【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 y7 G" `( W7 b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: p6 `8 q3 N/ w+ ^0 B/ H& pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  u% C( h# p$ T# t, n( eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; c, B* |8 o" D8 w  I8 C/ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 j, w6 R" w& t- o* {3 @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) m+ Z% {6 H4 p" Z+ b4 vNothing can compare to my love
/ ~6 h; O  r: \+ L8 }+ w& ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" v9 F- c  o) Y8 L  o* ?( {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, A) U9 k8 O# l" R' jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ S7 a. i" f  d. T: QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) o$ `/ `; k1 {* mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ Z, o% g6 X9 b$ B9 hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! c5 T$ S6 o) K* S+ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- v+ ?  f- z( S( \; p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# D4 T8 w/ c* R: F4 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ _4 A" c8 u/ E$ g6 v) V9 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: x4 u' m% G, h: [: t" d7 `; Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; w1 {1 B/ G  [: k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 p1 o/ Z$ ]; u7 |* e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; j6 v5 r( Q7 b# s8 u( ]; h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ E) f6 T1 t5 [4 w# x# \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ~1 `1 y7 @; u  C/ R% c4 P1 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. p# u/ k. V/ Z" }3 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% I- V7 x8 _, W& G, ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# Z5 o. K6 g, Y$ G( N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' m, y7 `9 t5 ]2 S5 R/ k; m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 \1 M# f3 O; w  t2 ?7 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J5 C0 ]  Z7 R+ U# l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. z' L+ [, r+ l! e/ ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  W' v7 `4 |, s* G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 u: v- ~7 U1 d  |$ {2 {. F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ j4 m: z; r7 g7 ?$ _( {3 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; [1 F) e! q  e% Z$ k. _2 j' e# w: E/ d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* a$ {" g- I' A2 r& Y. H$ z" U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. D9 p( K6 l' E& h2 V5 M' Y6 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ b$ y  x# g; C! N% z$ e+ d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ d$ |* p# z  K9 b0 o3 X" H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 [0 E7 w5 |1 q" r3 ]% ~; ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 }) U8 U. Y& b% K1 ~8 B/ w! T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  _' r2 B+ ]3 n4 W" D8 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- M& I. J- T* `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  Y2 z% k7 K) c2 {1 g( R1 p; W& y- s5 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- b4 \, p% z# \3 j. N; L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ m5 U% Y6 k+ z/ m$ t8 K6 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" l* D% [; w# |" }$ G# d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ~* n; S2 y- w$ v' j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>