【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
1 R+ W0 e5 H& s9 T0 [

- L$ S$ o0 p  X! T7 A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& p/ R  S  S/ n# y9 u- j& G1 |  }$ JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 L, Q) Q, ]& z: Y& f, BThe sky is happy down to its soul
) j" S+ T; U" l. Q% VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' n6 V# i$ [4 ?5 ~! P3 y) s: |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 k7 q& x9 _( ]" \5 x* E- _# MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 d* P, V7 i0 {4 JEvery other word you utter is love
, `- H: a+ {& e, XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 l9 f8 j) ]  C) yI’m still filled with fear
. ^) R- \  j# O+ |( ?! uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. b* l! c( V3 F, |  sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( e1 t# G+ e2 Y3 y% p. Z) j; s4 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 I1 e$ e, ]  M, I
. R, t* U, T, Z. V. L7 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' h- _  D3 c& j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ u  f5 b5 S- ?9 ^+ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ c) }" j. R' x% N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, l& M2 E7 a/ m  u, s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 a( R& M' V( i8 x. y3 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 m* ]% Z. k' u/ Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ?: \0 V4 x6 T0 F' n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, V0 F' s  B4 j8 y  o* A1 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; N; V) v0 v$ v' g$ i. E3 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ]8 k9 a. b4 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! V) _  r9 I/ h) @9 d! P<P>你无需担心</P>
, E! z' Q% A* i" p6 m! v# d  E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 x9 }7 W% a9 J. }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# Y. f' c  n: c+ \7 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 C1 {" {2 ]% P- Y' G& s/ X$ j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% V; r4 h8 \7 ?# J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ n0 a& d0 ^# c$ y8 q" {3 C; J0 u( t$ D" s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( d. U) O' O0 A4 P+ L1 n# x) G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 V: k8 e1 w# y9 @# d8 H3 Y! l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 Y8 R1 E" E' H) x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 k* I5 m3 R3 s) T& ]- e2 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! l- e5 D3 ]1 K: P8 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 f; F* j$ k7 _" K8 N5 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& G. A4 r5 V6 ]7 Y7 Q) Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  e/ f5 q) C# D! a" ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 }& h% P  B6 @8 H4 S% T/ K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" J2 f9 j4 p& F3 Z4 o5 c8 I7 ?1 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 a) j- p' O* P" z6 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# k# m" _* ]/ K  `, u# k
, Q& {9 O3 o7 p5 X/ s我请你剖开它

; R2 g# a; @: K  S; o0 @) E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
' ~; Y. v' `  |7 n/ c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>