【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ @: r- \, m4 E$ V4 d9 q歌词我附在后面。
. X1 n) \8 C) y" r: N1 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 H( s+ t- K* J2 v+ E4 ~1 F7 z  \% SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ~$ B- L, V: q7 f+ z9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
: m* F) ]. a0 T/ \' gWith the moon kissing it every night
( T% U* d) G+ t8 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 i# b! r0 g7 `" R& GYou needn’t fear anything
& G- X( \% M* W) QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) D! {+ \5 A, t" }; \' lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" w" q- Z; K) cNothing can compare to my love
/ M7 }2 _! f, o! iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ]+ w! A+ m! K: ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# |5 U3 B/ j9 b( {8 _* U, q; q( }I want so much to see inside your heart
; |8 Q) q7 X: c% z' XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ g/ a; ~$ ^6 b7 c- N+ ~) dI’m still filled with fear
" Q( C; a/ b+ K3 s8 \; rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; L8 n, V. K; J' [% \( U9 A. ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 d. `. {7 z# ?! A: i! fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ P: v) G" n: v- n# \+ Z, U- BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& ^/ m( H5 n& K9 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 x+ i  @" b4 a8 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ T8 b' B8 K- a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 m1 t- l2 A( O' @1 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ B0 p6 o4 l1 Q9 l6 r( m* M1 z" c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Y' A  j% z8 g* x# f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ B6 T; a7 X9 ~! R+ f2 r0 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ~! W: ~3 h* ]! K2 o/ Z* y/ a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 n. f" L9 p% i- K1 B/ e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 @. I! a& m+ z2 ~6 d7 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 B0 D+ v- S/ l+ B$ _- g# Q1 t9 H; l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. l. t, ~  H9 }, L) y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) `1 v; ^+ ]1 @# |5 k, A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ s) J7 s* r5 W% N# H$ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 x- L0 ]: g1 i  q1 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  R, R9 x& Q/ a% d! w8 w. d( h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  P6 W2 z0 C# V; R, {, i% i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ?% K! w" |/ ^% e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- }( C# c1 z( ^- y" q8 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 K) h' X7 [' m/ m7 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 Y  `" x& u( M# `4 m/ |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 Z2 a9 C( j& z  q, q* W* B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 C% A9 M' ]9 j* [2 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ y9 ~& v! @5 a2 ]8 w# m3 a/ C  S& a2 Y2 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 v% w7 e  e1 E, f) `0 T* m; p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& e. \/ [" S2 F' i3 C5 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* S1 D, p0 n9 D+ Y- y2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# i, _6 e- @6 p. \2 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( F! n" c3 z" A5 U. }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) U" v2 D$ y/ N9 O: L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- d. V' T( S% o8 Q/ @3 ^) T<P>I regret not dying</P>
# X+ S5 Z4 A) n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- j# P1 i& K2 K& Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  \* x; p/ Y9 l3 t  V# T* ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" f! B) s- ~" {2 e# ?; Z/ a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ }8 x2 P' \) M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" |# {* X4 {2 w# I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  |6 q$ X; i$ h7 e) v9 z* V) K/ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& b9 r) E; _: j; `, b2 d+ U! B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 _5 j* ]$ W! \# c! P0 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 O, x1 A4 v1 {2 E  `) m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- H% H$ K6 ]5 u& @我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, w( s/ _* \2 c/ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>