【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. c# I0 [' D* U- X/ E) CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 V: {* r2 V) }, z" K3 M% U, m4 e3 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% f5 @, K; n' L& J  ^: T% eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  y9 D9 c$ R2 ~) K0 E' HWith the moon kissing it every night
% F2 V7 L$ l2 c# x  J" BSeeing the sky content with its love
8 s& L1 i- e& @0 J6 q( IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' J* j$ t3 I. e: f! v3 QYou needn’t fear anything
$ {' V, d4 Q# U- JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; N+ q) d5 r$ O- p; N6 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. h7 Q! u: ~  U, T+ x- P1 EI love you I love you with all my heart
4 `/ Z* g, g- M4 \! J. {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" k7 o" X: ]2 [( B7 G7 SI regret not dying
: r5 v5 E6 |  p3 k9 O; C) w1 S: AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 a% n3 U+ [) s- i  YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( \, @9 p' D, t- ?( b4 N' A4 w/ _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 B, c) G1 I, q! L; ]2 [7 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! t" t" A5 H& P) j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 I8 L  X! Y' R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Z# Z; [3 M/ R: G# A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* k0 F$ L9 ~/ v# M2 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* d- }1 ?# \% z$ {3 F" r) v6 q2 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 N0 H, F1 L( k- s4 h. D' T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# I. b  f1 o* m" e9 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% W) v8 d6 o/ U7 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% t0 X1 ^  K/ G* z3 r, G( g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" }. h' x& D& e  N, Q( k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 g6 g8 E  v$ |5 I& N" M  }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* h7 U4 N' g. w* m/ b: t# E  y- o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. U/ x$ L# @. z# V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" T; B" p7 J1 u  P, U3 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  n, G) Q: k( h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 W  j9 ~0 [& Z9 H/ v* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 m# M8 I: w2 i$ w. _! H% u" U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" g: a, Z/ B0 u- V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: T  D0 A; A3 C, ?* t' o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" z5 Z% `1 N+ B" ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: f* J$ ~& i1 l1 n( x1 v, m<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 k7 a' |, v* z1 w% @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; L; g* A' H4 W2 L; D! X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 M# ^4 J2 \' q" r7 T( o* m: R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ G$ Q' E) H: \7 s% H! x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" N5 |7 N% ~- l) \2 J4 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ R  q9 I$ d8 n/ |+ y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 ^' r) M' X4 b1 o5 _# V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>