【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 p  C9 H: k+ U5 [歌词我附在后面。
! U- u/ E# V  _* C/ g* ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 J+ N: Y) ]) B, a! z9 [6 t( rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 A* q3 e1 F' ]1 Y" jSeeing the sky content with its love
. E9 [; e9 O5 `! D  i0 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& {/ `, F8 W) ~/ Q3 f1 u# OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 ]1 a+ Q% w0 L2 gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( S- i; q& Y0 [3 G; ]+ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 T  j5 g  k% n9 c9 BI want so much to see inside your heart
, g; h0 M7 n1 L3 J# ~1 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: M% T" n1 W' V  \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 C( {2 O) k5 A) `& y7 J5 YI regret not dying
( }  d" M( v7 e" ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 k9 H- A5 o& h, z6 i- P3 @9 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 X" {. H2 s# d. z& J: KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( r1 W* ]# b: {$ T, g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! A6 \  f0 J4 g4 K9 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. X1 W) M$ x+ d! B8 A/ {4 y9 b8 G# b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 X* C" R3 m2 a  K4 z% J/ E3 K9 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. s  h: N1 N2 g5 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( u3 \1 ^* @8 h+ i: e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  c+ ~, F8 a: S/ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ u. x0 p9 I6 r- E6 H' f- b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 H9 E* ~. P% o) d+ K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  V$ g1 h% U1 J% E, ~$ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" h% U; P& C& i, y, r4 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* H# D! j& {* a$ s8 n- f* G: A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 L) P$ ?# F# T( c0 l5 M3 \) `- s/ H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 H8 s: a! E) V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ O" S5 P: {4 o( C( [) A# O% D0 [- `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* z8 X1 {* e' ^# c* T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 E6 Y+ w( _/ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* O( `; L# V! D5 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ U" q; R9 z2 z2 `$ I4 n  G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) ~7 Y1 ?- c" L+ z: N  }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% J, d8 m. l6 I, C+ n- G& V9 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ \& ]6 }5 O3 E& J" i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 e. \! L7 z" X/ K2 P, y' J- O: f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 n; ]9 o  ^4 N! ^+ z/ m) A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>