【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: U* D( F$ I: A% KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ F4 J0 B( K# E2 S) \9 S0 r/ Y! `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! E+ O7 V/ p. N9 k+ I* N! z: U: xSeeing the sky content with its love
; y& O, k" B: e  aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 u: m1 b2 B7 L4 @& \I really want to know just how much you love me
7 b" Z# k; n5 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" c! j0 @+ p8 y) v$ d7 z1 z& dI want so much to see inside your heart
6 u  M8 R" U% @2 t9 k7 t1 h% {( `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 T0 F+ D) K$ h) oI’m still filled with fear
4 @/ ~+ X0 w& E( o) iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ I& o' v9 G; w# iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ B$ e1 O* @0 S$ I0 ~- V" ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& k6 I) E7 @' A' S! u3 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 Q+ N% D* ~; G, D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* J1 `# a) H! Y0 J& k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 _7 K4 U' H7 j* h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 z# l, C. y; j! c8 S' y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: _$ t* [: j" j- V. I. K9 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 m+ I+ y+ a9 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: J& {+ {1 w7 K5 b& R) ]0 o$ ^+ K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ f5 E/ t( y* s3 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ |+ L! I& G# u" Y  c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 o! W; [+ q" B' I# ^; [# k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ?5 q, t# }) e. W1 x/ i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Y" p" l8 o7 O7 L5 l4 X+ P! h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( T; |+ D& R- f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' M1 O: k! _  Z. [; X- Z8 p8 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ^3 H0 T( i& d+ ~# Z. s! ?( R# i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 J- H2 ~* }1 ^) m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 O8 _( Q# a- [2 v$ y' R0 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- N+ G# L- f- Z0 l# h( D9 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' O0 X2 Z+ b6 l! [! i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& S: z! r' V2 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 d' ]5 w% Y: P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 n3 J! o! n6 Y- C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& h2 s8 R! c  H1 U. y* H1 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* ~% ]* i) j. T9 S7 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Z, t) y2 m$ ]: k# V: y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ]: E! `' T4 R" p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# D* O/ O% k1 x- B% d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 W& E( p8 m/ p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' t, R5 w3 l% t4 c2 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 x) F/ F) u7 d; F! W5 `2 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) r4 y; W! e* ^3 b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>