【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  q- o) W" a, ]3 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 t1 c4 {; @1 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 }7 n5 ]' e4 L- {- rWith the moon kissing it every night
0 V! m- m; a; U: s8 l) tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ?4 ~7 ^" b$ ?7 HYou needn’t fear anything
! E0 p( D& W& p( }) k3 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 k7 a$ }; S4 Y9 e" P. d) \0 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  \8 `1 I( b% U2 ]" O$ }2 ?1 g5 u: \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ o; v( U& z! n3 E+ I3 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. G5 _0 F, f- ]" h5 ~7 cI’m still filled with fear
" n7 C# b0 k& }- D3 g8 I& Y8 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& u- k: ]/ @: Y& F2 M* X( ?3 o3 u9 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 t$ D& v5 Z  |& t4 z0 I. wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) j/ @* D! i5 ^  Q. T$ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, j9 j+ L. L* ]' {  Z: ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 }, ~+ ^1 B" o4 a* u6 B) F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  [: v, h* ~" R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 T- x/ ~; z2 p" X: k2 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 i0 B0 V4 X5 x- ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ e( H/ c) b& q* E: }6 b, p3 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, F4 L% y9 x' k# z5 t/ _3 D  O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 a! ?7 e- r" m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 c. E) s9 ^& T& |, W: B" J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ]7 U% D% s4 o( p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  W+ b- j0 o; H4 d5 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 Q. C) g$ ], N; A% q: U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ ?. l" N1 k7 O8 _! O, `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- j" ~) k$ J  b) [8 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 N* ?; U9 q# I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 J& @+ m2 {9 D/ e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 E/ A! ?2 j. L" y+ g7 j# m/ h; C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 X  V3 E( S0 A4 D: Q9 e9 f$ [- B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 j6 J# T: ]/ A1 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: Y# X8 m5 z1 O: P* }/ K3 e; U<P>I regret not dying</P>
% t$ G7 K. S: M+ ?1 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 i6 U* t7 M4 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& l' W  v5 v# z5 c$ w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* u. |: ~# X3 u$ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' T+ l! G$ s/ Z$ r7 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 W4 o4 y# ]+ c, |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ x$ W2 {$ t) y5 F: Y" ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" m! h! R  H! y3 ?& o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>