【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 i! D8 h9 g4 v  S歌词我附在后面。
+ ^9 \' Z. q2 n' m4 `* BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' T9 B9 F: I& J! {3 P9 k0 d' H' }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  b$ S" }7 l9 d" f5 |6 `6 B9 w! bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% G; w  Z- h1 X1 g& ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 X) g! X" J( W6 V# SYou needn’t fear anything
# i: F8 H5 S$ |8 c4 D8 z3 g8 |  gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% [9 l- |! p# `8 e1 _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% N3 O  W7 D6 W5 a/ K( K' ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% X6 ~( R7 h- y  q; \) ~( S8 t- MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 {3 K* h( O3 I9 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 E2 T& W4 v/ {/ I2 z6 u* Z+ Q3 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; W# B, v' J  N! ^8 e; p$ uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 ]& `6 f+ E+ r+ s$ B9 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, Z4 q$ p/ ?$ T& G5 J! d9 `  \1 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 `. o% Z: O+ ?' H4 I. [; A5 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% s' q0 k7 \' N* V; a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 `# t1 I+ I6 E5 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 U7 F4 G9 U/ m- u( ~  f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( T/ `* j6 x# B2 V1 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# e7 r# o4 e, U7 ~5 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 U$ ?4 `5 r; ^0 }8 z* v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; E% q. l5 f& d) p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 L( A; ?% M& w5 j' W! j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) z! v0 \: s) Y% x7 H6 G- i* Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ H9 e: _- n1 C$ a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  h% g5 O. c% c  o) h: y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' r) C. _" t- z) N; O3 L+ S( L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( K! i1 d( \" n4 R7 f( h, |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ e5 a0 {1 M& T3 L( R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: a' L/ P$ h9 J+ n- i5 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ B7 B) O( _5 U; q6 z+ h" v; n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ |/ N, z4 X) J, f9 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) F, u5 i3 L% A8 _& p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ p( W. J+ P4 N3 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 J6 m* X( u4 i0 L& Z+ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 N/ h4 d) H* P5 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 n) n+ H( {- u" h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. ^) i4 a$ `2 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 n0 c" m6 G2 z6 U$ ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>