【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 P0 D$ b/ r0 A  V$ x' ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' _4 g9 N/ y6 L2 f8 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) r- n6 S/ U6 R3 C& HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ X3 k; @) L% B, n' v# ~With the moon kissing it every night
1 d' S& `* x# H; FSeeing the sky content with its love
! W4 v5 r/ J1 Q" i/ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 Z- X$ C' ~8 C) Z. ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 I- d) R0 n% J3 {7 T) ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ B6 j- l2 P* J9 }8 D" MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  N( ~1 U) a( u" A% _2 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; l+ q( F4 L8 x3 {# ]* S* f5 oI’m still filled with fear
7 K& u) A2 x7 w9 ?$ E& R# y' ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( E: A* s5 {5 j2 R, T6 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- [2 h) |1 z, x1 AWith such a tongue as yours,
1 @+ @' [4 g/ c- l- uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 j! a: M, L* _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 d- w- @' G/ _0 n' V( ~2 e3 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& }, I" y! x" Z4 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, f% Q5 o1 u& I8 D! h/ D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% o9 B, ?5 p. L) ?9 W8 \7 A; I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 D( g; Z$ j: l$ C5 c' u7 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- r1 b" C+ I- i; ]- t# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' v' M) h+ e% e3 A2 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; A" S& l7 t4 _6 C) d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) m6 `) P2 d6 m, X. M" d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, q4 l% C; H& k: w4 F0 @, Q8 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' S) s2 v/ q. \' u' [: C7 f; I& h$ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 d7 {, N# g; Z0 w5 \2 n8 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 Q: Y6 @9 P. A4 a' R" f# b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( Y3 |  z/ Z* s7 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( a2 J/ [5 M: V! k/ z( C4 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ J5 r5 T' S+ U) i! Q  B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; d. m9 F3 V1 i7 k5 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- [3 e% |& j! p/ ~  Z& |; l8 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" n/ o# P# p0 I: Q4 W- y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) m9 \6 _. G, p- N' R5 P5 Y' h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ a* m$ O; s  w7 k& q( W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 g- q0 e( y% g- C  _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# ^0 i! s. T3 Z8 }) z1 o) B: v9 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* z. H5 y+ S% X4 w* E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, z! [7 Y0 f2 c9 H: c# m$ G: Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' y6 ]1 K) ^9 _+ y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- O5 s7 M8 G$ p( u' d* S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- t) i2 ?, H! R& V( p2 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>