【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  _  y; e, {+ OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 G" {/ D* h" ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 K; ?. F3 }, H% `You needn’t fear anything
1 v( H& e0 |& F8 A, H  h$ N) Y4 `' PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% I) U& m3 N$ S+ e/ H- q" Z) QEvery other word you utter is love
9 a$ I. n# f* |! H6 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ |# t9 q1 m8 x" |- U1 hI want so much to see inside your heart
+ k2 q+ r% e3 W& s+ VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Y& P- D- ]4 j; k+ `1 p' ], XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 ?4 H6 G5 {5 r$ u* Q2 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' {* Q. ]: V' x+ ~, p4 G; WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! A+ R! a1 R4 M+ b1 K/ Z1 Z$ {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, M7 c' b- G# _: E: g( Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ T2 V% j' S# k+ u+ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ X4 v; B* w  R+ j0 Q% X" y2 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% c* ]* M$ d5 v( I2 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 j4 P: y. C& i" s% B: ?; _6 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& r3 {  F6 L) e+ K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 f: K4 Y, ^' v% `6 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 c8 j: b) V4 D2 L$ @& n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 X0 j' a& d2 c3 I9 p8 b0 Y5 q% G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' y8 c7 o7 [5 \; G( Z. R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' z% A1 _% S9 z4 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 D( s5 e9 r4 _" _' _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ k3 ^3 K" h1 g/ x. Y+ `2 e# {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, R; R# y' d. e$ g) m. `* R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  |" {. Q3 z5 T' p; I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: @5 e3 x) c' _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 H% C% N$ C5 v9 u# U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ J2 K& g  Q3 a4 d8 D. l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% {- t$ r( Y% s4 ~- Q9 |3 P/ C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, T) ~3 p+ |5 L/ S2 A8 h1 q; Y6 n& w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 y  Q4 Z7 ?+ \! e3 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 L8 W3 M) N5 q8 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# U$ I: w. N- Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 E6 S' B+ ~1 O1 t9 f. m# k) u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 H6 I3 b$ X2 s. L/ N! Y1 H  G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>