【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ d7 _  f+ G7 }: v2 X+ Y3 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; ^6 `. l7 W- o, e5 j& FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" @3 X; k3 `1 W* {% m8 c: Q- KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: g* i2 Z4 S/ f$ [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ^; D, N+ X+ |5 E0 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% @0 A" g& {: p- oI’m still filled with fear
3 i% s' }9 h$ X2 @6 u. iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; d' }, C, W0 }1 P# L# @4 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) v- V  I8 p9 p* r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 H% h+ @* p) n! q4 m: n7 s6 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) e- ?. h3 l# Y6 Q9 x8 c& n+ l6 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; p( P" h  f& H# ]1 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d) _7 Z9 D" Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" o" @6 u" L; O& I' ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 B1 `) f  Q% b5 F1 e) r/ h) V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ V8 j% Z. E4 A+ i" E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; V$ c; d3 F; Q0 E; [8 A0 Q1 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# o6 ^2 s' l. I# Z) Z+ s" P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 h; {/ ^# n. p2 }- v8 l) f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) \7 ]( `; X. o; E; \7 L& h" j7 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" @' ?# T) k! T3 }# w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ b2 u6 h/ z- r* e% m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! p9 o  ?5 s- J  k5 V  p. [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 u4 R- f1 G8 R( H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" ]. ~# a  e* m& r# O3 ?2 U) S3 h  b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) P5 i' i: x3 c$ S' r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& f# I% h, T& b+ b/ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ z" M+ M. B. m' P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 K& z6 d9 o/ c+ S/ U0 R% Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 E, X# p$ g' f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! H" R- D) d2 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 Y- F4 a/ m" _( t3 v8 K7 B. W5 [) D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 {! w% k4 K* ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% h, P# X$ W# Z% n) T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' C; }2 }4 L) S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ Q5 Z& v/ V& ^, T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 X  f' G" C" D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>