【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: X; _8 v7 ?0 {' o$ s5 b歌词我附在后面。
5 B1 M3 N5 B& z3 P$ I  bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 ^/ Y( S) ]$ O6 c% mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 _7 j, Y# `6 g  z4 z3 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" A7 ~% b- ]8 C; LYou needn’t fear anything
. {( W8 ]; V/ s7 f$ Y/ I" hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, m$ A$ R' H5 c9 ^8 H$ Y  oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 g$ U' j0 [2 O/ j8 H( Q) a3 J! [4 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 X1 Z% A/ L' LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% I& x. h3 m! S: H" J+ P1 M5 U$ k6 q9 uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: N4 e9 B7 f0 T! t4 h* I; z. a' u; uI’m still filled with fear
7 z& M/ U6 }+ ?  L7 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) d8 P  z9 [$ t; [$ U+ D& Y, hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 H# B' T: f' i, I" eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 h; i) N3 v, K( V5 d" ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 j- ~% C4 s6 E' G6 B" T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 f/ M& F( j0 M, ?  E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 H$ q9 E) O* |' n9 [% _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. E) U9 n& w, C; ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# i3 [5 J7 V. ~7 d1 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- b# j& E) i, e3 ^& e  E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* G4 z+ h) V0 I* {4 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 r5 ~7 R" R# A% G% L6 `; _) F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; s- j7 _3 m' M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. P$ t$ D+ q& {0 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" w" |: p$ l% G! k7 [+ G& Z9 s2 o; L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 C& H6 O: A6 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" `1 f! e+ d" O& K, I. i5 x+ r+ J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 z9 \& M5 {2 `' S2 W; `+ U  `  U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( k' r2 k# e7 E( r# W6 y; b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. n) p1 G9 L6 C- T. F0 t& q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 X6 ?7 u8 m  ]3 D4 Q- p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& B/ }$ X7 h+ ~0 P; n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ F9 b4 ^, s3 ^  U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 u% Y- E3 D8 e% S' O5 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- P. R; v' k. \$ t: Z( h; l$ x9 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ~; h; [  ]$ w: J' w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 a9 T0 y. m2 w* ]. _4 p' Z4 Q4 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ _# m9 L  B3 p- L. U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; s" {9 k8 S6 t# A/ ]% W  }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 X6 G4 v9 y+ }" [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 O$ r6 B7 C' @. {, f0 r4 ]  U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ R+ k/ h2 x% i; K! s! Q& `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 o0 `! V/ L$ \0 j0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 R6 E/ Y! v, Z  ^! [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; M/ `8 d3 x; Q我请你剖开它

/ p7 r* d$ {6 B7 t. s* k# l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. d; w% n0 c( X2 p6 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>