is love
7 N4 @3 e# W* B% C  x5 [I really want to know just how much you love me
# B% ~4 c  q+ W1 m  bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# h% j: Q! Q  GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ C6 w2 ?7 W% s) wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! j4 N: F( L7 d8 [I’m still filled with fear
1 d3 U- e5 Y0 v% o; E& z% M$ vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 l) ~6 m& k+ Z' F$ z4 \/ a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  w3 y* o9 ~. L( }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# z- k7 U: r  r$ o6 I6 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& d- C8 P0 n) s+ Y$ p2 K8 @6 ^- N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 g$ ?+ y& X0 L8 C7 Z, V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 N: ]7 [' x* d2 X% ?7 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" t, {0 j. f7 i2 y0 E  d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 c6 \* Z. ^3 c( T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! X/ m$ |: E/ P0 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( E" l; R% I& Z+ d9 G* d<P>你无需担心</P>
+ J. G, C9 e2 f' h+ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 t) Z8 Y, ^6 _) l5 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! d0 j, N8 `7 `2 P1 Z7 v, w6 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 Y- g/ u  w  ]+ a7 v% A5 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ B( v0 H- E" ?9 D) @# u  V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. d3 H7 l' m& t5 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. _  Q, z8 m/ Y, O. l  X+ e3 E7 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) s- I- _2 I5 v, E" m% b' i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 \  ?/ j3 z" M' e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 F5 |/ x$ ^0 n' p6 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( T9 `5 V0 w( v) J- @: @- \# Z6 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% P6 \8 R( Z# i( @1 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: T! a, q  F" @& l+ z7 I# Q% d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ?1 C. t; u# A( O' D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. b% _" G2 Y8 n+ t# V( L6 |: J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ \# p+ e& o. p; X  y+ S- R- K3 E( V! p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 |7 J- s( |/ q4 s7 b. O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 V' S3 C( m' h9 ^: W: D2 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ~+ v% G  g9 m8 B7 d0 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% e- k- l9 n; ?- B4 _, ~1 \% W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* `; R4 U; O: k- Q! q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ T: e# x% Y" F7 Z# f/ r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 m7 L2 {1 N% l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ h, _; d9 p: j0 U# w' \5 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>