【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) K5 Q, s, L# V6 @3 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ H9 x9 _  o8 P! m8 Q- g7 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 y4 O1 G6 @8 `0 W2 X9 ^With the moon kissing it every night
: H- m0 N8 v1 n1 n3 wSeeing the sky content with its love
3 @, V3 O* O, S9 I" U$ m0 U$ bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 y7 K' X2 A4 SYou needn’t fear anything
: Z9 \; N3 r: K# ?& X7 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* Q+ s6 F8 d) f7 K) o4 J  n  @6 ?0 ^* AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; J7 ]" |8 q/ i1 j' C8 ?Nothing can compare to my love
  I9 u( U! _/ z$ iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' @& ]  a$ G3 B. O$ a- ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 {7 ^& F" U  h4 n) AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 j6 m& m* i' F2 W9 n1 n1 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 f, t) K6 P4 w( s! \3 F$ l7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) ^/ G& ^" A2 u9 g5 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 D) M% Q4 H2 k5 r/ N, ~3 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 V5 @, ]4 V* ?  ?1 E5 J, t. f+ P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& k3 c5 a7 i: I' T/ ~; u, s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ W: g- u9 k3 Q3 b$ L$ r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# o; J' s' f9 T2 U5 ]1 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% C3 D9 I& e, p) ]2 _; P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ w) ]( ?; ~5 n& a6 l, x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. T5 b3 q- W. K4 D) E7 O7 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( L& [. r- D$ [. V. {) m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% ?% j, X, A2 E; }4 Q2 p1 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 E1 N3 W" F8 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Z' M, y5 O' e6 ^3 p3 J1 Q; l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 A$ e" u9 Y% c# S6 u2 i) [& G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ A0 [4 M. x- x' @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# X7 n$ `: Q, a5 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 \% S% [& d- i- A- R/ i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 z  ~- u5 ^* `3 s1 K0 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ O' g, o+ s3 r* G4 X" a- O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, s/ n* N1 q) S, X$ q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ]9 P- Z9 }0 T! O8 g. c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) _- {3 x' R( F4 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; }& J1 T3 o4 S5 m! e/ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& q' Y6 W1 H6 `4 U: D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) v; A2 A: R: N! d1 b; L2 F; `9 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 i, ?, a8 Z5 j0 u" t- w/ W2 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& F# D& Q' T  r7 K6 N! r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) R# x  \1 f$ F( m3 b% Q& H4 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, v: u; D7 o9 F0 a+ O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 ~. M' k3 s& M7 b% s! T) r/ X: }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>