【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 t  N) y0 @& N7 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, C! @/ f' @8 k* r7 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# N; T! }; m$ z! G) ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 u# z# f3 Q' y3 ]! BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  u' Z; G' R( d, ^% `- @; [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 @# v* @7 J  Z# g9 T1 a) e8 b8 zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ m6 O6 i9 C5 E2 _) {I regret not dying
( N$ N6 T- ^% P  vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& d  h3 L& Q; x  \% SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 B6 A9 N% r- H% q! J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 H: d4 D/ f6 D, |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Y% r; d- T$ T$ F! j$ ]0 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 S% X4 W# W, j& l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 w3 E: @' k% G+ |7 @" _& h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 q, w5 b* F& C5 J/ W6 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: [8 G5 L! K) h* [9 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' x( i( n  b: ^- h; Q6 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 c" E: g# i1 C+ o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 E2 V' O+ i2 j" c+ h' O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ |+ |. w& t$ w9 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* g4 A* ^5 F7 r; ^! G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; g. A# m% k5 K0 D; y6 |7 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 t  B$ H$ n2 l  @1 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! K0 a2 c2 a; z  h( G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ]3 q& v: y7 |+ w7 }3 N: Q4 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( {8 A% `0 b3 a  D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 o/ N* @3 O5 G, R9 r+ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! H* T( b7 x" w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) _0 }4 z5 |2 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& C* @8 \5 m1 }: T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 T4 _2 b) R- U3 Q! s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 S' i0 j& G4 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 b+ K* q* O% S- Y- c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 p; p8 c$ j7 O) d( _' p6 T. E6 z, h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 y# v3 T9 J( J$ d. W0 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& `% q& d4 b# m& d) G$ s% c+ B' v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  w$ i/ P0 n2 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) f2 W! M- A* u; X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; i. W& ?7 H" p8 x9 e; ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ^, U0 K! l8 v7 O% {' z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ^# m; O; I, G( P! x, ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' e# i/ l& B* @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 L" h7 p* e" t7 k; v我请你剖开它

6 D5 ~5 V; t; T- m$ \4 n6 g9 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 k' O, y/ ?; W1 A* s, }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>