【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" T$ J* c" e' P歌词我附在后面。
  Z' c2 `2 \/ z" o2 q: eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 p$ w9 S* u  N. n) BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* P( |9 I5 X4 D% M4 t- g, fThe sky is happy down to its soul
& J: @% H4 t9 h, G* xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# _, u: ~( W+ f% VYou needn’t fear anything
3 O; d) k0 k9 l# `' t' VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: |. A5 O7 @3 P0 S; d& k4 LI really want to know just how much you love me
9 D" f$ r  A8 P) ]0 l2 NI love you I love you with all my heart
- ~' H& a+ A3 ?% D' r6 ^Nothing can compare to my love
. s: Y- Z& e! y5 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l$ s1 S; T7 |; G- fI want so much to see inside your heart
' z3 `( ]) y, {* m& ?8 W. j5 R9 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  t9 }6 }7 i, x7 }" O7 d, DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, d" x/ V9 i" T% G, aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 V- [* O+ C+ s$ ]/ ?9 r1 |# nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( V5 ]% b# ]2 H: r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  U4 v2 F! I8 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: T0 H: x& ^! L7 I+ P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% m2 q( z5 f  N. j/ O0 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) S9 y. u7 v! m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  T1 t/ U: P+ v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( g! u- W/ M; l0 E% q  L4 X, v) R: [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ J* Y9 o2 B' n/ ]: X5 D' I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. \4 O$ m3 B& @2 E8 G# L" s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" r& u' T' [% _, [7 U! Y. i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. \/ [1 [. f9 [9 M( {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ U0 E/ ~8 |0 Q8 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 P. f& {2 ?2 V) s$ R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" g/ D! B. ?8 {5 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! Y" I, `  m, f2 L8 T+ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  h% d! j* h  U; T2 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 b8 L3 G$ I# b( a; x: k8 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# o9 I2 @* L7 \# @- u* D: s- Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ w8 W! u. H7 C9 j2 Z7 f0 r* T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# X5 d  n5 @0 Q* Y! A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  m+ P1 U* t2 y" n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& U0 ~8 N3 I% P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# u# a  @7 e' Z* d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ~" B# }* t- e0 r# X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ @' S; l; \4 A5 f* I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 @1 S% Y* U$ A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 ~/ K* @; o7 _9 z) T+ ^我请你剖开它

4 G$ M1 D; R3 ^  {6 U1 G- }! c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' K# A( ~) P/ d" h9 I% ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>