【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 q, g+ K( w* n! V歌词我附在后面。
8 T9 [4 u7 d7 K7 {5 M4 O" }# qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 b+ F, a4 V) Q$ aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 d8 |! T" Q* V/ x2 _3 U; PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 C3 ]" S: h0 k- W1 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) O; M9 {6 z$ w8 uWith the moon kissing it every night
) f" @. s/ d* @4 v7 ~/ Y2 k2 TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! v6 |% j7 m) F  c$ }/ j$ D6 Y9 n1 HEvery other word you utter is love
' \. ~' c3 m# t, ], x0 P% v) hI really want to know just how much you love me
( k9 p( W: N5 k4 E5 m% OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! y( W8 l& L) q+ Q$ RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% J# G# N. {# T0 ^. P0 r4 rI’m still filled with fear
$ W& s! M- [1 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 Z* G: h( l7 i! _0 A  LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ P% w. L4 ?; n; Q! O" A
* Q& s3 ^! z! o& L/ H0 D& O: f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 ^# n1 M, N7 i4 e% P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* R- _3 D4 k3 v  n% D  d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! ]" L2 {# L4 e3 Q' h' R3 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; u+ R( S/ W! [; f2 g4 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! d  {# b$ Z+ M7 s" |) [, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( H* F' G) V; E. M  K1 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! T: Q' L' d( g: {& b9 E7 r- f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, K: b0 C! w  K9 \0 T  j1 Y. `. ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  R' V6 A$ r. W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 j4 O9 A6 j/ j9 p2 b0 U- p8 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 c4 @6 {/ Q( k# ?9 p, j. B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 X0 ~9 p4 _1 V+ z& g# T( d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& C& R( j: f" r; H. v; Q7 ]! d8 ~1 G4 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, Q, ?; n- ?0 v& f' i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 O- J& A3 [; D: h/ q5 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" `6 R& D0 R4 u& a, ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ^$ Y/ f0 m$ w% |! X; Z1 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 `: y; I5 t$ f- h+ o0 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 N# H! `$ C& A8 t# w5 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 T# N5 f% A, ~2 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Y5 ?+ q/ W4 d9 n7 n7 g& g1 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  l! v, p# v$ j2 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# X8 e* R  U  L9 U8 @0 V. l4 w$ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  b; y6 K  P" _) N  B# E3 r/ x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 s0 O% E  v* T, D' F  f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 K0 U1 k3 f' @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: P+ |" }/ i+ P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 \- a# ^& s- _" I& h7 H1 D9 s1 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 w0 i* `. s2 i, R7 @& e3 H0 J) ?7 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 q, q) r$ q- E1 r1 l我请你剖开它

* c3 F0 e8 j. Z, `5 P! ~" g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' J, f6 U) _- T) z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>