【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ?9 v/ N6 f! v9 K4 J# O: GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" P& u" Z# A8 C4 G/ ]! _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ G+ v, h* K4 i( J5 c& QThe sky is happy down to its soul
" b! X, W- p" \9 R7 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. i" I2 q. o: q+ ?/ i8 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% E; v) X6 @' [1 O: b0 r2 _$ b3 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; N9 h2 U) K6 p- ZEvery other word you utter is love
  v/ S& Y3 A/ o& k6 ~/ GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ]( A) e# }9 F/ O+ |+ }* wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- r6 |: R3 y7 g% Y9 A  kI want so much to see inside your heart
  b6 E9 m) \2 @+ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' v5 i/ {! _) {, [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* b2 {: l3 t; Q% `9 a# V, J+ KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: k* t9 P8 t( T5 l# s' YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 q6 N  U( ^$ z8 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ a$ B' r% \( v# x  f% s; ]9 |! B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" p! k  a, t, U& S8 t0 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 t1 L  R' E7 v% l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& R. |+ h1 ^0 d& @/ r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( B" m/ N+ k* V" t4 a  P* x3 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! N& p3 }5 y. @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: f/ b8 S, a" [' j! C* x& Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: w0 T# V( \) ~8 T) H; t  E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 g5 @1 d4 a; ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 P! t& i) U" G$ Z% V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 |8 l; j$ g! `' }5 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 @3 b& g" D) H" G+ u. ]: Q, K2 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& f2 o9 y: v; X& l+ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ S7 P% ^0 B. A: y$ F& F: ]+ A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ~: P7 [( ~4 R; Z8 W8 f; y8 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- y9 t& J4 [4 Y8 t( Q% z" l9 w0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 a/ I+ E5 N+ _* i+ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Y- S  z! _3 v/ I5 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 @3 o' v; l! h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. T6 f* X! X' Q9 T: C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 v) y9 B8 R, G: s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ @+ p! Z- ~2 k& D( x* p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 Z: b: P, |1 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 J* U$ ?: b: y) z4 k: u" t/ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ g  `; F! C* L0 T2 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* w/ n" k0 W& {. z  x$ b2 _  x<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 m1 U. z7 e/ W  p. H/ U' o& u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# M& {7 q4 p- ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ^+ E6 d/ b0 T  [6 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 p! g4 {- @5 c% Y8 r/ b! e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! a% G+ b0 ~  O7 m6 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 n- v% _' v' p* }5 p$ m6 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 q9 Z# `6 K& m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" j6 ?6 O0 q7 r" W8 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 ^0 V1 N" C/ ~. `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: L" O: h5 W0 q' b9 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>