【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ Q2 p' P8 Q8 n! O歌词我附在后面。
, }( w  o( F1 N8 ~0 ]( PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ G- [" N8 t0 A* j. NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% V) c0 I1 M- {6 |, LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% n+ A( [6 E, P+ tWith the moon kissing it every night
' b8 m7 v  {# D' c3 mSeeing the sky content with its love
  r' Z, P9 M# {) [, N, u8 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; O: e( b3 {# IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. K# B) l* H) h& pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 X2 t8 R7 A! h. F' LI love you I love you with all my heart
+ a- `: o$ t9 e* f4 k$ y3 xNothing can compare to my love
- F' r) Q9 M4 ^; {1 H: B9 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. L% p, J. O/ i5 @8 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 I$ d: e7 [$ }- Q( yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ n1 @8 g" c2 v) s9 [; u) SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 |7 f1 O* @* o7 e/ H: ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ r8 u* k  b8 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 w9 Z# q$ i/ b+ \4 S* M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) F0 Z' n9 _/ n& `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 A  y7 P* t+ s4 V+ h2 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: m/ C. `& }' ~- S7 Q/ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 J# ]- S, E+ V) z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" R: A: ]2 J/ G: ]* W8 j) }2 C3 J9 I1 D<P>你无需担心</P>
  f8 x5 l& \  I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, a- [- J% _' J$ P: ~) r! B" v6 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  B9 k$ t1 S5 G/ U4 d! M0 M2 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 r. \  t" V$ D1 h* }/ y& W" O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Q  \: t+ Z. w* _: j. v, y" O% }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 b: L3 g0 b' l6 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, i- I1 ^1 _: O# h, X5 }9 T4 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 G% Z) T) I3 V- x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 w5 g7 C) A% w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 B3 r* e+ a. u: C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 _+ {; S1 e  J' @# {7 Y, X% X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) f! u( S$ Z6 y  a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ^0 ?1 {  ?% @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( L' W) B0 W, ?  I9 b0 w" S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  ?2 T+ i/ w$ b1 ~+ ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 t- ?- x4 x3 Y$ \4 ~, Z% \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ u0 s4 l: l9 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# M* a2 f' a& w6 ]: |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# K( v# s1 i* R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" L- q. i* p( p' w7 m% e8 g6 m5 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; Q8 M6 O5 M1 P6 s1 E$ c2 X* B5 n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# f7 v) c6 G  R+ R5 J! k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>