【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( E. G0 t9 O& BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- h6 ^1 W$ v+ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ g) Z8 N; \  }& ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! u) B2 w/ f, e1 n8 |$ {+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
: ?. {& z' L9 P6 r9 W* Q5 t4 ]+ |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ?' W) S1 j8 @9 {4 i- u9 FYou needn’t fear anything
; z3 m/ g& ?; T3 f# D5 O, s* ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ m' o% t3 B& j3 z0 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 ^7 j0 z) o, _8 w/ v9 t( FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 w8 @2 n+ Y, E$ V+ K" V1 N2 uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" U& b+ T' L0 c( S/ jI regret not dying
& ]' \# m8 Z) f; K- t& n6 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; o1 y5 G# Q. C( b' m7 @: DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 q( u; q! S$ @6 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 j5 g) k, {' u6 K; N! fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, ]$ Z1 |  A" n) S, ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 D$ s' _' j- {+ f2 |% T/ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. U( V. U4 q0 t6 K: H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) y, {# f$ p& Y# I  L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 [( d  @8 j  `- g0 K6 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, O' @( ~  A8 v0 C" j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- a8 X, L) Q  z. q6 v" I" U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. v# D- W  E9 e0 U0 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ^* l9 R  R* g8 s% s# @( p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 Z" ?7 A2 c. ~( f' a8 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% }0 d+ i- z8 s, q8 M9 c& m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) X# K+ W, U9 q" \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 q- C1 f: v' H/ c9 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 @' m3 |! d+ t" c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- B. }% {0 {' Q; \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, o. R9 ~& @/ u$ b) s& e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 a% u7 Y$ U4 d3 X4 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. ?6 G1 W) j; X) o4 X( u) z  [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  D( `2 h3 L: @, I8 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ?7 z% K( H" x7 e' b: a) Q6 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. T# V. c5 G" D5 M& L  h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. i& F9 g0 U( h8 R; m4 @. K: Q+ `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 C& }; o( C& V# U8 \. D% w- S, U2 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ S6 S9 c" O8 ?/ h# B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% A. g: @* \( g! ?* p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- T/ m$ T- h9 C6 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ~6 z$ h+ n; g/ c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ }5 k# ]1 B, t5 O2 A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 r" c) {. g- b- A& Y( u: v1 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>