【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 c' [# [1 A( B( c/ `0 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: v5 }* A( b& A9 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
  q! T+ J* P. a. J7 w6 ?With the moon kissing it every night
0 B6 c! l4 H5 iSeeing the sky content with its love
. c' t/ N1 N; E& C# h9 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* c6 K9 y( F& G% AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: h, P. ^" F5 R" S# T: lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" B7 t7 J. b/ F9 z& j( d+ jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 }) a4 b' x1 @7 {. M, X6 U  e1 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ _- e$ y  f5 CI’m still filled with fear
& s+ t6 `. o' H4 D) Y1 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ U$ L+ B& E+ U. r- d. {1 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% n) p$ _. y0 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. I# @' u0 o* M9 x, H) pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. q, C- ?1 e5 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 P- E- f$ ~4 z9 a0 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- t  v1 V! X- m6 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* c1 N& H7 c. @  Y/ q& i0 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; V0 `5 ]5 U4 a( L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% H5 F7 _; e5 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 P( y; y2 I8 o  {0 K( I6 y0 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 G4 m! Y, `. {! N5 @" P# h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( o0 D4 u9 f2 h" d4 ~( A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# l/ O% l$ C* a* [" a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* X9 R, Z( m8 U  |9 X7 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* s, p- W) j' w3 ^1 A# y( b5 K2 B<P>你无需担心</P>
" K+ v! j1 u" p$ h5 }1 u/ U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, e7 L* l+ O4 d$ ?% j: I5 R0 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 f) M& Y; i( n- G2 M5 J5 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 B# y" U5 G8 `4 p9 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" P: E! T8 Z1 H+ `1 h9 k: m* s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 l6 J3 s, H9 U0 g& b# F  A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 m+ i; p, c3 J9 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ]* t+ Q; a4 b, V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 u% y$ O4 z7 w; z! U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 T  a6 O4 T! W! c+ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) M3 [6 r! \( Q! m<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 T& a  `- f! B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ G) Z! T2 j2 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  G7 p' G! P: y2 q" Y7 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; Z5 K- H* K& ?* M2 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! y/ I' ?- L7 q$ I, |# U3 j) Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>