【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! l; g" ]. o, i: h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ W0 T0 M7 R: L0 b, UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  P4 x7 ^. a: X" i5 r3 ^( l9 a- cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; m9 F4 V3 v7 |+ G" h: F4 ^& l6 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
' k/ A2 B1 h# [6 |6 iWith the moon kissing it every night
& a( z, o# E( B5 g/ c+ R3 fSeeing the sky content with its love
1 t- H8 r. f7 [+ ?$ n( y6 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# c! |& c3 p% g8 KYou needn’t fear anything
, L/ V* S, x) OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" o" e! }$ P. b7 E( A. B+ B% dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* d/ z1 M; Z0 z+ uNothing can compare to my love
+ k. \' M- v& R* }/ V6 H3 U9 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! R# L9 H- `, F  Q  _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( q7 ~: N3 `$ W+ n& f: h5 e7 d" u+ CI regret not dying
* g1 f4 ?+ l# l/ J1 ]( o( @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! Z" w0 Q2 N6 Y3 _+ x5 M% X& j% OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  r  A: C0 G: v% {# rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# t' P+ Z- {& Q. z) L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! P# C- f* i: U9 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- [9 o' n- W& x# }6 e6 }( v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- N3 a% `* E5 t3 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 H, Y( Z7 }5 O. T0 J/ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( p2 s" I' o$ C/ ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 J; G/ V3 Y5 _  \( E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ N* ~) C8 ^5 O6 J7 F1 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 n8 C% b( E5 }( c7 s( _8 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 Q' Y$ P, h1 i8 b( B<P>你无需担心</P>
1 P7 D- G" K) v" n* }2 Z' G% r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# y2 q6 U5 D1 q/ w1 X- J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 j: L- s$ Z5 A  K' ^) v$ v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; V2 p9 C1 u8 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) H& _; p/ J9 G1 }- H6 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 D0 M2 n0 [5 m. l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 C3 ]5 \* }! O/ g9 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 d% S0 f9 U' e4 M- U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 r/ V0 D* V* t! X0 Y! ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: A- |2 G7 c- X# W  a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% n3 x0 D! G# \: f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 h0 x, O* a2 A  b* n, l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 n* C3 x$ M: D6 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ?1 ?4 [+ M: W! }' P9 k) f6 r" g' |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 E6 R$ E' {1 Q* b0 O. n! X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; ]: H  v9 P1 z" d; R6 o, b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. X8 X8 q! G" Q# ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>