【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& x! E/ e8 J) d! h8 }6 Y' S歌词我附在后面。
9 j) C. Y, U" ?- H) Z" mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* c: |. i- Z8 G& b( K; n  NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# l4 A3 t. T1 q: g- C" AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ m6 R9 J% N- V% hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ x6 `% [5 |2 S/ q$ u2 b" [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  R4 v  W  O- \4 [; _; `: N, PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, N* }7 R+ E/ j+ rI regret not dying
0 j% A1 o5 |! g: Q, \8 F' h* N5 m- |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 e, k" Y; t5 c- QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ o  p5 J6 s/ ]/ K7 U& [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; w# L4 K2 e" e2 g! Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 m; ~# U4 z* F% i6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! Q! Y# v# ^( \7 ~1 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 ~/ z7 o' v" Q" Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 U: m% r7 N" `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% m3 O; ^1 Y# Y5 d+ ]( A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% Q1 I7 T/ r0 Y0 ?0 b3 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! R! d" a) a$ J% k1 a1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! t5 a3 C6 [3 e4 N2 x1 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ z5 h7 P/ M% Q+ S& W; x# a: R* ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 C' i5 m/ e# U( b  h9 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 a' d, ^( b# a1 d+ E6 o& x% Z3 M: d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 I6 E7 }: F) B3 O3 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! x" _" B, ?- B6 f& y* a1 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ~' n; _2 r# ^1 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 m( X7 @2 ^8 H# d" Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ]- _. I% `+ d4 R+ M5 a0 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; w# z/ P/ g. o* W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 z. U5 u! b: v* x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>