【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ P9 A4 d4 A! U7 H. N' ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
- i2 f! j- p7 @& `1 ]' _7 c# j) M5 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 @4 X0 l! n, `: s" EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 p  ?. A' @4 f* Y) L' JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; s0 ~9 b8 e5 d* KYou needn’t fear anything
# i; K8 E8 G6 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: F: J5 d* R0 C: _' ]/ `3 iEvery other word you utter is love
3 g4 F5 d" F3 xI really want to know just how much you love me
* U' _" ^( i; ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 n! e+ R$ k; Z2 x9 e5 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 f. p( G" c. I: Q/ Z+ LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, F9 }4 `$ t1 o& B" J/ j! rI’m still filled with fear
* y5 [: s( C3 ~4 P9 ]7 n) hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 K5 P2 G8 x) ?- X9 {$ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ E# _& H: Y/ D6 z: a( T# s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- U2 T8 W* r- Z- H3 R# x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 H0 d% C$ [# x, e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! y* q* ]2 _* [" N1 c. L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. D* x  _' Y3 b: m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) q6 s; B" p# F' h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 b6 i( Z: {" ]. r, ^* m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 B4 f5 b. y. w8 k& w3 }2 l5 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 n1 ^4 ]( h+ ]& r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. E( M0 @& N- {" T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# n  w; P: I7 e' k7 P8 {2 Q) p, l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& x& @2 N+ q8 \8 U. N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 i0 m8 S  ]( v4 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 H4 l( Y& e7 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. V! W& j& F- ~$ x3 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' h0 G, R- b! T7 x3 H/ a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ \: Z. H/ ^. i) F" ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 r. L/ N3 P6 \  C; C3 }2 q: }0 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: M; F# V1 i0 w6 a9 i7 L0 d' e5 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; F+ c5 L. D+ C- O/ z1 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: J3 u, V4 q5 ^0 G8 X8 o7 R) c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ s7 e9 P7 s' B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. |; f6 _, }4 [7 y. I& }; |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 X( b; w" a) Q# {2 K& C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 }/ ~/ _% |" Q2 h2 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. x8 }! A! y4 D: M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 [7 z4 a3 `9 ^4 n) F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>