【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* {% m  _5 K4 ^, c) JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" c5 R- @* \. z* M, \5 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# \1 L* P. I8 q( c8 J- HThe sky is happy down to its soul
- T( Z, e+ m4 i4 FWith the moon kissing it every night
: B/ f2 e/ ]- f# `9 D% q8 K! }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 f- y9 j/ S4 v$ I0 A, TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 I4 f, Z. a  [, B9 \% S' NI love you I love you with all my heart
$ j6 e0 \: ]/ [. hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, X1 j1 [$ v5 }3 k5 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  m$ e- ^- K# b# ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 e/ c6 M; J6 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 U; U) G* ?  |$ F2 x- DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; m- b) W) Y4 b' p( T2 g6 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, D1 D0 s0 n: i. t. C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 y" U! M# Q; }# B% G" B& {0 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 C# n* \! [8 ?# s* z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  W, m# X3 w  X8 w" ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. f4 w  ]$ ]" K+ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; U" K# l5 C  ~& z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 l' @. c7 h# X- \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 M8 O; {9 r0 G- u) O% c<P>你无需担心</P>
4 s: y2 X, R# ]& J. r* W% d: m- ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% e& u5 f4 M3 B/ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d* g3 O* p2 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" \: R* q: ^* H9 z1 g$ R* o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 [# _" e5 c# a& @  O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& i( E3 ~4 `* f8 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: m* e! O7 t0 h- z; {4 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; y6 {( M: t' Y/ K; y1 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" n# O; q  C/ ^' I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 W. Q5 g+ g6 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 G' S" N5 ~5 m2 w8 z* L2 k/ x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 m$ k* G2 W% f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Y9 Q9 B% J& |! ~! w$ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- l6 Q: J7 w. n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 V$ ?' t1 |( f# s* d: z$ M2 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 ^9 e2 e* y+ Z8 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ b; W+ ]% w& s( s2 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. B" h9 g$ y1 |1 o0 ^8 F8 K4 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O' |. e% k% X. X5 X3 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 H( R$ _8 E: c! H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>