【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ ]$ \" x! G! x# J歌词我附在后面。
  q0 E% A' P4 g9 B7 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( `" j4 X' m0 L  IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% H; r* [# w8 m, `; yWith the moon kissing it every night
* T, x7 \2 B; O  J" ^  U* BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, n% f) ?2 t* m% ^' C- nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 k( e5 ~/ B6 F* v; @+ ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' d: G% t& c) V; R$ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 B  \! w7 D1 v% u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* h2 t0 b/ D# ~! S. y' z$ Q6 c* a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  R& I1 j: J8 A0 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" R) r: M2 p6 V; M( }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 s8 t5 Q* m8 {5 p# c3 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: `; M5 h! A* H$ y6 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 @' F7 [8 |1 n3 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( `2 k# \3 }) L. J; U5 D) Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( Z8 S" T3 w6 |* F) J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& n" R2 J2 j% _( t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- n) E: a) @% d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 f, p& X  C: P* a8 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' q) r! \. A( q  |. s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' c# A) B2 W4 j! k  \" I& H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# l5 ?( p8 O* c  h6 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: B9 g+ n# c8 [& ?3 I& U, o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ]  T* b# t* ?* r- o' N+ P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ `5 W) \! s# r) I: g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 p. ~5 U, V( R7 }6 a+ g3 y, z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 S+ ?  V+ H) v! D' ~# e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Q1 H- a$ j- P6 g, r9 v) d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ?0 j5 s* |- z4 f: N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 V8 s, z0 g$ N% A$ i" K+ I8 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 \6 v0 P5 i7 a, H* o  h' @1 @8 h4 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" p/ D$ ~5 x( ]. M4 w/ ?( `: ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 I2 V" r3 v) L6 R) k5 o. H. j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 \% h  A2 d8 Q7 {3 I' ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  T9 k" }0 Y$ W& K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ @& t4 J% k9 J) ^8 v4 c) d, T8 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>