【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 J# k: c$ O0 V. `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ p0 s0 y+ Z+ f! \) yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 z: v/ ^4 F1 x. I6 D9 F7 c$ H3 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! I9 \4 v. F  R5 s  s1 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ e5 M% ~  A9 q; ?: LYou needn’t fear anything
7 @. K1 B( w5 O) rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 T5 h- {9 \5 X1 _' X! iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( T' y3 [/ O) U& X# ^; [: SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; N8 ~( |/ E2 m8 @! s; d% EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 y! ^2 X$ K# K$ h" f+ sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ d' h% F3 Y2 A* }0 ~, URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h9 E# x/ d1 r6 A$ O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* {/ Z3 {" H; v0 L3 [. s5 a; n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  L& ~& @) Z9 o4 k, B& T2 G' N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 B; d+ D! k3 s- n4 X, ]& k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  f  m* U) e# H: _4 x; r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: x1 c% }+ T: L. |* T5 k4 o, g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  g2 a& I; _$ A' O; n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ Z# i$ b+ }7 e; g; N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. B- M' ^5 P% ^3 L3 B/ z3 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ G- a2 A8 p# h4 z0 O# q7 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 {; u" i& s- N" W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; _6 d3 t+ P3 ^* R  w3 G$ U9 v2 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* }7 o( ]6 X! n/ _' O# S" U8 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 u. x) n/ l5 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 M9 g2 G( R- u7 i% `+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% l9 u  h2 ?% J1 F; Q& w: k% F% ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; H  N4 H: C# C. E; E" v7 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 p% R; K4 d. q6 A1 ]8 e2 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ R) w1 f' p7 p$ f% l, p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. A" U6 {& E6 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 R( H- s* [, ^6 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 e; \! B0 ?6 U! P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 P- V3 r/ L( W! e+ l8 ?  F' u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) P9 b$ i; M# l$ e& p5 ]0 b) {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 d9 g3 Q. g$ W* m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ M2 ?* o0 Q0 X" c- V: ^我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) ]: ]( z) p5 G# Q8 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>