【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ I  A. B" z7 ]$ L( M歌词我附在后面。
8 q! u4 F% R) h7 p! D6 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. W, X. i( t* IThe sky is happy down to its soul
* b9 A2 W5 `, s. E. I  N+ w# \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 S9 E3 B- v3 v. B: M1 J) ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ O1 [" g7 n3 ]% I' ^$ `I love you I love you with all my heart
$ m9 S" `5 c+ T1 x& BNothing can compare to my love
) N2 ~: L7 ~  H  VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 |- W, u" \. \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; j. G1 L3 d2 I6 N8 R% TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Z. w( u6 C+ h5 O8 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# ?5 h  }( c5 }7 y, G# y' A7 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ t/ V4 N. U& U) @( M0 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 e/ f- `2 `2 R  [3 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 m  ?, }0 U6 b9 s8 N1 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 L! `4 x1 }3 Q' h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  Y% k: x; \4 ?, }( ?* v( E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) Q/ D. Z2 K6 f; c' S# X: T; ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' p3 v( S, `% o# g3 G; A0 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 I, Y- Q: z2 v1 s: u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' x5 e8 [; i% J- E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 b3 H. D3 B' }6 ^: b; N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. t1 {& q1 ^  O4 R1 B* T: I- a( O1 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% y- E; \5 Z1 G2 M+ b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ _% |" d3 W; _5 G. e- h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 O5 @$ Z8 C" a- d. C- Y/ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" E2 q3 h; q) h( i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 g/ Z- w4 A7 \9 p! G2 r; W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 }3 ]% t4 }8 ], J3 M) o: n/ f; k5 |/ ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; [9 j7 [' S* \; S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) b7 J2 i6 a/ C$ T+ ?% N1 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  S% D) I& y: f" ]. `, h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 k5 Z/ m; o4 k; f, t% N7 E2 {4 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 ^  J5 P; X6 E% n) j( Q: R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 x+ N% I/ O8 `' Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  g6 v% \+ w3 e( m5 q4 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 T1 n6 A( O- a1 y+ \$ s* z' B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ u) W$ o( r. M6 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 o$ s; K8 B( U% d1 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& _/ f4 u, ]9 i- m0 e' b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) h8 Y5 v# z& H% u) Q8 |( v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 p2 Z# x8 a. U, E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>