【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- b$ i" V- P2 ^9 H& D  }' ]) sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; n. Y  G9 ?8 }5 I' s5 O" b( fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 b( S9 R! H8 y& A$ u) q2 D2 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 U8 a5 G! i# h- c& B' g2 S4 l# aThe sky is happy down to its soul
) S+ n- p) C1 e3 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 j6 _- f6 r) q! ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; N/ ~& E7 \* Q. l& TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 k9 J' @* B; o# m6 x4 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: L$ b; k& e; o+ nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  f9 g! n  {& b5 W! ?5 O  [( Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 K1 l( u9 W5 @) M% W. E0 f5 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& L" C4 |. O& q* z. C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 m; o, E* z! I- J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 b/ ?0 q) K6 }" P4 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% W" T# t% V1 f* M2 t/ }" Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: y( s* }7 @: d1 N5 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 d: F& i$ X3 N5 U- K. ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" C: v: F* n5 Y+ }9 x* K% z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 h) b4 N) N1 V1 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: N9 i+ d$ U7 W1 u! K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' \7 q0 _/ j! g" K' V/ n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' w8 b2 U, e- ?( x6 F* ?  I& H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" i/ ?4 e; ]% P- \7 d! D8 m9 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! b$ u$ |0 d2 Q% g5 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# F. u( |, k! \$ N1 [8 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Z6 m- C3 H4 H/ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! S6 a5 |* D( n  s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& t& {0 x/ z( H8 `3 J" f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 L  G4 u' m1 `5 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. h  z" I. w7 V- J3 l0 X3 t3 `: r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& S# l6 D7 d7 c' }* K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: v+ U, J  ]& c" J( O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" {) l4 {" ?( k6 H6 G9 |7 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  q7 K) j: n5 O8 B& f9 Z& B% Z6 [# m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ~  N$ E/ M( t3 q' ~8 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. U4 n5 n4 s2 i6 D) F0 z) r* J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 b- a" C0 g0 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 A' i$ |: n/ I& l# ?, `% F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- N6 q* t$ G8 T% S* \, J) o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' \' F* ^. `; R5 X2 l& h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>