【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& I$ g/ c; z) k8 I7 S) c9 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ e6 k' A  t4 k" v5 w' OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- Q; ^; F6 l5 p2 g0 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  f/ e$ s: C7 {7 H( Q/ @( FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" P2 m% O( P- }8 m) |) ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 u" i. K5 r: E3 X; qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 ]; b  G' G6 _: C' P9 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; a! g4 w' U+ aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 _/ @7 t+ x3 O9 _. i4 j  AI want so much to see inside your heart
9 L+ R! ?" A0 S# W% z& p+ d1 _' HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 I& e& r. P; X  `4 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 \# X/ j3 M9 g1 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 }# N5 K+ G* O% `) U# j% pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 f9 o2 W3 l8 v! c+ K% NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 \* C! l2 ^/ {" z, j/ q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 D  ^+ @; ?" ]# @; C* c( [0 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: J* T, I  M8 G6 p: {/ ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ~% v) i3 z, x, L) v9 T- e1 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) `" V6 z% [  b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  q+ Y5 G7 [! c0 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 e& F7 f3 E! O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 B* {& j5 A# \) |) O0 w: K<P>你无需担心</P>
5 ~' i& b+ c& k; ]' _: b$ e) i) W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 I* J8 f. p: \' H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 w: ~  J  A+ S1 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 Z3 \) v: C7 i9 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! P4 G& `0 [! c2 p, X5 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ l$ n$ m8 x& O1 P; @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" X9 J" r$ _1 R/ Q- B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ^0 M2 e. O9 J1 v. g  X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( G7 j+ G( Q8 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 b0 ?8 t: w  d7 C% p2 M; q$ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" h! T: U. T; _. v! O5 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 K: u8 M) m4 Y$ e. ^: ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  g" m+ o$ Q- `- `& Q0 k$ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( _' s0 t- z1 @6 A* u: \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ r% k1 t+ G9 `2 @7 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# x6 q! G/ J* C8 d' O) x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% {/ S# F, `! V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 S+ K# d+ r0 b: @6 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- S; t4 k& `4 W- t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' B- O3 E5 s5 k4 _( q. e& H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ G' K5 x! b- {7 ^4 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>