【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- f/ h+ H0 K. H: tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ \1 Q! `( o2 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 i) t$ G0 h" E5 C0 _1 S% \5 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. k: t% B6 K! Q6 L  Y' O- @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; @( ?9 l$ f5 a; x4 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) [- _4 C% Z4 I' F0 a! r; k1 s1 TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# [7 x; R+ d0 n) eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% e7 m2 {9 e7 k6 A  T$ L4 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ~! |" e3 L3 c* R0 ~8 T! KI want so much to see inside your heart
7 O6 h/ _; q( Y6 z( u0 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Z  J5 a2 P  A4 H. h! }! g6 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 }2 t3 Z( d  C- pI regret not dying
' X! @/ g6 @" w5 Y* w) ~% O' j7 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ Y0 [' z) e1 G1 d0 n! u) XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ p6 Y' c: A' h& L" N8 x7 d6 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 j1 j0 L! ?& I) h# i. U8 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' i  A8 r) |2 j! l4 V3 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* F) c9 l4 H, M# Q) Q* A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! M( n5 Y( e) G* r# n- V! b( g9 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- }! v# Z" g* R5 r) y( ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" G6 W) Z+ G. q0 Z4 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 U+ K  l1 b+ X+ I2 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& J9 n6 q. M* j& h7 a1 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ^* B7 E4 `: C$ f) C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) p! F/ }( f5 d5 Q6 \) @; a! o% h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ O$ P4 L) i+ G2 Z1 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 G- o* k2 L; k) k# {3 x2 J" q/ I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! C3 J$ i" Z; S9 u5 Z* @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( w4 J6 S9 v6 v) p5 m9 U1 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% `: f: l& F& K* }# r- ~' {( s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ~1 _& J. \# S6 z3 k( ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 I" }0 V. p2 n4 u0 L) z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 W" p* h- ^) {+ Y+ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 o. D7 Q* w7 A' p3 c  E2 b$ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 M! d6 s7 s4 S" {: V  q; y+ e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 X; h/ m+ p9 M6 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; I. D! H0 ~2 }) N* T% ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l- W0 b! e3 `: g4 F! a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: k# Z2 q2 T. K& Q8 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Y. [; W) X9 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Q5 O" k2 o" o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>