【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 N3 u" N" u7 m, L; F歌词我附在后面。
# p' y' f1 r, s9 C0 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ B/ H# S: Y( NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ x% l5 l8 h4 x! q+ I# K) _0 ~3 Y# fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ V1 d& V: _9 q* ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: m8 a. b6 |( q& X% KSeeing the sky content with its love
9 A7 `, q# R7 E' hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 p& n# T3 [" F: TYou needn’t fear anything
4 S7 u( C/ E6 F4 G3 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- ]" J# c* a6 N8 R7 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 J# D* h8 }7 R5 B! f, G1 z) X# y) G4 nNothing can compare to my love
0 h# |4 a# T- N5 X8 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* q0 S: k+ U& w. L2 V% n/ `/ ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, c4 z  Z. p, ?. eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 x" l0 u. F5 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! N5 _( D; t- B; ?3 H  PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- u6 N& K6 p6 zWith such a tongue as yours,
" C& f" X, \; H7 j% \) C0 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ o1 p8 H& F/ l1 j$ g. F7 q3 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I8 B" ]5 a9 q" M# T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 c+ e- b: H, {: B5 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' u( Y, B9 N" n9 A' I" Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ m% `* V) ]( p+ i# _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 w8 |0 X1 Q1 Q* h! F' h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 e) A& ]' D( l3 I6 y/ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( a5 t  V! E# L9 _' p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 e1 q4 I% S5 \. U6 k8 g" b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! E. Z" Z+ S1 \! L- X2 c: g8 p) V% a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' J% w! P! A3 n* G8 g8 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: f2 i8 B: s/ W" K) o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. j4 o1 v: g5 k$ E! p# L1 D3 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ c& n8 [% q- K$ G. |8 V& U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( O! k: q' Y: J, K8 _1 U+ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ k- O' g4 f2 N, Q8 v. n: {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 o# L* }0 I4 S/ m/ U" Q2 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
! U! L  \- U7 ^$ ?  @: t9 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  m3 X; z* A4 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 y/ U" ?( g" J- `% g) b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 Z( G5 |) ^$ F9 t* h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: _: r) p8 e  Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* G+ Y: c% s5 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* p/ o4 P  u7 h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 Q( O& ?* o7 M) l- G% ~8 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>