【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) z/ e7 R$ n- ?" S- a/ |. OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& z& C0 q8 K1 d/ UWith the moon kissing it every night
* w2 U# X( a( Z5 {Seeing the sky content with its love
9 ~. e6 d# ~0 e3 P, \) o2 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) ^* Z7 `/ `# G9 }1 W/ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 p9 q& w# U2 c6 n, l7 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 Y8 Y4 J8 M5 l$ ^+ W1 k7 j& T' T! {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 A: P, c3 |  w' fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 X# m9 V# E2 j9 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- \2 _2 H0 K1 C  u* B7 Y: [  G0 \( i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 O& M/ ~8 t% L7 E5 R8 G9 @2 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B' y' C0 U. ]& E; D& T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! W/ q5 ]7 z' O% e/ T9 B9 ?! T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 D: G3 f  V) D, r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' j7 M  J' ]% z, Q, X4 G# {: U9 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% l5 W2 b' L( V- Z! X* D9 ^# N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 h1 t/ J. \1 [, I. ]% }' Z! O% O2 P3 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: y1 N9 z! V% a$ X. b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" f+ ~5 `/ K2 b# z# B9 M* g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 d1 n# x% m/ m# ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: s9 O- Y- Y- V# [; |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# G9 l% T/ C3 w& ?; Q1 y  @! o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  F6 B* D% F2 \! s# h3 i( q/ {7 k2 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* j) c% G( G( r8 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" y( E0 @# m$ F" X! i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% o" Y+ A$ M, ?% V3 p# f, [( ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 `0 N) O( U5 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 `. o, E6 s5 @- Y2 y# K5 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ j$ [- O+ V4 p9 M0 g: X5 h: V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 S3 ~: ~* |, Z$ t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# X3 }- @0 m/ B  b2 `! ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 s8 |, U$ w  E7 w, I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 `9 h4 h) a: M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 p5 `' V$ I' _6 u& Z% y( r( N' |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 d  @& Q$ v4 A1 o. u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 M1 {, B+ a. e" p; Y+ N( y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 r9 l; M# |1 a+ f0 _% {4 [9 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& A  }$ I% Y' N8 X. e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 V  D% f6 a" S2 h1 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" I+ a% \1 J$ R& F8 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! K: }0 R- ]7 s: D* p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# c) `  @. h% S# p. y8 u6 t' t/ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>