【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% B# z0 D! h' }  A歌词我附在后面。
: C4 S8 ^" r1 T; ~# ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 n6 Q3 s8 G' v( w7 U" z) O; FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ J( Q. V) B  \, vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ \: o2 J) U3 {, x. I9 V0 L& [- ZSeeing the sky content with its love
! b0 Z# o  V; |% S8 q1 K0 ^0 t( {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( @7 X: H6 K) Y( R+ {' HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* m1 T( j( y8 b' ~. TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 Z% x" a3 @* J, m( j" \; HI love you I love you with all my heart
8 R4 A/ q8 |. S  oNothing can compare to my love
- n4 U  M: E5 N8 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 |. f8 f) R9 ~) ~, r+ ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; @1 d" v$ g$ V- k3 G% U* `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* c" n- J# P. v6 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& H- n% i+ e6 w; h/ e; P3 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ]. l) a5 [7 e  A. I& o/ I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. V! a) I3 x/ C5 t) k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" ]- h6 e% e: ]- x) h2 A2 H% }" N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. I. \, E  Y: W3 B) C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, q0 K/ j/ I0 Z6 |4 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ T9 d7 [1 U7 r4 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 Q! u/ e9 l# u9 o7 j/ O/ W8 U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 P6 M7 w0 p: \1 [4 k! z/ Q" t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" d/ {, ?) y6 g. o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 _2 w8 K$ A, u) x4 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 y. V9 m( _: Z2 N3 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ]6 A( F7 I' i$ @) d+ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- A  O# h5 {  e2 @3 F/ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 H. z0 \0 _- @3 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. t) c% H' Y  _3 P! X! C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) O% f2 @9 q* i/ \" ?. U/ p  Q/ ]2 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# |: R% M0 |, z" l; i! S2 L% h& O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 c1 ~& _. p- e8 {1 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* n: W% U7 `. I4 X, B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' y2 r! g/ C/ c0 B& I5 r, \4 L, p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ \' A/ ~, W1 n0 ?# ^4 z! z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: T5 K2 q2 M, H6 P" L3 I& d7 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ W; m& l) M: t* n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 [$ k, W% ?# j' d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( s7 w! S5 [6 D8 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. _+ d+ W2 Z4 M; T! a" u. f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; Z+ N! a6 O* }; z( H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 {0 W. I! n5 E0 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>