【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& ^/ E! |1 A  b3 B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; y) R% O9 c. A- }, g4 j3 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 k4 I- _- U" c0 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 D+ B& x$ x/ D+ vThe sky is happy down to its soul
( e% B: i1 G6 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& N& h' z3 x% F+ @* A7 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) c5 y+ ]5 x- {4 X2 Y& |  sYou needn’t fear anything
2 @+ k# ~( [1 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ~/ W) Q& `2 ~" E( a& p0 u" OEvery other word you utter is love
) D; e2 x" X' ~4 B1 m+ W8 {, DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ u2 A: W% A* ~8 ~5 ]Nothing can compare to my love
" k2 T! n/ s; }9 o( i) J7 o& _8 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 q2 q: c4 ^6 [. wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 F7 [7 q( b: x7 e! S& N; B, W; CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  K/ a/ D4 g/ A4 C1 p  H. G( a' fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- T0 J4 {( ~4 j& qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 C/ d" h4 I. d. IWith such a tongue as yours,
% x. w8 d6 B1 [5 |) EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 h4 u2 m' m1 \3 l9 x- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 t0 ^5 U* \$ Q3 Y  u7 G6 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 G3 X& H0 J. f/ d, Q8 [+ n. u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 I* y/ @5 C, I- B! z9 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" S/ K; K6 V: V9 [" ]2 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 T, {% d9 c& y' z* l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( B9 t& ]# l* X) c3 X+ d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( b$ ]0 {$ i" E$ D  c0 l3 f  V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 G- i% M$ h1 c4 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, E: i  M5 L8 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Q% K* O- F& r$ z9 \  O0 q5 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ~6 b; x( {( ^1 U" t+ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 a% [/ W8 ~- T* p$ ~1 T8 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 p! \% F. u+ o: j# L& w3 |$ Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 ^8 e& x% G. d7 s7 ^$ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  Z/ `) R$ `8 _; E! |1 V& B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, ]1 _, q; \1 g' l# j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" V$ |: {3 c7 l; n2 M  g* `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 l2 b9 z6 [* T3 i" E4 z6 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, T3 |- J3 m$ _- l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& x# L' x7 `, Q, X: | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>