【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 c/ G: L7 v5 aWith the moon kissing it every night
3 k2 q- W+ L3 D  u& u1 l% _8 @Seeing the sky content with its love
8 B2 u' x& F* tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; a" Q- f9 D2 ^0 z: a" ]# S  bYou needn’t fear anything
2 @: E" V' ?& a* vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! b. Y; y- @8 D, I* \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) n: `: R- {5 j0 Z; Q/ a& i  PI love you I love you with all my heart
/ C* ?' M5 y. XNothing can compare to my love
& l' y( F, o5 Z" xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" a6 @( E  X. Z4 i6 w! J7 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, ]1 X  M! {+ g, k( Q" ~; {I’m still filled with fear
. D" B% D  G( G. q' ^! e7 s- x, j+ {  |" lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ [% C+ B$ |2 H7 \5 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X3 U- F/ s3 {9 n$ k7 D6 gWith such a tongue as yours,
7 {" m/ j  ?+ Q7 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" [5 B" V: ^' U) C0 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* X9 y6 M( [" p3 O4 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; q9 c' O0 _) j  C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( z) [( S( X( K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) n6 H" D$ g3 ]# `+ }* Y% e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 A5 ~+ ~5 |0 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  t* h2 s8 f! o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( h; ~* R  P* s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# n$ h  v/ r) e) t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 q( M3 E$ d$ a( C4 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 u8 {7 y" [: H: k% y+ ^+ t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" |' T1 B5 {9 m. T4 u( z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- R! O  p: u2 F0 i- R( j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* Z" F- o8 q, D8 J) \8 e" y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 C, [" W' m& X! m- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Y6 A$ z  E1 r: S$ G2 ?& Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( O5 N! r! j0 ~, }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ^+ o' S$ v1 @) n( X& n( o& A% a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 q2 ?0 k+ D/ E/ y  `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 X  x) n. H: R' z1 @' y2 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# U( u4 h6 _' s+ O! D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 h5 H; b" B, ~( f; ^; M5 @4 S我请你剖开它
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# A% M7 |- Y% S# n8 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>