【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; w7 p$ P3 a$ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! G2 m* I  [6 t) b. E% ], z/ wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  L) ~1 p# v! O4 t9 j) F4 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ]: y2 a  I* a' J2 x% BThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 @; O3 e9 f, z( l% ?3 [7 {With the moon kissing it every night
: H+ l, P4 E! a/ B2 {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% w7 w/ X* _& H+ W% r/ U. y+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 t7 s, x6 N4 `I’m still filled with fear
! a8 \2 v; z: f0 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- }0 V0 c2 j1 `3 _# \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& {+ p' S( ~1 ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ w- |$ H7 p1 e* r9 `9 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, g, |$ F$ I! x. U' w+ O9 r, ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 g5 _4 m3 V* z$ b% v5 S1 v3 ]# q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 s: d* s: W4 p9 _3 C; r# {2 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& t) _2 Z$ {; k# D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" }( j& M7 o6 R# ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# a" G* @/ |* L9 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" o9 n, a7 @6 a9 S! \4 M1 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 N# o4 X1 ?/ h/ k/ C" e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 v! d* n. d5 f2 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ J5 s8 t" ?- M  G8 I2 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ?1 K2 O0 X/ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  v; y0 D) U& y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ^6 E6 V/ O7 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 v7 x$ q  Z9 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. j  e, ?* j! a( q/ S9 v  D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 o  x) Y& [) s5 F% h9 v6 }- h" B" s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ n6 X( ]1 E" s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 j$ s! _1 B5 n( _. n& |. B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" |4 s# Q- x% n" O: g( h$ ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 e" _2 O2 l% I, ]0 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ C5 o; ]( {- X3 t: {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 i- x. t1 j& e' a3 D' G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* Q- {( X2 A3 r9 u0 h6 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. Z/ ^. m9 X$ V$ J( p' X; i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 e, ?3 o1 t  L  j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* A" h- x" Y+ S. ~# r( f6 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% X+ J. g7 O3 ]4 |6 n6 T' O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) w) j" N! f: e" f7 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 j/ O0 y9 g5 M4 E, `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ A/ \5 ?' @! M# N- N6 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' [$ Y  e# C) X& `  z9 O( O& R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 S1 M" E; C; z1 ^! @, y9 }% e0 c) y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>