【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Y7 s$ H" u7 }& U6 l歌词我附在后面。
; l5 J! W1 q4 b7 g! q7 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 J& z6 z/ O+ ^: P) g; k! X  AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ t+ _: E- ]4 V4 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ Q+ u# J$ C7 ~( c, J7 A$ m- c! H) vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) x" a9 \, w0 |1 m& h: X5 ]You needn’t fear anything
1 G3 g0 R: M' |! c" SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- k3 |4 h$ I8 G& r8 _4 @% f* ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( h* `& k' N2 K( |0 ~& P& Z' ^2 a, [I’m still filled with fear
: ]/ {3 Q7 i& @4 L7 `/ t" RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. X- U& Q( ], b* W* y2 C/ A1 hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, W  m+ j1 n# @$ ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. _, ~+ s/ `" i. b, u" S; N) u  W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 F6 E2 b, |9 X; U7 |4 Z9 E7 r4 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& @# ]* }+ m# p6 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 M7 h! h% ~1 [/ k! j6 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, E) R# d$ t* F, m7 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 m: a9 i% N! y% M( u9 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% l  p$ p. d6 W4 {! i- M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 B2 h) I7 y# k' W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# y  ~4 i, d% l+ f+ o$ W" Q<P>你无需担心</P>
3 `3 Z5 P  S/ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* t! J& l" G5 q6 _7 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ f* l* j% ~: n' g- I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 i* l' j. k- }) s+ G) c, T( j7 C" s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 a2 l1 x; Z- |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& f& a( `! z$ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 S) M* Y8 j: h, ]. G* [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 M  Z, V" u+ b2 B3 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 A& g* l2 ]% n; x% q- [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 x$ B3 e! S3 F) A7 {, N2 t6 F4 Z6 ]- p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( L, F% ~) Q. m0 |7 j5 C/ X( U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' h( i6 g4 R2 z, U) ^. T  k  n<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 u5 s& a/ y# K# L( C7 Y4 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& z, q1 z* q) k/ `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# s( Y% e- a6 W8 U. i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^! e( f. Z# }$ a: o  P  k" D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# e: {, {, z" B* A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 m7 d/ S  n' c. a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. C" s. o6 Y6 E4 {$ B: O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, K* Z  Z9 p& }; W" T/ l1 d/ t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ?- z" ]$ T- I3 M* {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>