【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ~& X( K4 I4 n3 E4 N  T; T' _$ tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' D% V. ~. l( A# g9 x/ ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: F% c' ~" o9 v; E* O" CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 q5 d& |- i$ I2 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. v/ ?# x2 G; C: TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& {" \. a, g6 u" i  J5 l0 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 X2 U# {; f+ |2 `) OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ @5 I- z8 k/ V( l) W9 V2 @( g  V/ eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" Q& o  C4 `- Q: @; r" f3 L! BI regret not dying
# e: t$ k. P; Z8 X; pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) u% b- c6 M* x4 X+ t  X% e$ kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( o2 U$ b; d2 l' \( A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) _9 a" B0 m7 J* `( C5 h- V7 x- U% [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# y0 q* D/ r* G% t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 L4 l1 L1 N8 A+ {% s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 L. g8 E9 A4 J% V- j% `7 x9 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 Q" [% ^/ d! K& S6 B( r1 y5 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 D# \3 W3 |- o% |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ B2 r$ }" H2 c1 U3 ~: o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" d/ Q0 V5 v" g# b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 b: a" t- C( z8 m<P>你无需担心</P>
- V$ {+ j$ [4 k  H1 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 g& k, E) w9 n) A9 O" m4 I: \  F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 u3 @$ G; x6 r0 n/ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: `1 @0 O" w2 K: h; u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ K" i1 N1 ]! O/ o8 i4 ~6 o0 J& W: q+ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 f% t: N: ^1 a& B/ [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& L# g( V  [4 D; J9 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 @: L6 c! A2 w0 _8 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! }' _3 W1 c% _7 m( X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  s' m  r: E3 t$ W$ [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" D/ ^* Z8 b% H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 i- t: T0 g1 D+ L5 a: J" T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) w, e7 `' J8 R+ H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& B5 B" _' v, H( w" ]8 i% ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ y& s7 m2 p3 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; J* W7 a# B& A<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 n3 o/ t4 W' R- i0 P+ M5 q. o" H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ t5 v0 e' p6 V; X$ @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( h5 j0 x. ^+ F, e  s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ I2 {- `" X" ^6 o+ ~9 I( f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& x; o' ~, ^, j8 X  I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 J% D% r7 b+ Y- _/ K+ S  `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& j3 r3 n3 K$ p5 P0 I* C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 y" `3 U, \0 Y9 E' g- e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 u. P3 B. {$ Y# x# a我请你剖开它

; Q, a; H7 g- v. x) s4 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>