【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; E! v! G& J  |8 Q, Q( D7 b5 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ [+ M$ N$ g2 R# R" F2 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% C4 _" ]$ Y4 \# n1 Q! m* f, nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" V8 p0 g/ o' H/ ~8 w4 w% h/ Q8 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 _/ s" O. L9 S1 O/ wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, ~- ?& t, {' K2 h! e" ?! CNothing can compare to my love
* J) M5 Q; t1 n$ mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- Z1 P) y* Q  }4 w: u) P; b5 `8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; q( P- \3 _5 b; F/ O! ]5 @, jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ D6 \) B9 s. q% ]( ?( Q6 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- L, f6 s* M2 ]/ |5 y( @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* z3 Z* H) Q! vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 y+ S! p4 Q3 f, m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* |2 j4 \2 s$ u4 u! c/ w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" y/ G. Z( I. d+ \/ `% `9 x  k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& F! p* u6 F6 N' ~; G7 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" V# {) S$ Y+ y# i! I6 d, S' [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( B# o+ [9 I2 c& T4 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* E/ v6 M( ^: N: l- t$ T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  h0 L  H. z# g: V% C; t" W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 Q, }- ~+ r0 Z& ]2 c8 a& n( Y5 V$ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# R+ o5 u/ ]2 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 M/ s% z1 Q' c+ A, o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' Z( G, \' {& W/ x, f( {4 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 N; i5 p) W; h7 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 ?3 a$ R0 Y2 |7 v9 v3 F: Q, w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  D- N6 D; A! j+ u. w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 K2 M- ^  _: G9 b6 q& d: f2 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. Q4 n* F, d- `9 F# d5 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; m7 [5 U7 ?: g* g# A  X. F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# _( L  s% V& L3 W* A; g, v2 E8 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ^9 Y* I' N/ Q/ O. q, K* V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& `: y9 H+ |% O2 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ n) \( s$ f9 V) A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( e* ^7 F* D' J2 W) q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 H8 a* @" X4 t$ N2 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 G: @7 M  d9 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 @7 [' D: x* P8 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>