【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 [/ L4 k4 \! g0 N7 s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) M& \: j6 n) Y) C( w( ]8 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 }* N9 M! d# a1 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \- ?/ U5 w' t4 n# {6 P/ kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ M: E/ i3 }1 V  U" }* PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ z+ S1 M' `: gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& e* s5 r* x& [3 X+ r4 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 y. h& v; ]( B4 Y- p- a3 q" e& P' @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ d3 T, \5 f3 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# j$ R! @; t* ^- b( @4 Q9 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 R. Y- i* k, T" UI’m still filled with fear
* d& N4 h$ O% ]6 X/ R. W' y) \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ J  v* O( N- R+ c& h2 ]8 @3 VWith such a tongue as yours,
  J: X* ?+ {3 X1 B7 O  R1 `: yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ |( @% r% D, M2 _% e0 W1 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, K( r9 \" j$ D) m) [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& c' R. K% n+ B# K4 U6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 }8 `: b3 l# ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, m8 y9 Z2 G( r/ i6 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ D" h0 B0 o  q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" ]. t( ~4 A7 P# l6 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- _7 V2 w. J/ Q5 m4 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 j0 C; S. {' R2 w  ?7 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ M* j8 x' U. H( t" t+ K# ?" I# Z% Q, m% I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ K- G/ L( I$ a7 }: s! G' G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 p- g" ]2 R6 _8 [" W* b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 ]6 k6 w) D! H9 G1 Y4 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* u3 V% a. q* D1 X. Q1 [( [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( X2 x1 N- N4 z$ L- z; |1 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' h9 R; x& O' C# g+ O- v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ O$ c3 y# r$ W- c" @. j5 @+ K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" G7 x/ [; C. R/ U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* u9 ~* O! a+ P1 N0 P! ~" \5 x: V* u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ ~# d5 U, y) J* j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 j% c3 @. D1 ]) P7 t& ]: W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 U# }- v7 n5 K, F1 E7 z9 ]! ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 N% D" b5 R* o" I" K9 F6 R; R! I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>