【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! X: M' G  B) y2 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- z$ U# j/ p) W! T) A2 ?' u1 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Y* A$ B# T0 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 z6 m# W) [5 L& |; y" u! F5 g. E/ aWith the moon kissing it every night
* Z" T  R/ Z- c% x3 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ l+ Y( q4 z7 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. f- N2 n4 s2 j! lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; V3 ?" G2 P/ m9 KI want so much to see inside your heart
% |5 h, v* O8 ]! O6 Y: vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 ]  r5 I7 ^2 rWith such a tongue as yours,
! w3 i4 F3 u+ `/ X  t1 `8 n: _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# Z3 ?# u2 n$ m8 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, B. |; E$ e3 F  m$ H+ r; @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 o: ~) }! I4 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  Q* j. e+ x* r' R0 b7 p4 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' a* c: J/ |; U6 S9 B0 M7 U# _7 @' r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 d1 j8 c! E7 ]# _& t1 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. l: {  i/ ]& K' ?0 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 I& h( G2 ?/ r0 _- i7 ]5 t+ b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, {$ U! |2 U1 R+ p2 ~# @  i1 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ?5 E9 W! D! s% `* q& A) G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% O) F. V. F2 ]7 B8 e' q8 c% L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 f$ [# I8 `( \0 G  D" R8 s, ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: l& J2 \  r3 g' Z1 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# e6 q9 E$ B% V5 y/ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, X6 f. X8 Q5 a/ s: z1 q0 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: l5 D" j# m; N# D( E- F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% V$ k! L7 U) R3 p7 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ d; S1 k0 f+ M4 f- l  ?  x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: C6 M# D0 `" U" [1 w" o" _( _9 c% _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ [6 ]  D8 i2 ^* |1 K' A0 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 y  n  ]3 ]+ o( ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' g# C% t. `/ l* h9 X' p- m3 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 `: T# q# F3 E1 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 n$ J5 f" l/ m: ?9 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! x. m3 V& t4 E/ N/ {+ s, a/ `" E. K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; w2 D: t5 r! m2 }" S<P>I regret not dying</P>
; x7 Z" u7 _7 X  w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% q; f0 V9 W8 ^2 Y! g6 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 u& b" C7 S. H& K6 k4 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- I0 }. V4 G- E9 U% q6 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# i6 |/ ]3 @, s% A" I# r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* }* ]( u, T- E$ ~: w' K8 F0 X, q$ \8 r6 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; @% W) P7 |7 N. k% } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>