【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ^1 S! {1 @1 Z; S0 u歌词我附在后面。
& T8 P+ j- A- o/ ^+ E: M5 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 t" Y, ~0 C) I9 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. x4 ?+ F5 W1 Q! _8 Z  ]The sky is happy down to its soul
& e$ F4 c. _2 H" sWith the moon kissing it every night
# Q3 b. c0 k1 }% T' p! O3 f- rSeeing the sky content with its love
  C" q( ~( L5 E1 N+ I1 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% o1 g: e. |' l1 s2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 |# J6 N9 D# z2 i( jI love you I love you with all my heart
6 |6 a3 p7 D: [9 [- t+ QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' \) y2 }/ l& m+ s+ q9 C/ mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: h, L: l* @, k: B% P1 _. i* s6 X1 m! SI want so much to see inside your heart
, w, S6 W0 S1 V8 c& sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 k) q; y2 F! [8 {! _1 l" ^I’m still filled with fear
+ h1 W1 y0 o( F: WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! l3 n& z3 K9 |' W6 u- h% Z- eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! L* d# L8 o2 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 b: Y5 d( w2 N" I6 `9 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ l7 d, v& E9 n; c3 h& }4 K# _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ k3 h5 c4 y4 n- M: I# n2 U5 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( h! [! p9 f  }7 ]' h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# J0 L1 R. @8 P& q& @  L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 j0 e3 j" |7 Y, P2 p1 w) p5 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: V$ }4 c( m: I2 c1 Y( A* _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C% u( w) \* W5 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ k1 _$ p0 w1 o/ C9 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( a. F1 E5 M" _( o0 }<P>你无需担心</P>
& u) m& J8 l' H; O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~* c/ V8 x& `" Y" d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# t! @+ ~! ]: k6 |' s4 ^& x0 w- S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ i2 H% s/ s5 `2 ]7 y9 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Y2 H- E5 l( O( N( s" O- d4 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 x( v" w) e& J. t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* s3 n/ }  W& b7 N" }1 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! F- [/ d' G0 m" S7 y: v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# K1 |/ j) F, _$ {$ S# S/ a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' R2 d. \/ s2 Q3 \. Q. W; W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ]9 _5 m2 D. V, t# ^$ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  S- U9 x, q4 G) T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) }! @+ E  y! M8 w2 k0 _3 I9 h9 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: g  z' D6 r* M) y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, K6 j, w( p2 G) d' D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- j5 Y, f5 A* e( W4 F! ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ g  e" w- U6 n& z1 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 _- i6 Z( u6 r. J0 ], c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>