【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. |9 Q7 j% s9 {9 |0 }5 N6 `歌词我附在后面。
9 b2 ^% p3 V/ G, A/ KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. Q; q5 K# N% o$ rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; u: [* B2 P4 {. p! D, iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 |0 j, a( m" W, Y! DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# @. `* N0 e3 d- e+ x4 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* R2 e1 B2 k3 q" u; W; M. c! [7 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: i, \3 A3 [; |0 {* R4 _: RI love you I love you with all my heart
: \! |$ y5 {6 I& YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) @; A4 R; l  }. }, o6 HI regret not dying
( ^" k" e2 q; I- o+ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' m8 @3 e% X" HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 s% U" v3 Y# pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 Z) t& |+ s. r2 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; O7 f7 r: j0 w$ Z$ k8 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* o% ?  l  |0 P+ o. L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 I! }/ X+ R' N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 M9 b0 h1 w: N: v- \9 Z  q9 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Q& _! ?( w% I* m: U8 x3 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 y, \  s5 g  R8 t$ _# z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 i! J+ t0 e; s0 T# ^' g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* j: B! t' D' ^; I' X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! p/ B+ O3 X! e; T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. C+ z+ k( A' X1 r: u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( O. h) S% D% V& j* P9 I& E6 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ p8 T. x9 g9 L" F3 R& b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 v/ p5 \6 ~# k: v+ J0 C; d1 J" w- k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 F+ E$ x) O5 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 e( b1 B, L4 f9 m/ E/ Q4 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 p: }0 k4 @! k) ^; ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  `' y! z* |( k7 A' [+ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  A$ z) z- |/ b* d" v2 H7 w. i0 I. K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 d5 z4 Q: @9 h7 s; C6 q# f3 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* U$ k) @. @0 f; l, s/ f- |2 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& W9 a/ O0 n2 J! T' A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' s7 r4 ~- J) f5 _& a; c1 y& Y. q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>