【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* U" J" \! v  J0 k歌词我附在后面。
+ s' X) L: M7 v( R4 [. [# `/ P  IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 i& u- b& G$ aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: U. g- d5 y3 S! f+ f8 `; aWith the moon kissing it every night
* z' l: I6 {5 r; JSeeing the sky content with its love
% E4 X- n% P: l. Y5 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( k) {8 D8 F  t; B% b7 z% D' i, r' _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 ^& N; V. Z4 `. }Every other word you utter is love
! V8 N' r7 g  ]. r- T( `0 U  K2 dI really want to know just how much you love me
7 o! Q0 H" D+ _: s; T  \- a7 eI love you I love you with all my heart
+ D) z- v, q. P0 C2 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ H( f3 H- w9 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& u* P5 d% z8 R4 V- }I regret not dying
6 _* j3 N, Q* k7 a3 u  w1 d! x9 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ w/ P. Z0 ^! X/ h- ]: hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 u& |8 o5 l! S4 R8 H" Z  O( KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( z0 E5 v- l1 N7 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 p! }( e! `$ _9 G' o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! L# M5 m, J8 N" L2 W/ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 B: [; f* T" k" E- R3 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 }) h) ~0 g1 a0 g1 l; i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, T6 Z( W/ ]8 l1 l9 |: M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( O+ h: y% F* k5 Y$ E2 j; X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- i4 M  o! m# G2 J" \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 s9 k4 e- Y! ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: g+ B5 m& e2 o9 V; G* E, F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& X3 v7 O& m$ v. \. u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: N5 d( ^, [+ T  c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- J, U" k) \" K$ P) o* z5 v1 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: p. `4 p3 k. J% k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. O# @% X- L3 f! k4 o0 Z0 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 s0 [, Q, d; ?' i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ t. i) @0 l9 D3 Y5 d, `! o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ u* h4 \7 A  ~$ J4 \6 ?+ O* \! `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& q9 T# D4 j3 p: [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% n& c# ?$ j% [3 x1 O/ E# ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 }2 M2 |# O' @8 t% L. g& j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ E' a% n; C2 J+ x* e. v  c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ q  |1 C0 \+ Z( U" s6 h0 R" j& s( N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& a* N9 I! K1 n5 V# P* i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 y4 d7 _3 G, F- F7 l5 M, u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ y- Y. H% Z: P7 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 }$ w. U7 }: Q( F; @* Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 y6 F5 _6 Q) s  X8 D! y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }" [6 Z* \0 }% ^6 c! V# E6 f5 R- J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: L, P- ^) M" e4 _0 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- e! B3 q0 |, c8 P" r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 a( I! L2 A  i# r5 L1 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 O1 `. a, T, g: w" z2 B3 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>