【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Y0 _! \, T3 @) E, A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( P# v! ^9 K" V$ l5 V5 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- ]  W  t9 w/ c2 Y% C# B. D% RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# `2 D- _$ N9 Z) ~: d- v! ?) qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" W$ M& x4 ]- m0 x0 \4 \; k2 l$ |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 S- Z  u0 G1 o+ B+ }5 U2 VSeeing the sky content with its love
/ o7 T3 z7 @+ E+ sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 o3 o( Q; ~- `% U. x2 E1 x9 IYou needn’t fear anything
3 ^8 o: N' j8 f8 ~! r3 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: v2 X4 {. A& l$ {7 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 r1 Y% m8 g# G: cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- E9 J2 Y) t! G( X9 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
& G/ p' C% k0 Y- o( s  y& U1 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* q5 F8 l2 |, Y3 ]I’m still filled with fear
$ w2 l" E8 ?& h7 h6 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( I/ \* X! }/ @With such a tongue as yours,
6 ^( o) {4 m$ Z, p8 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 @2 m2 E4 V% v( G- E# eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 L9 G$ X; ~4 P9 a0 x( _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 [# p" f% \" F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% M0 ~6 x0 i- @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! I* ^* l. b3 W- `: V  L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 d3 W- ~- S1 ]( b# D) Z0 N6 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 A+ h; k8 R% f* {, s, H/ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ |4 Y" Z1 r1 T5 S/ P5 j' y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" W# n+ G: d8 k1 U9 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 N. r) r* |7 b: j0 r<P>你无需担心</P>
/ r1 t: |# O) g( r! {; ]/ ^  T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: x! X1 s7 A) h9 V3 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 N) u1 t' x2 T6 F6 C* s1 @4 Y9 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: R- _( F- V# o4 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; @" \4 f. D) X" Q1 y# x0 ^: u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ U2 ?# g/ N4 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% ]. u6 ?- A" m" p; ^6 ]6 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 \' \8 ]4 V5 P3 L4 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; ^6 @- [, A/ O" M" B" e' O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 x$ _; \: B" B( r1 \! s. h: X6 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' {( O* h" s+ U2 T5 Z2 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 y2 {' K, t( N7 R! I& b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; _1 Z6 M! h, Z. e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" ?) U2 v5 S1 |, w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ _' V8 U/ r2 r7 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. W; l" d* |; M8 q: i% }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# R' y) Q8 o# ^! Q# _& @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 }: U; y7 w0 O. u! s6 X  k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- O" @! J' Q- w1 h# w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) a% e/ I& b! P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ Z/ i% e& b5 t# E# S$ n. G8 s6 j我请你剖开它
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. m0 D) g* _5 }6 J( H9 f4 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \# P% g8 ^5 h  d5 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>