【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 o1 M" j4 d$ ~  x' zWith the moon kissing it every night
8 [: `$ Y  Z: h# M  u5 t  d& TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ h3 R0 u* ~( M( @1 \! i. Q  X" f) IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! r: f8 Z- s; W! t+ m; n1 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" J, h) N* g' H6 i+ j/ `! A! YI love you I love you with all my heart
8 J% I5 O% S% S, YNothing can compare to my love
6 p) H5 Z, q. s8 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  }8 ]" X4 t2 m( d8 {5 }6 x4 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ?* Y5 T8 I/ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" R. \( L1 s; ?; GI regret not dying
$ g0 ^& m7 d; aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; G  s% c! \. n; @* I8 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& s0 N% l7 W- K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) |/ v  h+ b$ D) q# w3 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: E9 Y, Q! Q! F/ O- q7 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, R/ Z* f/ D, V% w- w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! N4 I# U0 T7 U$ ^' e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) \6 `$ y" i# c' A! ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 i* V4 k* ~& p; L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" m5 |4 O1 @* m+ B3 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' y+ r# ]6 f* p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. [* Z( m$ ~1 ^. f2 ]' g/ B; `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" F3 P) ~7 n0 A. K9 f2 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ I/ f$ ?6 G/ Y  l: w& _2 D( r# r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: L( ~$ `) |0 a8 B# v9 G7 {- `6 A' l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( B% P+ G5 v/ F6 e/ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; I- \- ]# C- E% ]3 p/ f7 H3 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 h0 V; f+ x: \3 f8 E' \0 {- a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& E& S: p- j7 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 Q8 M& u; i5 _9 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% b4 \+ d' Z' A) V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 T2 I6 {+ U) z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; L$ y$ \' J* r: q& I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ [, \+ O: a; z5 U9 y- b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* N  o: O/ F1 X' k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* \) p( A6 j( M$ U: T3 \9 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 L/ i8 N5 ^. o( S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, m, ~, {' I4 J  M, F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: x; O3 j" q- P! u! D; [7 l  J1 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 W8 A3 x/ U* W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>