【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 j7 L6 i0 A/ o: n' w# J( QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) r4 u) A9 D# W' t, y- J3 D6 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; E1 d/ V& S" A0 O5 u9 Q0 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 R6 T: C, X+ J0 K0 K5 U* [With the moon kissing it every night
: ]! A. M! J$ ?2 R6 |, ]# n( p+ YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* m- y3 a7 v: U( u3 ^9 R6 F: _% a9 v* ZYou needn’t fear anything
2 I0 l0 ~3 W1 J0 E* H' Y# vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  l! o7 |( ]: _/ p6 X$ }. y* oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 u8 F+ N/ S3 [2 r: x% ENothing can compare to my love
& ]/ t7 [( L1 Q! j' {7 m6 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. d! W% x) Q7 |8 ^% N- AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 A+ k# E! D9 @- }, w* G4 Y; }I want so much to see inside your heart
* u3 k( D5 G2 k# CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, f' o: \1 T$ j. y( yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& p) r/ h0 j) }- `2 b+ L+ u# YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. n0 ]9 r1 W! i( Z2 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% y8 z* `. g# |& UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 v) W2 U* i/ |* Z2 A3 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ ~3 T3 g4 _% F- A8 I1 w  R% B( G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' `4 N" g1 J' o5 R6 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, b, R1 B. l* H* e; g# E/ {6 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  O, Z5 l* c# o1 `; M/ u* V* Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 K- w! g0 S+ a3 @: u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 O# c5 _* J! n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 F- U7 ?% u: D* H+ e$ \! Z8 ~) M, ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, l: k- l- @1 N6 K, Z  F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( I; g* K) ~5 c- Q% `: p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 r- ]8 M' }3 Z$ Y2 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ U! P6 i7 L  y+ K, X: B3 z5 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ q8 d8 G3 r7 R, q7 L# S1 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ]% Z3 l- G( s1 f8 j- q6 G) S& R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) m1 j! p/ R' n* z+ K9 y# r% Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# ^0 [+ _! S; \  U+ U0 z2 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: }2 w6 W0 x# w. Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! ?1 p/ V; ?8 }+ Z0 b7 D3 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* j9 `7 a) Y$ P+ I" S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, T7 O) w( |5 J3 D2 E( \<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 \2 ^( H$ X9 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 K; c, n; b" K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 e! M4 R7 e% H. _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t1 |; \1 X* N9 S8 ?2 {) A) K6 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 m1 q* v# P( E& k* P9 A" Z/ ^" s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 L7 a- T, z. t, _: n6 z( _$ I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: k" F, p* R* ^& R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ O, c0 Y# b4 v0 j5 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>