【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 @0 j& D7 L/ w( Y" _7 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" f4 o# M7 D/ a- m6 l/ \' WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) b/ ?3 R/ N0 u, {1 c3 y9 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& z) X7 Z5 [9 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* H  ]& n9 L* I% t5 M/ y5 q- iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ b7 ?2 _# q# D' oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 k& G  b0 A0 x5 e1 V2 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ {9 h# H# n1 s8 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 v; n" k/ Q7 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 T  D5 X/ k% @' B. G7 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 V# Y: j5 w* z' c6 }. `7 F/ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' N9 D0 ~0 O& K8 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" d! o" V" f1 g' h8 ~6 ^5 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( n* V/ o( W$ A! j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, f" Z" Y( m: j5 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 _/ p9 J3 G7 D4 u6 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" }+ i" ?6 p2 g7 h0 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 b3 h7 T7 n3 |  k( G' L3 Q8 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- e* a! \4 y. {- X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# ?, H( J9 J7 N  m3 _7 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* i* K6 X, h% N3 b( q' H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ c* G' }: ~! f% T5 c( _3 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ z2 [8 I  v2 ]; }( i. s2 {. h# T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 D5 G, S& F9 j. \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 c( ^1 V, g6 c# m6 e) d/ s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& H- d$ K9 F3 P; [" t- Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& w% v0 D, l" V" [, A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 @3 k9 s1 }- ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 }/ n( x+ z6 T. F$ \, v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ?3 a' x6 H5 X! v2 ~8 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% \* j% H. u6 i9 u& Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& r* M* n- W2 L. o, I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& A$ ~' k# f  o6 m& f. M/ o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; e' ?2 |6 y, ~9 n6 b5 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 c0 U5 q7 s2 _0 }0 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 m& j3 b5 R9 V: f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% x& Q4 E& ~& L* B2 g2 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ z" s$ P; r. Y: o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* k! o6 X9 r2 p6 _6 D% r1 x) @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* ^0 ?/ r0 k% w; ~* P, u, u: ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 i) Q! N1 L' r, U( v* V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k! b" C+ Z- |% y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" _; Q; N& z' t& W4 }( [# k$ @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) w4 z+ S* U  a/ ?+ z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 s( V' Z4 W, M( L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) v+ i- O3 Z2 S2 w+ ]1 i* m" B/ @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>