【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& ?5 Q" y) M: ^0 B: M# S5 x* k歌词我附在后面。
* D) Z* `8 `- g  eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. B% N- u% O( T' Q( b0 S9 E' _The sky is happy down to its soul
- S! o- D( K4 [) aWith the moon kissing it every night
8 m) a: ]# @- \2 f/ tSeeing the sky content with its love
/ H- t, E, j1 g; p$ ]; bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 J- q) q+ h( y& @6 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 C' w! T) N$ S1 t6 S9 Y/ SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 v+ ~  w: w. U2 R, [9 fI want so much to see inside your heart
( t+ w% T# S: P# d6 R8 |6 N( PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 n7 O) P- @( o; [1 ~3 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- a- h1 [! l* R8 ?) v9 k# ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 p- @7 j& f5 ~+ r0 i4 a9 W4 nWith such a tongue as yours,
" r( D  `6 u4 {) _' OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* P- a( S+ J5 p0 N; oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 A+ @/ i' |+ ?. I' I' e" ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; A9 z! F" F: J# l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- o; _, {; P7 I" B& ^% S/ G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 S4 M" v' h; b% p- Y$ P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 ~( |; G4 _1 q: v; e, g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ }0 {  I& C5 f0 @" ?* {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; p6 l* Z$ O( k' C% z7 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 f8 N- A3 |$ _0 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. L" T8 ?* h( s* Y' _! X  P7 B& M2 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 o* B. o* f* R( s! m2 v! Z% p  F: A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! H' }3 E5 k0 o" p  V2 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 i# R# x1 p6 G/ o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 H) `- U& l" j# C1 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( S' z6 K" ]7 I* q, @5 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ H* Z* z5 ^5 t6 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 H8 _$ W4 {4 ]% _; f* i3 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ]4 s6 G% ^7 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. g2 A5 I; X: A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ W1 H( s2 H) g5 w* ~! ?3 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ _+ Y$ D& [* l+ t7 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% N7 Y$ u& o2 N4 ^& ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* E$ K5 \. K4 _# f( G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" k- O- ]) H  T6 ~" p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# @: U5 G* h. s% B* j( E# U/ r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! p, p, D$ |$ n9 v9 Y, b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! D9 ~( m/ G5 Q/ }1 W8 U' {我请你剖开它
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8 F( l' `1 m/ A/ | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>