【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 W+ Q2 C" \* @6 J* t3 L0 `歌词我附在后面。
& ~4 q* H. ]8 _5 M: ?! OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 m, V: f/ P! yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  I+ k2 O( J- R  X) _" t: v+ w# [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: `- ]) F' S7 G" T) ~3 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 g, A+ R: a6 I' f- e8 zYou needn’t fear anything
8 |+ c, L/ y8 e* EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- q" P4 D5 P( PEvery other word you utter is love
, P$ ?& ~+ T& W4 p9 ]# c5 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 E7 v6 I' V! I1 o8 U& Q* UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ D: X. f; s5 P) E' |# I. s5 t/ N. wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& b" E' i' b! |! L4 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 c6 i6 C. x  K0 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, M0 U) K9 [$ l, D% n. nI regret not dying
( [9 T9 B: \2 {9 |# r9 z: OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, |! r  Q& T# E/ TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 y/ }( b/ f6 \5 g, t6 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 P6 [0 `1 E' G1 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ o5 y" Z; r% G( b* d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l. E. x! |! X- v3 `! x/ J2 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- n# m, _, |) Q. T: v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' O! E. N9 _# @) i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% I0 ^* D( V/ s3 }$ P4 R3 o3 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; G9 Z8 O, v& m! g) R0 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 F3 j$ ^  X9 o+ p5 V1 w- i1 z' f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 U/ i' m% W$ X% X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  U+ `2 M/ r' J  T# U/ C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# G7 F$ d+ `) g( k- _4 Q; G" E- ~6 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 G4 P5 \8 X8 M: w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 i  C. Y, P" S% C8 Q$ ]2 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* Y, |% o9 C* D5 ~4 j; Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! ~( p2 X' R" ~8 y- T! ~* n) z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 Z; F4 s* S" J$ Z! h* F+ L- w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M9 u  R' q. I6 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" g0 G( m3 f  s3 }% B( P  F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# `8 E. ^  A7 y" j7 ]5 P; ^& q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 K# A3 F- o" V# B6 T; ~* s+ L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 J# H5 P- Y3 y, b# y- g9 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 U4 A  \5 B/ P8 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 x% P$ \; M5 S  ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" d) ~2 c2 d  x6 `: l5 O' k) P/ z, ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ R1 f/ |" K+ J3 |1 X, {" @9 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 A3 H  Y4 k3 }" h2 ^5 M  Q* N! n& p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ S) {# Q/ L2 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 R% ~2 s) _9 C' A+ h* {+ `, T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 k% {( `$ T0 V' T; S- H, U% u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 }* R# y5 ]9 g3 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 M( k3 Y' h* N& J, c5 M( |2 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>