【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) l7 h! J2 g/ [8 M' q. L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, a1 P' t/ [6 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  [4 h' `& B4 S- `* vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) R* Y+ N+ |4 L1 b' y! H( IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 X, l1 t2 n9 R  U4 MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* c+ V; v9 _* Y9 D3 o4 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 x% G' C% ?3 {) C: d8 M( iNothing can compare to my love
$ f" C% n& s: v  i; R6 b* g9 J* uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ \& h* ?% m$ B  W8 N$ R2 SI want so much to see inside your heart
( \  x- ~7 d, V8 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 K+ o6 Y3 W0 zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# y7 E) v* X: S/ z7 g" bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 p% C8 r) {+ ]; {) HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) x8 G! [  L% o- N4 p0 `' n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. G# b5 j1 w0 ]4 |6 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 c8 D% s$ a9 `' z9 b5 G3 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 q( k' D/ D, E5 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. r5 r: |( U% X2 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- R, W8 @+ I2 x9 X$ G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 T. W3 W& ^3 M- E0 h( l* V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* B$ A- i/ M- v  M/ S# {- o+ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: O/ g, r; ]: y- N; N" B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. p2 B% ~0 A* J* E<P>你无需担心</P>
; U5 N$ A/ [7 q5 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; M6 I- y, J8 r; I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& s1 D4 O  [$ E* b- t- z6 L7 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 x$ p1 ]" M* s8 h, e: U9 v) f* I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  I0 S/ g" Y' D0 i2 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; W3 I- {0 E1 U) T! H+ \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  w% T) X1 u) D/ t' K5 M/ o  d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) X3 @3 y$ q; |% _" O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 U3 N2 t" J/ y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& C) O+ p! G8 x5 J; d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. o) O! y+ d: S' f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 [, N' x" F5 a+ i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  m7 ~  _( F+ ~; R# ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ N4 t" s( G0 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 k0 q9 l; E* X7 T) k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 a" H% c2 y8 ]2 H  s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" ^' p" A) }, y/ e" C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ ^& z! ^) U; g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; b  Y2 I& i: E2 Z2 e6 o! E2 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>