【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( e6 n2 ]+ ?* Y. {- RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ?: Z( `* V, GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 m% D# b# x0 E4 k- _- j/ @% T" IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: L6 }0 x7 a5 W( bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ o1 `: R9 P# Q- TEvery other word you utter is love
/ ~* }1 P+ x4 W- R5 v9 }4 l5 K  uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 \+ i) g- A! ~: j) u" ]I want so much to see inside your heart
( q* d7 u3 h8 L: f( RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 @, B, N0 c( Z- vI’m still filled with fear
8 _2 b& w6 ~9 ^5 X9 H& z5 ]4 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" W$ S( }& U" p( f7 Z3 x0 n2 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ C2 a+ Y3 x# pWith such a tongue as yours,
2 B; s1 z6 R% d0 r4 B3 I6 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ E" f; w: h; \& C9 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 R; W5 c, X  S% H' ?0 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, }1 P- w' A% E4 O  j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 d3 y% ]' |$ l1 `( L9 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- |1 R" b6 p5 j$ y2 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) x1 v9 L0 K* N* E4 I1 ]& T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 w  o- x4 X, m/ i* ?  |  F& y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ b4 J( J, x! i9 {- V4 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Y0 \, J2 g; G2 r* S: o  F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 g( J6 S) D% H3 ~4 c! \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. r  N) g" Y0 u: \: [% q; s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- r9 A3 I2 a" T1 d. ~5 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 q! H, n/ \- ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" B: ?8 |4 V+ n  @: S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& ?/ D: v' ~8 N% q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) i& J2 ~  A: O% Y7 Z7 E  W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 b. b) @9 |- f0 D# C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% h9 I3 _' @4 v% ^' u0 \: h& l" f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' a7 Q* B, |0 S6 c: E2 ~7 g" P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 r9 I4 u6 N  y3 ^4 X9 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( J4 A4 H2 e' {% o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b0 p$ w4 _% J" P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! z7 W1 u5 s- Y+ c3 z- ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) h7 u/ H6 M) ]5 u+ Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! m. v, f3 f7 D# s0 k% a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ~; A+ W0 q) w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" m2 O9 Y, x1 i/ t( L) X7 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, |8 t$ u. t; y: C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 M8 K! A! [+ B  G3 q8 x. x* H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>