【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 s) }' D4 m6 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 @$ X. A; H+ H, U$ Q! hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Q  a; P7 B% D0 i0 q) r$ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 U% W/ P$ C% y: g  M5 \6 K8 \The sky is happy down to its soul
' s; I- ?1 m. w2 k* OWith the moon kissing it every night
! z/ Q. a1 l" USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ `/ s' e* H) k/ K8 N- VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ Y: g2 c) F: Q; fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ]3 _# E$ [: ^+ n" B+ I3 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# W, {! t' R. \3 V" FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- C2 n' L* k" m0 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  @% ^+ I) S3 w: fI regret not dying
' F$ z' s- [+ J, b9 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 V. L1 p! l0 P) B7 |' Z- LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 Y3 M5 `2 t% O  [% D5 C$ K( J  f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 H, D: y) |, @1 ~8 q* F* t; L7 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 d% E1 b  ^% c) n/ [5 P/ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# r4 y+ ~2 B3 i7 O' z0 Z$ l: o/ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ `# S9 m; I9 W$ V, B; X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- E  m2 R) J. T: s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. Q+ ~- O9 [6 O; S% s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 A% B6 D/ M5 I, G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" f; \5 ~/ T( C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 s  w4 A9 X- O' r4 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 r, }4 p4 `$ d, ]0 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ Y! I, f0 @0 [; H) w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& n5 n; C( Q8 v. l4 u- g6 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ?' T5 N  T. I  u# U" _2 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. Z* A( B* l; y8 Q9 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' o% L" o6 m3 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) B9 Y9 c$ T: }* c' H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 {6 y4 u/ {' p1 j: o4 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! ]" G# [; D7 R$ n9 r& u* G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 B  L, e% A% \7 C/ G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, [; U" S# E: p3 S) B5 D: ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: W5 D& l# [# G3 \5 ~: |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 w( e; B4 @+ I7 ^% |$ V3 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 W' p1 ^, B5 t0 s6 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 }6 O+ e& ]5 S& z8 I; R+ j8 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ ?% r% g( ]3 t; |# r  C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ A2 w4 |: O4 }1 ?  \! q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>