【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& ]. b( H6 g1 u, ]! V4 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 N7 q! D7 C  f- ~) O$ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) b6 T3 Z( b5 K1 c% y( O0 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 Y. X+ h6 [% F* CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- g, O  T- y0 O$ Y  x% Z1 G  ?8 tSeeing the sky content with its love
8 _4 K7 \! |! kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: u) T& ]' c) c: Y7 L& }You needn’t fear anything
5 n: C, C4 I5 L7 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# x9 c$ ~1 {0 m5 a; I' e3 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 e8 v8 V) y! |/ S2 Z. ]8 g0 HNothing can compare to my love
, C7 N6 v2 Z; M0 O6 W- }' ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; H! P3 m; t+ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( {: x9 i' U$ H) W& m; MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& x# z* s- i" e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 m; U( U" L! Y9 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 |9 k& B3 v5 L9 r( p4 S! o6 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. D1 ~! n+ l* L3 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. }& Q% v) U2 F: @1 k/ M7 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% T& }( J1 ^- P: g7 J. S1 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  }' B, Y$ x# V0 w$ @# ?  r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% Y: b3 x6 }2 e% i9 }8 {, Q' ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# F  t! T- ~& a$ ]) X: G2 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& E. S# @% J  }' u, I<P>你无需担心</P>
1 D9 @( {) M$ [' M4 {3 V/ E* d# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# V$ Y% ^, J4 H8 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 u8 }: w* b/ x( A( W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 q. V2 D9 A/ W5 f6 p) ]! F- L9 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ a5 K2 p& L! b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. d7 l/ ~1 x4 A: O2 F$ W6 ?0 ?, O, f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ C+ {$ b6 k1 v. {. j8 v+ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 e" m2 w4 @! i, E" B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" \7 G1 ~, J7 K4 w: @: o; ]/ S$ w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ?- z/ U7 i" [, ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 x6 @$ S1 H+ H) p  K5 E% R; F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ A' E( G8 J* ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ j3 N1 V8 J$ L' i* u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" [2 k* P/ W: N4 ^! p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 N) o% d$ ^& A! e. c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Y; a/ {, Z  ~. m# h4 N% G6 B  F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 B( \2 m: B& h/ r3 \我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>