【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ J) _$ d9 V2 x' c( `歌词我附在后面。
( `* Y) S' u# j* @& L8 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
, R# d7 j# x9 J1 W9 {/ d7 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
, W6 y" p; E+ Q+ h; F) c4 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ \& p- B" o5 d; V4 X0 `% yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% _, w$ [- E2 B/ |1 MWith the moon kissing it every night
: b% J! v; L. T& U  m& c1 k3 U8 N: GSeeing the sky content with its love
! s' F) X7 C0 t4 h' X+ S+ u, eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 f* H9 i' W$ W% H! Q! C# {- ?6 S/ TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, x3 O! B' `$ I2 O7 mEvery other word you utter is love
; c  c$ L: H2 ~& z2 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 A* B6 r: h* R* _0 Q) wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 I' }+ t* d4 N5 O) ^% \. ^  OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 |7 M( e! Q+ v3 a8 B# m% ZI regret not dying
1 S% ^0 E0 P# d" i/ E; ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 C) O; i4 _( p- d$ n: L- ]8 x, cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* Y% G1 n1 n' ?8 G/ `' p! ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# ]0 ~% s. a" V- N, N; fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" T9 m- X7 J& }( F- M5 m4 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- h/ W8 H1 E5 l1 c; O; h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 I7 j) F* a+ _+ V0 Y. L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ v6 L0 N8 I3 O/ i! C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 c& R( U1 G9 O+ u- ]: s$ c1 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 D4 S5 ]3 N! \7 E  F" @2 [* a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 ?3 E- R  G  H8 O% R9 t1 J5 Y, V. G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  P* Z  P" F( d! O" d# C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 }; g3 m& s/ ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, |- h$ J6 P) @0 j* ]" E<P>你无需担心</P>
2 M( }3 c% l- R$ i( \4 X+ S; Z! j. K9 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Q( p/ J; h5 |8 V# Y  v& E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ I+ a; G( u" s6 O) J9 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 d9 p' r2 W; ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 I/ z! j: i9 E3 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 D* k! k4 d: F3 h7 P' S) O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 r( u  D, B* b) h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! O( p& r! t% b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ E: J) L) Y$ c" Q8 N7 `# S- q& b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( f$ l& a4 v0 A4 l+ E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; U- g3 Y7 u8 m$ ~7 @# j+ A% I. V1 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ C2 i; Y+ {4 D* f' w" D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; j9 f1 ?4 f( }# C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, U5 T2 b/ T1 Q+ f! X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. V6 |, s  a. [" F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. m" P) a* s* N+ F8 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>