【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 c! i6 G' }0 H. U9 F9 c7 k$ q3 ]歌词我附在后面。
9 o( z6 l4 |7 I- k" C/ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ f0 C/ T7 {8 W# x+ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 R: ^' {* c4 B$ Z/ V' G1 m; w9 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. g; E# }* ]- F6 j, x* eYou needn’t fear anything
' @% [2 D$ ]- ?% p7 S3 \- JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ u7 u3 |" @4 w4 v: F' SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 f9 Z) A4 o2 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 h2 x: y( y, k" sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 m3 y/ L, f9 S+ ]9 p: ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ f8 L% C) Z& ~3 B1 {. u% OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& d/ E7 u' v* e0 ?! N: f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! U( l0 P( T, W  K6 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 H- n! v1 E: L3 r# D. ~# _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ f+ g0 e! l& A' E$ l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) o- H4 Q- C$ F. j+ F$ e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 P; l& X0 U) u) D1 V  L4 V+ u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! `' h$ j& R, e- p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( Q. G9 j& e/ r- g4 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& F" \& C' {& J. H8 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ k7 X& y; Y0 A% y. B2 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, _4 M. q9 E& ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 \2 v4 T) p0 I& u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 P7 U" m' b8 U- _: _0 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 @3 t; M7 h% ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* q& F* ?+ M7 P) D7 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 O" ?" U5 ~0 Y& V% E/ L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, q4 _! ^6 \) S1 {4 G; N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ M+ P  a0 U3 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; B, H) ]4 H3 D# C; @# z- G2 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 L2 I2 `6 N8 p' @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 \1 ?$ J4 o) R1 m6 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ W7 K: u& V( C% p6 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 B0 f1 m- s2 b3 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: u7 G% @% N# {: ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- f. i4 X  d# P, J& C. F% ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ E! [/ a, |* \2 f! o7 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' V) o  G9 x* H  i. a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 \! |1 u$ a( y. B' m# l+ P8 m/ P: I% _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 c. P" U3 n  \) e( i4 H, L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* N5 S" K' q, [+ h9 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>