【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# \6 @) @: Y# l" M5 B% |6 s5 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ Q- {/ J4 q% IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- p$ |/ |$ N) e; E1 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
& p0 o2 q6 n5 {+ e) S+ R7 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* ]" W2 t! b' l, c& P. `) ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( E- B/ i& b0 m9 g1 vEvery other word you utter is love
  a2 _% S0 o' `0 T' a5 u9 eI really want to know just how much you love me
1 z( K2 ^4 g4 sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- P$ }3 E) [9 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 e$ Y) T$ e* @9 N6 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 I  W' k* Q$ _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 B% y. y. `+ |4 z5 b4 F4 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- Z4 |9 P9 B7 L6 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. D8 q5 S, U" I$ W, ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ~- L+ ~. Z8 `/ R- O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. L1 ]7 M: S0 o- j+ T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ c) u6 [, B# Q* y+ p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 \% |5 j6 g) F1 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* r2 c7 v) l8 X5 \6 u3 Q% l$ |+ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, V5 l5 R5 ~7 Q+ i- ^7 ~  t' a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* G& [! u+ _4 R! e. a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- j" n& @3 M9 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 w. _; K- w" `* w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ c4 k$ e# w( q* y$ o2 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 z" X! w" j# ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ?$ X. t2 H1 i1 Y7 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 U1 w6 g& }2 k# w! ?6 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ `  Y! p: A' j4 C8 R" g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 L" L& l" D3 \; z8 v9 z8 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ a6 I" O9 A' w2 ]$ v. ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& [8 W3 h6 f' C4 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. @. X; @5 ]) l9 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- l: M6 D0 C* F: e6 w) Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- K- I+ w% V. K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 [( Z# \4 P8 p0 p6 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 q3 [! z. z; t& B4 }7 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 w! J# f3 x8 q, F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( }- @9 o* K  g4 g  P( ]) Q/ Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* _  J( I$ N3 h( L. H9 n8 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ y8 M. }0 s: T; d2 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 L5 |/ \; R; H" D$ z$ l2 S4 S' f) u. E3 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Y! Z) ?4 ~6 V  t" @, G. i5 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>