【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 m; ~' @9 v/ ~" J0 I4 P6 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. }! K1 i4 v6 f) u1 U/ L& r8 h+ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 T) L6 Y3 z" l( ]  o: `& n" @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 V$ D  Z* r6 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 f# c5 d7 d& D  k4 HYou needn’t fear anything
) I. c# s& W4 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) T: D, y1 T  g3 J# q9 N2 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% y  G# T# X) `I’m still filled with fear
1 E1 a8 i2 S+ r; G% _2 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 r* p/ F/ |! k* u) Z' U' `9 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- `9 ^3 u# C+ s" {3 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ d: E' J/ D4 ~/ WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 _! |# Z' L/ NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* a# E( P: A& {  `" Z7 Y9 n! A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% y. B0 s" s2 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 D  c( j$ L7 g  }5 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 E5 \/ A9 T" }& }9 I. @+ n' |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& y% O; c- f0 y$ D4 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( c6 E, d7 `  X- c2 t1 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X1 T) z+ p/ U5 Q- Y4 ]$ n) t3 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( |# y( b0 G5 M% L) k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% R( ]1 w" H' ^( }* y: E  q) ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 x( g" |# k! N! F6 l; b0 d, ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. R5 J. l" f9 m7 i  a  @1 i: T. G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 j" n8 R/ u8 h' A) c  u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ D0 Y: N" \8 f7 e' h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* }: A# R# ~- d/ t3 o6 n" b0 K% V7 C0 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  r0 z) I( R2 V% E7 E- N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 P: _! J: C3 O7 O; s8 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! g( M2 E3 n5 I+ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. W0 t: S. P% I$ x# A/ t7 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 ]: b8 B+ N% X$ X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 {! g4 b  g. _8 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' i: p  m7 s2 i; u' b" D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 _1 ]' a& a6 j6 j" S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* Y2 r0 t9 n( P5 e/ s+ H! Q9 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) a/ v5 i$ D( _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>