【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( m, o9 z4 z$ Z7 `. h" u3 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 M/ d: ^. {; j$ p9 l1 [. D% G  P4 f- c+ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! Z+ u/ N& j" b8 p+ }- ~$ ^& `8 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! m$ h4 b$ A: YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; I, \! _- U& q6 b4 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  N- W4 P. d( e4 V: i9 cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  a* |! t! F+ x) X" W' c5 qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( V+ b5 x" Q: E. A( a/ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ |% Z1 S9 B. U0 |3 c8 h0 R- I( MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- L8 D7 S+ ?* L5 T; xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: i& x: L3 n9 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: h& J- K! U; Y# l4 C1 `- FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! S/ U: ~+ `7 d1 x% O9 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# [- ?1 I( y' [& n9 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 B- y, ?1 n8 b3 u* k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% _' J: N9 ?" |$ C0 V5 j) f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Q+ q. y& {* s* b( P0 q" F! T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 z0 l; N1 W6 C: _! e% `- U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% g2 S; V8 B; D; t1 z* V' f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 P7 x/ U3 T) C2 L. A! e<P>你无需担心</P>
$ v3 p1 h, R+ P5 @7 v4 A+ E- ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# O7 g) `" x/ y5 t/ v7 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, r3 u/ y) F2 h- N7 j' c' l) [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ^& S/ Q& n" n. k0 Q) V# x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) z6 A, B9 e1 l! s* P3 a  C2 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* y/ _! u0 P! N& H, X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ~8 a1 I4 N1 W  }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& i$ S  s1 ?( a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 z- l5 W+ \, a! n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ?: u- i: I- B+ C! y6 Y6 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 b4 H( r- o- C4 {* `. E<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 U. s2 s4 Y* @  B3 {# g: B. t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% K4 G) E5 U5 V% r: ^0 e7 }  w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 |7 ], y! P+ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 q9 x) d  r+ o' U5 T/ x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( K& s0 o& d8 t3 O, A' J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 g% `- N- {. k  _# M+ U& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 a  c8 I0 Q$ b  {6 p# E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" X, @$ P0 X1 X: t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>