【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
- e: u5 o( v8 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( L5 a1 J* U6 O  j- t4 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% V) z' u5 B/ l% {% U$ `  d3 iWith the moon kissing it every night
3 ?0 Z& B( V3 [' w8 J. f$ J& hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' U; k; h, @7 A! h  M+ n: GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 Y. g4 N; K& k$ a% T+ {Nothing can compare to my love
$ G6 C  f2 O8 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ^+ A) i: Z4 H+ g2 p# y4 v7 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% ]; \6 K/ U# v! vI’m still filled with fear
* K4 l2 R1 \9 S# S5 N4 e) Y" bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) x9 i0 u2 e, S* d- N# I2 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 M3 w4 `. K1 d; R/ mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 n0 h2 Q1 i/ B- }2 X" G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: E, l' P& o/ ~) M: D' A  J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" h1 e* B) a5 @! {8 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ d6 g" N3 c, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' |# ~  B9 L, e1 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 X* u2 H5 U9 j: n5 f# q9 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ q+ ^+ N4 V* g8 m7 y4 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 Z% W, i: b& O0 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ _1 k/ v: u. d4 L1 P3 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: m2 L3 Z2 c6 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 _# @  X& U, h2 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 y2 R- j5 ?  k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& t, ~2 P+ v' V) Z* [8 C+ e: ^1 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 y! Q3 f' L& j. h) j% F" w- d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 r) J( N6 ?5 S: F- C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' v+ \! z" f# h, z7 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* U% h# A# x! G$ f& ~, U8 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ P) \' o2 o+ N+ k. z* v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 X& x- Y) }9 g# S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e# n# ~2 S% Y9 t. m' H% Q+ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 m" r2 B2 ]  L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 w. x7 s5 H$ f$ `/ k* K4 o$ v7 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
# j$ s! X; j6 S% z( ?; b5 I4 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' n) N5 L5 r" \& @. ?% D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- C& n1 I8 `8 ^+ d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 f! R3 M" m. K  k7 R, Z& I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* I9 l, b, o% u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* X) _9 X# V3 d1 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Z" j$ D0 h" o1 L* V  v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 o: A7 M2 Q: }& v6 z) e) i+ `* P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>