【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) r1 ^3 a+ |% y+ f' [6 K2 x* q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 k% s6 [" R0 S: ^+ P4 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
, E2 `) T4 _* J. uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 Y. D' B  l4 }6 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 z( f" m5 y: i3 P( A( RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% P. Q; J9 d/ A4 m) J; I/ sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, d0 s* r( `- p$ h: a, Z# [5 gI want so much to see inside your heart
" U* X; `% `% E4 m& BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R$ i* }% x' c8 \I regret not dying
# k* b$ i% H3 v% h% A0 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, A# V! s1 \6 s; y1 _. A  GWith such a tongue as yours,
6 _! x% N" _; w) U( V& E/ F" v. |1 I& MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 l; ~, F. M' XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. ]5 Q2 `# \% F" N! e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. J, q1 E3 C- x/ z4 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# S3 ^" J" B5 L% t* K. t+ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 @. u* G& N0 H! v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 p' C% G0 e3 V6 p/ k) l- j5 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% z* ?( u5 A: G9 q- w. h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ j: v- F# D* }' K: N# h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ l" L6 K  M# E5 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# `# d" g4 m/ ]. |0 b# o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 t( h! }; F) l5 v, Q% @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ e4 s( T. \& ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 D5 W* ^: i( Y% }8 O/ f, k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( X! j5 b* O( v3 H$ X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ ?% [# _' L2 v+ }; u& g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 U( \& F7 K) Y' [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ m* b6 f/ w9 B: i+ a3 L# x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 v8 D% Q% r' O( @4 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& C! g# }! b& }) J% c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  k7 N# \( J$ a. Q8 f. d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 ?+ k# U- u' C1 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Y  z4 O* s' e9 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ i0 A5 S# a- h$ ]0 r5 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- f  e- n  F% ]+ z9 p& H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ^( P5 [/ ?8 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 N1 \! o+ `4 f+ e2 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 E" ^# z: k" S8 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) i: w8 D9 v7 N# h+ e% a+ q% L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 c& f2 d) j# a/ d6 L" R3 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 O- M9 B, u6 \" g( Q' I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; x7 n) u+ O4 P; A1 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>