【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# H: j, g" T6 X) A5 G歌词我附在后面。
6 p& j5 V3 x& R2 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ {! f3 f1 W+ E$ `6 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
& T& e' x! R) Y3 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 s' H9 a# q1 t/ t; g7 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. v/ f* r3 Y) t) m+ z1 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) a8 v0 V+ j1 {. J- ?4 Q8 A3 s. W+ A' ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 C1 l* `4 a7 q4 c/ S) [5 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- ]" S1 [4 G% W# X; zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: y% N, z: X) V, S; l3 `! `& ]0 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 P" J6 E- G6 @6 `& `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 s0 U' @1 m. \9 k$ s$ m9 f8 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; V2 N+ s% J5 {7 @/ O/ i' k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- q! g2 @2 |4 w5 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ a" \9 n) r! X7 V- u2 f* X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 S6 g2 w" U. R4 H/ ]- x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 l. R' M$ G/ R  R% ]2 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: k/ p1 |8 j. |0 ~* H. X) F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 `+ h( y9 e$ m& \  Q4 v0 o1 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, }, n3 P/ ^0 B9 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 F! X8 I0 N. v" O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 V5 J% q6 y# @; t1 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( ]( h" k+ B. c% n" e; A* `  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. `; H; f+ J' O6 e# R7 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& y+ X, Y+ N7 ~' F: U6 L$ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 b6 c* Z9 z9 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 W3 a- M& U0 M& }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Z2 i" X7 u6 z- q) I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. y: h2 x: z4 j; M4 V* X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ b" r9 |1 `7 u: {# C9 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# s9 w3 {/ ^6 \4 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
' z) b% ?0 c1 W. f5 G! S% ?  S; W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, [" S7 M' |  j7 k% d" H) x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; U& x1 i9 w3 @& N: H! H- ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 h- n" U" V/ o& a9 m' |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>