【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! h# k0 Y. b4 y8 s歌词我附在后面。
3 x/ k& ?5 p6 }3 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: J# u1 q' y- u& J; B. F, vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ Z1 a. T% G0 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
  c4 N, X, T' O9 g# y" v) \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ?+ O0 Q# H! g+ _8 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; I5 @9 G& @) T5 _" TYou needn’t fear anything
0 U* f: e: b8 J9 c9 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% {0 k2 R9 l; D6 q: IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 `( g7 f% ^/ o; r& k' LI love you I love you with all my heart
$ z+ C9 Y4 o: Y! i6 s: N+ e& E& zNothing can compare to my love
- x6 o, W- _3 ~9 @, QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# V9 J, }% t$ q. l$ C6 KI want so much to see inside your heart
9 I/ C; G) L) }& ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, g& E5 l/ h# I1 n6 g, pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" n' L5 F/ |% m1 @7 FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) f$ p4 e. ?- C' v4 [. gWith such a tongue as yours,
! O3 ?' ~3 b/ \4 i* s4 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ y5 c( {/ j# {0 g0 k$ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) a( c1 R$ o: L) K8 h. N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 {3 b- E; Z7 L6 X% k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ o7 s0 z1 ^" F' Z9 j9 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ N9 [. o, A+ S& M- a6 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ U) @2 G) o. w$ D& {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 ^* I  i3 T9 N+ {# e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ \4 s# T1 t, I8 F6 ?8 ]5 A" `0 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& h2 O6 g% L9 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 A8 |$ @. o9 G3 e7 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 @# u1 e9 F, _$ y6 L+ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 e% K/ y+ h+ \0 g6 J  Z- S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 _1 ~0 Q$ z' r  k/ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 m% y" `: V5 i4 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" G- i# l# @0 j3 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 m* E8 C. g% b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ^/ D' o6 @. o* R: t, o4 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 j4 w1 K3 w8 d1 b" ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ P# ?: k- q! f$ {' o8 L$ K: X! N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 q4 T, g! u, k4 N) ^/ o  ~2 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ I, c8 A- m* ^1 n, T9 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# Z+ |1 Q; f* P1 q! \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 E0 m5 |. A% a& b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ J  w, b4 N3 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 L+ }- K1 X  q) Q1 Y# R1 z* a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; V$ P8 Z5 Z1 l" q5 c+ M3 i( P<P>I regret not dying</P>
, n9 ~4 Z$ |) V2 G8 l# W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ a) r; n. W/ v  G0 ]; c: M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ y4 X: {: o1 I& |8 G* N( R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* ]- q; h5 |5 U5 F" h# C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 F$ s  K; W2 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. W2 J8 G7 R; A) c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( u* R+ ]/ Y9 c4 n9 @- i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' X( a4 Q; ?8 {! |* l  j9 s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 b. @3 R% c# B" x5 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>