【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( G7 ]7 Z$ l( X歌词我附在后面。
/ Y4 I( ^) j: UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* S/ L1 g' E8 h4 P$ k# c2 h7 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 n( y, R, e7 V6 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# x, ?3 ?5 q) G' a$ `0 k7 z) aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x1 H( z# B6 _9 Y1 g! VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ~  j1 t( n! `1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' X8 o7 T) k9 d/ g3 V. KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( f6 ]( w; m& Y& e/ A$ f& GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 g" c& `: o4 y7 f% o3 w! yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: \  t" `, J8 Q) k; I. _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  n3 `0 i% A; a; nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 Y9 T% s4 u, \) [% @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* [( |' |* d' ~4 k; J* c0 Y' }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ]! [7 t  E4 ^# i& \5 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* Z* Z$ v! o: W1 g) c3 q9 [3 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 {3 H) ^, f* B% {6 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. |9 `7 J- `; n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# @% k6 U, Q5 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* o. r7 h+ d5 u- \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ~" s8 G1 P; ], Z8 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ o& c0 ?; b" ^$ Q. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. l# z5 j1 k" O; _& K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. @/ e" a) U, h1 S, z. H: G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 B1 d0 v, c  J. x. J& n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 A% `7 ~! s6 m% W) x0 h/ w- A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ k) ]+ F" f: O1 g) e" z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 x/ \- J3 p8 y+ l8 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 r* R$ W+ F) N$ V* l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 h' W8 B6 K* c; a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; i; |5 |* n$ A8 N; y5 P$ }) N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. @1 R* }) v/ g$ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 M% |* |$ j: b/ O$ h8 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 U: z3 Q% Y4 o* m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ E5 e# `- N( X% I# y8 ~# W# w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. H. `4 k* D7 k0 z. J; D/ G1 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- R* A1 y0 `7 w; H' R+ B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ `2 K. D6 e* ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* D# Z  G4 Y1 {) ~# d" l& F1 N/ w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: M9 p5 C+ K) v$ O4 k- f# j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, O" X- {  r! }9 F* b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% K, H4 c' }3 ~2 x% V8 D" d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, h. Z; O8 N# i9 |2 z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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