【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# l, |0 A6 [  M* }  z' A5 _歌词我附在后面。
- m& C# s7 g& jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; i8 N* m1 b( G2 k/ h! `8 B$ b  zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 Y. ^% ~9 {) @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ e% N, |# W* u, ~1 F" x; n- ]; \The sky is happy down to its soul
+ _' `2 n1 D* e* {. ?: YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 l' [" m: _5 Y1 Y+ FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ]& o: K4 N: v* e* W3 s1 ]/ xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! R# w- V+ c3 E2 o9 a# TEvery other word you utter is love
1 d+ r4 P' L6 z0 P6 l2 {$ VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 D, O: q; f% N2 FNothing can compare to my love
& m/ t- q3 k! _# Y: }7 N; PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ ^: _- n3 X# C+ {8 V) iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 n* a/ k) e* ^+ \* s3 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" t2 u. F& J7 O  d$ F# w/ zI regret not dying
4 ~% x! a5 Q$ B& t# OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ?: K3 o* k' ^" @* hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! U5 T- v, x$ }; q) D/ {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; ~4 L( a9 G. S5 k, n' u& \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' T7 V( Z) k6 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. l/ `: {! `; I' f- R/ P3 Y* p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, S% t, Z1 d% m1 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ @5 R" A9 w+ a5 o6 N) \1 M+ X, }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& f: O# ?% L8 V4 @' L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 c6 T$ ^9 R* w2 I& y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 `0 W" T: Z, f4 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; I* z; v+ U% ~/ `. U; k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 A! j6 n1 y3 a$ }1 I& |3 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ?- l6 Y% P% ~0 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. H$ b2 \" ^  X! j: D9 S<P>你无需担心</P>
- T/ ~$ e- S' w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ b4 S; _: m3 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& K. [: w1 Y, F$ Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- U: }: U+ @# ~2 T4 B" a8 L9 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" x; M: G- |* V; Y# @. U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& o6 J9 S2 U4 U) I! ^$ w; |8 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ j* t% C7 u# {% S+ Y5 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ M5 ]5 e4 \. J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: p; m. S% g4 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ~0 s! `- f4 Z$ `4 Z! _5 T: ?% \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 j% d0 T& d0 g+ q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ V5 N: d- D* K4 e% ?- b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( n2 J9 ^7 V9 o# N4 M( O' P% x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ r, y! o! r( g, x4 m  T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) C  [  F$ @0 B3 P; V' j, k9 s5 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 n, ]) A: Y/ c  |. a. f9 b5 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 P: l) M0 w# t" x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  K6 h  b& f. e0 _- _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: P* `3 _1 n# e! _5 ^, l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>