【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* P+ K1 Q6 }7 ~. n. F' CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ @) N5 i5 w  P! b" yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! _5 c# u7 F. a6 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& x6 S9 P5 m# ]; V# g) i" \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 q1 K4 z& o4 K% eEvery other word you utter is love
8 k' o' c1 `2 j# P5 u/ T3 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
% l9 }, j  l. d' B, l" rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ l2 h: A& X! C- d2 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* o6 p  }( R4 K. S5 {- bI want so much to see inside your heart
5 a* `- g  S1 R5 p. x9 u4 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- `- N  s# }5 e" \I’m still filled with fear
0 F* Z( }+ U! Q! HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 T0 T" H. b: T: Q3 N' X& W# [With such a tongue as yours,
) `2 _) p! j' a7 I" c5 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 g0 H, G7 y, f& {) R6 b/ }6 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: A% D5 M. n( x! |( e, K6 z! E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; @. t3 I' T; @9 j$ a! `- F, g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: j- A- a# j0 s# G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 y/ y2 B- ^! Q- C3 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& R1 b  H4 z; j0 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' _+ ]' `! {6 p. g; V. n4 n" w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) m" l5 f9 p3 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# k1 {3 q: G+ M$ `# F! X: q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" H3 F1 {- t4 w9 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 U  v& [/ O4 c, a4 `! O; y1 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* N2 L  G3 x. o5 E6 X. `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 Y4 X9 e$ r4 Z7 x6 c7 W0 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* G' b8 e9 y$ L6 |% Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 J6 R1 k: C! d6 g0 @; h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% }8 M' m/ R5 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" w+ I/ D; i6 i; {: g3 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' |8 u( v: N  T8 v( k' k0 h7 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% r* x5 S# I- ]4 ^( D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 F- U' g" X; P) K* _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ ~- j1 e6 h& F4 |4 J( z" O$ W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 |/ c* I6 y, K4 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Y+ U6 u" A$ L9 j+ J! j# e' {6 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! z: z) s) y7 L/ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( I2 H' ]! B+ x/ x1 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ U% E: `% O, r  H' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 p0 H: i/ `' n3 \+ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( e  Q, w' V! O# g4 I' E6 Z2 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, X8 y" m7 k6 ~( c' |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 |) c/ ]$ x% f4 {' {% O7 i  U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) k3 H, a. m% ^' F2 Q9 i* i7 J我请你剖开它
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8 f4 g6 o- N7 [  O! g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>