【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" f& r( ]6 `+ t3 Y6 O! C4 F) \0 V3 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* K! ]1 b8 r/ {. ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 J5 D5 k2 H' ^) \! HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ G  \+ @) U& z0 j/ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) k0 w- g) I3 s, z9 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 Y% h! i3 D: k$ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ L; K# r5 r8 P% s, L( {; wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 n, t/ J" a$ ?9 H+ iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 b- Z# N4 G; g( TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' A- w% m' D# ^4 S2 t, xI regret not dying
( I. u" B, T9 I1 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 b# T/ Z1 a& w5 S$ [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, p! |6 n% P2 i& v; E2 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) J: ~) Z1 M, O5 r1 E4 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( C+ e* O, [( g7 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 c7 r% s: X/ _) \6 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! w0 m/ o6 z# `) \: g( Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 y/ ]( F) S7 |; [8 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- D5 w* s- X' [5 k/ u+ Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& i, A  G, Q) s) G! I! \# \+ S6 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* j9 ~) z8 |9 B7 p) Q8 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ W* B; ~- Z% ?8 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# P1 B; y# W7 l) v4 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 w9 ~! l# f  P0 d; X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# b: u" _; Q" l9 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% M! z  D/ R$ j! `8 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ S4 D. A2 H$ }) Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ K! i  ^. c5 f' q" {8 R, P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- n6 v2 n3 z5 J4 T6 I/ a% Z; r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 w: s$ Z! z" B1 O8 w( z) K* I& c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x8 ^- V2 D6 y8 N8 S2 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 {. ^. {2 y0 n) ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( W8 b3 ^, }) z+ [5 ?. p/ R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ x6 V& }2 j" ?( y& E: B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, X6 a: y  J0 A$ m+ B  u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; H, N. [! ^% n& K6 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ \$ c$ s) b+ x0 Z. h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* F$ N) @: N* n0 {8 F, J) M$ F" R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" }: m8 v) v  E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>