【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 R$ G$ h+ j/ K! W歌词我附在后面。
# z/ X5 _" b& Z9 n$ w; ~2 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 t/ F/ k! P* V) @  {) MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 z3 |0 i7 l5 ~/ e$ i' b6 i: FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& f. X/ j9 {# X4 R# XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, b  s+ d3 N( f% \" NI love you I love you with all my heart
0 [4 h% X, ~1 a" cNothing can compare to my love
5 C0 ~6 I3 E. \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# s3 M. B; b  kI want so much to see inside your heart
0 `( _3 y4 G9 q8 m' |. T) u- ?# BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ z# h7 o; A2 N4 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 G, [6 l* [  Y( `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) O0 X# R* Y' D+ I, o1 [  G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, H" w  V) O" x) n# P+ ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 d0 f; d4 k4 p% l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 `5 G' ^1 `5 b6 k8 M! C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 o6 |) {- x1 h+ B! B# r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* @' e9 O8 F# u' I% ?; k/ x) l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 J( ?( L5 x/ c. E' j* x4 S/ @8 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 M: I% y* d/ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 w, h* @$ I8 V. `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' X: j/ i3 i1 B1 ~8 m; ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% @/ `2 u% ]& a& V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ?# m" s# q( `4 o: ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" W& f/ k. A1 s1 i3 S5 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ]5 B  O: S. `- L8 q0 S+ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: h' Y" N2 q+ p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ J9 N: E' T/ ?( f) s1 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 h9 d: a# T- W9 k: c/ D& n- [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) [) `  F. n% B( Y4 i7 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ b1 e, K3 V) A/ w; V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 u" V/ Y! C$ y! f% D! F; G. ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 R5 t& i! k" K* I3 S$ _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ p) q( O0 g7 F) ~* ~5 v/ X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 |, i, a' F9 |  z$ J/ Q' P9 D- D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( z  |" _# b1 a: Z! C. M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 i5 r# b0 [8 T4 m' I+ Y# k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 L2 N/ |% J/ q, \: C9 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>