【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 c+ l9 P% N- N( o6 V+ y3 ~3 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 Q: D& x- A8 _) |0 C+ o* MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ r5 u3 O6 X4 P) K% LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 f6 P) J! ?/ ?' I3 A, H& EYou needn’t fear anything
& c$ M; c- Z: fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ C! y, _, ^9 Y0 s% j& F$ MNothing can compare to my love
# N  Z' g  D' d" F3 ^& SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ~9 Z! f5 C4 C+ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! i0 [1 X5 U8 N3 k0 G3 _  PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& F' f" ^6 S8 d4 V- s  ^: S5 I0 F5 U- oI’m still filled with fear
- O* V2 t: r! Y2 i6 i1 h' _! @+ l& n& jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 q+ U0 @+ P: a; C$ fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ C9 _/ Z! Z- K2 r1 A( B0 hWith such a tongue as yours,
* t3 T; R& l( a5 x! @$ q: P0 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 t* t8 u5 b. a9 ^% SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 Z1 ?% a! R. ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l- d  R% j+ c; k& C, z2 [& [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 g( T, R4 L8 }0 G/ P$ D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 q& `) i" T% N0 H/ Q! D, H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( m+ I9 g1 J' w* u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Z% l8 R3 m; k' a! |$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ [* P- O* `! O" o$ p5 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 f, I; s" Z! k6 u  S. t1 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) A% N+ c6 `6 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 Z3 v; r- C; f+ c; i2 `0 X' e" v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 h; ^6 Q7 H% [$ V+ z5 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; {( x5 {* U# Z: y( a' f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ?6 f. e8 O1 ~2 G7 r1 |0 [$ ^+ m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 ?& D  z4 c: W9 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! K' M& M% n) D4 j; r: \/ D* k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 n  X6 n4 r$ O& j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 g8 P& R9 V) f% K2 [2 p( Q4 T& z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' n' W' E6 g3 }6 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 Z: X% f8 b) o- `3 ^7 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# }6 o% g. M6 j/ p) Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ Z/ @4 E2 a' R; H: l; J  ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ d5 ]: z# C/ W我请你剖开它
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% h& v) T& |. G+ x8 G! e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) M& s" P* O) ?; L5 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>