【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 ^7 X% c2 _& u8 A; D  W, `" sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Z, M$ R6 f8 C! \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: _4 f. D; C2 I- [* f2 g- @! VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 E9 [1 G# Q5 O# EEvery other word you utter is love
9 W2 l$ c  q+ |4 \9 QI really want to know just how much you love me
# k9 h/ Z7 [/ f# q! l* ^; o, KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; K/ q- B- `; L! l4 j$ l0 @# A# f  t5 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 S. }# H! \, o3 H9 T' n1 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* f: k$ k  Y% jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ n( P4 a" m! m4 i1 R+ O+ pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; h) u( l4 S/ M, {9 |  `6 l" f& _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) ~5 {! v+ @1 C' I' q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 m4 |' G+ N# |- \$ H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: l8 P9 f7 ^+ ?& ?7 u* X9 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; t+ j( t" V( F, {2 B! b3 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# z9 @8 \$ Q( P: N( Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: [: B% G! a1 l( T) U, a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 |8 z) J+ u$ R* I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) [, Y9 }2 q& K+ N  I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 k, \, S# W0 P6 s3 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 e+ t5 {8 s1 E: c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, `% c6 z& }0 |1 V) [) E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& k$ T6 e1 e$ i9 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 O6 _% b6 R) ?. Z" {% ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: a" v8 `! r! \5 G/ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  F. E2 ^7 H) ?5 o& p3 p( h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  j& U8 [* a$ o* q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ b( O- J/ J; Z2 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 _* V2 b# [: s# G- w) h" ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 U! ~2 }/ q  j% T3 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 E, J" A# J% g0 y- N8 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 ^& f. p; K8 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 t; D% o$ y2 F7 l# T" g% d( ?& G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) v# q( Z( P$ b0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! x0 G2 t8 Z* h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! X7 ~* u. b& s# A) `8 j# g' }/ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>