【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 I) G" Y: X9 N' I0 i& d. n歌词我附在后面。
/ s$ [5 S" z9 F8 F& C7 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 P3 x; D1 D, @6 u% N, IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; u4 Q, M5 O9 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% T5 w4 G/ j9 ~: Q! v+ SWith the moon kissing it every night
" [) w& ~. y; C7 OSeeing the sky content with its love
" Z/ h. {& [$ x  b3 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ [; j; ^$ |) Z6 i" OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 R5 ?3 q, J) u' `& E' z0 n% L- ANothing can compare to my love
  G) V1 W- ^1 r; V6 Z' n/ fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: }" x" i/ P7 R( SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 U3 X$ w9 j8 H0 _. D( ]7 ]  w8 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; C9 F3 c; o! ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 f( Y4 ^+ b5 z/ jWith such a tongue as yours,
6 @# J1 i7 w, x- Z, o$ Z2 ?" EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# \! Y) R9 w( @( ^3 D, g( RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, J6 K$ R1 X/ w0 X$ u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- A7 l/ `( u8 Y% M! d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ i7 \, \. i# d  u4 r3 T/ l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( `: q% {+ v. P+ M" y5 i0 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 }# s! \3 J) a; Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 _2 w2 e6 `* E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. X7 T* {5 s' I; l/ o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: C) j  A: N1 ]( @' i9 y5 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 }; I  Q! J* @4 [' P/ N' z$ M$ s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 c, X& i+ K2 m1 @; w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 E  _8 M9 Q: Q2 A( k; b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, w6 d/ Q7 j! o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ M) |, E  v& l8 {7 w! A2 A: ]- d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# V: ]! h% `$ E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& m- v  R: T4 ~, ]0 D$ T" {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& n8 j1 W7 u8 M4 V( N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 z0 i3 n! Y8 [5 m9 d2 t" C* L. a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- a/ l- Z% Z3 e7 s" n1 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ Q$ x: K3 w! U$ f* T8 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ j' h  Y: Q$ \' t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  o% J, _8 B5 C% l6 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 e, O! ]- V* N. [; k6 y. r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>