【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 A5 U" H! T7 E. b8 o6 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( L, H; ]5 ^' F# ?& ~0 R; [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% c5 V: N, D8 B: p& P' h7 d3 \3 W1 OI love you I love you with all my heart
- @6 z8 f4 n4 n# \: N0 B, Q0 v, rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 e4 }& T$ A$ ]% [$ E9 @! RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: {* I/ R: a- N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 b1 c+ P0 s% X0 P& L+ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" z% i/ F3 s& s; d% m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 Q/ {- U: D3 K) X0 p3 y6 f, o) v- v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 p4 i4 m) A& J2 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 d+ J: e$ B: Z( |6 G8 h5 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; Y  c8 a; L* S1 X$ _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! W# [, O8 V7 t7 `1 h" g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 ^) o1 m0 Q3 ~4 A2 \* L6 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: q7 r3 u" [* E# [8 i' J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& ~3 b: s7 u1 z' ?: @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 t0 l+ Q5 {" l# `& u1 F) u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 w' _6 r$ U. K+ H" @5 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! ~. o4 j% {' ?/ v+ y2 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 w3 V! E9 V+ z; X9 a; w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: t& @6 k& C4 n- t* S. m' @' V5 u  J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 E1 {2 y, b4 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! S# Q& w8 K% Q0 Y+ J) L. M+ j1 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; `0 i$ s; j1 s; ^) u- `0 ~5 M5 p& k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, S5 a, f" V: e  g, z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. v8 x  R# y/ r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ i/ m9 N9 U" P  R2 ?, ]* O* j" n/ U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; v# o$ g& @2 Q7 a4 b5 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 t! p1 Y# i& x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ n2 q/ r+ Y: w2 _) d% |3 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 s$ ^$ ]1 K* f5 T) p2 \5 |; Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- _( N# v" N/ z' w, M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& v2 j& s7 A6 I. S3 k) O2 P. w1 N4 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ @) G/ @) L8 U9 w5 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  B; u8 H+ b$ h: Y$ a+ Z: }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 W- J( _$ U$ s0 v' Q4 P+ Q' t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 A: g. S* r6 E6 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>