【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ Y% g9 \5 @, q/ R" E3 W歌词我附在后面。
" g  C0 J* O4 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 }) V  J6 i' M2 U* F. V8 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ m9 n1 v- Y: {9 o& \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) d' W  ?9 l% r- e/ A, \! N" U/ `The sky is happy down to its soul
5 B* C$ o5 H2 Y  L, s; p7 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 y7 n: Q" J* N! c' R6 n6 {" L1 }. eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  \: @0 m9 Y# k: N2 V& D; UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- M' j" U: P$ g( c! h* s$ rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' A2 e: p1 ~4 j1 {( d+ B, ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 g8 h3 _9 t( SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ~& L5 L: T7 S; `3 p; PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ |: Y; s, x5 u7 i/ E  QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 H, A# l9 }$ ?8 W& }. P0 T7 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. A7 u/ Q  W4 o5 [; w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 ]$ p) B! L/ i( y/ y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ e. o. g' u5 }7 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% I& L. u: a  K) s6 Y1 f5 ^/ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 C" O5 O# u5 v7 u$ T. g( ]3 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& d- o. C, j1 i# ]$ @' D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: I5 [7 C2 r! G! N4 i* ?2 \' i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- \8 i" r! X0 D( _/ z) t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 P( k2 y6 a1 f0 s  ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ]* W* Z* P. b! [0 N' f( w8 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ^8 u4 \/ ^; N! {  i! g! N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! m0 m8 M) A3 D& X" r: k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. ~) p. D0 \3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( s8 _5 o$ w, E: j9 k+ c+ G: T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 r8 N% \9 V  M2 w$ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' J. [/ m" \1 T/ y- {% N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 g$ n& v, n, u8 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, V. O# `% S! J8 \) T& g4 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 \& ?# s/ t( Z) P/ u3 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 Z8 _$ v  `/ B1 U' u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 m4 _* J1 Y3 Z* @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# Z8 K9 k% j0 j3 q$ r! n: |3 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% I- J( s5 k6 D6 i- r6 F. A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 L. d7 h  L1 E( L6 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>