【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 K- E2 J& K) E# ]' k: Z1 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ U# |+ w/ A( Q- `1 a8 j' ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 C: t" O8 w! S/ c5 A& _2 d* m2 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 w* x  T' |+ o5 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 N  W) L! ~! u& JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& a9 R0 L) x! ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( h+ D# z1 O0 u9 v1 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& V7 m( D( a7 m! h7 ]* QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% i$ }/ t* Z4 o& D5 Q2 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ [/ k9 a8 B0 [" d) WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 y! L6 W2 o. k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& y4 U3 W+ P/ U1 s; [' k" d( \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' G9 X; U3 |' v' |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, y$ q. P4 r# d2 Q  n5 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: W- h( t8 u7 e8 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 D( E& _. {" j1 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. A/ k3 n; Q, ^: {. a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 \7 [& _3 M' a  t2 v& Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, ^; a5 {+ D4 d" H$ s7 r: g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; q  N/ z: [* `7 R" H4 b% f7 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 }9 b2 C/ y9 e8 P( R0 q8 B+ e0 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  }" Y# C! E0 J  h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* J1 v8 {( D0 p: A. X  H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 e8 D+ p; b: q% R5 n9 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  ^; @; F8 X4 Z% X3 H6 q. B  g  L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& `5 \, A  n- B  o9 X6 Q: ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" x' t: S. L/ e& Q3 o8 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' n- V( ]' {3 r$ M; w1 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 N; M; x/ P! [+ E- w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: @# G/ F0 B0 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 J* x$ i+ B) B; |& D' C4 }% |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- k" u* H& d4 C! n6 w5 R) B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 V# T5 {$ w, z0 R* D$ W$ \9 t% L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# s6 `  n; P4 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ d1 U2 x  y1 Z4 T/ S3 E9 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ w0 `1 W. O- G9 ]; N+ p5 H" }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  l% j' N' ~: W% x( I: r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( C7 O3 \8 P' F8 p, R  J9 ?' K; u  ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. r# z" h: T; J* `5 D/ {/ U$ S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 w' b* Y& j* `! n  B$ ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ j  H0 T6 Y: S, z9 G) Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>