【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# C5 f& i8 E; p+ d# Y1 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 r& N" L% B2 l5 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 P: [. c8 p# L5 e0 WSeeing the sky content with its love
* h: ^7 o$ J$ n) E! p( V9 I; TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* x- K' R* s* N0 b* N0 yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; O+ T$ L" A5 X. u  W. r' Y1 x# W3 v$ FEvery other word you utter is love
$ z: z/ z( _4 U3 B$ Q$ a0 K( mI really want to know just how much you love me
5 N0 x% f  U( I6 uI love you I love you with all my heart
1 C5 u, ^) x9 r- |2 _7 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" U2 D( ^9 g. E3 n9 C9 ]1 f! ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; e& o- G4 m! ^- r+ N4 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' }8 E! R0 D6 g2 ~! O, pI regret not dying
) T8 N& [6 S8 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ y6 K0 [; h1 X: @% e" T& p/ g& W3 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* a* o' Y  J1 a5 U! ?- ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% j6 [# R) Y( X& H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& i1 ?2 J, v# s2 I* o7 m- i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ ~; x* H9 q" C5 G0 `: i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 E/ j  l; N; J% P: [  u+ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' E  T# m2 Z  u3 ?& w# N) _. J( D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 U4 h0 s! f& _, _0 g( u5 c0 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& w+ H% p& c- |$ D. G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Z/ V3 T' q5 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" d+ p; g: [& L6 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# L; H4 @# J% B8 d) J) L$ k1 T! U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" V2 W2 H! o# K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. c* E$ y, `  U/ a7 k+ y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* J$ V* ^1 l# }7 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 V7 N! j2 m' X( |  t2 H% i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ]) e9 U+ E9 ~3 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 b6 `$ w" g9 A2 b' o1 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; S( a0 w5 C. V2 b+ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 J4 x9 ~9 q0 f% \! d, E# l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" F3 _& w1 }0 P3 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, Q& P/ y0 E0 p) X# j, A2 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- F+ m6 j: N6 v0 q" q5 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }$ X1 s* z% f6 J9 |$ M* _6 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ u1 Y) B  Q* f: P( h9 \& n# o/ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 ^8 q  t, o5 D- S! U  o: [. y& [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% y0 k& e$ n0 \9 l" k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 @& F, A, _) p  s2 H; M8 X9 ?) `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% T1 ]! s1 y: e$ @* s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ b' \- A& V: d% n/ A+ s( m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" C8 Z3 O( m: c. p  t; L5 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: b8 h) Z! m: V9 s3 h' m! t! O; v# U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ m! v& _5 b2 P6 z/ J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>