【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& B6 l/ N1 G' B) fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; m: H, ?9 `- f% C% uThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 B; A3 G5 G8 M9 _+ B# KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  g4 G$ o% J5 c1 L# A/ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) n% j$ Z2 X/ ~5 d4 R/ DYou needn’t fear anything
6 r3 x% J+ x  K# ~; C+ x/ `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 N$ x' ~5 d) L+ v* f' k5 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 C6 S+ q& Y2 v" yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 A. }! m3 m1 W8 J) O, O: tI regret not dying
" g' H9 c$ @7 K( f) i, t, {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 [7 h5 r& Y% s, }+ a& j, zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! X3 k/ u: n$ C# k( [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 Z/ a5 ?4 A( k5 z" {! |1 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# v" a0 m7 t7 p9 z' y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- S- k% O& A  u% C( p3 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 p! z1 Y; B& s* L" v5 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) m9 \: a% X1 A4 Y9 g! u  ?0 z. `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 i# u; H3 G  {% ~8 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# \6 ]7 v) N9 }+ y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; j$ p2 {5 A- \7 O% y5 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 e4 d! A' Q, |. t3 U2 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 U' W6 N3 z2 t' u* j7 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 {$ w- H6 y6 I- B; ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ ~: r8 U) x! ~: Z% s( o9 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' x) m, D) l6 `9 i9 M& M: y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 s& Y+ a+ g' F! }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" d) e3 m# E0 `  a7 x2 P0 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 q& j; J# G$ @' }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ?  x2 e6 A3 [0 y+ A9 m6 R! o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) g1 w$ }7 n) d1 Q0 R4 m  l$ M/ h# K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 n' x( E* P7 o4 B0 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 w/ ]. d% U+ F# G% p% }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 C3 H, }8 b0 ?: {! |7 z$ S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# w; N. P) J1 Z5 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 M7 a  r7 M6 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 G! V! W$ [0 y3 v; b2 {+ y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>