【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 D9 Y4 U! ]! I5 P7 p2 n& OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 g+ _, q# F! l9 n* SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: i4 j% A1 Y8 H% y- ySeeing the sky content with its love
  S; G- l' I( cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 S7 {8 ^" h7 t; V8 NI really want to know just how much you love me
5 X8 M8 @5 X  WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ^; l) _# k4 l: c# P7 U$ `# T# RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: \6 t# P0 i, `$ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 E) D& P5 l1 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# a! }9 y$ e8 a; vWith such a tongue as yours,
3 t# E& h: e& R# tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; x$ Z/ y: q4 d- ~$ rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 r" U5 m( u1 O/ A! |. U5 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! p- ~, ?6 ]7 `: g/ F7 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' v) L. O6 o! D% q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. V, \" {& g# y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  o! f5 i3 J* e" u6 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 {: M. {! l: {  K- H$ ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ J- r) O/ Y2 @  l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  A1 p8 J) H" o# g<P>你无需担心</P>
. F, Q; e# Y; m0 L9 r2 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- I/ S! Y. d! ]; z) f# D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 M/ c, j/ e# `6 e8 S2 U( X" T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 d3 j. G3 Z( ^- ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; O  x! h3 [6 b/ h; N3 ]. o. z- A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, Q$ z- O8 n  t1 v3 }; g$ \2 \* ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 c* I. q4 T( m) K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ z1 P( c, \" U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ ~& K7 c) r3 M8 n) |( q  P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 ~$ S' i! z  C( [2 R: J+ B: @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" S- [" h2 V( h$ Y& I: @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& d- h8 o" t0 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" X" q$ b5 }' w3 Y5 z3 L# \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ B. U* w/ g  J& u3 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>