【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ j. P0 @3 D' \: Q9 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 @2 o: z% z& r9 c6 B' K$ h  cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 D' m1 ~6 B7 W0 D3 r: j2 b& P6 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
" U# G8 e1 M$ P- }5 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' H# D8 L; X/ f" f: dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  M, O& L' U. d: I0 p( M( bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: H5 \# h5 B$ u5 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ k( f/ P0 Z' s" E2 N7 F8 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. U% S  y( H  {- p) t1 V* y* YI want so much to see inside your heart
; Z. Q3 S1 f1 X4 ^3 v: RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ E, \* B2 s$ [& aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ]2 T5 A. j( W- mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 L. [4 c, E0 K! Q: MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 i6 y3 @5 B8 j$ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 p. r4 C; ?- I- o5 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 ^0 z) ]. k9 @! V  B  L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: S8 K& B5 {4 A4 b7 m4 I+ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: I/ j% {( O3 a  i, A! b  M. J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( Y* e  S9 l& P, e. }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 k5 B, K. k2 l& a) B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. F& a7 X  T2 [1 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! J( r$ \, U- q/ `8 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 o" ~& B; I; M  y) u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# U- F+ I. Q+ J9 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- G# Y9 M* }6 U+ h8 X4 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" H4 }( ?4 C5 k- B. x: t- B& v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 A9 v/ s7 c% e. _$ T0 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 n- |7 ~+ E+ R1 _/ b7 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! z8 i% s% b! h! H- I" ?7 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 G+ n+ e) Y" i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 t3 ^5 h8 ~- {* K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 M" P1 Y# ~8 e( l$ r% D8 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 S( q& [& r5 @5 a1 h0 m+ J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 x: n, l* G' o6 [- W& i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% v/ K" A8 i; K- u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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9 m$ F6 _9 z/ Y$ x# `1 Y( v& C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>