【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) Z, h( Z4 U& p' n) d6 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 l& G+ S  q- \2 P' Y) eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# m! @* y1 s8 c9 W7 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 `/ e- _. [- }% W& f4 [$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; ?' y- a0 R. ^5 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! g$ s. d4 @1 q6 g( m0 l% B: P6 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 c9 {- p* D& e& t3 ^. |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 [! O3 k' \3 H8 f# Y& Q8 h+ w0 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l1 X9 g9 }6 t5 p/ s% Z% d4 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ {( O) H- C! S" S5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, S0 \2 S6 }$ {7 C; M+ n, x  D8 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" Y% l( t% J0 h+ @. V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 n3 U9 [- r; v8 i0 V# J" I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# g$ H# ]/ S9 g$ Y# J& {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# l9 b" y0 w" w5 C4 R3 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" w4 j2 L4 d& ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 g; d" Q! Z, q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- F& `- }5 {( u7 ^" v- I- {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* j* [1 w# F- B5 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: ?: M3 `9 S$ j, D$ U/ @8 {7 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 O4 Q+ _) V; L, g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( e- Y" q- I- Q, J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 d7 ]3 [6 a! ^, R<P>你无需担心</P>
. W  J( M. F; m/ o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ B0 u0 `9 ^8 [7 `, t& U5 J  \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 }9 E: E( v4 N$ `7 F' o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. t; V% M; U0 Y0 l2 [9 ^  S3 _; p) N+ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ p( f3 ?, y( n% J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. _) A& W& a2 L! K+ b. s6 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; @# {! j; M4 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& C/ J- {: O( n3 T& J3 ]- Y+ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- H( m: e' u' M" Z. V+ \8 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ f& L9 _5 b: R! ~* T" x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. t& a) @' A$ h  ?( U1 e9 O, V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: K  Z7 E# q4 M0 e+ I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* P2 V& y& d7 ?3 J8 K% B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% i/ p/ f# ^2 A' a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ d! x  B# p. v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. I( x3 A# p+ x% `# ]: H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ]) h0 m& O) l  t  Z, Q% W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 i7 W2 W" v2 W2 e, m0 H: P% l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  @+ p# m5 B, U1 F7 o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>