【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' K; c. q, Y2 x6 ~' F3 G" dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: K  L) J  j# P: O+ ~/ A! _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( [1 d" }" v. P0 d" ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 Q2 {: t9 m1 \, B6 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 f# ^  [( V; \# |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; o0 J" c. T' _& M* MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; x. s5 A/ e0 ^2 r6 EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% ~" Q# D5 y. \I love you I love you with all my heart
( H4 F( N+ U- R7 H5 z* o' f* m" \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 S+ K& H- l5 V1 X! B8 |) p- `% q" eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" ?; f/ W# M1 P6 J9 k* f& Q: V  gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 j$ z$ S3 H& ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 h7 U% T# O- ]+ nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; m& b% l: y% {: `8 m% j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: E* X* @* p  ^- {) D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ o1 E: j' [& v7 X) [; A2 i3 z8 ^' [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 J1 m2 |5 t5 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 a3 l- t: g2 [9 i+ e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. w" }! W; h- g1 c6 {! n; r5 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 z! o6 Q9 L- R! Z5 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ~+ X9 T- @- l: x% f2 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( p5 \# h- x7 B2 a6 x: z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 A" F) X/ }: S# O4 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. \6 G5 f5 ~& E" J7 u2 P0 Y8 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* A0 v- w2 |7 A7 R4 X$ r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& J; ^- i3 ^# C* f- T+ R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" w6 X+ h$ @5 Y( D4 |1 t+ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 u1 p" T; Y  @) d! ^* P4 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, s* B3 s  S6 f. O2 A5 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# s( M3 r1 ?: H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 C" |5 t, D, ]. ?8 k: }$ k1 [" N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- a, Q: A$ `9 l9 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 U/ s8 K; P% V6 `1 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 r6 u8 J# t' p- L0 K7 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- h/ l) L% w, o9 o; h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' t, t7 N: h3 A& J! T, u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& g& G2 o8 h0 H2 ~/ b' D: O& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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