【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' G0 e8 s1 l' S3 y歌词我附在后面。
9 c- P+ H7 b1 X/ j9 z+ S1 V, l3 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( B3 j0 t! i) N1 p5 `# rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 w7 I: Z, J$ W5 d1 v: u; }2 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 A' h' d3 Z5 F- T( Z0 r4 H) Q0 o: x# m' @% \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 r! O$ J5 g5 u. J  V5 GWith the moon kissing it every night
' _# V2 J* q- f5 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 \4 h- m; H* p% O9 ]& AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( A6 d$ H8 [- d8 AEvery other word you utter is love
  M$ x% ~+ f. d* c/ P& `3 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 L: i3 v3 M9 k: O! ~2 V! m" DNothing can compare to my love
7 O: ]# q2 m5 u. h2 k# {4 S% p" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# I6 y% \' m) W( J4 N! EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 e" h+ N) J- G1 d4 @2 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% s9 W3 v9 O/ a' }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- u0 Q5 M3 _# B, ~$ Y/ l4 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 c0 _$ v* z& Y+ E( L! q; A: E9 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- L% C' A  K  p) T6 `+ q, M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Y/ Z4 e/ i  X, V6 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; [- ], S1 _" M3 n3 g. z2 `# b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ n4 ?& b% s# Q0 o+ P8 B# [, L# R6 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ?/ Z8 C. j8 o6 T3 F4 A& B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 l8 G. r0 \- z% J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ }9 u( x1 O: y+ Z' u. d, A' x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& r+ F9 W9 }% Z4 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ]9 s; U" X( m4 w$ `1 R4 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 R7 t9 s0 _0 P$ }/ D; |0 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( l0 ]8 Q( k4 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 D0 l" ~$ {! \0 n8 c  |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 ~8 ]6 h% l) q0 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 l& ?! W8 q2 v2 o, E9 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 Q8 e0 X7 e4 t& Y' V( F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: K+ @1 a, o: k$ ]) N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 ?5 d( k8 m1 Q5 @5 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 s! W# l6 Y! w1 _3 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* A! e# o9 ?1 z6 e4 h  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 P: }  k: \& r* D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 h+ O% r) k3 ~7 R- q$ T0 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 J! d* h: `/ z( }/ |$ X0 ~- {: c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 P8 Z( E" F. _$ M+ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# s) K$ G0 c9 d6 n) S/ T我请你剖开它

) g, g" ?4 ^, ?4 k4 o* p+ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>