【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% u2 }5 f6 E! P6 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 ^2 T8 x: w* k8 T) QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& X! R, i0 f. b2 T' hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% p7 \( Z7 l6 C% K% F( e; o3 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ {1 H' c- c% L5 _" J" _4 @You needn’t fear anything
& N  Z" Y3 j+ l$ M4 f8 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 L9 B% K' v2 q- P  h0 D( _. mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 t6 {; N1 n8 v: s4 h8 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 o* D: B0 y5 r, {* @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ {; H1 C  E! w' U8 Y' ]With such a tongue as yours,
0 y( h# o/ ^7 l7 s8 o+ w3 e0 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& i8 N. A0 N) Q1 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 \8 l" m5 O: H( o' ?  J  A  }) I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 B! |4 n, X5 v$ I9 ^" |; O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- l: a% p( F( ?5 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 z% |# b4 b+ [# E, G/ `0 w8 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' G  H7 @# I) H& W6 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* l2 n9 _/ g/ h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! T% c$ v. v; q& N3 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. @8 P% e- W  u5 q# \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 @& X) y. e- ~0 V' Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( |3 i* y! c% C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' W- Z1 a0 M: L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) a" l, u0 c3 r: G# R# X5 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- P. w+ T1 D6 o) ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 f; \' T1 F" O! a! Q& Y' k9 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- {- ~9 u* \9 @2 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 w+ M6 i" d% N5 j. S# C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ a+ n( m+ g; T7 |( F3 o' q2 ?/ I' B" {1 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% F* d  t( f& m, g" O' z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 q. X8 d) J7 K) ^5 Q! Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J7 _$ s: I4 \: ^. [/ T9 \$ ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" J# L* K" S) D' x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- o4 Q: g2 w- e4 ]6 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( @* x+ s$ \. g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 k5 ^* I# H& Z0 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>