【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: p0 D; ?: \0 z& ^/ _歌词我附在后面。
7 D- K$ Q" Q2 u& C- XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* S; p! q/ o+ y8 d' f+ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& C% G  @# U9 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
: W! t( v. M5 `( g: k4 [With the moon kissing it every night
6 m. p/ G; c& F& y1 [. {  mSeeing the sky content with its love
, |0 w' k( P' I! N% xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" |, i) G/ n' d0 |+ bYou needn’t fear anything
. T  Z  g7 R$ _; ^: w! iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 r5 s% j1 m; d" }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; l  ~" |4 o# D% ~# ]2 ^+ J. ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- C$ O/ @/ P* O2 F9 E- f  QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) X+ n0 [3 Q  t" l+ W8 qI regret not dying
1 ?9 k; b3 |+ v8 b  ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ k' a% f. B  I2 ~; H% sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ o* M8 b3 n! d) w& q6 C) |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; }; G; b7 n. _0 b9 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ]( i1 H- c' i& {. ]* D# G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; _, ~& m9 R. p; z  B/ C/ Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! q' Q$ R1 m) @, R! @/ R5 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 m8 O) R4 `( e+ S1 z! K3 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 a) Q# \0 A$ F; w: p0 `. \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 w' u! \: q1 M6 t  E5 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 X. a2 N& r0 |! j  E" n& s3 Q% i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 `# g' ~  j: E0 L" i' w0 ?; H0 |8 ^8 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 p+ G; z! d( H1 d/ ^( z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 G4 J& L( G" Z/ v. L% h, {4 c- I' K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Z4 O+ N, @5 T4 w) a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! v. Y+ e. |4 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' z9 P# t' |& u3 l) P9 a: s- p# P  `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ N* T! e- e. k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 W' t3 P( P4 _! s8 O$ @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ f% v( Y) F0 Z* Q1 B( i% Y4 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 Z# W) A' @5 i& n. K4 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 [" s0 X9 ?. Y  c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 F. R. F% D5 i1 v7 I7 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 k5 R, _( W. t9 s% X1 F' n- X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 j( I+ ?  W* A1 ]* F3 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" m7 s2 H3 [5 S: l  v! c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 T5 v! l, t% ?4 c3 g$ o+ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 n. v5 x. [9 k# v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: }+ m6 x3 h* y; K. Y( K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 a  L) b- ~6 C' H( S, h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H2 l8 A$ w9 t! f3 U8 v+ ?, V2 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 Y/ {- f, q+ Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  d! |+ t; S9 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 G) Y* I) `  j) n1 J$ e6 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) H' Y% ~1 g7 }& p6 u$ j, r( ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 }9 M$ T! ^- {. `! {) |$ Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" `0 E+ k* V/ U6 e" c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ b5 S# q% Z! ?/ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" w0 @! o- ~0 ?7 g9 v; ~' n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- V: L8 M3 t; i0 i我请你剖开它

/ R/ }! }4 _# o+ d8 w# w5 V$ o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i% q, T3 }! M- Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>