【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; L+ k" d% m/ o( cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ `: t# ~$ W: i! r6 p: L5 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 E! T2 c" G& eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' [" I$ n$ }7 ?; J7 n7 `/ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
) q4 Y/ T" M5 p9 O' q$ }5 VWith the moon kissing it every night
9 B+ [' c0 \6 s, L- s) t. |8 K0 fSeeing the sky content with its love
' L$ N1 R; r( ?! O4 \% |; cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 w0 \, j9 s( c5 RYou needn’t fear anything
3 f' U; e9 }: K, w. ]4 z- U" ?" _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' w  `, k/ ]$ F5 B1 Y1 h7 b( YI really want to know just how much you love me
. R- }5 e% y9 AI love you I love you with all my heart
5 d5 H. h- B/ `8 v# ]0 w: ]  qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% f( m4 F5 K# G+ m2 w+ u& @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 p/ Z7 M7 x# PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! X' L4 f/ g% o4 g! c" S$ q( i8 JI’m still filled with fear
/ v# B0 K; p6 @  s! l$ I; V0 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 }6 t, {+ N  L( u4 r& BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' E+ t; z4 m- F( \. zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ F: G  L" [+ l" O, Z2 K9 G; W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* R4 [9 j( D6 E* o9 s. [6 d9 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& O4 ^1 A. T8 C, D1 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& |& c5 }9 I  |0 T& H/ D. L8 e8 v; J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) l* A( U. r8 C& o$ i, c* Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 w9 S+ y7 z5 M! Y- B<P>你无需担心</P>
( A2 v! t+ w! t3 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 a. V$ o$ j7 ^/ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ m/ X4 u" T+ ]& O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* g8 h# |4 o. t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 y( P8 F3 B# ?+ Y3 i5 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ h8 |: l, t' e4 m2 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ |& U& L4 ]0 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 h* d( l2 P* P# C% k- h2 v8 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( r- J: k$ s7 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: g& p$ U1 X8 W2 t' z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 d0 U+ Y& R$ L6 @4 s: ~; \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: C# s# P, _! m$ k6 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. [6 w5 K) _1 _2 Q2 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& U7 V- E2 ]- `" @) \1 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ h* N8 v" E3 Z, T( K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( h% {8 b$ d# u+ T, L. i- j! W* ^9 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; O' e$ L( B# q+ F9 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: p1 E0 P( L- }/ {9 u- E+ B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ K* b1 a! x3 ]  ?* }+ R6 P. o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 ?3 A" {3 n2 O7 d' W, ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>