【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# J+ F7 b1 C9 A. h: Z8 h3 z( YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" K8 x/ w1 ?9 B4 K0 j1 @1 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 q9 Z0 Z% h7 z7 z# B4 {With the moon kissing it every night
) I: G& `( |! k( ]) NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ]! C6 S  \7 n+ |) T6 ZYou needn’t fear anything
' l+ M& m6 `1 D6 l- s, |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 ^" ~# G, b/ r: F6 G& ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 h# W8 ?4 U) lI love you I love you with all my heart
" j, O* D; q; R* H* pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& V! b: w4 C% K) y) v* jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ l5 A' I5 z5 \( g* }I’m still filled with fear
1 K  B$ ~% I1 _6 y1 f9 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; K' O6 u; P! T: W* S+ @0 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) }8 L# P' Z" X8 n# E2 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ \) H& ~! S0 g7 V$ C. Z5 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" r; h3 C, W( G+ K) O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. ^4 F) ?( K# }2 O* g. O) g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 m$ k+ \: S/ w# n( `) I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ], \6 F8 b/ y! p2 c& L, L! i! Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 b1 {$ @& c9 ^: z6 l$ F) q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* u$ Z3 t/ J% v) g* f0 L# v( {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) j+ w% }) p# C* U6 i  n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ M1 I. \1 K: T& c: U. q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* q+ i+ {4 Q: K4 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# ?! I4 r( A0 A; j5 I1 f! W<P>你无需担心</P>
9 Q* o) Z. A6 T( ~( A% V9 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' J- N" x6 t' u0 Y( n% a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 I. R1 ]7 e5 d* U6 ?9 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ~" x& G1 O5 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; x5 F( h& |* @" r: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& I& c  ?3 v) M* b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 h& M1 C6 k2 H; ~# t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; W& ~( j3 h+ Y" t/ f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ?& @" V; s+ j, @/ s4 u. _7 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 p6 [" q8 p$ {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 B# Z! r) }* j' f# O# V# R7 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 X& w$ J( G% t% j1 u, l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, a; b" Q  K% H7 v' o  o4 l' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 b0 R: O& {# v2 M& X+ L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 L6 K' F+ J. r1 |% Z% e- g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ^$ b2 t" A+ f$ E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; A% M! O# z/ ~/ v- N8 ~' _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 {' h# h" W! r: |# D" @" O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ O2 H3 P8 [& i# K& J$ }7 C, K& y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: d; @. j7 J* {9 P& J( _! E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 Q# I; g, J# E/ n8 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Z1 D  J, t! h' s& \% ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 O- O& @7 F8 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>