【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. P7 t6 d3 O, p4 _  MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ w; C1 ~. W& K1 d4 g( oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' h" c6 X" J/ _( o3 a3 x* \The sky is happy down to its soul
2 ^; ]7 k5 ~" z6 l) K2 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 J5 f2 q8 t5 E( I2 k3 |I really want to know just how much you love me
) Q* v1 Q/ a4 s2 I' [  NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 t) U- i$ |, OI want so much to see inside your heart
, J4 k$ b0 p- u; Z/ v* qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 t1 T# Y0 ]+ R9 Z( {, j* vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 O; d  Y2 Q& f. b% L0 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 A) Z& N: ^: |% V2 G. o! e; mWith such a tongue as yours,
9 O; @; W$ I) O0 x: UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" _8 i( Y4 F; i2 h& `8 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. y. Q1 L# u5 d& ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 F* t9 ?% I' C/ l1 X, {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& V5 \. Y7 k9 i& E# ^2 C+ A0 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ l7 @' f0 [( g' S3 C) i# L& s, h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' h6 K% z( z! T2 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 p8 ~& b. p, U0 V1 a  A; f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' \) a$ N  f. q  r- x' _7 l: f- z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. F7 }& M( v( z3 T8 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" J$ f# P$ k2 D. U6 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- c. Y3 O  ^6 k* Y% L% q0 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* b2 ?$ [8 \! _. s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ i& v/ a4 H" k/ T- o% j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ B- X$ b' u- X$ r( P# S7 |+ a* G' S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 _6 l, M% c0 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% W0 L9 `/ `+ K" n) d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ?) B0 r% J" i4 Y4 v& B7 ^5 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 p$ e  e5 n) U0 k2 M4 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& L% S1 v/ g& P. s: A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, q9 ?; }+ [  i  t2 _: O1 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! S' s" o0 B" n% Q; J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( m; L  q  ~5 N% x% K% n5 C6 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 h# ]+ T% p$ f. O: _6 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 @1 j5 V# S) R) j5 ]8 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' }- P5 M2 H8 L: i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 S7 I7 C' d" @' R5 ^( j) v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% b( S) x, G: Q$ N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( U4 A: b: ^& m/ f. j/ d" [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' ?3 I" }& ]# j$ \  I6 C# a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>