【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ R: E% L6 {9 _7 x! H. C2 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 q# y: D( Y3 w+ O) J4 X4 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- a( r! |4 B) \% NSeeing the sky content with its love
: u" n: }! f3 z8 |* y: u: F% _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% F# P; \8 e' e/ r: DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 K: K! ]9 \1 b# O4 P% DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ p! f6 H7 Z9 y& h( Y: kNothing can compare to my love
" R. V3 t& W8 Y4 p- e( ~' L* k: iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 _3 @6 a  O( R& F9 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) j( q$ V4 g3 F' a! C$ ^3 L6 S' I% \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 S" I* V# l  r6 m' w: _. L& X. KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 u# X: D2 c. l. MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 f( j! \% u5 N% q. R( b) F) X( B! ?1 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' \* O# d1 m7 N) c  l. `- T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ y! a6 g) J) z1 V7 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 w, T7 [$ {7 ^9 B6 m9 D+ E1 h' h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- D7 e' a* v. ^6 x6 T* F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 o7 \& O- x2 T; v. f; ~; I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' w- w7 ^$ I; v- o/ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 t/ S6 u# C& i) H$ r) W1 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& z- s9 l5 E2 ^8 v6 o7 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 x% M5 g) m) V: v; ^) E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, o7 P1 I! t& Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' D; A: }) w/ @1 X& A- N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; g1 F3 F3 N* T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  S+ M% h+ X. r0 W) Y2 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! F( _* {9 v$ [) s# X5 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 n# n$ S' n- d& U' B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 o6 C! B& T( a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 H4 t( r. L3 o" D1 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! @4 [  r! V* F3 I% o, c) G8 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  G3 d% h  c+ \: ~: T- ^; O  o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 M0 M, j; t. W5 m$ Q7 ?/ Z1 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 A! o& i) G$ t  Z; ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 J+ |' a: \8 d# n3 J' e4 [1 Y; D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  V0 g5 T) z. F9 B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 C, n- S* r2 z, a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>