【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  B- q) F; e( u( R, ?* L# lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 D4 X4 O% {, M# G, |/ I) NWith the moon kissing it every night
- K3 m3 n2 o% D9 rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 M+ O9 g- U7 N3 M4 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 n5 ~! P3 |2 @6 ^5 cEvery other word you utter is love
' \  G6 i, L& r1 y1 {' fI really want to know just how much you love me
# f1 ~7 [9 `) g7 EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 g" N9 N9 B) QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 q) L* q# M9 ?, a; \, nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 ?. h% R- J: j* x+ `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 j5 F/ v9 `8 ^( w8 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 C, u' r0 J: N6 D2 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' X. Q, N2 U! a* j; J' q: K6 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! {$ P5 r; @% V2 j4 Y2 [2 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 P* Z( d. f7 K  r) j! L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Y( p9 V; J& l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 K6 T. Q! M3 o% |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& M3 N1 I3 s7 m) U<P>你无需担心</P>
/ x+ u0 P/ b' g$ Z' Z" F# ~8 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 t+ U8 Q7 A" m. J( O* x7 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ [( Q) L9 j: `) p/ N& N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' j) }, {. d9 d) Q5 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" @, c" B0 O! T/ i0 v0 G7 m& J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! k" [9 k# g5 Q) X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' _: ?: z3 _  O# u6 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' g8 y7 p0 F$ T! N( q$ Q: f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( m) n* ~& L7 u9 F6 O- z' w* G7 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 j9 Q" G# b0 p: r" Q: j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; p% G& J3 C  i2 D. _/ A0 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 q4 C- n( _# Q- G# h8 s7 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 }: q3 \0 a& Q, F0 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; H' |& i7 q! i& u<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ L. l, ]! x0 [& U% C! r' G% h0 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 ~( w) F& I' t: X* Q( y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ?2 t2 A& n9 D, Q5 j9 m4 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; u+ }& u# x: x; P! G; z$ ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ~; K4 D2 V/ \" u$ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 C) b/ }5 ^" e; Q) x2 B( F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  D4 n; E5 p: D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 u% W3 [! y3 c3 m1 @0 z, F. w+ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 O, M: Y/ q. \5 `+ P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 ^# p! k5 a  k& V' _2 {( r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; i% P: g5 x1 G% W& d- p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>