【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* E% B# w8 o9 n  QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 Z. a8 d8 f! [# [- R) f( p5 [$ f. mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. l+ R5 P2 q: \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 {$ U2 B) V5 p, n% WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. k5 W! P! z1 q( c0 pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& T, [9 N* Y7 p, H; g( o% jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) p- g- ~# P8 U/ S# N4 z5 q0 QI want so much to see inside your heart
1 j: A: v- f$ ~" G- |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 d+ b+ ~" a( A( _I’m still filled with fear
/ W4 {. R* E* H; A  w9 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- [5 i: C& a7 D4 _I regret not dying
7 p8 ]: S! m$ PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 e, I$ g1 I& f+ ~2 m5 d6 ], gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ d& J  {+ c3 T; D; u3 n6 o; j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ]4 y  k" F. U" ]# A7 f8 w1 f- B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 S2 u5 j! a. T& Y* z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 m2 d. }) e* [* N! ?+ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 @* {: u5 O/ ]2 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ M/ ]* l/ X8 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 N$ t" [3 m7 Y( l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 T+ ~* S0 A$ z. X* I. H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' p9 j8 F" K# G2 z3 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% c) H' m% q) \# B* G& J" G% ^! y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! e) b" Z- U: f% C% \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ]$ e1 r" j+ s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 o: `7 O5 M$ X; a9 e% p* e) a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) f0 @- k- B; ?( q9 `" z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 D; Z7 i' O1 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# \5 ?  v6 D+ r3 j2 o4 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" P/ U7 k% X" \4 n1 ?6 }- N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ b% ?7 i$ H; I2 ]) Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 u7 C8 L) C2 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; I. d1 D1 ^. C* x# p  L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ U" Z2 i. m' z  \( G" y9 \( z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 ^) C" O1 W. V, B0 z7 e' L$ d9 C& A, I<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 T! V- a; m7 `( V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! n% z' |0 V- ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ F+ m1 M" c% p0 K3 N* [0 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& o! D+ {9 {8 P/ O1 [" ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% v: w& {2 X# j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ]  u( f9 ?' X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>