【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 p# r! {4 v& Z. o+ TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' j6 n: w3 e: |1 A0 q' {3 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 s$ C. r( S! U2 {+ Y% ]# n7 mSeeing the sky content with its love
) W3 {0 i: V$ c; c1 p0 s6 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. L' W% @. L, e! o* i# G/ A1 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  h6 _- v( Y# ]7 |7 Q* |, T1 |Every other word you utter is love
# o% V1 U; |' zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! o( O8 u4 R' I2 f9 }- DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) ~/ D# d( [/ Z4 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& M4 ], f/ Z) H, V& j3 ~, pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: W1 ^0 u! o9 A, O. u9 B  C  |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 q& d. d3 w' [3 j4 y: nI regret not dying
9 P) M: i3 G7 W% D) a2 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ T9 n& A. L3 M4 M$ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 K# e( l6 m1 x. V6 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 q  \9 S' b+ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 z, _4 C" T2 M' G4 A9 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- S+ m1 _$ d) C* [0 H% {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& S+ N5 I4 N; _% R1 T* D! e' X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( }( h- Y3 Q8 R. h6 P3 a9 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% s1 P% Q, d$ m2 a! D5 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 O7 ^$ m, c( T8 D2 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; m4 {7 a" T' z6 H: v, C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 d  o: G1 T- w; p/ |6 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. R4 D5 ~8 o+ U8 H% {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ^' u  [+ Z4 J" Q" s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* {$ M' x' `7 b: B6 k6 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 b* a% d4 Q  o5 C+ Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 m, z$ H1 R% d" p6 _# m' f  D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! {2 a2 P+ [0 H# j0 }- X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ a" I* `9 f: u8 e( \& C8 O7 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& k$ \) w* v9 U6 |* N! p9 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, A- \" U5 h3 k% D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; }( U* ~, ]$ s6 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 ?; O; U9 F8 X8 ^; `* _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( h: T* a  j) B, Y* }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 a. r3 n' A. z3 q" c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ N7 }; k( o7 F! t) H1 K0 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- l6 K6 X- e4 W5 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 I0 R# k5 D  J" ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ?6 Z" }; c4 z: }" G% _- j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 ~, C! n5 X* S& B. s$ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 z2 b: U. J6 f7 d& ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ R6 U4 p8 M  w/ A1 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; r5 M) E; R  a4 J/ M7 \. w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: f0 b7 ~% P5 Y4 ]2 d  r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>