【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* Q0 O7 Z7 |2 M, F/ N9 n5 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 D# `$ Q1 h. N0 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( M' |9 D& q# e+ K( m+ D) UThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 \- v. j1 m. m6 ]: xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 C5 Z. D5 M* S- w$ JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ]) ~( l- a) CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* B# F( [& g( Z7 e9 x: G& H% q( SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 h9 I, P: p  @0 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 K; Q, r0 U# z- dI want so much to see inside your heart
9 C6 T  m/ J# P- n- l3 p3 R  JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, a8 s' f, W& H/ Y, T" o6 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, \1 o4 f, S) U: o; h- X) c5 aI regret not dying
. \% E4 e/ j* n/ |$ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 r: H4 B# t6 V3 r& S( xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ C3 Y& g9 h1 n' m: y$ `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 T' w' H0 \! L; K5 T7 ~4 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 u3 f9 x& b5 U# l0 A# w+ Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  h) R& u. s/ l4 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 X: t7 m& ]8 i# L7 X, U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 V* U- X/ H/ t( ?  L# O+ j% U2 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, c8 p  g* u1 f! J* }' x  C, D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; y* z( J* N7 A3 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# X3 W! ]5 b+ q; G# p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ |: v8 Q) x  T1 g! E+ k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- E0 z! t! R$ w' h( [1 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* x) |( i* T( T* g2 ^$ s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ V5 q* U+ b6 m0 @  _( R; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 q$ I3 z* k, E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* H7 B$ Z7 a7 a- U; ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# H4 x/ ~7 B6 P; w( N7 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  f0 C: z" `4 L' ~* ^* j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  d$ N2 s, ^. C- Z1 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 v8 P$ m: X3 ~7 R( |& V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' y3 O" D! z2 {  w7 ~- z% h! Z( y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ?* G1 g7 C6 w& {; @" v2 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. z" D7 \6 k* p5 y  Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  O& x7 _' ^  J% a+ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 g+ H% y+ g; j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  E$ Q% c9 w: y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: F1 o! O8 S0 @) i4 _9 w8 S3 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# d  l+ |( \: f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- X2 e, o/ }+ V7 V5 z" I7 ~: _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ^8 c% n# ]4 [, e9 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>