【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* w) \5 C' h1 Z# b% ^: g+ D4 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 k: @3 u( Y/ _+ L3 [2 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 h" ~$ c7 A) v, i" X# _' j2 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
* L" l6 Z  P) q# @With the moon kissing it every night
3 I, V. f9 q* [" |" `: j; [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& e  u( h  s1 Z( V; w0 W/ j. iYou needn’t fear anything
. J8 V* e! ]  T/ v6 ^: BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 N1 g9 `: J  Y$ i* L' A0 K, s+ @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 s8 F) l2 z/ b( f6 X; ?. p1 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- x* y8 {' a: i' f) II’m still filled with fear
1 O; B2 `) c  a; l6 d# Y  H3 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ~4 K) T+ ~( y1 `2 R! ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 A& P- m; }8 x) G% r& I: X! [5 e1 n; ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 B' A8 v/ e' b9 J* N3 j' V# h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) [4 s1 K$ ^4 d  f4 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# n' s) B1 ]4 c) x9 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) O/ Q% T2 }: S8 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# J* [0 v; @5 ?: D2 s% N  y, q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% ]1 \' a$ L" q! s( D! A4 j% {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 u2 H/ \# h, B* b0 ^7 ?3 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 W/ w! F: l* g- `/ E/ |* Z; d7 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 z+ O' x% n/ Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 q. [7 O. b) {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ^4 d* y% n" s8 F# c: e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  o$ ~7 y; T. i* {5 P; D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 {2 t. w+ j8 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. ], v* c/ Q+ B7 l5 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! U+ L5 M4 q* v( m3 {+ I$ F: c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% _* I% ~0 c$ f; M) W, ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# w0 I* p* O% g3 h' s6 c, C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: ?9 L1 E3 k+ N3 n4 m; Q" Q: q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- P0 v- K2 f6 S) L2 D0 J9 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ l/ m9 Z- ]. a3 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ]; N6 e& A" w  u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- g0 m+ L% C9 _, D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. A( {1 r. W9 [* a  q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& S" w! d2 a& h5 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ f$ C3 p. S5 r0 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& P# b9 L3 a9 e" S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  u' D- E# I* H6 W6 }& B# @' U+ e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: ]' Z4 B, I6 G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& N% O7 Z- z# H$ h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 y) X2 q9 @  M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 c- b$ H- ]+ m1 d0 c% x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 b6 t7 G0 ]* B0 j1 Y% |# _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# I  R$ K8 d. S6 J+ ?. U9 k0 ^我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# T+ T! z$ E, t2 c2 A& [9 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>