【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 P: @& j" O1 ?* ~4 K* D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 n4 K+ K/ a" G( b- YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 }. y6 y3 f* u; U" e* KSeeing the sky content with its love
% m5 k! L+ E  R9 E& @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 a: `* y( H. S; h3 u8 MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 {7 Z; j& R2 K/ B' KNothing can compare to my love
) W6 y$ d" B+ g8 l! t6 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; y( T& p3 m) V0 C; }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! w4 s1 S/ a/ y, G9 g1 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 h/ G- S7 j; m# W8 z4 v. BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! j: A1 ]1 ]' C% Z. JWith such a tongue as yours,
) N( q1 E2 c3 J+ O) RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: l( _' R/ N; S! ^5 R2 b; b: F) W  MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 w( C* B+ c, {% {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! A( C$ i$ T1 U2 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 Z. @& O9 }7 }! }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 J' |3 P" A! w9 U/ j6 R& q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' B3 c$ {  L. q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 H% W9 s9 n% z0 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 g, M4 [5 X; x. h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 }& j( ^, v0 \: L( ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( r9 n( U$ o& c; P! r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ^' c6 Z. O  {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 A5 j! M3 x# \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 B& l# x0 X7 v5 n$ j: U# a4 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! ~" C( W5 F0 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. w' \' P0 F0 i+ j' j5 z1 @6 y* x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 |# A. L0 J0 P" t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 O5 ^" f: @2 H! Q1 B$ ~6 s2 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* J* |( x7 W) ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, }4 f5 u9 C. K# E& K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# Y( {$ ]+ |$ b' B# j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 x1 Q8 W; Z& v# {# t; H- T. r4 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( y9 z1 U; o& b; p3 t1 N3 x# \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& G+ M* F& r8 N0 J3 j) J4 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 H" {: v1 f# V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>