【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ @$ I0 o) [" L9 c' nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 k4 D1 z, M( m( U5 _: G2 Q$ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ E3 Z1 s+ X2 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% q5 a! q# J6 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ V' Q3 p6 B6 x, f, nI really want to know just how much you love me
$ A: {0 D' A8 x# ?7 H  H3 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; E3 c) ?, x) r8 Q1 Y- OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" C/ u/ w: B" P0 l& U5 y5 W( C- t' T1 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& I' X1 d& e7 }! J! d# \$ gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 V) A! E, k# H0 c. OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- O6 X  c! s0 Y0 i% {+ J5 n0 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ g" B  H, W( `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 U* }# O# v" N# k$ g$ G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( X& S- D: u! \+ z2 F) I& q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. m1 B9 h' ]' e) H# n& o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ O0 ^2 `/ }0 j" Z% V6 p! h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  _- u" C, H1 z& m( R1 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Y4 Y6 U2 ^) V! r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, X7 d; B9 c4 V5 ]/ `2 d( m+ M6 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ E% l# q2 Q' U" B5 }6 ~: ?5 o7 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& G# D% Z; ^' L* y+ x) }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% Z& F5 @- F" ?2 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! p4 p$ R7 e. W# U5 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ y4 C  [3 W! q( t7 j1 g7 e; d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% M" n) v9 k( }  @+ x) G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Z- g% E. G0 d! M& l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' l& W, ]& s3 Z# h; ?1 X0 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  k- K& b6 O8 A& I4 O( W8 t* q3 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 r- U  w# }2 {9 h6 y* w$ K, \: g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% r) l% u! Z* O1 ^. i& }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. R$ u0 A1 q) l( ?# ]! |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; r1 c* Z" c- {<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 G# b- {  b! t/ e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ X+ Z, [5 C, c" W3 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 K- D7 y5 H+ A5 z+ O) ^3 f/ v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i( q' H; Y8 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 l  |( G4 U* a# F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, M' g, B/ B" m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* ?* O% p' e4 T% p+ o我请你剖开它

$ C' g1 G4 Y- i8 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  j4 U2 m8 y& n5 b$ q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>