【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ D) B( h8 H$ u( L6 v1 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 Y4 y$ L, d9 A  ?" P7 hWith the moon kissing it every night
/ @$ ^0 `! j, a- xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# K% _& M; P1 W+ z; J0 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ T7 q* ?5 D8 G# x  B) ~% x9 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: n# ^6 ]$ ^5 ]) iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: J' c) Y  D' F4 MI’m still filled with fear
, S* H" R5 G. R! e( Y- wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 m1 L5 d4 I0 r% B! @3 HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 g2 S# }5 ^6 s( q% L. KWith such a tongue as yours,
2 {7 d* t0 `* R) `% z9 m. R! sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ i  _2 U# O. W7 ?: URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. c3 t" _: Y+ e# ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( B8 x: E, i0 f) u0 g; a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ a( }/ R8 H0 s' a& S' |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* o; {* z* d6 m, `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 {  h" a4 j7 v$ z1 x2 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' W1 T& E& K$ o. \6 N, ~4 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ?  `, L! C3 D' h5 K% I) N. k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# q7 s9 a6 D$ W' f( f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, a. B) }8 E. K8 v; {& O<P>你无需担心</P>
3 L5 ?. E- W+ h' \$ d0 _/ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 V. y4 E- U# s7 N0 C1 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# X4 b$ v6 t! X2 R0 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- \2 O% c4 H5 U0 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 h* }: \( o* p* A& ^9 S  Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ a1 b: j. I9 q! O+ W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" x/ i; I6 ]# v6 f1 Y0 H6 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& [, T# @; e1 a. @1 S  E5 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- |  ]- Y2 D; o% s: @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# @0 e- F/ v. f& [( q- U8 O& \7 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 i; J( l* L. o, g9 R( K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# L' e  e; d& b4 c, y4 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- Z8 \, S( \& Y' e( n9 j8 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 e! W8 e4 O  c6 @/ X6 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
: c& j4 q2 o5 N% V: m$ M, b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. i) J% C3 |+ f9 k6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% k2 K) C+ N+ v# ]6 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' l1 W2 `! p, D) @5 R3 X3 I$ o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 A$ V# P8 V+ J) n6 K$ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: f( u6 I. \# ?& M& f% _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' T4 A3 e( ]4 k, k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ l- Y! |. g1 z6 M! P: Z1 q. V' w" s
我请你剖开它
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. J; C) |1 c* V: {1 q% m" F! ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& j& n$ \+ B* T+ [, J7 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>