【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) {9 h$ Z, \( t, }4 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ `8 y' @8 w& s( n! k  F3 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" g  V. Y; j# k5 z. \4 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' l0 m0 i' Q  [! M$ bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 z* h% n: B4 D( s3 M0 X+ B4 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" H( |0 l+ o  }4 d3 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" v1 r3 j0 D* |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ O# V$ Q' g6 }+ h5 A6 _9 k6 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 }; G8 B5 X( X8 O3 ^2 q. qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. C% ?+ W9 K6 s+ Z6 v; N  nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( Z1 q1 |& s. ?$ m; PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# C* t; l* i' P2 d5 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. E  w* Y+ R" \5 w% x8 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( r$ D- @" {+ h  L4 l/ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% i+ J$ B, l( Z1 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 D- d& D4 K7 [, }% I' F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 ~  l2 T  e( X) |1 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 Z6 R+ T/ x- S. D3 L0 Z+ u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 T+ {; Y: p3 [5 ]1 c4 g3 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! d; k; R+ ~$ A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 A0 J: k- g% Q* n) O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 p, h6 S5 Z, l% n# z8 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* U; U0 w* D- A. H9 g% L# g  P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- d+ r' d- J! q( R0 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' a! _( m" U: d% V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, Y8 a1 L2 \  m% O4 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 B& F9 {( T4 ~3 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  {2 L& m1 d. {3 D) X9 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, l2 M9 [; w8 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* R5 R: E6 v# Q. s! b; G* }. Y' _, ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  Q2 p8 P, I/ \: o, X9 R8 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! P) l9 N0 i/ }3 M9 c9 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. }) v% @8 J9 I+ ~& l& A+ P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: K( ?+ c& ^* q4 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) L# Z! s; @! c; A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: C' N: C1 m+ {! V- y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 l' R0 Y1 Q7 }' O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) d. t* ~( `: {  E! g4 q) X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 t9 K' }! ~% w! Y) U6 V+ v- U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% M4 X+ j2 q- H7 }  j, G我请你剖开它
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0 O- A% f2 W0 ]3 Y6 V0 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 r* U; W- M& L3 z0 H# R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>