【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 k4 A7 A- V# Z* M8 Y' |- {+ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  h* g3 c, Y# V/ C: ]0 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 \7 H+ J4 ]' U2 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& i6 s* X4 a+ CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; f  y0 J2 h; H( EI really want to know just how much you love me
: [" n3 u2 f0 J0 QI love you I love you with all my heart
/ J- Y8 t; C: G7 d2 h# V' gNothing can compare to my love
1 |1 x* ]( \9 T: iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 O2 y, d' {$ S, V. \+ u; u3 vI want so much to see inside your heart
% m! C# E! e; n% M" {0 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" E0 X3 M! n- GI’m still filled with fear
2 m- L9 R, Y# `$ L! `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 @4 C. y! ^( }- \: l& U( QI regret not dying
% }6 b, f8 Z4 R& ~4 X9 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 M( G7 Z. v5 H0 R, n1 q* b3 N0 zWith such a tongue as yours,
) ~, r+ g1 @1 }- \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  n8 X: _% T: Q) ?. u8 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: O' M, C# p- h0 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& }9 R5 Z8 a( L# ~. Y- P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  c7 I+ @: r7 m% Q$ W9 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ q- O% I1 v* _7 Z* N- ?' c# E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Q. U4 t- j' m& S/ f4 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- e$ e+ H& D: r; V7 J' C' Y+ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; X, h6 [! ]6 n8 f, ]( F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 w1 R  U( g' o$ H9 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 E" M5 i9 N4 a- a$ ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ?' q; D' ^. I' D. X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" Y5 R5 H3 j- Z& {. T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 D/ n; ?$ }2 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, \- B0 l0 q) `- f) _6 P/ b' R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 y3 K! B& l: X% M* f: T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( H: p; t) W/ D' R, v2 a: Y8 h/ s$ q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 ]) b0 H4 c# }4 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: n- R2 C$ A2 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 L  I$ M1 i( ?, w% Z9 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" `+ u! L7 Y8 W# \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! S, S! H7 B3 d* P& f* L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 Z( X, Z- N1 ~/ q. n5 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 r' {% F- h- |2 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& M! v, \6 r# i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ `# p' D; P, M, J+ s! t) f- o5 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 T! L% T) q) P+ Y. x. J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 b7 U. ~8 Q6 y) b; I) M; C! G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>