【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& V# T6 v7 \& HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 e) J* V, f4 j2 j  S; _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ p7 p/ l6 D& v; Y: X- H% LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 G& ]* y9 a, l% C/ x0 @* n9 @0 u& a$ \Every other word you utter is love
4 M  `, V( Z' Q, H( B) ]I really want to know just how much you love me
! V4 R  K4 e8 ~. Z7 L) F& rI love you I love you with all my heart
2 @- M$ S7 b6 U' B9 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, |" }5 m; ?# q- U2 f: rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 }1 K5 X; e& J$ ~) r* hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& s# }- u. v: ^5 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 t* L: D5 V9 u( hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( z; W$ n1 x% v+ o$ t1 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; T) c8 x/ h' T! ]) W) c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 n4 ~# v3 L/ l2 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 P' k3 ^2 Z$ F$ j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 h  D) v  [0 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% y5 B4 @' n" u' P2 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 M- O1 Q! d7 d& _7 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, j* @9 @6 \) U+ s  L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 w7 ?# Y8 \+ Z& _# J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: B" v. M# F/ M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 j* p( |4 j8 h- P! X; `9 k) F- B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ Q+ g. ]. U) z2 t. J7 k0 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% `3 v, l  `  n/ b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ k" [$ v+ B7 {* i2 e6 S# |7 B& ~8 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. K9 |' p* L; O& o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 b6 p) b2 ?& ~4 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 j! i. {4 z1 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) I3 k7 W0 @3 S9 o1 f" I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% t7 w# s0 |9 B/ \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" W: |( m0 \# l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ d. I6 T1 W+ J; i$ B0 q" Q0 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) U( c' D. G3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 E8 X0 f% {; ?+ h+ b/ B  H( f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 l+ {4 R. P: Q% r$ Y9 B/ m/ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ [7 e3 d# O; ?& _: k  r; i8 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* \% T1 L% X( u2 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. A6 W" V8 R1 ^$ ~( ]4 y4 `0 k% X5 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
! D7 k/ h. s1 W" q2 u6 N" j0 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& g- e- d4 i. G3 D: e: t) X  u. C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 `7 A+ X0 {! X5 ^/ W8 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 O. a+ g1 P4 r: o$ V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' f* l7 `$ [4 ^( C: c0 p! Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, Z+ J' n# l3 k9 \9 w1 w6 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; S1 C2 r. _: y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 N- F* O* V. s/ z* h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 Q8 J/ _6 Q! _7 C# ^, K. z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 E8 {: \0 r9 a' z5 a2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 x* E% _- N' v" Q$ Y! V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>