【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ V- n" E4 A  [8 ?9 i3 f5 b9 n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 Z# y3 o  j# xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 E) N* @0 l4 U% fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 x+ V0 i& r9 Z9 y( jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# Z  d: y$ P+ B* KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( H6 H) a2 R5 ]" j  KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 l/ I' {; Y; _! {9 j8 z: pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ ~+ m' b# j* Z& A3 f7 B6 jI love you I love you with all my heart
6 {/ j6 |+ C" W% P1 Y3 bNothing can compare to my love
3 k' U3 d1 r: j0 |/ {1 b+ y: \- o3 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 [6 ~- P- M% C. l3 z5 {* G+ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) E$ {7 b5 b. I- k0 m6 II’m still filled with fear
) D9 |/ V' ]; N, _. HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ s) z: ]0 X" }) d8 w* I+ DI regret not dying
) p9 f1 g) z, @% vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 i$ @1 s6 }1 N% q8 ]5 r0 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ F( H: n1 L- dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- j* e2 i* V$ U9 u) w. V8 q8 h) Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 d) h5 g( D0 E, n- F& H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 v" j; @( h$ o: S4 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 z1 D* j+ R' e2 p: O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& g. j$ G$ {6 H: ]7 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 f; X4 G; A, ?, g3 Z( M* a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Y6 v# |* M6 B7 h; A! e6 b3 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ s2 j: g- P, j, E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 [% q! a  Z0 R; D' n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& j3 R/ {! f5 W" ^' n- ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) s- f% z3 r" b% b( c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& v8 v+ x$ T( A0 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# u3 |& f$ H, e% S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  a+ D# `4 {( t: U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) w! C8 u8 c8 b$ h1 k+ M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" g' u; S- {0 r  h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 @! e% [2 V& @" a  U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" s! P. P8 u, j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 _8 T' i" Z* {, w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ g' _7 w! d4 Z1 @+ \: K6 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* c6 Q* P+ \( S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, Q* S$ @9 L; K  U9 a5 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- e  ^5 U7 x# L5 ?4 n# p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
2 @" f- t# c1 T) Q
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>