【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ h. W1 W+ L4 x0 p% D: nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 L6 {. F& A; d  sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: G. l: u6 `  T& J* X* qThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 N" x" D; ~$ B' kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) `/ K2 N' x% E, y8 H' ^& Q# GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" [% V1 V- K/ q% o1 V6 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 C8 r- A; W, Q" M. tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ d; \! W' A* L, N5 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, @, D7 {+ b1 I& m' j* WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% [$ s6 ]+ ^/ Q, m& J- C* @& mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 F/ v+ |" @; k1 J" kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 @, Z, g/ T; g& OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. |. t/ R  h  F/ U6 L' O% yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 K+ s2 w8 g# j2 o3 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 m4 ?9 ?( M1 o7 S( H& K# `5 _5 p3 i; v9 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, ]: Q. u$ p* ]! j; ^+ @* g: V# {( s5 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# \/ F1 P0 B* F+ M" w) D3 T- j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, l) X7 z7 k/ I9 ~5 o  j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, i. W& b9 W# Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- M4 B* Z  A3 Y; P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ q- g2 J6 n" i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 H$ q' q3 ]* a( p* D1 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& q1 Q0 w* w0 A; C/ }2 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ e" R4 ~) }2 z" P7 [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 f% `: T( K4 Q9 a  n8 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. N' M# ~/ Z; s( p. S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' Z- T* y# L( }4 P0 ~- O" a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 u8 N  Z  b9 n% q0 y0 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 k1 z, ^- W# P5 |$ M1 h0 ?7 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ x5 G, S/ L4 d: M) v, {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ]* f1 i$ h2 E$ g( Z& f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& @7 y9 F3 r. Z% `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ @  x5 `& J5 L6 u# q/ z4 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 j2 w3 J! M+ S  C( j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% E$ w* L# Y2 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ]% {; m7 `) X- R5 F) B% i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 O- i* B) h# |4 i# L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ?/ \1 I. |: {% C% N$ G- z# O3 g- V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U% c; Z1 F2 F' d: E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' S! U' Y$ O6 d5 y. N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>