【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 p0 O$ a1 h: {1 z% D歌词我附在后面。
) ~& O, a( z! R* N& }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. p. G9 L7 n: D" Y7 L* C1 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 O0 j9 m/ c3 M/ L6 V3 {' OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) _+ [6 ]' ~# B4 ~" K6 ~. rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- g7 q. q3 g6 B7 |0 d; c2 |% m$ {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 t3 |' o, `4 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 ?* V7 G7 J6 ?/ [2 O1 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; ^; o0 [" ~3 v# h! w# U7 |+ JI want so much to see inside your heart
4 V+ N0 U" i0 d: V+ kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 i( b4 C$ h3 u' `6 V. \. c: S7 BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( a0 G: E3 J$ j7 K! ]I regret not dying
! s, n1 ]$ w$ TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ A" _$ m. e& t3 Q, \' [* |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( r9 u6 h- h! Q% W) j) r0 Y; y" IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ c0 e9 s1 Q7 v7 l9 W3 E7 \* o" CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# p$ Q  ?) F% y2 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 B! w( i1 w/ X! ^& O. R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& [* B  s& M4 i+ K1 [1 `; I- D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" `, Y0 i# C) A7 f" d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' b) D. {1 m, x' {, r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! H, a  h4 N* S# I" I0 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% E9 k5 {/ X' Y  h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 T' n/ M- `, k# ~8 S9 c, K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 |3 |" y: c' t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 Z5 [: @- I8 l1 x0 j& f" z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ B% e* A9 ^# V$ R% }% q! i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 _  {9 G+ D. e0 G) Z' o0 _0 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, F$ `& y6 ?& ^) F7 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& Z8 a3 v% x/ Z6 j3 x: R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. Q+ r. E8 n2 H+ ^- `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" ^$ Q5 s( P; H) C- M' Z9 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 T  h: |- y3 }; \/ B* d' N& j# ~; P6 [1 ?9 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( c6 c6 F7 K% X1 z3 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" c/ f6 f8 p' E- P3 T- O+ ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d+ \: `8 ]7 q' U3 K- S( Y! ~4 D, g$ s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 ^% a1 |1 P  w+ B) r0 N+ I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- p/ p* l" ?3 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ y4 [# Q: L3 n' u2 `5 u6 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 V' l) B- z1 f! z7 n( h9 [1 B0 Y2 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, g" p( I0 @; e) F: X2 y* u" O% x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 T, g- E3 U' C! ?( e3 e" B% O6 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ]. k% b+ I" N% t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>