【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 [9 ^- e9 S$ A/ c歌词我附在后面。
5 I* Y5 b4 ^# S  t# ^! c( t6 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' M$ o, O/ g# g  U3 v  H/ X' SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- j! b0 l" }- G8 |" tThe sky is happy down to its soul
& p# `1 `' q2 qWith the moon kissing it every night
. B+ s. y$ Q1 V) `9 W3 jSeeing the sky content with its love
0 i5 D! C2 V. L0 x7 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 ~/ T" N9 S4 a6 ]; nI really want to know just how much you love me
1 q7 Z2 _' g: b& W* cI love you I love you with all my heart
2 \1 t8 i$ ~+ F( h7 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  r9 m9 M4 J" f8 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( D6 p- C6 B+ m* R9 s6 |4 GI’m still filled with fear
+ D( D" C! H6 }1 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' I/ a# L) I6 w' c  C8 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. C4 `1 N$ \" L% s- x  F( W7 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& u) g, C$ Q" E$ I7 D9 J! ?- {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 M2 N* W6 ?+ `6 B9 d; X9 s$ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ u1 D8 R3 S( n: Z& I( D& t  _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, W  V; R% r7 V* M% |: _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 ^4 t; {  J5 T  g5 V% P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: J+ g8 a, w) y& d# w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* t7 M! [2 {/ R8 q4 G2 t* p9 v! N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 A4 Y( Q2 c) P) A/ c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: g0 o( T4 p: G3 W6 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& K9 d) D& ^: {# H- G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  R: V  k* K5 G% r8 f( u( S. C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, P3 u; T2 X% T" y" {) J, S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Q2 n# {4 m+ y* V7 M9 M# R3 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( U  G  {7 ?: K* H' h0 o2 I2 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ P, C" D5 d! M+ u2 K5 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 t5 c& d2 a6 M/ t' i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! r. Q! Z3 p! a+ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; q0 m/ I1 V+ i: J+ o/ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) i4 [! i2 h" o3 q- D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; I* O2 N+ h2 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 q7 _$ M0 j, p; u2 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) U/ {6 g- [* [) R, I4 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& o- }; E3 ^/ ?4 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& N+ x% d' Y2 D( `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( x! O2 I' I. c8 D, A6 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# G, u/ u6 n, s5 G) s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 q& L$ \% C5 o+ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 k1 q+ T$ q5 o1 N9 `. M" t% m0 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ^* a! r8 c7 @) c9 A" e8 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>