【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 F0 ~# \- i7 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 f# C1 Q" Z, c, J4 a  xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 c6 j0 v  [/ Z$ q9 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: B; a, M7 q: s: }. dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 C/ ]( l2 r2 |. {3 H+ H1 ?7 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ V& L* Y% J: A( hI love you I love you with all my heart
9 }2 C5 M5 [. {% y% H# x, Q# ZNothing can compare to my love
" M, U' q- m& {1 f! k- Z/ ^' UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' h2 o, V) B3 {2 s' uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* h4 m2 S' N6 _0 W5 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 b9 A" |1 g0 _2 v7 Y( T( BWith such a tongue as yours,
8 r6 o; h% X- o9 L, pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ u  X" K  Q, b( W5 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) C# D5 z5 k- `3 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ Q0 @) h0 k2 ]5 m& e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) M  @3 |) [  j1 [1 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ e- u/ r# W2 m( `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( O6 T3 T( r$ q6 ]' s7 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) v% @; Z+ b! y4 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% d3 ^; ^" s6 p- T" z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, M) S& E: K4 d4 _% _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 y' j, Z7 H7 r7 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" Z; F2 m. n6 O$ _* G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ h0 ~# |4 w* k# @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ `: F4 D, \2 I# G# \" Y+ Q/ Z% R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 y( N  V5 k: v0 G) f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- X) d7 s7 X  ~4 w4 f6 K5 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 S4 U( h. d" V7 y% J! u9 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" ~+ E8 a. l$ l3 K* w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% H3 A: X( T8 A: |' a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 L/ \8 O/ _& f& i' i( Y- r- E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  @/ M2 S) n4 P; f2 g  l. e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! V! b" r9 a8 b+ w2 @+ F  U- S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* f, p) p% z, Y. z6 W: a; t/ h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' W2 P9 D; ]) q% W; f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 t  T; z$ N; v4 ]* b, h) M<P>I regret not dying</P>
. x' E# i# }5 R# n" W3 A* s& D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) A* O, c  f" Z  X7 X: n+ ~9 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# |4 z+ _8 U3 y4 m5 H5 F0 C& q: i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ [# o2 e' Q; j9 d4 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; n! @% u, r$ ~  t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' e& Q/ F# M# ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 D7 U9 q) x$ K3 W5 O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>