【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ k2 C  Y. R$ K% \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( X, a9 _1 ?% ^) G; OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; F5 W4 M- X0 b) K# b$ \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) n; [5 `* }% `1 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
# M  Z8 o3 O$ g& R9 oWith the moon kissing it every night
+ N7 c; o! D0 ^4 A9 H7 v, TSeeing the sky content with its love
( K. i7 s% ^, S3 T5 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 l: A" a$ v) h- l# IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 B6 R9 j3 a5 ]5 e) LEvery other word you utter is love
* q) ]  \8 a5 Y* ~* W0 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
; |5 g3 |  e/ Z% \0 g6 {I love you I love you with all my heart
. g4 k$ b8 j2 K) F0 cNothing can compare to my love
2 W/ t: N: P% t/ aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  |" H+ F6 U% H  i- `1 n5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
2 y* l# H8 d# \, X, lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, Q3 F5 _% y8 V' L5 ^. NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. T5 S7 R% J* q$ h& Q& e& fI regret not dying
9 h5 f, p# A6 X3 ?& E8 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! R7 d8 n/ C- F% A3 _# k; ~With such a tongue as yours,
, E, R% k- u3 e  Q- ^3 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 u/ E3 d$ G& p$ Q& Z1 F& LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 s5 ]4 g5 F8 A7 \  h! k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 i& ?& |+ D+ v8 x5 y! L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# L! E' K9 G! N3 G) q! G! o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: u" c+ v/ @& w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 a/ A7 p' ]9 b8 O8 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: |% @) u! L2 ^+ O8 g3 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* }0 Y8 A# b* u( T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' b! d( w; r0 L& w9 a& i2 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- a0 I! u: r( m$ C4 C9 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 L7 a5 m+ e% g# _+ C2 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! {1 X5 A8 s. g2 T  T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" l- N7 [2 G8 F4 ]# N6 F" h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! C  ^1 S3 N0 l0 }+ j/ f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ u8 C2 m7 G8 T3 M) b. R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, m9 r  }' r. ]- ?% o7 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ k) Y$ t" e2 T, y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 H' g+ L4 o5 a  l2 w( _/ y" ?9 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Y0 f/ R. t! f( w& C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* Y0 z# T, z: e9 H: o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 Q" }0 z% R& d& z! S. ?: W9 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% G' I' A9 S  T3 N7 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 l1 M" J% a  m. ~3 q% N# Q# x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- s6 t& w5 L3 v2 O) V# ]7 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 o! W) r" N' ^2 j. \. Q( ~0 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 s' s  R6 F* O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% J" o+ V- C8 b- m# r% w$ d/ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
. D) C2 H( p2 h' W$ C6 W8 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ a& z6 b  Q' }: X$ h4 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 e& d8 J- K0 J% \# c9 O. e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ x* {4 D( h9 @. ?, ~+ H* n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ b5 j0 K& ~- a7 {2 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, m/ a5 M$ ~( P7 p; w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ t; M# j3 D4 N5 s2 ^) M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>