【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% W% e" F  N: f4 N5 V4 X7 b, TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( w3 h, L! u4 k& r6 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?$ q1 t& G+ n+ J7 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ v, l8 u5 u4 O3 Y5 [) D( VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( E, ?6 z3 t& D9 a6 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ L4 p& `; h/ sEvery other word you utter is love
' ]' S# W7 F3 \7 ~: u% @1 \! eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! P6 p: n% ^% \0 |" T) ~+ tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 k- s% l6 ~+ I/ P' _" q5 C1 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) \* y0 O7 C6 ~  B3 e6 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, E. d- w$ _2 Q) o4 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# ~4 q: i: P" ]( j) M9 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ^& ^/ x( M2 ~' _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 `3 m# M- u6 Q4 E% S& R$ [" `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# F* I) m' J% C4 p% T2 y0 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# U: {4 V$ q) I) E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& C  A8 V+ X. l" @" O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- a; o4 i* D! E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 O( M, H9 z- f: j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' h, P0 t; d# u1 F) [9 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  \4 r; u  `, u" T$ i9 ^2 C' O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. x. V8 X( F1 x! h7 |/ B6 y! g& o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& \% b7 f7 f' ?  ^! k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% s& ^0 I# d3 [* J0 B. P+ i4 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ^' e7 m" W0 z' z. g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 R$ j; P4 L0 G9 B  N) q+ C( [; k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- U. ]% s4 ^# i4 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 G5 o: s4 ~- ~/ X- o5 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" r# v# f) }. V- }/ R% }; z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! b4 g. f) p7 j# \7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; A5 I+ M5 n1 t9 X1 B! o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 p/ Y# m) `. V+ F: w/ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' W# x+ j9 q( g8 S5 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 {9 E! C" @  R* v<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 O7 w0 J7 K2 `4 p/ U# @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ y+ y8 g6 }& c% L0 {7 M/ `+ \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* W% {' [& y, ~/ ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 N- {9 ?' n! C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ H2 U' U- p+ D' B& a9 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ I9 V( s* c6 w, L$ o" F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ l  T$ O3 p  q+ l/ j+ a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>