【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 `5 C  ?4 v1 \( dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* \6 x! \  i% x4 e/ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
: k6 X, C4 W/ GWith the moon kissing it every night
3 B$ P+ R3 q/ W( `( J) OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 v1 k- }  d5 t& OYou needn’t fear anything
% u$ b' q! z5 f# j) \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' L/ s2 m1 D; AEvery other word you utter is love
& v' A* J9 t( Q& W; n1 D2 EI really want to know just how much you love me
- w/ I, h" b  |: HI love you I love you with all my heart
8 d# \1 \* a# VNothing can compare to my love
" j) _/ Z$ A$ Y7 d9 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 X- a2 _1 ~7 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% t  {; j: J& c, x: k6 EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Y' `& U6 p  ?: T) D" Z' P. iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% m8 E2 q' ^2 @8 ~# ?) ?" ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 }  s* y8 f: k, q. R, Z7 m1 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  W2 Z4 J3 U) g/ ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ O# i0 ~% d0 m1 T1 @: P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 t0 |. h# K0 l: P: |+ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" ^' _. ], L1 B( s6 W0 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, S. W& `- {3 G6 s/ z  T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! T$ w6 V0 h  L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  L* w) O, [/ D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 O) Y* l- r$ x# R% o) ]; D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* S+ C5 q8 z) h/ J' a  ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 r' G4 D/ W3 s6 ~. H6 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 h0 C" ?+ a# }0 C% b% s* u% B7 p' B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 p  d7 _+ @4 M) y" I( _7 d1 p5 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: _' S: b; a+ X; Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  j* d, x( s, V* A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) |. k7 R& ?: h2 p; Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d6 B, r" X6 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 M% N/ R% I* K1 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& y8 o, p8 r0 {; g0 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: y) ^+ Z* x+ X) f' U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 V" N( L4 f( X. d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ X" C. g. ~0 ]& {6 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ O/ q6 {- V" ~- J0 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# D0 v; T5 w& D" M1 W7 |% `! Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 f6 D: M* q* M# O  e& v' T) S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 J' O% P) ]3 H" d8 ^& v; R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ ^( A- o5 ?& d* P+ t% \) b- k7 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% w$ ^8 c7 E4 @/ `3 n我请你剖开它

( r( n& Q2 b5 N5 l; J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>