【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 @' i) H' j! o8 i" C歌词我附在后面。
  b9 w  r* f' ^; X8 t4 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 h. ~+ v' G) K  p% B2 j6 v0 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ o' ?7 ?2 F' o, G+ t) k1 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ K) J& `0 G6 _7 w3 ~, CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 B! o% y# o) K5 i9 U+ B. hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 u9 C/ S/ ^- F2 S: I7 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ c0 g1 y+ @# Q3 F9 i! O: xNothing can compare to my love
5 o* ?' z; B( j' |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  W; ?* g& {2 e1 f5 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 ]7 ]# Y# z  ]. EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y- h$ X8 _- _I regret not dying
/ v+ f- |) b6 k- u4 m& K4 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" Z* Q3 A# {: r5 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 U/ F/ T2 J8 H2 v3 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 Y6 J" Y2 z7 H1 w) X" O5 F; RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 u8 ]$ y7 m* A9 b$ c, S9 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 e! i* [  M. K: {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; ~1 s5 }+ M1 H" N  h& p! Y0 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 m! ~2 w* C- Q) I& a  V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 {' E6 ~' S( ?7 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, X+ J% \9 m) [% w, D3 Y& y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* `4 q0 L' Y: ]0 y5 Q6 Z3 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  v" z/ ?* @7 Q$ \! H5 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 P0 s! u9 ?. A- q! c! u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 j* {0 z& G9 D  v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 {7 A1 Z# z) }# V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 o7 r: ~" u0 d, }4 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 N0 W+ C$ i. w3 W" V& N; F& {; @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- V- Z7 G# {' H+ D0 ?2 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 q& U) ?/ |1 Q, i* c6 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  S/ h1 n0 V6 E( w) r, I( q1 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Z( m. Y" C! H6 _1 P3 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 X- k4 ]" o# u  @- W$ u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" J+ {& [( `0 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 s# s6 k3 z& Q" T  ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' E$ x% n+ O( ^9 V' Y' _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ]3 t5 R2 K9 i6 g+ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ F9 y+ X. a- f- d6 \3 m/ o6 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! i' k$ k  Y, B# l0 K, {9 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ~. \& e2 N/ E  n' l# k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# ]# l8 \8 M9 ^' U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>