【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, M# d! g% q- B- S- I& u1 J4 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 M* l5 }% X: R1 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 p! t3 r( o' d) R+ p7 @. tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 A1 a8 Q0 e2 b" j8 E# u4 g" jWith the moon kissing it every night
# s2 G, f6 Z3 ]( J7 x1 D& CSeeing the sky content with its love
% x/ u! K3 u/ j- PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) \5 [1 H3 }; D6 t& L( AYou needn’t fear anything
4 C, m- J+ d" o) t) ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- q+ _( V, \: y' M3 n5 N6 D8 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ H4 T7 Y' ~! D4 G' B6 r& aNothing can compare to my love
6 k" \' n; t( DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) v) R. E5 }1 ?' k- V$ }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 E4 |4 y, w- p' n6 A5 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 c8 s# D7 q( k8 O8 A7 g  K3 ^- rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ M  m# J6 ^  _2 J' `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 h+ o3 p' N. z# a; o! E3 ?7 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 x( Q5 E: a4 h+ g$ E1 W2 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ N/ h6 g' o& o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ g( X; b1 M) t5 K7 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ d- l- L  m2 [- N+ G  Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* O: I/ C$ U8 D2 o9 o5 E+ {! @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: {3 W$ Z2 y9 }  }7 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 \8 L4 X9 t/ `+ ]) s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" X9 o/ Q- B5 D5 t# p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% y* n; A; l) V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ?0 V' }4 i% R# k+ U) u- P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& g2 r# H: j) U" V4 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; E9 f" Z' n1 [+ h  J3 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 N% a. ^$ |/ G: T6 D" E4 J1 q; Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% P% S; `# p* s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 B! |0 `9 X( u& Q2 \5 O) X. s) Z* A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, u3 U* }# p( B, ?4 o, V& V/ l' ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 d/ `! X) S: L% o7 A) f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' j- }* `* V# P6 p& R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) H3 Y5 Z3 f8 d6 _( a$ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
- t- ]/ s2 m% @% G# v4 q1 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& ?' u: O9 ^; M/ F6 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( Y1 c% z+ f- O3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ w7 m) ?& l0 R  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* i% w$ ~* Q$ L7 ]4 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! I2 C+ q! ^% X1 k2 b" Y我请你剖开它

/ |# U; t, F5 b( T, `9 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>