【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- b" `5 P3 `- g! [1 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ]! p& r5 }+ M$ S  ^  f* @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' |1 M) _) N; T: p1 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 q1 p% w4 o# _) S6 {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ r0 `! k- a: Y& E1 a7 N2 D9 z% {' w% oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  c! K1 g& ]4 d- Y6 g5 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  H& E) t+ H" Y- B0 dI love you I love you with all my heart
+ i5 y) A9 p6 h$ v! T4 T2 F9 ?Nothing can compare to my love
4 A8 s+ I6 ]9 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* M/ S( N( P5 @  }" i: ?5 ~" kI want so much to see inside your heart
% ^9 u8 f8 _. {! q, w- q% v( ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 ?# G% M+ N1 C. I/ U) q7 `6 JI’m still filled with fear
; f, W7 I5 d! L, c1 N) \: lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ^* l: q& }) dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- q" P' K5 M9 T. q7 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. A9 j; o! B. M. {; R7 n1 T9 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ r% M% c( X: M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: `! @, Y( q4 i5 I7 g# f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Q3 h. @$ Q" z+ T( J+ u3 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" o* u% H; Z  s' D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 J  o+ b  @1 R4 x* b9 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ W% _/ t" G/ V) ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 I; ?7 d! \& P8 n2 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, @0 I- K7 @5 J: z% @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 B! Q5 U$ S3 w# F" W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  |" I% C8 v  _- e' ?# i' v+ @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# F& t# Z  L- K" z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( m. h, h  ~4 c! t2 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 [7 K" D$ Z1 g  C- S9 V5 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( l; c% ]: a) `7 h/ S* |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 A: f' A. N1 n: @5 Y6 R/ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 y0 X9 ?! T; x5 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 G0 F/ {1 f6 n9 z' O( |) S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: _: s, Z' y; h- o" f! E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 a, E6 T' ~1 ^- x! z9 t, \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# z2 N8 R3 J( Z8 A8 Q% q6 k/ x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  t6 _" N' Q: u- i9 c2 |, @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 A! `5 _8 b; }- H( [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; l2 n* d8 J7 E% P8 w6 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) @3 ]6 D" K! i) q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( p2 ]: a- X5 ]我请你剖开它

1 @5 J2 z2 \4 G6 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 p! R: e1 }) y( k7 ?; N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>