【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" O! {/ q) Y/ s7 r歌词我附在后面。
2 X- M8 |6 H0 L0 _, u% f( GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 W+ I+ E, ]  D, O" P: Z: `' LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  f! K  @: x# C8 E. jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, Q, L$ x& x, q& {5 {2 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
& `& y' ^/ H3 s. {* ?' U4 N( I; WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- K+ h2 b& c% C; r# [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& P% [5 z& x/ ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 R1 o" U" v0 p* U2 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 x$ p# R4 D; j/ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 [, D! R$ B; @' o0 l/ lWith such a tongue as yours,
9 D2 z5 A( S4 s7 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* f9 F8 }  [5 \+ Q* u+ R* N4 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 c3 }' _( O) K/ P. ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. q3 A/ G" G5 S4 k, w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ O4 w* V. E( h0 s* q  l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# {$ b' D! j$ M- Z( t8 o8 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ l! ^: T3 B. x; g! t1 v% S6 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- V) ?+ {) v3 w( b% p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ M8 v% R1 g# A$ P; K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: c% H5 H- `& A& ^. s: D/ k5 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! b) y/ |6 Z7 r1 r6 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" d( u( F, y, ^. C: v. k4 @" ]9 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& l- p' b6 p8 Z0 U, `- b( n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 c* Z" u$ P5 X4 |6 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 L6 f, f) u3 R6 |4 b! ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 i7 K1 P7 W) j7 p  @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; ?# U, V5 v5 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  A- I9 j3 O/ M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 X7 H9 l2 x4 h/ T3 S2 Z; C% }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( q+ D( V3 e) S4 V7 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& b  g' H- d4 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- {7 T" K  [2 I) K5 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 \. [; W8 A' g+ H. W% v2 j! F% x% b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ B* e  P( j  m+ o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) i9 K0 W- \$ s2 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 f+ b$ u- N; R  M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ D. f$ `0 X+ V7 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ a* F/ ]" U; r- x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ N, l3 ~3 U  r3 w' d! E  D8 j3 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 z5 C$ {$ b6 D+ d. [& l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 E5 K. M5 a* e$ }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q7 |' N& E. g6 a' u  C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. d/ G+ v$ W6 \6 G  T8 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ B7 p3 o+ A4 Y' ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ m! L% F  [5 {* e6 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 G+ w2 ?; o, W* \' U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, `4 X) d/ O; s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 s( g) J" h" i0 g  b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>