【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( y) Z- ^$ k6 b. x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ V# s0 X1 x5 G4 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& y4 k7 K, H2 r  U$ q- pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" _, C2 I1 Z* g- FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- L' c, o! W6 [, I! AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  n  G, s9 Z8 S" X! j5 z9 c- LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' o0 p! A) t# N8 M( G. f4 u3 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 x$ b2 M+ X0 |9 c/ E* MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! ?8 v' y2 V; T8 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- P" F$ A' P/ ~1 q  o4 a( uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 w5 I/ D. S8 `5 n, [. _3 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 Z2 j* c) |4 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 U! y; A6 V, }+ J% |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 B8 L' r! A' j! l3 [' ^2 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: S& s1 ^$ n7 d6 i5 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 X; ^& `% G0 q5 I/ u9 P. g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 W8 L  C7 I! x) T9 o  d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 a- |2 T3 |. h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Q- h( v3 h% i% l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 p5 S9 s- B& m4 W" ^. G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 h; J% r3 h4 X" v! h6 `; q0 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" ]( C. n, x3 H# z3 q. N5 O' W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ g6 x( m' M, v/ r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ J5 I. Z6 h! N$ J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 X; m+ A9 N& l+ `, k1 K+ ]* `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) f0 L2 r2 O" |& b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ n: Z4 I2 V2 {: u: W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! Q0 e: i( g# q) L! U1 Z5 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 A' T6 n6 U6 f1 y+ f! H" I6 `0 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% T) M- P4 \* [# J8 x2 ~' s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; k7 B( F- e5 V& Z/ {- c& k$ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 L: p: O8 r, q: N5 n5 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ o) T& Q. ]: ]/ \$ W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 j# _2 \, f7 u4 Z8 v' N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  g% `5 E) \% r, u: N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 e5 q) m+ R3 Z8 `' {: N9 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: s; d# T6 F4 N2 z% [3 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* X( A% T& c" S  f, Q% b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 r) k( Y" Y0 l; Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) T0 A" [* z; u& T& T$ V; w我请你剖开它

1 r/ \( R2 j# ?* E1 E8 p; B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ l; e, Q7 i5 h) J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>