【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 }: `8 z; _1 H# a/ _8 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; {7 a0 u0 T( G0 h$ h. @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, s( m, b) R  [$ F  hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: j6 y* C  q% h5 b7 M2 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; `; l" w5 h$ ?: ?. LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 B: W6 j1 E0 WEvery other word you utter is love
8 u' C1 ?7 N0 j8 Z, m: T3 AI really want to know just how much you love me
: [  G" A% s# O7 A& G. F- mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! P9 V3 t" G3 H, s0 `  X* s1 T" F' `I want so much to see inside your heart
: G4 F4 g: S# A* {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: K. y' A0 ~- [+ s7 J8 G* [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 C4 M' q& {- d! d  \% sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ~3 t- `; ]$ w& y# G1 @; m5 P0 `8 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 C2 b, }. w5 I7 t$ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% K5 g& q# I7 |+ m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: M. ]# S( a- L9 R, ?% y: m0 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' a/ R' n0 a2 j4 [5 `: ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, w1 a  Z% b! R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Z. v9 y+ g! o( {+ b$ Y1 y1 L+ ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y9 F: ~  x0 Y/ X9 s( f, w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  a+ \: z: K8 e! A1 J3 v0 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 K$ E) t. X  o& y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, \2 \+ x) m7 ]' Z9 P! V  w: t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* F, c2 ]# s% A  M# j# i+ ^! G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) q; R  l- q: S: \& s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& e5 n/ c* l7 R% X; r( \5 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 I) t: M4 T+ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! S2 U1 y) D5 ]& M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" n9 A2 P+ ]' J( J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; k$ i- w8 W3 }: L6 R) p7 B- ~+ |$ z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 h1 Q' [+ c; x4 P7 b0 u2 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 J1 ^' [. p2 f* N! a  b3 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, p2 _7 Z, i5 `  X( ?7 u( `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( [7 y3 i! s1 \4 a! v( n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( g! `- z; b! g' X+ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. M0 `+ U4 D3 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 d  O- v0 i7 A" h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" A" q; E" i3 z4 Q' n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: y) l3 {0 q2 E5 C  I+ T% L1 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; F( V# U7 l* N5 K) q' s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, h$ F4 n" J% D1 b. G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( w- @0 {9 ]2 D) i8 g! f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! v. A' |7 {7 p; k' Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 S/ s2 g# p. J) X7 I* y/ n, |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>