【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 o0 S) i* I" }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) R8 `5 W+ ]# w( TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ P# }5 \2 s, E& }The sky is happy down to its soul
; T1 c2 O* K5 Z, i, q8 d, e6 I8 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 U5 E8 P" P" }+ UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 W( t+ V- p+ H; @; n7 cI really want to know just how much you love me
3 N) o! Q: ]5 W8 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 q2 O" E6 H; U( iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! X- ]/ N) t' @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Y! l$ u- R: l  LI’m still filled with fear
( I4 F" J" U- W2 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, o* j6 Z. f( a# UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 N& E/ i6 f) \3 O7 T) W2 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# R: S) C6 S2 e& I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ y( m! @/ d  c% R+ m8 |. L6 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. |4 i1 B+ O6 V# C. o8 Y# \: ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ v% ^! A$ x7 \( C6 g( \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' e4 ^! L" I* N" _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( M! N- s6 q8 J- {& U5 j6 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 {8 u$ k7 L& {* b1 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 l. C0 J, [! m; U, Q( S4 @5 n4 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 F, |/ n# x5 L: t3 h) c; u3 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ Q4 y& p- z* W# Y( }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 i0 H% t+ `# C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  L/ s# P  ^2 D4 k3 O& E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* a, ^9 g+ i) j* E& H: g/ m) w4 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: v$ u6 y1 ]- x% F8 Z, x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ \; C* ]0 E/ r9 U9 V) |0 }8 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) d  f6 n1 w0 w( U  Q% X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 P, ?' j) |/ m5 I* C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% P+ n" D, p) w% Y% L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( a! t) T+ c, P5 h0 H6 W3 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: v& j" A( ~/ k$ A; ~. |9 E* Z4 B! h2 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) i- B/ s, p4 a9 h3 m8 n8 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* {' W; G/ \. `6 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( A. c! N# G" |% e7 j' O0 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ O# P9 R: Q4 I* _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ c+ e8 X2 S$ [8 o$ P6 X' V; k4 n% U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 B3 z- f2 m; o; z+ \1 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 o, y% W- j# Z$ O我请你剖开它

2 A8 ?: ]5 z8 J( p$ d/ X4 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! T. e! f! X) Q0 ~% ~$ U: R- W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>