【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 _& A% O2 i0 `( V: h/ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 P: p$ x2 |1 ?' c* ]  z3 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* J) P9 S" Z  V, E6 x4 d5 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 K8 X8 p! V2 R- w( Q1 \( LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 R. r$ k* X1 @7 AYou needn’t fear anything
# F2 A- a5 A2 L7 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  M  R2 W' D7 d5 [1 b9 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 v- t$ d/ q! P3 _) @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. I% P( r, R7 {7 E$ a# vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 z+ b% L) }$ ?2 T! p4 p6 i( ~3 GI’m still filled with fear
8 ]9 f7 d5 ]7 x' N8 d; k: fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) I# b$ k+ e( X8 h3 L/ n3 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ @# U& b  \7 Q  DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 g  e7 G, T) VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) |( O) W% m) I: CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% O% \5 ]2 p. A0 [$ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 E* b) d  P0 }9 w; F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) |4 n5 {. W* q) T: E5 `5 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 F1 z  M. J& p* ?/ r1 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) z1 ]) \7 a) Y3 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  S3 F2 f4 r& \  M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 W# h* c9 s4 F- I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# J! t0 }6 ?9 M% q# T; Z. g3 z  T5 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 H+ J( e$ v, |+ R$ x* W) ?3 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' S5 I2 I% u7 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, E6 v/ i* R& y& r* N! `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 N. }. {9 o  X2 x( \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 F# x  S% ?$ X, H0 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 V! e8 }7 h% M! P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 m" t' m. x& R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 ?* ]% T' L" [& {) d$ n& y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: D, N! I1 C  }* `1 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ ]+ A' F2 N, k5 }/ T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 K* q1 r7 i, K2 b$ P; ?9 @/ A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! \0 Z3 @8 C4 W6 P% ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& q4 \; z! i: I/ {: i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% H6 R: j6 ~2 D4 t, k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' `+ |; s$ F  p; |2 r! [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 |* V! L6 r. y& o/ _1 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>