【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ X6 j, ^# k3 U3 C4 |歌词我附在后面。
/ y$ ^) |3 W4 U8 W2 s3 [/ ~& hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 `  s0 w) C5 Y  y2 e2 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 p. T4 |9 Z( K4 a: z5 V7 q9 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# a6 \9 n. ^) m2 f0 R+ X. {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" l8 R2 k+ d* h  k2 L' u% cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% X* g) Z0 `* j- l# a5 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ x& d5 r9 T6 J) K0 L1 ANothing can compare to my love
6 a3 [/ ~  a9 G" e) F  I. G# jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 _5 s3 i' k& t5 C7 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 H$ k* d2 }  M$ O9 w! S3 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ]: R3 s4 K+ ]' y  zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ |  {7 b+ i% G/ L6 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 [* [7 F0 F  z! t2 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 V; c1 U1 G# f2 W6 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' t' T$ ?: X3 l# }4 m# `* H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 v) l2 C/ S$ g7 B3 {+ j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ j+ o5 g4 ]7 t/ ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; l- g) p7 I* H' d; x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: O  w1 @" |* e1 W2 j9 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' O& W1 j: B, ~1 T7 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% r2 i0 n' _9 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- _" S' v) D2 r<P>你无需担心</P>
9 L' F2 p! u% t" w/ d3 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: C* C5 K0 s+ K3 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 m/ U5 x5 `7 M1 i! E& d) I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" t" I# M3 s; G2 V. ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' N$ ~* T- @; A- V) C8 h% s0 W6 N1 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' F) O; `# Y# z0 n% q6 \3 }8 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  n; A" \( ?: w, |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- B# w/ w' A1 R' J% Z% d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 O+ r# Q* _" `: ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- Y. O# F0 A% M. n9 a- M0 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
" f7 y$ ~$ x5 O! ^# R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- n& Q/ X) X; ]. {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 R  g; U8 m1 e' A; ^5 x; r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 f7 s$ U& B1 H; A8 ?8 W# L1 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) o, ~9 `1 C& I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 X4 X6 g. n5 s( L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) l7 U6 u1 b. d- Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>