【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 w+ x6 x' ]- Z1 {5 }$ V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: I: g/ q' p- q5 b2 f2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 ?9 W' y( A- G5 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( }; w0 p/ n6 d* SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 k0 m, h- J1 H$ E: {' X/ c7 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: j: I- s& S+ ~9 M' h* PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# L/ V) z, F3 n6 j. D0 s. PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ ]( r( U* D( K3 P1 q2 k/ i. S( QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' N& e1 v3 Q' [7 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" p* G' t8 O6 J% @: e, D1 i% {3 @3 rWith such a tongue as yours,
, d  }0 s2 O# I4 E. nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" L/ D( N( h+ ]6 h! z) vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& k- H) G& G  P9 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" d$ u; R! {$ `; c8 g  v+ R( t. c1 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' H3 `, ~: d& ~3 d& C' i, X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; j0 h( g6 Y% x: o3 A! U3 w- X6 n8 |" p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 B( P7 v* a" G4 v/ V( W& S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% V/ N* p  s) R% V8 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( g% w+ ?4 F4 Y% A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: |- |7 Y8 f7 w/ X" n7 m* @  |" q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" |3 H. C3 e) Q9 q  a" C; a. E3 g. R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 O7 h0 p' x" k$ r6 N6 @% ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ }  Z7 h7 m( w4 A0 e* U1 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 F, n. {0 Z% c, I7 Y1 r( g& F<P>你无需担心</P>
4 K! m- ~6 j# q9 D- T5 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 w/ k* z' t6 s& W! s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 H4 R" b  R) j1 `' R( F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! N( d. k8 V( c+ R& P* f& b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* N2 C# c+ A% ~- B8 l, W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& L) l* [% U" C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 }" P1 f6 q5 k$ w& r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ x: Z" h3 c5 U* A) w& b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 l, ?3 w; i: ?/ T0 @* {5 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ t) y% g7 q* y+ }! G4 Y5 k6 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 }4 @1 J4 t. L+ K7 H2 o$ U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, E/ z+ g. v. S: y% u2 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" m% F6 j; P9 S) S  T. E" L4 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- f. c2 z& o  j3 S7 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% o* n- f) q! R8 P7 L6 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 M: p% `( G, P4 C" C$ f6 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 r2 \2 m. Z: P1 f/ G4 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( w/ w$ [& t) M3 Z8 ?6 s4 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Z. F; r9 ~! H1 T( `0 o6 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 K! |. k! a) x& b5 E& ~& M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. ^/ i8 u$ q* r/ W  v- l3 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>