【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- P6 P' p) G- X. bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' `! m- ?) I$ t1 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ K4 Z7 Q$ V1 m- s! S' B' {; L) |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: w0 y2 }# c4 o/ g6 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, F8 C8 `) C; V  {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 A% N6 C  {6 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 L+ @$ [* L0 r! V- pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ?& D$ L0 S/ p$ {2 F$ t" mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 X' t4 r6 \6 R) y7 n9 pI regret not dying
/ r, q; J0 I  q( `2 o/ }- h: wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& q8 u7 F3 i! b. XWith such a tongue as yours,
1 J$ P6 a6 O; C9 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- W- X) s2 [' {$ q5 s% g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ `7 Z* H" W7 M- c9 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ |& k% U9 E3 {% U4 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 J1 K5 ]9 D5 Z* y0 U7 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 [: k! b1 Y/ Z1 d1 {6 T" [6 z1 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 c5 N6 {. o% z" C, E7 d( z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  o4 r( e1 p; e* C0 J& h3 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 @! k. y6 ~6 f+ t3 `5 v1 c+ o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 U% S% k7 X5 h7 |. W/ v2 A$ _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" r1 p" d, C- f' Z: U, s; `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ \" U9 P# h* p1 O8 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: D1 d6 j1 j. o9 f, L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 a5 N- e) D2 s- q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 r& c% F6 F0 f3 p- `  |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" v4 p# g% y) f. f0 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 m! R) h; T' `6 K, r9 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, o2 g* }3 E; H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 z) m* p' y7 c2 W( A7 H/ Y/ L  n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 P# G: O, M: E) M7 O1 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ b/ Q: f3 {0 i$ w% }1 }% C% o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ S! q4 y6 I& i4 k( b& i3 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) s, u/ l. t) ^" o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 m- u& M4 i5 h: x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ L& `' M+ @+ X# \: _6 r: u/ Y. _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>