【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  L. T5 \! n, h8 B2 F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" }; K: }& d7 `2 P" t# ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" \- Y, J3 n2 z6 {3 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. Y5 y! B* k& @! Q- NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; J* d; t3 B; k+ F1 E* BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& {( ]" B& O* d( _5 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 g6 _* Y, N; y& K7 B+ \! G+ ~7 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: t" f1 ]4 R' l6 F3 _0 Q' B9 c2 z0 PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 U8 V5 P' R" _. QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: N. W) k( t  h3 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* r# N/ B8 m/ m5 S$ S3 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 c( E# [, j0 `" t- oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& @5 Q& B' v% f) T1 J% q# S* x6 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 t2 s4 q; h1 ~8 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 o: [% N# G2 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( [" f1 f  i# o7 Z* `& h, q9 @2 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 t: {  [; T4 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 }- n) m/ E) b' h/ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; w. W- k% J( b7 l+ H& l( C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Z" M6 ?! Y& ]  T( a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 S1 F8 W7 Y  M( t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: r4 X' L0 ^9 }# B, x* h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! g3 e* [7 \; U1 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 g$ u/ k0 ?5 V3 L! g8 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% t% Z8 h* X% ~7 v3 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( n- i# _! L7 H5 f; K4 ~; Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 n: v/ T& Y, d+ E* a; i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 W' ~! M1 [) T& {7 t5 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ u) L0 Q# P3 \2 q  ?1 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 U! O9 T& H" C/ S. |' u2 {2 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 [; T; ?+ U7 G% n% |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% o1 d7 v6 Q$ e/ H2 e  t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 `( _- z- m4 ?+ e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! g. e3 D( Y8 c! O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>