【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
: i( Z, _, ?9 A: V9 V8 c
; P4 ]) }- ]! e; y8 w
歌词我附在后面。
* V, x* M7 K9 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 z+ V! u7 {9 ?5 C, o, q6 _2 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ]6 r% v, w+ |, s5 r  B8 @With the moon kissing it every night
- a- Z6 W/ \" {- v, vSeeing the sky content with its love
; p! c  n0 L$ ?; |6 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ }" H) R" x3 T8 B6 s+ a& VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 ^" Q; X4 ]2 x6 P) a+ I3 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 C" B! C; L9 e, ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 T# }, m2 X1 d. w1 F9 G# ?I regret not dying
. P) `5 V) L( j' _! BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 t9 A% h2 ?) v, r! L3 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 m' p& @0 A  qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( S5 D/ q9 ~6 M: U5 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; B+ D/ O6 a8 R  f( Y* ?( y
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, V2 A% w5 W+ F" [$ B# \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: T: q3 B# y2 x  a, q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 H( u% a( |5 T- r) ?4 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- R+ a% q1 |: H* O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: Y$ R; u: n$ k; d, H$ R3 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 B# n( d. C, v! T3 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. M8 B! t3 K: B% o<P>你无需担心</P>
8 G7 n, ?# Y- F! f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: X) v) y9 [' d6 `  h( C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d$ C9 G4 E, j7 S( d% }1 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  J3 ~: j) M- l# ]; S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! t4 Z( w! M) g- {3 Q. M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& D6 ~' X( K$ ~) |1 P" l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- @0 W2 Z" Y& m, O$ _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: P$ ?2 y3 g) b7 m5 i# q8 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 y5 q! _4 r9 N! t# n/ Q: U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, F2 z( N7 K1 Y5 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* I" W2 l* w$ F2 }' W3 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  Y: @8 p9 @& u2 T: K1 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 h& I% \1 r4 o/ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ [) l# o# h/ C2 B0 G9 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 y( G7 C+ g& i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. Y2 {5 c. o3 J! Z% ^( t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) u/ ]( h1 w9 d5 K/ X9 |5 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 c; l2 G$ P, e4 F% [! G) d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 }9 Q5 u, M2 D! u; ]% h# O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; S9 i" N4 a4 v) a6 J6 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
) V2 |; Y0 N; [
! v: [0 D: l: W# G3 @$ H4 L" V我请你剖开它

8 x( q1 R# W$ S. h8 A! w& A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
/ T7 h4 M3 W/ ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>