【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ^+ s1 V/ O+ k7 W歌词我附在后面。
' Z& |8 _6 ?  h4 S8 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 L# n' s' c! G- C2 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
& G, u3 y' Y- Q' LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% q" l/ O  B* x" fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  t+ q: w  M  v/ M2 {; V2 _  vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* O9 |$ H; e# t8 P9 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ X0 S# q4 o7 j, X/ iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 u- d" a2 L6 R- F: Z0 s' U. BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 M* M+ o! _% W. _6 B, qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- b' Z2 V$ V0 L% \8 H9 [& Y4 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- L% z( I8 I/ C: l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- u4 g  M8 m( v2 q2 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 ~! s, H; J/ _% q1 m( c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: h6 `& x( M+ a3 q/ _- Y: P" G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; O5 C7 J, r  I5 B0 k3 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 u2 s9 s) W% {* k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( k! ^7 d) Y& x+ I$ h/ @  Y2 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 W4 \7 Z3 I/ F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. d+ k8 u% U- Q/ E) h' W/ L% \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 z/ }6 j9 J& Q- W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 B1 n: a% t  s1 M* |6 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) k. s. _, V* l7 P3 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( z+ {0 j& V' Z# t! t6 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ n* m' ^: T, E6 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- M! Y3 e8 Z4 K+ l% F7 E, i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ R) v2 o- I; Q- X( j! b# h0 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 c, t+ Q1 v; u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 q" |1 w$ G3 X2 w$ [; s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 A$ W; j) p6 z1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 e7 q5 ~/ c  P" g/ D7 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* o& B0 c- F7 @- i' t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& G9 M1 g* `( i; v4 w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 i+ U7 m9 X) D0 ]5 F/ a- j: S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( B/ n& y$ g/ M0 l& E" M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& b, D' o! q# T9 x1 F我请你剖开它

: {9 N8 b+ k( U8 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>