【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. D) @1 I' u; Q" o8 M$ r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' `  q* Q4 g8 e  J# N% wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  j7 k$ |& X4 i& F7 w4 B* AThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 W. @( d( E, D" L8 ?/ K) ~4 CWith the moon kissing it every night
& _; K7 Y$ |' u# N( a( \' s0 }Seeing the sky content with its love
/ J" }9 j" v1 B+ n7 F2 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 w' u/ z8 D1 g* u4 EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 L( x5 P2 [7 s! r$ y: ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 _* `; D" b/ B7 B6 {7 e( kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, o7 |: J/ t+ vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, g; D' z8 m3 e) wI want so much to see inside your heart
4 \$ p- N" [7 c2 z2 u/ H: R5 e8 O9 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 R, D& p6 U; k  l% wI’m still filled with fear
) U( z7 @: o4 |* c- U$ }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 q6 v, H" U: UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! l: |3 L! a1 |. q- I2 s6 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ v4 a8 i5 B' j$ A" l1 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# N/ J% p: y% f. f5 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* _" t+ B; s# x8 I& `, n! u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 w  ^# ^6 i3 z: j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: c7 F" X% t3 K5 Q9 e; g3 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# Z5 U* j/ z, p1 [8 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% a$ I5 N8 T6 e4 v% e) Z4 ?- P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 A- [0 ~/ z0 k; s* a0 g1 {# \- L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; W! W  J! S1 n9 g0 t0 ]$ v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& k/ r) j# H1 g8 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% B+ l6 E. R, l% a3 R9 G' k' Q2 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- K% P7 ?, g; y, h9 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& A% i1 T0 P' O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ K4 [$ y  ]6 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* x6 E  z  `1 h  `8 J: [6 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% p* c: y9 P: D! i+ Z; J0 l; \/ U- Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 @0 V/ ^/ A! @+ P; Z6 Q, N8 w9 @9 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ [- Q9 `1 P  }% ]6 @! Z3 M5 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% B1 j* q! D0 Y8 m0 r! k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: @4 L3 m6 w% R1 g* w<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ _" Y5 b4 C4 d, l  Q0 A+ g+ r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ]! U$ O' Y0 f) |( c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 o1 G, C( \: Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 w6 |6 {' l3 g* q- p$ y& g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 l9 {/ {. e- J& S  S' [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) H5 f3 Y* Y/ `+ l( F# i6 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>