【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" |$ p: {- U3 n7 ?1 u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ]( ?: n6 `( u; z& t) RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* J7 V& _/ A# r" Q" C4 y) f1 b+ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. l! Y. e( N$ v$ D2 q( CThe sky is happy down to its soul
* e. V8 S2 M7 j7 w0 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 y- X+ Y# N4 v  O& D7 h8 }" `7 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ]9 W, B: J, P0 E& d: f' ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 H3 L& u/ X# a. mI love you I love you with all my heart
6 R8 C+ T+ T$ P9 ?: {Nothing can compare to my love
) P# U/ s/ h+ |- I, J. N; |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( X! j; ~) w3 w- Z, cI want so much to see inside your heart
4 c$ i$ m5 R, v1 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! N' u+ _0 E# S9 a! AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) P# Z% E* @' E) X' _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ T' v$ {, M) ~$ j# z) i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 F2 r& Z7 l4 ]8 D$ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! q0 S* j; Z1 N+ `3 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 l, q( L6 q1 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" @3 _( o4 R* X6 A. r; }" L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ^+ d5 t) L+ Z! o/ y, J8 S  }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 ^- M/ U, [9 D- {, s" m9 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! Y3 ?, T) A7 Y- L' o1 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 K9 l) j& @4 M0 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 ]4 o& d2 A- a: ~0 l<P>你无需担心</P>
) @' e! U. W9 V7 x# ]& a( n$ \( J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 |$ p! o# H" P/ g  {9 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% a  c% X; O' c9 V  r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 E! s8 B7 |0 L) _  K6 J) l) v. E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" Z& Z. I6 I. C4 ?- g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ^" ]4 p# I: z" U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ]2 u1 t9 d7 Z& r* k9 Q3 A' a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 }( t" D4 n( b0 q' i0 k) @7 b+ z0 m  i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& A5 }: I3 G: N7 E+ x$ d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 m; v  N$ }) P2 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 _% V! E1 t& _' m- F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 l' f( q4 v; X4 h8 }3 a& \, C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( T- C; O* P, F, B6 i9 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ W5 I5 n9 D; g: N9 U- i" \! o) L7 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( e+ }3 P1 ~; C% @) c+ y) H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 V! }+ {2 c5 _  h- E7 B. i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( |+ n3 {7 l8 F/ d2 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 }9 I( Y3 E7 c5 t% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ X. I; Y, \  a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>