【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 o- v& w, z' k" P歌词我附在后面。
. p) E; z9 D/ W" eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. ]2 Q* G. |$ B8 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; @! V  _( d' v. I9 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 H+ J" r" |4 B' E, m  S6 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 U7 ~; a6 H+ S$ X: E. i: |% I9 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 \" f) H5 ^$ y( c# g* zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! |, h, o7 f! N& N1 h0 M  x" j# NEvery other word you utter is love
; [+ K  B+ x& ^2 W" MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) {9 w3 V) f/ n) X- y' tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ q, P7 h! n: o; o. [) gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. g/ e1 ~+ g. vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' S2 k: k. ^4 g. |+ q: II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 t/ x8 x4 X3 L6 V9 _( k8 k* ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; J0 ?  D* \* _. l9 W% H! U- i) XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ A" V2 |3 A! i, {# qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 l7 R& O$ |2 U9 Z( w) }2 u' F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ?4 T2 y. @8 `) U; y7 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ D& B; M( }3 U5 b' k: C5 Z9 L5 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 b0 M/ Q7 }& w) B# q- R" R5 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, w# [0 A0 I. }% v+ R$ b: C* D# S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. i" N" W  l% Q( R) D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! t* E0 j& J9 v$ G6 b7 A3 m. a9 s- c- b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 n+ h. o: o3 u) v4 G$ O8 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: C" G. ?8 t+ k- ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 |) a" A$ ^! j8 A" |% H  m! Z7 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h3 t9 I# d1 E/ s  k' c+ e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 h. Y+ J. W) J; r+ {; j* |: K, E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ ]1 T3 A2 U9 l5 g* M: D, n! r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 M3 k* Y( v, I- @1 D9 g+ v" A# t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ `# G/ e' r. X$ x  E& x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: x" V2 {1 R- g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! e3 B2 |& x7 o! h" T3 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# I* n; G4 [  K" c2 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- X8 j- |: K3 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& q& @2 N, y' {9 `: R' ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Q* g; Q: G- U/ M) j5 W! ]2 A- q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" U  F2 V( @/ V% W<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 o/ o- V! F" g  g$ o4 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. i/ O! B" M. B6 C, @# u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Q9 h, S9 ?. q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 N) G/ U6 q  Q7 S% ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& g, t1 o1 r- K/ K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 o$ f3 i1 Z5 m7 ]5 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 P" d, A8 C; p. A9 G7 u% p& Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
4 V! [" P2 U0 g1 J
8 C# |( H/ A) H' M& k我请你剖开它
: h" S: \' S0 c( d) C
9 M! ^, E( s$ V) u% e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ^; M% v2 m( z5 [. B0 F; |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>