【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ?* o# |* u( |" O- iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& n1 C! F5 L" M7 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: z8 S! N4 i5 [* D+ iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& |+ N' ]; B4 H* t8 r  o6 pYou needn’t fear anything
7 u; C6 r% w" X4 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, p( @* C" x) ]- ?) S; QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: u. S7 t2 k" \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. p3 |  J& E5 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ]' o5 C1 M. x2 \( M( U4 x( L, YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! h+ s! s% N( MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( I7 V0 S2 X& z, o8 u6 T0 bWith such a tongue as yours,
& l2 z3 \* E/ q* i  l5 A) R" mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 a3 Q; J: C% ?3 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% v$ {% D. c7 O  N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 j' P* U2 t) A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, R/ v; i0 V' S; n+ U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ J7 C0 E, H5 B2 y, Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 _1 G" ~" S  n# p. M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  Z7 B6 Z. e6 T1 G  y+ |! g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 T, T8 N* R7 N+ N9 a7 W4 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ i, R3 R( Y3 m% [8 [8 V) l9 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ b7 O' S% l& ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' N/ a2 r$ u; l! J8 |, E! z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 K, W- c! X  l+ L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" }: Z$ R+ E, _8 b% \% r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- V2 ?) y) w3 K9 T9 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' P$ P+ a* ?  L2 {2 x1 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ U* K) Y5 ?2 Y; E6 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 O" ^1 y7 T# l% _2 ], U1 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 u% d+ b6 S0 y+ I, J3 ]& [# h  r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 u! M: q1 t% u; ~$ U+ x/ v: k) w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 G) `0 H# p: X! s8 q) b/ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ F3 E6 @# J! N! \( `8 p' v' a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& O+ g0 G/ U( o/ Q7 H' N7 _$ o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! y9 u" H: T  _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* c) W7 R. B) w+ D3 c, @1 v# @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, _% l* `; H+ A9 Z0 y+ y8 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 f( x/ A) Z9 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  X3 |, H; g+ f# i* H" v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 v7 m5 ^0 ]( A: _3 X3 L/ K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% r& j4 c! b& a. h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Q9 S* Z0 U# l4 C# ^' @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 A! w; X, ]' u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- q3 \7 S6 v+ x  _! D我请你剖开它
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% A" }( q8 |- g* X$ y/ { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>