【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! A6 G, }, ^3 a7 p! _  t/ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% q4 k+ ^7 U0 y; u* o4 \; E  cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ _  q4 C! Z) u6 H) O/ wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- S. L7 w5 b0 x# XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: U- j" u* e" g8 O% S/ |- t  g4 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ V1 }: \2 R$ ^5 [- H: B" A) O/ QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 [% h+ G1 [. ~: i9 I+ I5 L  }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ r& ?; q0 _: s! }9 ~: HEvery other word you utter is love
: x. T! g, g. e4 R* \3 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" B9 s' V' L. v% R( B7 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ V2 y* {3 O8 i- j9 \6 i: TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" W) T& A$ m& s8 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ ?4 X! q' W# b& y% ~I regret not dying
: J( @: j5 y* u! V7 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% V( M9 x( b- u/ J6 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 f! I" Z$ D* P- u9 _5 j* hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) L9 K- O1 e( yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( I7 f0 j# F4 M$ p4 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ U; L; {$ E+ I' s4 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, h* F0 K  p( d3 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 J7 w. `$ j! l$ w- l' _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' F* I) D4 z: R" n1 Y# D1 ^/ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# I) @/ p' L/ L: X! z% Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ T8 s3 D  d3 J6 L% P3 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& o  g6 j  m! S: H$ P. G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 n; V* h* p0 I3 ~( L" Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 |- ~( `5 h& [* e  H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 g2 I+ |8 l0 s# v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# C4 E3 d( Y+ M, D: l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# J. e: Y3 v8 C8 ?$ `5 g0 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 @1 t4 R0 P: X- ]7 Y. j. T4 B1 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 N( B; M" }5 L% ^& }8 l5 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; X. d6 H+ M4 z# Y4 ?+ v* _9 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ L4 R) v6 m3 z" z2 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 W4 |6 t8 L1 B7 `, }* x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, x0 V: }2 }1 F2 r+ L' N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 M( q5 B6 J' U! f- @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( q0 v/ D: b) c) F" X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 C$ B# W( T( F6 Y1 Q6 `- s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% D+ k+ l5 e' K4 v3 w. w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Q$ {; C4 e! F" T1 ~  {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 X( O" D$ _4 O% c; b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: M* N+ A  k' J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 W; M" c* f) t0 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 \' [) |1 L* w  m% b& \% t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 a1 _/ b5 e# i% z" f# T* m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" u, o0 p# R: K2 O6 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ E3 n# a( K9 M. z4 y' j我请你剖开它

3 n  \- v+ a& ^) u  p  V$ o' j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>