【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 h5 ~8 H( t% s3 o& u6 S' S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! l3 v* o% Z: H1 a- i$ n6 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ A5 b$ P8 u1 ~6 y/ m, T: J8 h  `' sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* t" @1 ]4 ?5 @& c! p0 _, _1 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ R9 P  X5 E* K# M0 M' |" RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* N3 [: ?% K  w1 q8 I, _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% a' m$ i7 M+ m0 I2 U6 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# j- ?1 x: W) B, M7 z! K8 m; wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 S3 ]- j5 p" Q9 K8 ?2 s% }1 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 l& b0 _- D  H1 T$ [1 U( RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* L* O" x. [3 k5 d, P4 v" o, lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ?/ e  ~5 X+ f+ b1 Y5 x* GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 l; I2 I  K$ {2 e% U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ]$ s) ]" m' d& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* s3 Y/ c3 A( H, P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" d; K8 X& Q8 Y( p7 ~8 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: Q9 }+ y, ~4 j: q+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; D& a0 t3 M, v  @3 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& a/ }: q1 W6 u2 B: Q<P>你无需担心</P>
% X! p# ^2 H8 y7 V* F7 B) x2 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 `, K8 a7 m% p8 V  ?: k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" T5 p# P/ @- y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' j1 t6 Z; `9 I) y9 @( v6 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- g$ g* Z# g, v+ l; T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 N8 Y1 k  b! e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' K. ~2 L& O# V! j/ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( U: S& [/ q# z4 A. w1 R. L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 m" @9 B. i! W8 Y! r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 q% G. N, J' f8 J  _) T  P5 n. o9 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* ^; B! q* I# m, R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ?) e- T0 G; f' I5 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* O# ^. u( E, u' O* N% L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( J1 L/ s8 h4 \$ z* H5 x2 b+ u9 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 u: \8 u7 i5 G. Z( d# K' W8 f, k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 ~1 {. E8 e* {6 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" N2 K5 r  b- N( a" I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( D. D: s4 Q* X& n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- n& v% V: I! S9 q% s5 ~( z" u; v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 T4 N; t" y# P% N$ Z. e5 |% g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! `/ F- K% E, K9 S/ l& S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>