【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ I7 Q3 O! k6 F% x/ \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: X' j4 x+ |5 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ Z( |6 ^' M- T: G. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 y+ s. K1 |3 z  Y6 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: V/ W0 L$ B7 Y8 O* ?# qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ O* v( H# S3 f8 \& ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) M0 N2 Q8 T7 Q. }8 ?* SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" b5 o5 R: h# I% O) O8 ]6 c/ k. mI want so much to see inside your heart
" ?/ q7 X6 b1 ~2 h$ G0 J7 s7 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ s: }7 ]; e  ?I’m still filled with fear
# i9 W( ^1 y4 R4 a+ V3 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ N( z6 O. Y9 X# r1 a0 p, R1 F# iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) |! R  G3 s8 t. h3 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 R2 e- I. ^' E6 [; {# m# @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 [1 ~/ A! `1 K5 J6 ~% l8 e5 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. [* v  k2 R! K6 V7 Q- h% f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- y+ _0 z. n% v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 s) j! o7 I+ @1 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ a+ u2 c+ t! R* a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 I' e% P% [  U4 D5 M  G) l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 h2 _! r9 N+ I/ x' H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  G- M2 ~) v. u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- V* q# ~# w9 W, v$ B, q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ?8 T) r; o! S. B1 A) p4 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. `3 x+ I* j) y6 J/ X, u) X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 a  o+ w, W" l. g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 c. n7 R" V8 ]" V& }5 h- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ i" p  i$ w& V. |* a0 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 Y* P( \- M% ~3 O3 U7 F. v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# n; D6 i/ m. {# C* l; n' V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( p/ @* {: d, n# K) a9 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 u6 B  g+ |3 k0 U3 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ p3 w: V. ?9 n; L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ n" P# s* \/ A& S+ ~; B5 A; a- l) l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 [8 T$ X" Z, l8 b2 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' A& p5 r5 p* z8 ~, c  _, W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Z0 R! ?3 E" ]: k) _0 W6 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. c  c  h  J% p% ~/ x+ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 M# Q8 S  U" t  \( w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% s: N, _& y! Y" n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; T/ F0 |9 ?$ Y  D' g/ J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& c( R1 N2 x: E" c( J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, \; D9 p$ \1 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  K' w) n, C1 t3 q9 ?$ @5 J  I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# m- x( m: L8 ^! S8 y( f
我请你剖开它

5 x9 o/ |( d% G  B( T* d1 L/ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Q: P/ e$ T: `# V$ ^- b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>