【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 W  J$ a% z9 E6 g% vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ O$ D& ^9 @5 p$ _- u3 e* }, ~+ nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 @3 Q6 m" F2 N9 E/ F3 u% VWith the moon kissing it every night
1 o# `& {- b4 J" ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) r) L& h9 S, Q/ G" [6 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: u9 g( R$ f9 y  B- {3 ?) f8 a, ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 K: K  g! }- R; y7 SNothing can compare to my love
4 T/ q* S% b1 y8 U8 ]* ]/ ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( s8 W! a2 S+ ^  N5 ?  xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 E! X8 L, Z$ K1 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  V, {; \' w1 k4 g+ Y- ~  oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( k& _* ?8 B8 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ^+ V' R  b+ P9 C0 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* p& M/ z$ O0 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 M$ X4 u- o- z  B% h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ U- S- s! T. U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. I1 h- Q5 x1 k9 x* U3 O7 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 k  f5 R) @$ u( }' K0 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 y. g, V+ |; K( L/ w7 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& |: m) C: y% U" q4 L: z! C7 m+ l% e. s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: f0 t9 E5 g2 e; Z. d8 I: y4 G7 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( |& l0 W5 f, `! j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; t% ^9 {' k  v* L1 F4 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- }- R9 ?  ]5 C3 v; ^( u0 F5 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  k6 g) w6 W5 v. Z) B- u  O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 Y8 J$ J4 f" [* o' S+ |9 @# c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( W8 M! H6 x+ I) i8 `" o! [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ _* o( M0 q+ z2 C2 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 K- Y! _  s/ V# _( J  C7 h+ b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ v: N& d" Z$ ^( ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 g/ x. C( G' R% B+ w( J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 t! K$ w' z( v# C( ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ B1 \2 U) z6 V- W0 ~- H; ~6 E; H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! B: D; o+ @; b6 J5 \" Q6 S9 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 l: D! l2 D( O/ e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; P: L1 W9 [- }" Y, h& s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 ~- {9 g; A( _3 n4 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. r" W. M) O0 d  `$ c. w( W我请你剖开它

" I5 u+ I1 c7 m' j4 l0 Z: p3 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- H$ M5 ]" X4 m& ~: h! ]+ |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>