【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 W5 X7 b2 `0 k! [5 N- B歌词我附在后面。
8 x! b2 J" [6 B5 M. r) VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 g+ L7 E6 k4 o: Q# |5 |The sky is happy down to its soul
$ z, ^: p0 C" a! |7 [1 j& i* FWith the moon kissing it every night
* h  g4 ^& [0 |7 cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) h/ `$ }9 m* _1 ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' E, r: `! C  v; J  i2 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 f8 ^+ q* t7 z/ nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ o+ C# y9 n+ J/ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ k3 N% ]/ L7 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% f, N4 z+ s8 _4 S/ j5 o# {4 rI’m still filled with fear
; f$ \) w. H$ }( g/ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ j) r3 N  i. l0 jI regret not dying
  m' W( L1 g- E( B" pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ]6 f2 r! B* o) sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' p* X5 s8 O2 l% xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ D! c* m/ }' @' p" J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 o6 R" P3 \8 t( o4 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ^, q$ ^3 t2 a6 f7 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 m! k. w6 `# \& b- M3 t$ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 X+ J) L. S5 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 d5 T$ W. G7 Z) j& o* {; k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 x/ X" A" J0 t' B: D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) f- P: O, V* |3 H. r' ?# s0 C- \- N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: {+ w$ W& s- ^; G1 A+ E2 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
/ j5 F' h$ x1 z  g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. S6 ~1 {  F. m. ?# N2 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' p% Y, z: i4 v) ^5 ^) R7 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ w6 V$ s5 o% [; h/ ]( B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ E5 ]3 E+ _( B5 R! ^0 V, ~/ r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ {3 o$ P  ~' |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Y. A% |2 v5 ?6 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, R: U7 O% I! Y2 E% e- t2 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! x( Z3 ?9 u0 O, `7 h) ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# V  V$ g8 ^) H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# G: D. S& {! A3 f: z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 }9 p/ {! F5 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% l( _2 w( p$ M4 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( f. h- M$ v2 Z1 y" s. }  V# U: a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; E5 U1 E7 v, F$ B7 I; W% O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, t5 C0 v& I" b) E0 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 r$ X" ]0 z' T& D- G9 s* G9 Y) d9 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! U6 c. E" e, n! j* m, O0 Y: C7 ~8 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) @1 R) X/ a' V; z0 ?2 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: W! i8 K. g5 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, }6 l( c6 T6 H9 e5 Y# e/ `
我请你剖开它
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) G( ]0 K/ P, U1 H/ F5 u$ T9 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>