【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 y' E& z! r8 ~3 F! ]5 g# F" a9 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 w, [/ i' V4 ~5 ]) c- e5 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 q  b$ O7 `/ d9 ?) H1 DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* D# I! f- _) w' ?' E7 X/ i# }. pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! [  j: D  D' y/ \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* O# R& {' A! t3 P0 ?5 V' xI’m still filled with fear
8 @! `' S  n4 C1 }5 b. }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) o( q' O! ^6 p3 ?1 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 i" v* ^1 N' d  D: d9 ]2 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" N) S& L( k+ ]% TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& l! U& ?: q( T4 g/ k$ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 a. }! |+ y" U' f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ X: g& }! M% J+ u8 R8 w) Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 g. `% k9 ]4 a0 J5 j- _9 I3 c9 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ c& W. ^( |5 ^$ A; U6 M& I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 n* f1 g1 K" q0 K2 a. Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" I% G9 K- ~4 D$ v$ U) }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ i+ L: H% s4 C% U5 O# P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' h. i3 U. q( g2 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 q9 o4 L: S* Q* U% h* w; a8 j0 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  S: _4 l+ W, ]0 b  ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! X$ R4 g7 F' k. i" ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ r" @1 C; J& L0 H& c5 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! E/ v( K$ \" @9 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ |) W1 h9 L  C9 s+ V8 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 s9 q( o. {  {& Y% N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ F* [8 `2 i  M2 M( g/ c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ }4 w  l5 G8 _+ |- @; E6 e3 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 D' D- _& k6 d5 x2 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 e+ r8 l% J5 L, [, U8 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! R6 N* L+ u  @, Z5 \+ B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ N" l& k0 j- G6 f4 N6 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 s$ E4 \8 _  ]* z$ Q  w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ?! ^( [  F& `* _& W( M$ @! f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  Z5 i2 T0 i" [5 Y4 a  p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  j+ \2 A% ]0 Y; d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* f( r: M# G- C0 y4 Q- m3 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! v( |  ]6 [8 M! ]7 Q" n* c<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 Q; X5 [3 i& o% y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& V, m$ F; E* L/ d$ [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 v8 i, \0 n% |1 p1 y. v: u9 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) t! k9 x$ u" w) i6 W8 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: O1 {7 ~! [& n7 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( {- }# X! K% x- V+ Y: c* B; O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% R6 T1 f. e2 M( ~$ t- m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, E+ }. @0 M$ N5 d8 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 G, L8 N, _3 H! m8 @1 G# K" x* i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* x0 A- E% r3 B9 [6 H+ p! V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>