【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. {* L1 V7 k5 N3 X1 K/ P/ y$ t8 U) A歌词我附在后面。
) f: E  S; q9 _# X  Z$ v/ e  CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" H2 U- V; x% T+ c: X+ P, c9 s- eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' W! o& Z9 K/ fThe sky is happy down to its soul
! g- f4 I9 }6 o; g+ e+ |- rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( w3 a" h/ h; d: pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 x- h$ ~# r6 L' v% Z6 ?+ \+ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, P, _# I' v8 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' K% g8 A6 p; M; R" d: x4 y, lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& b6 b8 F/ L/ b* H' ^9 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ o: i; R5 h$ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 X. k3 M+ d" K5 q; O) q- o( W. `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; I4 q4 `* d6 n* U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! Q6 O, K2 n$ Z. C0 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 h4 g; B' p% z+ d4 [5 k7 k* Y8 q$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  }1 p7 t, A2 a, X  I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: j' s% b0 r  S6 p; ^/ W: c( ?* e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. G+ b8 U4 E1 n' q' z- ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Y# ?6 X* Z  h% F) I6 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# N4 e- Q% G9 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 E8 T% {8 a* R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 p& h5 K* k. m% g4 b0 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ?8 G( E9 ^, P) H# j9 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ R3 i6 o& i+ h2 u: N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- }& i6 x' H6 n/ i( D" N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' v/ w2 G6 D4 r1 {. J. v. k/ o! w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 }+ J9 L6 ~+ M5 ?$ M" A0 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 b. h' e* Y" y: T- n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  W& P; N: G) e2 ]# `! q0 {) F; i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 k3 k( n5 d, R+ F* @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( g) H+ |0 H' ?# o% T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ C1 _' b- E3 ?) f5 L0 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 l9 K: j) i' I( Q, J" y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, p1 @' C: G- b6 g" W8 s  s, E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 c0 m, G$ d7 U; y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% I% S+ i* o  j8 d$ H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: L3 a) |2 @/ `+ Q8 c3 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 K+ F& |' x; M" l2 {0 ?. a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 G5 y) {" U+ n1 }+ Y, X# J' A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ B9 k. D! t! V( i2 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 F7 q* `8 G4 A7 B! y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>