【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ l! ~* A$ G- e: x; @3 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ T9 H1 `0 M: H4 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 N9 b' z( m- ^! [0 n  wWith the moon kissing it every night
9 W9 x! T5 V+ Q7 H9 L, l; @4 gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" `0 ^4 _. s  Q) E7 B/ x/ r# T- dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! D6 ^5 e! i3 m  W8 Y+ }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) D- Q: v+ j1 G: `5 n4 J# U- oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 \1 X1 Y, k, I! r  k5 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% ~. V' g! B; C6 \$ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 V6 d4 k# p8 P  U$ ?. }4 k, _5 _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 f' r; r' w& z0 C* y! |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 P/ j9 Y4 L* A3 Y4 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; [. Y0 R; h4 N' `8 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 K4 c2 X$ S( v: f' O. d& ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 E' ]- N- ^. R3 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 U  F2 o2 h1 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; O& {7 A% l9 E, o9 ^6 e1 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 C8 h0 ?4 U- x/ E+ H/ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 v8 }# U7 ^7 W0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 q1 s: W1 J; A" @. c% U( Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: B  Y. c/ e) ]8 R2 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: G& Y( A- r8 V" s3 s: o$ e6 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 B" c1 ]& a+ L3 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 m/ q+ k7 c5 ]2 P: Q. J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 s8 m! X/ l4 U7 K" `, s1 R  V* k9 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 u. t& `) Z+ Q, X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  r9 `# {, K% F7 C! K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* W  k" ~  ~9 s- \9 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 \, `  x6 m8 {' W" Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. X: U( d+ E1 W% M0 x& S1 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 L4 x/ B: `$ y1 d/ r$ n0 ]1 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ e1 t4 R: }& m# k' [5 ?6 M/ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ H# Q: v( h) N) v<P>I regret not dying</P>
; M- X/ a, ~; J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 N" b1 O7 j+ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# Z/ ]* C5 k$ W7 F5 Q8 D  x6 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m# K$ i" \( S5 m# V3 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 v+ X- x2 Q  u& j$ x1 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 c) i/ l2 s9 y1 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! j" b) g# v: X7 F# p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# K! {3 k9 r) n9 o/ G3 H# \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 O3 r8 p) t9 h2 ]- E2 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) G- {# n' Q4 v. x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>