【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 _% E0 b" Z# c/ Y% S* f) E7 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 u" C0 c/ n+ s9 X/ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, l) G  T9 A3 A3 D( iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) R% K) E* K. i  f9 W6 T. xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 H1 \) p' c/ }8 o+ AWith the moon kissing it every night
1 x: t' J+ y$ ^! {: GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 I! }; g; u6 a* X" qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ x! ~4 m5 v3 \" R: EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) h3 {3 c) O- o3 O/ CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ^& Q/ U, R( x6 J. ^I want so much to see inside your heart
) D/ q1 a2 g" `' k6 T4 {0 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ]' a. \# ^) R# h1 ?I’m still filled with fear
* ?7 H6 c  X& T+ t1 X: w6 ~: I) SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# c; J' B& k0 Z1 C& xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ e! _* \- U" B6 ]8 |! ^. GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' _% m" b2 T" t- r* K* D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 Z# U& G4 s2 x, o7 ]) J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  y) }- o6 _- C% W! s: I. J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 n) I9 q, e" c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) U) B0 M$ K  Q0 V, O1 H2 `# Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ K  C1 L/ q  t7 U, U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 X: K8 p8 d) n/ t/ {: V! i9 S  g8 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 o9 W7 e8 g- s1 w4 Y9 D2 Y) r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 m  x! j! k" _3 n4 E<P>你无需担心</P>
  A2 h' ^: V+ B+ T# i  ?: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) R, c  q! m1 l5 d5 i& j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  }" }0 f9 Y' @: N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  S# q( u- q) E" j& K. Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 K, e( C8 E7 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 M: g: z& J1 d# U* t- ^: U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 g! V; C* n3 J; \. b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ J3 o1 x3 i0 v6 L0 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ j3 o; p# }* h  ]+ N/ g6 t1 z, L5 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ^" q% o3 g: x  L0 `/ C# H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 [% u/ ^' b6 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 b7 F1 S' I$ f! m9 K* D7 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ~2 ?0 w& B# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 Z: A* @# _2 Z1 x0 P( H<P>I regret not dying</P>
( {& d( v2 F. d7 B% R/ v0 N( z2 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Q- d, u' e1 I* `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# x, [8 `' M# ]+ g6 j: u& r& D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( B2 L; ], k: Q% t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) }# u0 l$ j: `* K7 N8 f* z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& U# v8 s) H5 G! t- B& w( Q+ D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 t" V4 N' K7 l" E9 w7 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# q, A4 S  o) d7 R! G) F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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: ~' Q4 y1 B; O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>