【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ z1 R' g/ P; j- Z6 A歌词我附在后面。
/ g% l  S' C, |, S& yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# T; T1 f; }  b/ u; H9 C: W$ YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 X0 t3 v9 v! r  B) o4 Z/ L( tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% T! N6 A  a% `6 k0 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 `! f  c1 h( l% {# q7 c7 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 U  U: U  e3 G7 {8 [( t9 u" mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, T( c. ]. Y! _* ^( z6 z! rI want so much to see inside your heart
- ], L) |$ N9 U  b4 [# g6 u1 x. {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 W5 K+ L, _+ u, c/ dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- `1 P4 B# S( y& k: p$ }3 {# q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! u6 o$ w& E6 f7 w% ~" L! q: o* p8 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ c: N: l/ D. c1 A2 h% K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 Q: r5 |8 Q! U/ X% _( A. q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 j# c3 w+ A/ @; J+ a& d% {) c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 V2 n' A- G$ a- ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  d. D* N! |# F8 j) D9 G8 Z! l" ?& z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  n. p  I7 d2 {+ C0 J% N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 }9 W7 }4 T( f% n4 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 P9 H- A$ L" r( p<P>你无需担心</P>
7 a4 C8 r% R: N4 t5 `: m* d) y8 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ s5 R$ X. V. p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* D4 q) ~. v8 J3 C6 c+ z: C# z( x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 J( `& n0 |( `" F1 I; H/ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 t: f! A( K5 z# Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, z: K& ?' a( G& [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. K* P3 H0 q4 i+ o$ l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: p4 w2 i  h6 D- b7 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 D, X" X3 e! X5 ?) |& b- ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 `: @- y8 @1 O7 q! C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! B6 h7 M4 V' S. l& k9 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# q! u3 g; s2 V5 ^6 S7 {2 S5 @, l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ [. B! o, k, c4 J( I) d8 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) v; ~# K: M8 c6 y: B2 M' }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 q) a) h. N  t( U! g$ g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 w" O; x2 O9 c" }) i+ \6 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 a' W3 a$ _7 d( u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; W! Y, F4 c1 N# {; {0 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ^3 `: @7 U3 e! o( _8 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* W* F" i2 Z- ~- }, l, `: K5 o, W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* t9 _5 g2 Q4 L4 ]3 {5 \4 s  Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>