【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# W/ y/ y# S' Q' R$ fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 y  W+ z1 S" Q1 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ?3 O# P9 a+ q- S. x9 @7 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 n+ y/ k  R1 P* @$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ i% [+ j. ]& v% S" DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 R3 D% p: w( z& L. UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 q6 m. T) r' A! n9 v. `" c/ u- GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& u: |" T1 Q  G! V7 A5 k; NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 _% Z4 L3 d* KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: Z7 D% ~" [# Z- G5 C8 G, {" LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 A) M" e0 R+ O& i& [4 MWith such a tongue as yours,
0 e# f( u6 y+ t' O' ?9 O+ T' eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 s( M% v/ `8 Y  SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( _" z) `! j  O" \; X2 y+ c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ A" G+ |) t  D* t% m7 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  F9 {5 J% h6 ]- c' ^( f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Y- Y' T2 N# o8 p0 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ \" _! \4 y0 v) K6 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 W% k+ P8 e! M<P>你无需担心</P>
, }# V3 x! g7 ~; W% [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# R. S7 i7 p' E# Z  F" U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 R6 W5 z3 `" U) M3 r$ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! L* ~% I8 J% l) p! T) r- W( q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, `8 G- `- I* _: K$ l% y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; W1 I/ ~; ?, Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 ?6 I: n& U7 R! I& \- H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 B6 |" g0 r# |- U) E0 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" F' v6 Y& e( ?( N- Z" T, O8 K: i& d2 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  W- t6 b1 D6 a) T# y6 r6 R+ I! X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* J; K5 d5 V$ k7 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ^& {0 G; j( V5 G) J0 Z5 w' \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! ~/ m, `* s+ w) k! f) I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' g8 L. P/ k$ Y1 H/ j$ s# F! t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# {6 |; W" `2 m5 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 n* D  W4 w, Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>