【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- M& z! ^) t( R, W& e" \The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 u+ ~( z2 y- H1 I1 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# P* }1 o2 m4 C" o0 |: NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( \' G7 z) W  `* uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 j% z' p/ D) i! O( eYou needn’t fear anything
" w7 B$ b! @( p7 a0 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ {! s5 c5 s  |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) {9 p1 S- |2 S9 ~$ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% T5 _$ x/ L( }, D  @( K4 s% SI want so much to see inside your heart
" ^; P1 ~) y1 a: u2 x$ sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 i( ~& A* x! fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- Q: s& x7 w2 Z9 j' F5 c9 u. vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% w, T% o8 }( X: [& @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% o: J6 R# R+ [* h& lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* \) I& f& K6 B- a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, y0 ~9 R* L' ~. ~! D9 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 J0 f$ z+ S7 S* V0 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! F! K' f; _1 R( t4 W9 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Q0 F, Y! S1 |& w" x4 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! o0 M) h9 ~  U! O0 s7 ~; x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; U7 }" o# X8 l3 p- G9 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) k; X9 x: V" z0 o/ R  f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- m( Y, |% y% P4 Z6 c' r* u% {<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ^8 p3 J8 v2 I% r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ \+ y1 j6 z5 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 S+ V" M( m: W9 o1 b/ c3 k* w: X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 V9 t) Z" z0 h/ }% V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; b! M) s% x. A! `* m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ e6 S7 k8 @$ z7 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- C) v1 T5 Z. P. s3 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& l5 Q8 Q' ?1 ], O; m( p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" f5 ~7 P# B  G% X# z1 O% a9 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( m0 D" R" s" B8 K+ ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ^' s" b* n, s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ |/ i1 t! `! Z" Z8 g4 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 e. e3 X0 a+ M) w, c, w3 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% R; A: w7 W! j( o* R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( X" x6 q) ?4 a! ~: @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 P* l$ i; M, L( e& y% ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: L& d+ Z7 F+ R( x: E& Y; h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ F  m9 W9 P% @: I3 L2 ~/ D  U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  u3 U) v! S0 B  l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 j4 F( U' w: ~5 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ A+ N6 @% W, a/ @0 D) |我请你剖开它
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/ Q! V0 v! P3 |; T) ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>