【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ N: c" R. E& j4 H- d+ D0 B( yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& Y$ s$ {- {/ X' I& oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( L; ~; O7 w6 H5 w+ V$ oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) n% j. J8 D: i9 H. x3 q2 }$ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 z& U  n) ?( P9 Y* S) O. ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 }3 [6 m0 f% U; h* SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 m2 L# m8 E( ~7 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- K$ I+ A% j4 a! ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 B& o' t- j1 c0 i, l: K  ^8 E# CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 c- a- F+ P0 n% p" Y6 ^/ G5 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, b" D# t) O$ x1 ^1 tI regret not dying
; B' H3 O; e( k% {2 g( T, [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 X# U' J4 h: j( w2 o* }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ v3 Z. z6 D6 `; k5 V0 q9 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 X! ^% I5 x9 y( x  ?& `% w+ m% CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# ~! y% [  q: R% }; H1 L  o( n% i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 H: _( Y: Y/ O8 B+ S! _* [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ s5 {# ~5 u2 p$ U+ n' I) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# k2 V: }/ c# |; J/ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 @  C$ I' f% x  D4 T( h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) `8 s' Z/ z8 X3 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 j6 `! \+ X1 p! T' x& l) q& |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; v  i0 M) B2 f( M* j4 s* ^, b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- l0 G1 s7 q9 v3 }- y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  n; ~% ~: Q) `( q4 w3 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: [6 x( Z+ I  H0 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Y- _* r& j' P( B# ?" i! v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) e  N! I9 T7 y# b1 C1 R6 w5 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ N3 e7 l1 C" z9 B# v' l9 Q$ n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 C" |8 E# c( l+ ?' Z: H. u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, C& E& a3 O% B  @+ m; G0 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 M1 [( ^! y4 e" b% g! T- t+ q# t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" t4 U5 a! _: ^. W! D7 r; W2 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" l, U# C) N' n$ `" V& \' v0 A2 F1 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, Z" H8 y3 c5 P( ~8 I9 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  k6 U/ D% O! K# t* r* s$ [. `5 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- N2 t( [: H- d* ^, W5 D5 D: j- _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( V5 y- N8 N8 |8 C- V, i% V& w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 t# @3 U" J0 m( A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& j; N5 ~1 r7 x$ s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 P/ x4 j8 U* H* e- q: I$ _) v4 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ~. A& H: W9 a0 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ l6 C% ]- u5 I4 K# ?: y" `% [( F! X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 ?0 H2 G4 ?0 _" K# t! a; o: Y6 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- R* F, D! ?" P3 K0 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ N$ @( H/ a- @5 x. c, h2 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>