【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; N/ l9 F6 x: A0 J9 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 F- t6 r! g% mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 @3 e$ G( i3 e% }7 V# J6 qSeeing the sky content with its love
% I5 V5 }3 s" \- V' y, [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' |3 N& ^- l% `You needn’t fear anything
$ `5 E, J0 N6 `7 @( {; y: XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, f4 O, {' r: ]# V* I9 D$ |$ LI really want to know just how much you love me
! D. e( S. ~% u, YI love you I love you with all my heart
1 N; Y: n  `( ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 l# y  B" ]7 j0 Z! PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& `8 _1 a7 Q  Q% ^2 s6 P6 iI want so much to see inside your heart
/ z9 g- u8 a! N# x: w1 r. d4 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% q( |# G- m' F$ gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) ?7 ?9 T% F# n- {% P8 UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 X9 K! ^( v/ w" V1 _7 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 @$ k1 D: g- Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  k  l# h" R7 c7 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 i/ C" ]) o9 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; O" h4 S- W' N5 r- ]+ n' z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 h: L+ v4 D8 J: T/ }1 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 [$ a' }7 F- f% B0 Z5 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" a0 ]1 l% ^7 S- D7 v/ P1 J9 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; R0 z/ n! g( [% s5 O- T; S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ V3 n9 M& m" R9 s* j8 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# q- `* m' x1 n$ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  g3 C. v) d) B; T- N* C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! b* K3 h5 b3 [: g8 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 @. Z" i, x* B0 x" q) ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" E2 V. S% \- `. K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# L, [' n% r! w  l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! T$ ^; W; ^1 M: ?# @; {) q& ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 G. n3 \0 [- g3 ^( a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ X/ A7 {/ Q# c2 i6 r& S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, P  \, ~4 w8 B' `- ~3 |& b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 u7 e  P! F% T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 @$ ?, i, n" ^: H/ D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 k4 U. t" G8 s9 ~( \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 j5 _& i8 t4 s! n8 q- a' [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 y4 p% T* z6 I& j5 u6 o: K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>