【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" n. _- I# u0 c( D4 C8 R- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% |% L) d0 d! _/ v0 b" Y+ _+ i8 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& P. }) [1 E7 |9 lSeeing the sky content with its love
$ @' E( B% T: U" R% s# NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- B# D& ^2 E' I, U9 w. X5 y( nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" O4 z$ X' r1 ^7 W4 g$ |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% c# v" \9 b; S* }7 r- ?) tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 }3 x- J0 S5 y) p. j  W, @+ wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 d' y: q) e1 x+ D' GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% a- E- k6 r0 ^1 g4 P+ I# k2 V) h2 \: zI regret not dying
0 A- |# B8 M+ ~9 b' }: C, M) `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: c6 |2 m2 S* v- V2 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: p; L" F; o& F/ x' p0 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) \2 b5 m5 t- W* p- t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 A+ V9 {$ L/ v' w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( o* R# ~3 o1 x  C" ?" V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! n' D( V* M# T( w& j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( q# d5 c9 s7 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) H2 Y. ^! y5 `8 C2 r" Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' E, D: _  L' K, \+ X: I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 P7 w7 u) f' v+ e* h; J$ Q" b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( A  ?, e8 E. C0 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 a+ f: n- R. V/ Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! d6 p, l8 z1 R( l' t% W6 ]( k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ o0 [8 O6 B2 T5 a# }& E/ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' A' i) t. s' ^* u9 y2 Z4 i9 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 n3 y" {* z: Q$ a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 o. f% N5 N& b/ [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( C: C5 h- E1 b; x! w' U" Q( C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# G; K+ U9 I5 W9 V4 G1 u/ W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: W) V0 t* a' c$ {- j5 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- z6 e. S" w! q3 W$ X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" K1 `/ ~' C6 }- R- V+ h2 p1 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 l9 B* y6 o" E- R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' }1 c! {2 f3 f0 b- c% R" \$ G6 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ W1 H# S% Z6 f2 d  G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- R$ {7 e: N* m! C" z. \- o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" d& Z8 [: f8 s  N) {/ j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 h" T1 b3 k0 }( @2 E" j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. i- c3 S. O1 n4 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 ~; a/ G3 S  {$ c  d3 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 B$ i7 K2 ~4 r& \. P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ G- E( @! Y; ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 S1 q9 N  X$ E& Q( H# k  ?9 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) I7 J  u. ?0 R$ X" D9 o' A我请你剖开它
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% |# ^2 }* R* j) F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>