【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 c' Z$ Z% \7 n; T! xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ~5 s) [9 b3 W: W1 u2 J2 d# o! uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, O5 F( R% J- m; i: RThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 Q7 x% E1 l% |8 V5 oWith the moon kissing it every night
9 m. P+ n; e9 b" L$ ]  }- FSeeing the sky content with its love
+ m) I. a; q" O( Y/ hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 T5 H9 ~( v" cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 @8 x/ R1 n; b8 q5 t& o# OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: |. H7 D. y0 k: E( ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- v: K: ?, e4 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 L' m% _9 I3 V  W# j/ X- {; OWith such a tongue as yours,
7 o+ X& R6 e3 [5 i7 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 U. b' v  e+ G+ ^% |0 Q: o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 Y: W! G' i  r9 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* n- h4 V; t* e  c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# _( Z3 I' E9 r. C$ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 I% n# C- Q$ u9 U, C6 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* q; E$ k' ?5 E7 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% b( c+ i5 _6 G9 b, g, c/ z1 p; K) [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' D. p0 _' V+ e0 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 x5 O: e/ r& Q, c" M- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 B$ f4 e- _( \: r) P8 z6 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. b! }3 S) t! m# ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Y5 r" @8 T' e) j4 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( u( F6 \. l2 P2 k' z* T5 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 O( C9 n. t( X; r- G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; v8 S. {* e+ \' Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, k2 [* E: V) W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! I5 p3 @) @- _2 u: B- w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' t% K0 v0 `# r! P8 U$ k' i4 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# p) W# L- u& M# m' g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: r2 Z( j0 Y/ R% F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  K5 f. k3 p$ K" l7 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) L# e8 ]+ ^2 a. F9 o) U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, }% P5 m- ?, ^; m" \4 `' ~( b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 l3 u. L; p, A4 a1 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 R7 Z% z$ G, g  j( r' w* F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; u2 I$ {* c+ n4 e$ T; N: K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ X6 V9 Y. m% i& |9 o0 ?( \: {! w0 Q, N8 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 T, N3 e& e5 u+ @  S% l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ G. @$ B# L" d. o; V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 A* n9 m6 N2 o: k: w/ f) C, P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- ~- ]5 r; }- H9 {+ B1 M& G! M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>