【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- l/ i) X7 Y* `  k, o歌词我附在后面。
( b) T6 f) n( m! {- ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 |$ e+ F, g, {/ H# [  iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 [2 n) P2 a- `. M& j4 w0 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 y1 y$ }2 j5 h# g  h) x% ?2 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( S# D* v" h( C& c3 k2 k4 o' dThe sky is happy down to its soul
( t9 N1 [. a* G' y) R. f% D4 fWith the moon kissing it every night
* _+ t# N5 w  s- D$ j) aSeeing the sky content with its love
; V3 f2 C5 Y1 d+ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ^& c9 N" V5 ?% |1 {: NYou needn’t fear anything
% D0 L* s+ j: u7 }% ^! nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# I) E4 y2 p( w, W' z! J, x+ y4 eEvery other word you utter is love
' b' h% W" g: p* d3 x7 t' K& L3 wI really want to know just how much you love me
0 C" r' t6 _: T4 }I love you I love you with all my heart
/ a" x/ _  J2 \* d, D0 z# l2 ?" V+ PNothing can compare to my love
1 a) d! B) w' G* x; R7 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Q* L/ X0 ~! D5 {& F$ Y/ LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 {- m8 r  z# G, t; z9 e! wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ H* V6 s" O! v4 n6 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ~" d1 j, r) Q  m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 R- I9 M: ]* V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ M& x$ W8 y$ ?" b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. l; S* U* p9 w/ Y8 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: P* P: c* D) m$ R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, Z- Q- M/ Z4 a, r9 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# b  Y' F- R4 M1 E0 |4 B: I& [/ K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Y# @/ B" G6 J! e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ?; F! z. D% o" @& Q& B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ C6 x; k  s$ A7 w2 r& @; s8 f$ q- ~# U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. |0 k& H. m9 e$ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. W% m1 L* F; e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 N1 J' e! t* k8 k1 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: D4 C; a" @% M+ K* G5 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 ~9 B" y6 H" n; l+ e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 J- A: O9 @- M5 x4 O" r4 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# X  o, M! |0 J8 A- Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ l1 S1 m* j4 k- Q5 Q1 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ G/ d) b: p& C, q$ W1 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) _6 r5 j9 B9 j& v* o% [7 @  z) H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) o; ]! S6 Z  S" j, S/ N1 f$ ~) }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& j' @$ I1 S2 T! e2 [1 `5 h3 v9 Z+ M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 x" y  @3 ]! f) k$ j) l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 ]- y! _2 N5 n1 F% U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) N* y' D# \" C, X  V+ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( A: x/ `" O8 n5 W" M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ o( y% W. f. C& u5 p& Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' y+ F6 l8 @6 M  W3 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. x5 n% x! v: v% w4 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% e5 U" D, O2 z8 c% p- r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>