【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- x, b# |+ t3 `- rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: Y* W* V7 y1 l5 I4 K9 ~% {! MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* w. _; _9 K" B) JThe sky is happy down to its soul
% O! ^  G, U$ d  ?  tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" o- t3 V) O& {& R4 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, A: c; W7 f' j/ lYou needn’t fear anything
+ p( z8 K( `7 R7 m; k$ _& T1 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 h- \! g8 I* J' Z1 Z" D8 m3 FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* v" g1 y3 p' U2 t4 x% ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; ]8 U, e5 s0 E3 N. \6 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) i4 m2 {3 X( s1 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 t" S2 I* C6 m/ \; O# o4 t$ AI’m still filled with fear
: \+ t9 A  M% E/ p: w4 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. C- X! _$ \/ ~4 @With such a tongue as yours,
' N5 p: L: _5 H2 y8 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 }; n5 d* ~) K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* f, F0 T' e1 A+ F" }3 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* m5 v7 k# D( h, H- Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ~( p8 M* x1 L: r, l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: @  K/ \6 {+ ~+ o) _5 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 A0 U1 ~5 Z, k0 o0 D" Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; R, m1 m: v) y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ o+ d3 D/ X* D$ g4 }" ?1 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. M2 c* z' R+ U6 V* M( q5 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 n0 M0 Q. z- p5 e; o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 N9 X4 H% j" F" n7 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: E' ~5 i3 G6 |! c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" z0 {0 F/ P+ \$ c$ l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ j9 D1 A2 K: ]# \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  @+ G3 N0 Z! L8 P4 a  A' I, F% ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' \( a- O: ~& d6 B. `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( U- o$ D  a$ }" J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ^4 Z3 `1 Q( H2 |0 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ^0 D! `$ j! k* f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. |$ _# y+ G, w/ j+ p4 s3 c; A/ s' _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( a4 q- q( G# h$ y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  M% `0 B; T/ `% M- F' o  L' |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. f$ ]* q' O2 h* \! ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
  a( D3 ~4 L9 [6 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- [6 ^! M+ T6 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 i6 j' w) @) V" o9 t* i4 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( @- l3 x! J0 \* q2 H. F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 Q& M. ~) g( o. r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  V6 u) o6 i# [3 L+ J0 K# _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  O  z" a0 K/ j& [* e9 @$ A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ q* y9 j2 |6 U+ G1 w2 g( K7 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* x# K2 L4 ]# m# x1 b/ K3 |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ i4 L* m1 e$ }) i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>