【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 C4 V2 G$ w5 [  f& g1 a8 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  ]" f3 z* ]; a$ n9 D7 BWith the moon kissing it every night
7 |6 L0 d" q6 MSeeing the sky content with its love
3 ]3 R( O6 z( ~% QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& r6 e. H+ l3 U' NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- Z: c' i8 U6 M! K+ p/ BI love you I love you with all my heart
' P( J( {7 x& e, R- NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; M" W) A4 {- {1 w  mI want so much to see inside your heart
, N9 J" t% }4 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 L( d# X4 _& b1 jI regret not dying
% X# G2 [+ W, v' _1 @! d+ }0 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- A5 h3 x% z, ^6 [2 T* w! dWith such a tongue as yours,
1 {2 C) u7 y) d/ J5 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( i9 G4 M  i  D+ f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ~& w. g7 M0 u7 }) h% Z. m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 w9 H  z0 \3 t9 c/ Z, T# L7 t& o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, q7 ?, _& ~/ k# d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% t2 T; x8 U3 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* \7 G: k) E; n( D* H. Q9 ], p# p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% e$ p; c% f+ U) H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, e1 k7 B+ n7 Y" c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! S/ k2 k& D7 K8 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% z1 L8 @; Q* a; U! V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 X. U+ r, J0 P9 o0 P, ~6 M6 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% F9 {5 ~* K. K6 K' Y1 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 M% |7 q% H* W' G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& b( N' I' k# G2 G5 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ G* k1 q3 d% O2 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ]# L" B2 s# l- u0 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z- `! @. d( c% y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ I& T' F- M4 A1 y* |9 K  G. T/ N4 {. j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ R* {) V5 {0 d  w8 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' e& }  ?: v6 E* J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 K8 g# A/ n& _8 _0 j! W4 W, v- @) P" k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- A4 t3 m4 U0 j* f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) K4 ]8 i  o( ^/ z; o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ {# X7 u2 S, v5 ^- s. b! ~- h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. o. A  `! R; B$ g( Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f& x( o2 o5 K. E# \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! U$ c* N. k+ x% ^" @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 H# m( j6 `2 _8 |- V/ L( D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>