【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 O; P: C& `# |5 n. n' b) jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Z% m+ `. N5 F# S: N9 }The sky is happy down to its soul
5 x6 _5 m; W# l% G0 XWith the moon kissing it every night
( S& \) \; n' o( q: X7 q4 A6 q( jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Q8 N) Z" v( i6 O$ d( O" OEvery other word you utter is love
% q3 A! y% ~3 y1 CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: H1 C7 X7 g  B/ |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  S* m  L8 p6 o$ D0 @6 j7 K& tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 s, L3 ?9 W/ u5 q# }3 b9 h0 r; a3 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 W: A& l2 ]+ t' S. _" D, s+ `/ qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 {$ F8 T1 E4 _% vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& ]* I6 E( n& M5 t2 ?6 d, AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# |# o; P8 t4 L6 f; E. q( z, [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  V8 T2 g6 k9 I8 G2 Y* rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 |& ^' m" W" Q6 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m/ h+ T# s, T, A( @9 r3 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; t. i$ i$ R& r1 T- a4 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 b! o0 x; g9 F/ \  K, I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: _1 J5 q' P- I; I: K# S. Y, m& W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) ]8 F: v; d8 ~( u/ D: [, \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  g. F+ w: w/ ~, q/ i/ m; P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 Y1 z6 ^; `5 ]$ B6 i2 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 \5 Q  y) T" _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- d: a6 L8 [+ k" L2 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 f0 s, |# z6 ~: c) ]9 J0 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 w- l# u$ Z+ Z1 O" y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 X  e. h* P# u: y7 V  f1 V8 r: A8 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 Y) r# h( F; p) v- T! j0 Z8 f8 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 p0 z( K+ U0 @9 V0 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; d) }$ ~$ h+ ^5 q5 ?0 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 E' U: ~) M+ ]" Q  F2 m5 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- `" l& W1 I/ @2 h! u, A+ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; S* h* T/ D6 V: g, S& X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 _! e; q; A  P' e* H! r8 D. e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 d9 j; X9 }3 X5 P6 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 X! n" o) F4 B4 n* @2 |2 n, A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- a5 S) L3 J- V; P, \, e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 k4 C! `8 P8 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- I$ m& Z1 {7 y! s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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