【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 A, _# q; b$ p+ ^; ~) yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* V% D. A# [# F/ b; \; ~/ fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ @3 j' V1 C) e' k2 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: {7 o) L  Z+ wSeeing the sky content with its love
- S: \7 H$ \& z2 [6 U, tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% ^8 O" i6 \4 v6 N1 l+ K7 g. Q! WYou needn’t fear anything
7 h" V- b+ G+ v4 J( H+ o5 K- T* ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 x7 ~( N0 L- L( V, r6 ?. u0 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! C3 `2 O1 x" S4 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 d$ g; e/ J2 N* ?, ~# ~With such a tongue as yours,
& |+ ?' d' Y1 r" G& l  T9 J7 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 v+ A' n" }5 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# C, _% G; _5 G3 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 m  c% Y" c* e  k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% V* r/ }: T! ]) H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 P* A9 J! R7 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 n4 t5 Z8 k2 y; s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 O% g$ X  U* z7 e) u, M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  h& ]' ^: c5 H& b* x- w2 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& E+ b) p! Z5 q! z( ~9 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 |% I" m; k. T) W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( J1 O2 S5 i# H0 c' A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 H# H  i" U. w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; E$ k5 }/ W6 H* p; o# g) |3 n3 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( g$ ~5 _- m* u, e( y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& W$ l% `8 M; }1 y: M* N* |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, f+ e; O! \/ n  s, _( d4 g) P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ i8 |& K& @: _  M" t) g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Y# w5 G$ V! T  X% I* w, Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( H+ x2 f( U& X, ]  C. c% g; a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- a" l9 ^2 X& ?) h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. t) f! u. i: ]2 f6 Y( q- n- K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 y! u1 ?& t3 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 f0 V" |+ B9 \1 ~; n& H5 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 b* @. O; b! E) r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: D1 e1 o  ^  I! b0 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& E0 d/ w5 V) \# l& h* i1 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 r# Y1 U' v+ L2 {& {# \2 E, d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# b5 M5 w; N$ Y4 g5 w! p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 G4 j- b' s9 U8 A1 z- @7 i! h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. {; s  @8 e+ X% A; ?5 W, F) J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 N7 F/ c' J+ K* l# F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>