【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ]* \2 N+ d" ?; zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 [( E% }% u' [0 E( Q# K5 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  F: i  N, Q" P6 S: q; c( F; gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, E) j# d* y' W: q: R  q+ |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ {; g# m( u. }5 c' N- b5 qI really want to know just how much you love me
( H; v- h" s, N; T7 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 a: v+ E& v! z2 `) BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ m+ z. Y( f, d' L5 m: i$ SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: J7 i% G* P- B6 B( d4 @; d6 K  sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) y% h' J" J+ N. J% I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" l) h# Y' H! k" t) S6 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& e; b4 S1 h7 @4 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& D# u* S; O  d/ M+ |& y. J: y+ A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' k# c3 `) ^' h0 P) B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. ?% ~- D5 f. ~; R2 E" I  c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 @$ o0 G2 J2 g% ~& }' }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) {4 B' p8 U, M) i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 c( R3 u/ q5 V% u: b- e/ U: E' }0 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 l; N! M. I, ~% W; m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 ?) p) K9 a2 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! P  F# m/ q7 a( j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ a9 @, e- e4 s" m: n1 h  f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, O7 v9 x) d9 C: c9 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: i) i, c+ F" Q# |  n' v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' y  P: F3 I( p: f6 F3 A8 e! Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# }. A" r! b" o' y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. z+ v$ E, r' i9 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. i' T# Q) R6 g) S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! y: X" {1 ?/ V; O* z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 d( j  S4 a4 @1 P4 G0 R; h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' d* C/ }1 i" k2 S; ?( s- j! G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) b4 a2 w* ?% G. ^- A: E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; L: K+ y0 a- N, z, H; C! }5 \1 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: V. N8 h( w7 B, g6 F6 C$ [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 v) }5 }* d+ ]  t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ K" ^+ k* V4 \6 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* c  @7 q" x0 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
6 e5 m9 x" q. [. |, h" G( L
9 S. g) y2 d( ?' f& M5 m. A我请你剖开它
$ F5 D- N5 o7 W# t- k
$ Z/ ^3 u* ]# h. s, P* Z. Y1 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( p2 }4 P6 `; l2 w. g, z. V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>