【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 {$ B4 m  x, Y  {! Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 _5 m2 N; z% dThe sky is happy down to its soul
& G' }) C( m+ m: j4 Q4 N" g5 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) \4 b. P5 H. k; U8 O  yEvery other word you utter is love
/ {+ z' f; ?; [, ^4 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
2 C; z7 v- }: c( rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 g8 \1 V: v' w6 T2 s5 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% ?: P! c' q/ |, jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* h9 `7 {! f" d% x5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" L0 }5 X$ a& y9 @, b2 k: `8 CI regret not dying
: j/ P8 p3 [( k2 X( }; ~7 ~( pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# {- S6 g- m! T6 P* u7 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! x3 ?9 |' V7 U3 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# I7 T& S! F6 L6 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ x" ?. r. L. l  W$ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% A. x& b' _; E9 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 L2 K: H& T  I$ a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 }( {( {  U1 [) C$ x" r# U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% u4 I8 c% {' E8 Q1 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 m) o& C7 h# S4 n) l& e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 O3 k0 |. P8 a. f( }, j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& K  Y+ v' I1 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; v1 c: }" y& `( [4 B0 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Q, m2 g( |2 q; }# U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 }8 a+ a# g; S" k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; k; m* c- \5 I; m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ L! U) g/ e% m! k5 N# n9 _& e1 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 F+ j0 O+ E5 r8 j  ^. @* t1 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 B3 Q9 k+ f3 h3 {( P) o/ e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' l- g3 E+ y# U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 A( V) b/ q# d3 }. l0 O3 M$ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 U4 ?  E/ N5 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* X$ }+ E  A3 S: b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 R8 b  y9 X; }9 n' z1 {% I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t$ ]% J3 z. h, J+ h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ y6 P. |. Z9 A0 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% ?7 Q0 h) s5 v4 y0 ]- K( m; S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ a3 |  J8 G8 ^) i8 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>