【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 x- @# T: T9 U4 e, H9 H; d9 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; P( X' ?5 W2 f  u+ w3 D. v3 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
, Q5 S+ s) r! k* K2 g0 g* \  b3 a: }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* C$ ]) Y3 W2 Y9 B1 n) xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 D; i% }, k1 e# k. k: g7 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" N: G0 D( M" a5 Z! [% J2 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' L! R! Q9 X. VI love you I love you with all my heart
7 n  M  X1 j1 ^* UNothing can compare to my love
8 I# p7 V" [6 b* h! \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' D; N' W) L+ c; [& ~, q/ iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 t* ]" V# @; ^: BI want so much to see inside your heart
# D* m$ N$ j7 h, T# r) HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. z) `- H: J. h6 Z; z9 x, \; z0 FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' O7 g( x& _3 e$ YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  |1 b9 C  L! K( X; M. }. P/ nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# h6 `4 w0 Z0 D$ e/ aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 y9 j' |* G7 m. P# ^2 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! p5 y7 a  ~: s# d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# t/ b: O; P1 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! i! z* A8 f, _1 u8 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% P/ E2 D! J7 q; h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 I/ a! {& L$ W$ T1 m* I/ _: P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ^+ P6 w& x# f3 C6 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% s' t4 T8 |( S, O' T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% r6 i; h; G: V7 D: w8 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" M2 W$ s, A5 t- A, V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- [; c* g3 Q+ r* w+ u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! c7 F+ Y! o' q: C) I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, a  S* c  H) r/ {& V, H4 q- r0 v% |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% S% T5 \* o" ?: G  k' x/ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 C/ a8 t) }# {6 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& x9 A) x! ^: o% V  y0 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  p9 W* W3 Q3 ^; Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# l/ a, T8 L6 q8 y/ S5 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 z9 U7 c+ [: u2 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G. R2 M$ a+ I3 f/ s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ]/ ?; n" Y; _. D( v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 J8 C# H+ h# z. ]! A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* E9 `) [, |# x! g% _: m1 e4 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 Z1 ^$ d( b: B1 G. Q+ z4 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% y3 r; E6 I  ]9 Q4 W+ u, b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- E8 _" V+ K& @& }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 d2 `6 x* Z* d: |: U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>