【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ?! [6 G4 U9 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! |# B% l7 j5 S8 ^8 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) X8 @$ h9 T, N% r/ M* K  fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  D! Q$ G$ u* y8 t8 b" _' }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& D/ Y4 \8 [  iEvery other word you utter is love
4 B2 t" z, F4 S% y% Z/ }$ oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. L+ M$ f4 f- Z! y2 C9 ?- wNothing can compare to my love
6 a3 F8 G6 |/ Y3 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 O3 m/ W5 l; sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" ~5 g$ w' w, aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ b8 |, }+ _- i- B) mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 R. x2 }7 A  vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  }# R; C# Z( f2 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 R( ?- W* q. s: ^2 z1 M  _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ?6 N- c# Z% K* O  L" R, d: B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  j; n2 H7 m# }: \, }# a7 o  B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  K3 @! m- v# b1 ^; N% o( R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# a) a& v2 O& B( S6 \( n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; ]  `6 ~  n, r3 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 [' y' i3 G) y1 s. E4 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( f2 l/ W7 o0 S( v0 E<P>你无需担心</P>
: Y  ?, [/ |7 T0 ^6 P$ H: b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* x4 h# [/ W" R' z" Q; n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 `. K* i0 ]' o+ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; [2 d3 c6 e* ]  j) b7 I7 m/ F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* v2 D, D+ g8 C) z  y, r; w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 t1 U  B4 ]- K4 ^$ ~2 ^) ~3 l8 Z1 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, S0 z# s- g8 t( s/ v3 W- V' c+ y. z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ~' ]3 b% `  u3 K- Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# A/ ^& S# P5 b# z$ b0 I! q" F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 k% H! h, k) h& T( s: T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 V9 o$ m# D5 Y5 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 d/ u+ X# i+ U4 o# W) f: l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ A9 |6 p3 f* }3 o1 L. Q- `<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 D- U2 p$ h9 K/ d3 Y, t$ M: h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( y2 S: x5 f  e' E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 P$ |, r0 p" s* z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- J# L. Y0 Q/ n7 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 a. V* l; U3 j) _6 ]4 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ k9 _: n, W" t3 |, o# U7 x7 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p0 K  k2 w1 n2 V5 Z* }: A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, H3 S5 ?+ {! Q) h" q# w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# U; f' O! M2 k. X2 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>