【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 p  G* J/ |3 A+ OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* I  D) Y( {+ u3 A% N2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( }+ m8 u, e/ e6 n' \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- T  C" ^! q/ Y. iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 |' T: t& _$ ^) X2 \) D# SThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 r* C' n; w& [( RWith the moon kissing it every night
; c7 V" `; Q7 w2 b3 r) {  r' w! W0 ISeeing the sky content with its love
! |. P* \# J6 U: W; |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ f4 ?3 \' c7 {6 Y. pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ^! _' ~: M) K/ I  G& }+ dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 i3 E5 Q* }3 [2 G5 h4 A5 g$ jNothing can compare to my love
. r  }. W$ l8 e' y* f$ PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& M: e% R/ g. U5 I1 lI want so much to see inside your heart
* }. K( [3 I, ^3 b- SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; l3 A: \& \: aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 Y/ w, K! X( J+ b4 xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Z/ o- S, o  J! fWith such a tongue as yours,
( e  X% Y. r" J. ]5 u* jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, r6 k2 H$ }7 K" `% R: tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. L/ o- v0 Y+ q) D8 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! M+ v+ M0 g+ A  P4 w2 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Q8 J/ a5 s. o0 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' K3 ^$ U: h& I7 t, x2 j- v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' s5 s6 D* y0 i6 |% T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" y4 g5 j2 u& T9 d: ^" w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 a+ v9 A1 Z. ^* D1 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 G! x+ V* a% x% q% {  J3 Q! |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' X/ S) n" R5 i% i: U$ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 i% |5 g! w, {1 f, N) l% v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% o! N& R6 o6 O* k: l! K" x$ p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 d. R2 N8 X. T6 g4 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ E. }$ O' [* u1 V  O, `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* L$ D. G+ q8 D" ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% \, j3 ^+ x, l* t+ [( m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; M6 [7 c  t) `8 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 s) P: X% s! n* @( r1 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 H+ s0 z8 R  h6 A! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Y. ~* ~) L* g3 A8 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 S) ?' ]2 n) h) p* E- Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
- o* ]! J) V/ O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 y+ f3 T; a" p" H- X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, u) ^9 h1 B( ^6 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 i9 m. D/ c9 F; \7 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: y$ v% T8 d& X: t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ~7 B" e/ @# B( _% S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* v+ b- Q2 C+ T- R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! }6 B$ t" u1 Y$ W) }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
4 r, s/ T2 f1 i3 C6 m; _# l4 d
我请你剖开它
; {) W, a: G2 K
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' V1 X( v& L3 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>