【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 |( j! N# k1 X/ m' M6 [5 A) }The moonlight is shining brightly,
: e7 ]) M8 i1 |; V1 i6 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; D; Q4 j5 }6 R0 p8 y3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
7 |, F$ {% x2 p  a  D: D( NSeeing the sky content with its love
* a4 m4 Y$ s) g4 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 b3 Q  i- u: I: I. S& ~0 vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% Q  J) J# z1 u: z' u" l5 ]+ P# kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 |( |* d/ |+ D: D, ^$ KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 B) F+ F" O1 R; s) dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" Z5 Y4 J) W) U3 n8 {, q7 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! X/ \9 \" Z' L+ k# k6 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ e# r3 @. R5 _( f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 e( |. [1 ]# F% G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' X2 U# f) t5 U- r8 d1 o$ B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- O4 g  Q: y# B; U  S$ t/ ^0 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 h8 A7 K) f, A8 i% n9 z' S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; {" U' Q7 b& q! @4 M" t$ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 [4 Y* j* W) y; G8 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 \1 G9 U+ w: A% s! Q% V9 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& E5 _* z$ ^) E7 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ?3 d8 \0 d  X8 l5 \" d9 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, E6 e# f3 F" z' J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ u0 {4 H7 K# O6 K/ E; Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: `: s$ W7 t4 |% m% j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 m: c' A4 q8 Y- Q( ~0 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Y# Z; j1 A8 M- p- k8 \. g# ]$ l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  E& u% L+ V6 V4 U) @1 V, C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ?9 \8 r; a# C5 c3 y6 V* ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 P7 w6 U) c/ ~( {% p: x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 k7 w( D0 ]+ D5 b, a* v( Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ W9 M3 _' }2 A, o4 d. O) j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" X( q4 g% K' T) _5 T+ X9 i7 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 d; Z$ h% F1 ?/ t. d% r8 T  ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>