【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% }. V/ Q' T0 z4 {' kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! x6 S) f$ m5 f' b1 \0 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- _7 ]" `8 ?. k+ wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- i1 [  r: D8 JYou needn’t fear anything
# s* b  S# k- b4 v2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ E* t, p' S/ ?$ V4 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; {8 t9 y# s# h+ U, N# RNothing can compare to my love
3 v& i7 B' W4 w9 C4 ^& F" cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 }* b/ B9 d7 P/ u' {9 H0 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( H& B+ ]9 T6 k3 Z4 M& L, t1 i1 eI want so much to see inside your heart
) L/ U- `3 G% yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 x! z9 Q0 {" o8 y% e, yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# z# h. R1 X4 e: WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. ]2 {/ h" z/ D( ^  V6 F$ ?+ W. sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ~2 t) [! t- F; X- @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 h7 `4 B: S  q% Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 J/ o8 B) l0 ^' V  K/ h/ b/ r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ d7 n$ X& q/ z' K" F/ s; l: \' C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: L$ R# j: d$ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 [9 K6 N+ M0 T8 Y/ ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" m' j3 y2 ]' \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! F1 q) r9 p. Y* W& ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 i3 _1 O% Q3 h$ w! i7 o" ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  S$ g  i2 g- O! B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: s; k3 q( W; `( |4 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ [9 O* i8 _0 m2 K9 e) f9 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; G' f1 I4 |! U" y8 I! y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' u- v% {, h  c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( R' r* l+ M' i# @4 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' S6 y# U! m! D6 s3 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 V, |0 G* P& {4 C" q3 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 @& {/ p- R% U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 a' k5 R7 ?+ \, W# R1 c. W- w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; q  y' ]& ]" @. P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! R9 G$ k' v8 `: y- D2 I) I( B1 b) v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 `* _9 P' j% \  w! D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' v7 O! H) K# W: o1 L4 D: J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ l9 t) Q' x! \! h) m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( W$ ]0 R8 v4 p) T. v7 c# u7 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: @4 C' M+ I+ o$ J+ z6 R  O8 C1 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 N/ G2 c. ^3 e1 D8 _  n  X/ g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. H8 t% e7 ~% H2 s6 Z8 @% r3 l  Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 n& @) R6 ?# v" R2 G7 b' J$ [1 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 s8 a( z6 C* d2 F% g- k% f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 q/ e3 A% \6 o3 }. L+ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, L+ T- C' }" P$ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 w/ }  l7 c" @: t% F- U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 @$ B8 J' d, a0 W7 j% X6 f% | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; |1 ]: m1 k% P2 h# @0 u  l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>