【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 [% M8 ^5 R/ d1 ~7 MWith the moon kissing it every night
  k6 n* L' j0 u4 [Seeing the sky content with its love
8 N4 L% H8 i' z0 \: e5 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 i: X1 a0 L5 ]4 B. TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* K! U, l+ d1 p. f" {Nothing can compare to my love
" L, g. E% g/ G9 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 }- z+ |+ b. ]+ T$ n/ V2 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, h4 t, k2 l7 M  [2 ~6 Q! MI want so much to see inside your heart
: c3 o: b9 e: O# G: }" ?7 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ [" g* E- Y" N+ A6 h: BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: o9 y* a! K7 T* T- Q8 j7 S5 e6 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 C% u' h  _7 u6 [9 Z) @2 k3 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ^1 c6 W9 v1 C7 T- Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. E2 L: X8 P* Y  ], {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 V; \! n: e2 K0 U/ t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( d  A' D7 x1 G) x: B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 h9 A' `( c7 |8 V5 \) C6 U8 E" X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! o; r% f  f2 |- A' Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 U: J* D0 w( f* f% K+ |2 N( t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" S& _& S3 ^1 G- ~& w' Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, j( A9 g, c7 S. ?2 e: Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ J* h7 g1 w: D. _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' _- b6 M0 x/ `) K8 w. Q  f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ H4 H7 K7 F% V. r! X: d  @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ i& g+ Q7 M, W  T& D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ l8 I# v3 i2 u% n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, R$ Z  e4 i; c9 l$ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ o5 I" t& T5 F2 F6 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 M$ g% c) s  u9 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: K! D. S: X  v9 _  i4 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( O* t9 z1 y# a- u2 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ U% M* U9 o8 r% a2 O0 i, r7 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ C% V+ d4 v1 V0 u. i! F' V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, h: `+ d1 a( a: r5 p. t+ ~5 A+ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' V" w. H) S5 l/ m4 \# k4 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ T" _' P2 @; |$ Q) ~* Y3 \# }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 b* {  v& n" ~8 I1 y" G$ B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 G( U" N$ ]' ~; T) d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>