【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 E0 U- `7 ~! g# X+ m, w9 ?歌词我附在后面。
# G3 Z) I. [1 Z. P9 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ }* V& {& D$ L* WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" J- U) r: g* K3 p' a* ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& H  p2 O5 i' M. c# C0 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 `$ |4 @* f) K* \7 mYou needn’t fear anything
% s: `; F2 ~# P" R: D" i, m9 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; {2 G' b5 u& g) A0 rI love you I love you with all my heart
% l' n8 R* ?% s& h' [7 sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 K! ^: S9 ^6 A+ |. p4 @4 M% kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 T' e& ~4 Q, W1 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) B" ?2 E& I- RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 n( _! ?0 e$ ~/ A5 Z1 G* z' l) QWith such a tongue as yours,
+ p$ o% `. i/ ?( l1 [3 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 U8 l# N: [- OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! B  n! L  O- y1 M8 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 o3 G# u8 Z, {; b  z- u, h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; y/ X* p* |# I6 o& R+ f9 u3 G- m( a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' G7 M+ O* c5 h( {! q# t: |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: S1 H) V1 F2 G+ c: t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 k. c2 C4 D; @, q* O/ F, ]+ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ Z- \, h% S3 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 G0 e8 b4 l; b: P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ |4 G# }6 e) l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 D  r$ ^: N# }9 s5 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. b6 Z. G$ s, T- C' o, q- |8 l7 i9 Q- k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: V2 T' T0 ^# [! Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# l1 w  G! h" h* L6 Q7 a6 d' |: l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ]$ z# e4 T0 D! w- [/ U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \) s! [. i, i3 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( P. s2 I' j  F$ {0 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% d  j, M( [9 K/ l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ r$ I% ]3 G$ G4 _  F1 u6 G- t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 c8 }2 w- K3 K* p& {, ^8 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ?- L6 {+ w" v3 T0 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 H: d: t  v" w, s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 w! s9 ?6 v: Y$ ]" H8 D& W" f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- C+ ]0 X1 Z& A, a6 c* H# k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 U2 W( d( J  X! T. p7 I$ P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: M- o- }7 T: @  s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  X) N6 ?  w7 v4 V5 ?. K* }2 Q3 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ P: _  w! U3 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! G" m( u8 T2 \) S/ k1 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 b* h8 b) {6 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 `  Y2 ]& |# [- O1 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ h! ]% N5 U$ M% K6 x1 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 e8 {  r$ G1 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>