【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. z' y  m0 o# ^; \! n. y) Z( w! m1 I; m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 b' y8 }1 q8 E5 ?+ xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( G1 t# M1 ?1 ?5 A) dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 K! ]8 a6 D' `1 `* ^$ G  YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 l3 b; K! f/ M6 }( ^With the moon kissing it every night
! A8 A4 g; V: o7 G; P) T, b& kSeeing the sky content with its love
$ g* a9 S2 S! n0 n, A- @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 H7 B/ P, I" h7 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- j' ]+ {/ n4 q/ D+ [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- I) g  k: E  {' XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% H: {% l, y2 W3 I1 b6 G8 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& i6 d4 [& S- i; x( kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 M3 F" J: E- A& e) W% @. qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ s7 g1 r9 n* f( R% ]2 z& j2 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: w0 q) m% z9 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, o. h* `2 }( h7 V: ]8 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' g' M8 h+ A! V  n' I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, k* s" P1 Y1 D/ M: }' u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 F- X- q1 b" W" i% i2 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 q3 e5 y/ t" [* }( }) ~8 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 B) `5 z$ U9 h/ A8 Z- j& ^) S0 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 @( y2 o4 h5 Y- S# q# _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% v/ v3 S$ ^0 ^* p( G$ z* {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 S% h% f4 W+ ~- S2 B" X0 A7 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: ^4 r: T; w0 Q8 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 Q( H; n4 a, @" j# H6 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ B% H+ r7 |& N, F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ z. L" V* Z6 l+ [8 Y& p6 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ^  a' c9 c* r% d: F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L; ]" y" n- d. W, U  j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* F' q1 U! Y4 i4 U; A' Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ E) W& J# o. c! w* O2 ~) a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 |" f5 d4 O1 b0 m) Y4 k2 W; t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 U6 i) O3 H; n" A! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ j2 C) F  E3 C# ^& l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ~$ }/ B: g) t+ B/ }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: X8 U+ }* U% I* q" u  b<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ A8 d: S0 V. R! {  }/ m/ m6 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 X* N: [8 x. }' d# P% N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ e# {, }+ M% @5 v$ X; `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# _$ N! z- b6 Z6 Q  T0 a, a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Y1 j8 {' X: O# Y1 A) p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>