【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 ~; s- N1 X% i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 g3 G+ J* g8 I+ C; c& \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! D! Z1 q9 t! HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, Q% Z+ Y% }9 x& F. s' KYou needn’t fear anything
. [3 s5 P. g. O5 H6 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% D1 N4 t6 ~  ?+ ~Nothing can compare to my love
# z; o4 T  @" j& x  OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% Z% x8 c% d6 g8 pI regret not dying
. ~# q& ?5 p9 f: q4 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! c5 ]( h+ q# M) t' |0 [0 W; NWith such a tongue as yours,
, V2 A9 j. E5 A0 R& q/ g. rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% j$ W" q  m3 U: Y. wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 ~% u1 `2 t8 L5 I( H* \9 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ Q7 ]8 A1 v2 {9 ~8 b6 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" U5 L% n) T$ j7 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! w9 p+ f) z& X1 @5 Y! {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 e" a4 c+ m- l( u1 ]; U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ Q; h$ o4 r' m* ]/ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' J( L. h3 r2 Z& |6 N# V8 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' x7 ]- E* I. E( n2 s$ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ v+ r* C& b! c; t7 x<P>你无需担心</P>
! Z5 I) \# U3 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 M  a9 B+ r& t8 O  j  X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" w1 g( q0 R, f2 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( f8 M, a) m, \* u# f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% h; U! J8 X3 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 _) H' P; n: ~1 |6 _% p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 k2 V" _: [+ S$ J/ b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- f% {: R' U: c  d6 c( M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: o3 k% q$ |' r3 e0 o  {9 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 j8 q: S+ R; S( l* y3 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 v/ h( e# N/ Y- N, D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) c7 h/ v) S2 U* \: }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ]6 N! m7 B9 O2 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% |1 [- }0 ]  x" @  A5 X; f# S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 K8 X' O" ^9 ~5 V' m+ w0 b/ ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 V7 P  U* R/ v$ V& h6 R/ v& ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( [" C% g% S7 r$ {; t7 D; n) F+ D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>