【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; H2 U+ B% L% ~# ?9 ~) QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ \3 L# l+ w/ K& f: c2 M) H0 J8 t' VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) F- n  r7 n+ p7 b+ W6 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 \) B7 G" E. E+ {' ?5 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 z: B: f7 f; J9 m# BI really want to know just how much you love me
# n  t7 q& p- L7 f& D; |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 N' U9 i) [0 ^+ U( U5 U; {: M" MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* x9 p. d" S" e6 Q; P' yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% }  w  t% p4 m! c& N9 H  M1 B# yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- m( j) G- i* S! L# rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ]3 J! b% W) f6 s9 d/ YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) o6 c) r# H( ~& E) f/ @" A" MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 d- m3 S1 z+ U2 R+ Y% k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ T8 w: g, c: ?) |; z2 P$ P! g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 }( u, |4 e: T9 G3 m8 G+ n0 ?" n* L: m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& A0 e4 v5 f7 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 B& I6 A1 w: L2 `- f" x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. O0 o5 O* {. g0 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* P* X9 h( P6 l7 _; I2 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g2 R6 w+ m( F) P5 e5 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 t2 i6 ~! h2 |2 e6 R; K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 [* g3 G- V+ D& n4 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( |) f7 ^" R5 n3 ?0 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 Z* _1 U  g/ I, K- e. y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# ^1 ], b0 D0 u( E6 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 v/ F6 E3 {* Y6 Q* k4 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 }  @9 T  l: S. @( M8 N2 r+ J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, h- K7 f. F' m" n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; K9 X- [, A# [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* \$ E8 c- K# ?3 V0 p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- J' M# k0 V, U6 t9 r: k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" q3 n2 Y6 c0 s* F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 w2 e1 \* `7 D) S% u  x! n/ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ C, v4 @$ d9 W# ?6 o( N4 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 T: ~7 t5 P4 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 V/ E! u/ O& f. G8 D1 }; P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ]5 P& T" e! T: c, ^0 I/ e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( c# J$ Z. O. W; J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* A' ?* W2 N6 G: g& g0 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ [+ ]+ W7 @& s* ^. \/ s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 m1 `3 \7 F0 }+ o( f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>