【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: ^+ Q! @- v2 i" M3 Y2 S/ j; ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# A$ |  W; p8 q1 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 W& Z2 T3 R. [3 w; b6 u! W7 \3 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! J9 x- J  A- F  b' nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* t0 {+ `- r. b" B# ^% @I love you I love you with all my heart
. e/ G$ k; H2 J& [% |# GNothing can compare to my love
+ V# f6 w5 z/ f$ @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ j" G) r6 b7 N. oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 p" p9 x. \, ]/ {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  M2 B& S0 I1 T2 y+ [. s7 w) HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 I6 q/ c; x* ?1 V) }# c  tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! B$ m* c8 t  t; H+ w/ }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& A: g) w$ i! b. z- G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' ?+ B2 i5 H  T  z' q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% W6 A( D0 w! u- s/ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 b& b0 V5 y* n  \6 C) b1 {& ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- G/ M: r0 [4 L3 E1 x4 X% e+ V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( k- F4 H* F: O' S- F, c6 \<P>你无需担心</P>
) B0 I& t& K9 o. M" K4 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- B' Z1 H$ ^4 s- R9 x) Z) ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 d6 s  e3 N. P% s" X! D$ S# }1 S) M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: W6 ~' s4 U6 X" o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 z; n, a& L# Q* C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  e9 m' X2 E) ~6 y* d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! _7 Q) D: d% W+ s* o5 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- M6 ?7 m1 f5 H/ X9 ^# ~0 s4 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) e  x8 l9 O) s% b; l' y$ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 }- B2 a3 V! H; u; p+ F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' A8 b+ k' G' E4 S1 _% s* N$ B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 X& \! Z9 Y% H1 V% a% O; Q9 z" z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Q6 u  ?+ |, l6 s) x2 R8 {+ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; H$ @$ J  j1 w5 Z7 n4 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ C' H' v4 g# b8 R9 q1 r, M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 F; A6 }0 \/ r& F/ J0 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 G' s5 a! M8 T% y" I- M- a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: c# G7 ?* i; D, d/ E2 B; D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ |$ R9 V3 X2 C: H  |- T) H: m4 l6 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>