【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 `% P7 t) w# ?- x) z8 E8 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 x$ ]: m6 M$ t4 S3 L6 A' {Making the sky glitter like gold,
% T. f1 o' k* t- ~7 T8 U7 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& [3 z, q; \6 q1 Q5 C9 W- AThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ {& W  [0 g/ a3 m: {) R9 ?3 T* _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 c& h; W2 a+ n: c  E5 E/ aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 T  m' X0 i, T9 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 y% q. d( A% c$ r. lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. L9 G/ Y; d& V$ jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% }& Y+ p2 @8 Z, }4 K, bI regret not dying
, X% K+ N' m7 ]7 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% v/ h8 Z6 k9 O7 z- R: cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 I2 j7 q# w" H0 q5 U/ q7 l' @8 h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* n& {0 N' ]* n) P+ W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: e$ r; u- V( E8 L5 E7 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; e' y  x0 z6 k7 X# e. R: g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 T* c/ x; q9 H* g+ b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( r5 X- ^) _  h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 j. Z: }' U. j: c% D5 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 U7 C$ C+ H7 F/ Y7 A' W5 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& L9 w1 d/ m5 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& C. u9 h8 M8 E; i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 m/ H" D/ R: M8 N" W4 M: }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 m( r5 o+ o$ h7 E5 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 F+ o, t  g% p! t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  K' Y0 ~# E2 V5 X* B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 c: N  [0 {  y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Z. [! W' R5 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ~) }; x* [8 O- _, `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 u' C0 v  s) V& K. e0 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 F5 m# y, h0 t2 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 c4 y' ]  T$ J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ o2 F  ?3 p( v# O) f: T2 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 P; n: F0 M7 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 M: I: d- E+ D0 F8 K3 w5 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; I. {4 M* l; r" x' O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  [# q4 S! b! n+ r) i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 x/ J  R" @' ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 |& n! w9 N5 P' l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 O5 v3 j: u0 s+ U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 r- D/ o8 a3 F6 n5 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>