【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ V6 H; R% U+ K% h+ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 i3 o# L3 y" M& _. R  SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- i: h" j  S) m6 |8 L( U9 z& mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 }: S1 m' |0 H. p) v" ]With the moon kissing it every night
  i7 Q+ R1 @2 m: W4 s% OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 _( p% S" t* [; z& P: lI love you I love you with all my heart
- s6 D$ N; T9 x: h& H2 S% ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 K3 o! h: r1 c% j# o$ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" A* d% o5 M5 c+ E) a# M; ?5 sI want so much to see inside your heart
" y6 t  S7 i) j" D1 @* U* F7 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 @/ Q; z9 T9 {7 S" H, _7 ?. II regret not dying
/ L3 p' @! ^4 r: i  G; iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) Z9 m  A$ [# I# q7 nWith such a tongue as yours,
4 M" {7 p4 m, u; R  K8 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 K* I  [) E  w! aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 B3 m, G0 S+ T2 R. a8 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# Y, X0 u8 s# S, k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( G# }8 N- x) n1 I# G( }4 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 m  I7 Q$ k4 E4 ?, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ W# x* ?; ^7 N6 e; l8 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- L0 ?5 \( x- n4 ?; L6 b% s% p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 \" F2 @. B8 [5 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 H' e& b& U; V( Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, H% M! k" o* O3 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 S) z0 {$ F' x' x( d  n% r. ^1 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- i! B; ]3 Q) D' C% ~5 v7 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ d! F; Q$ ?6 R; y8 A; Q3 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 V' f+ }4 R+ B6 b. a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: i0 K# e) s: {% ]* b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" u* ~: U" c1 h5 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 h4 `  ~) T* s5 b  c: t- Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) k( }' i3 g. \' s# _/ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' v4 k- Y) R$ l: z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 b* ^# ^8 ~* B6 a% T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( |. B' E; y; i4 W4 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 W# E, k; R/ R# |# [$ e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 i7 q$ u6 K, _9 n& o7 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  D1 x; o+ c2 h7 j7 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 x& Q8 d7 V& z- i& C7 d+ s% z" @# ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 O8 c$ v1 L" @2 ^- H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 W; U' [. V" l# q: q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, T6 ~- A/ t, j6 v& R; Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# }& N2 [  I4 N. a" V& A: b2 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ i" G5 R0 m$ _! u6 S8 _( S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) P2 V' E1 n5 p) h% Q; V+ g: j4 u我请你剖开它

, ]2 {1 F9 |, w- y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& i  o, x: F9 [+ z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>