【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ?7 ?2 u. ~8 M7 C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& A' _* f! h2 ?1 J* }/ JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ k) G0 {0 l  VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( I9 r9 P$ y( `" EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: u# Y( l$ I4 |$ I, O* {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ r/ }. |! [* ~Seeing the sky content with its love
$ N& `+ ]8 z, S, w/ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# r; {. o' {3 M( u, LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 y  E# Z, Y6 L  N/ C& n1 aI want so much to see inside your heart
  g6 x/ w# Y4 v$ BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ C+ u* z: \) L5 S  uI’m still filled with fear
/ n" ?# i* f) N: FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ Y0 G6 n( t0 tI regret not dying
. `/ T: C1 K7 [! ^% TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% k, v: i+ ]/ u6 S% X: R3 s: dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ]6 y8 j  J2 ~7 Q8 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, k4 S5 w1 f% {6 X& p% P- a& o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 I8 L3 h" C8 n) A/ Z- A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ h6 u& f1 K- T% N# N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 o1 t5 A1 `: V& t9 j7 @. m7 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- v. D4 @. x0 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! l/ ^' x( _/ J; C  F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 d' s  C/ z6 z) e' ~# D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- C2 J) v5 f7 t1 E2 o* v% M) r' H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; i4 D  g5 ~7 b: A/ n# o# |6 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( w9 [- r. i) O; n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 f5 y. {- m. L; _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# S# I9 ~' P6 a& K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 A& F8 q6 G& Q1 G$ Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" p1 i! O* M0 m' ]3 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. l; {$ z" l5 [  b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 |' ]  p2 ?; ~! Q/ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 F3 b' T; G6 J5 E3 X& `: H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 |$ v# s$ V4 T/ v. m# v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 T: S0 m9 d: M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ r% D. H: g1 j$ G( V& {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( b! O3 D& c. t; i- }! G<P>I regret not dying</P>
; r# U1 [0 `4 @# M' R8 Q' p0 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* z5 ^* J! V& J* E" y% ?; e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, [* |- X7 e- _  h$ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' ?9 ~9 q1 D8 V0 h: x: u. a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" d/ j) n' _' q0 c. ]( |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>