【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. i: z) }4 R3 v# ^1 C4 u, tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, P, _* G. _" fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- K& x4 G8 \4 h0 _' OWith the moon kissing it every night
' [# t! M7 Q2 o- C# `2 iSeeing the sky content with its love
% S" D. @) u6 M5 a# GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  R, n  A. S5 Q( f% v" w5 {- NYou needn’t fear anything
* k; V1 E. a# d. MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. d* \& ^: k$ Y/ R  REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" F& E" i( C4 f% [I love you I love you with all my heart
. |/ g0 J$ m" u& X$ HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% }1 x5 K+ ^8 m' O8 TI regret not dying
' x7 y! v9 S% }7 M$ GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' T* M: l, p* ]; L9 y5 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 P& F3 |, h6 W$ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' u8 c4 V7 x; g8 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% q. x+ e# i3 _0 W5 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# J1 h! \$ @' X1 K* W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# h/ e! d" m2 _! o9 q. O: v% x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, ^, b2 @4 K! w# l4 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 K' u# C" N- }* s$ p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 F8 Y2 _3 b: ^" s9 R<P>你无需担心</P>
' e6 ?; z) @; |/ A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 X3 L1 t# f6 O! I2 W1 r& v& [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! k% P) v5 K: `- D8 c: _0 ?2 {" W! b# X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) u; _2 u0 e, p; Y0 m2 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 I, Y' E/ J' G' F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 j! ^8 T8 s+ R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ ~7 ]! y: _( a* E7 L  C/ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ?# K0 ~$ r5 x6 `8 J9 m: a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 D$ p9 M/ ], f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 I) y. g1 H8 H( H+ }8 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* H/ @% b* ^. P" r; z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 Y5 a) n! k9 P4 @$ p) d0 N4 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
" h( K' A$ |, }- f; \, M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# W( ^' H  y. j5 W0 e) J- ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, ]$ _2 {8 _- ~& U) C) G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 H4 p2 u. h* t4 a* _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 H! w! L- x. [3 u" u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# f+ r: L& ^8 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 y2 Y4 b" D; L$ d4 p7 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! P# J9 ?- H1 C. P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>