【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 y, x7 G9 F& h8 A; E% BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 o# J7 @6 P5 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& Q* \3 W. r6 E1 S( D) B& YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. Q( \# b1 U" x2 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 N( Z% ~/ ^9 p  h, h: CSeeing the sky content with its love
# b. {% i% _3 Z" n% h* P2 w% p/ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 {( O- F: g$ j# W( cYou needn’t fear anything
: x1 H8 q) Z( i$ eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 G. ?) b4 s7 p5 F5 a6 i- xEvery other word you utter is love
3 r8 p8 }) W' ^: ?! lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) m/ J0 L; w; E  ?+ P1 G6 R6 sI want so much to see inside your heart
# {4 N$ l4 Z  W+ }  g+ ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 i8 i2 |" A: z+ k$ @I’m still filled with fear
- p* `" c' ]( J8 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' s; ~2 z6 k  @2 F7 \$ Y* AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ i: Y( y" I, I* A0 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) ]+ Y4 x  F' L. K& j% {, @& c6 n/ CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& z2 m  J: J  ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% b0 J' D$ f& M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! |7 F; h3 Y/ M3 ~5 G; t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 Y/ v9 C2 Y( z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 J4 R( B9 `1 Q  {" B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. I6 ^. N( d+ J) L3 f4 b% V2 C  X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 v: C: O' Q3 c3 R& i" `% t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ~5 u8 p+ M( v) {) j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  H2 T  T1 O# |% Z$ o' u* K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 `8 }5 v7 ?. w$ b1 l4 D# m+ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# V& W( M+ s# d$ s/ |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Q/ @: a3 z$ F- D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ I7 g) r" D: g! B$ ~# |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  Z% w+ ^0 F& ~2 h! o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 W) ?( l) G) E0 b& C' R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' T5 |3 V; u6 V; \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! |3 }( m5 Z" \0 {. y2 j' S5 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! j: y" N6 A, `  U( m7 K5 E; t3 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 ^/ Y% _; b4 t+ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Z* i. ?- D. Z  ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 a. G# s! H- G1 E6 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. y9 A( r3 m6 W) l* z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 S/ F/ ~6 i, u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ S1 }1 p) r2 L8 \" k# R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% V' b) ]' E( M" }* a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 {- K( z* m/ Y5 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' u6 Q$ I) [. F- A& `/ B' ?9 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% g* f3 L6 U) Z- _4 T6 G/ R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( p3 X' ^& |8 W6 P: q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- u( `0 G- L0 H+ w* Y! D0 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>