【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 R4 ~# q6 b6 N歌词我附在后面。
: r" Y) F, [9 F/ l$ W9 F! ^. \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% \  R' b& k! XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 W; ^% k' z/ Q. kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 H6 S: U2 w% W3 X" ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ _1 o: B5 ?/ b. y1 XEvery other word you utter is love
  N) Z, W/ W) X  \0 @" U* B6 r9 J- xI really want to know just how much you love me
8 B; u* o5 b8 U4 ?% j" U1 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) D# I/ W6 \8 N/ Q: jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 F# ]1 _! ]# d0 v( R% _- M! pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) r' C/ |8 l6 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 N' S  L: D' `9 W+ J9 R0 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ \1 J# l7 I* p4 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! w) N# n' @/ N! m* T: ]( `- ^# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 r% t* H2 V# |' [5 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# d, [* w( [" R# ^! s5 N- _! k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ S. B. g6 B4 I, ~% X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! g6 O! D( f& l4 d' M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) W: P. O$ Y" Y1 i: Y! Q* M# T+ K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ ]4 L. |2 b! |( ~4 L+ _; L+ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 d8 c; R8 t3 r* V" c6 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% t- K& {0 L$ n9 r, D( X3 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( G& q% N9 j  R5 y  i3 J8 Y* S7 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. N% T! G) G  ~! V% {/ J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' A& B+ m' o# Z, s1 e4 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 B3 E. b- X$ m+ v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# V$ `- g! i# Y' E" ?4 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 O0 [$ Q2 d  i! b3 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  R: E5 B* N# U" K! I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; ?% ?' [0 E# W0 k6 b5 q: A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: Z) d' o; U; n/ y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) n" v: z/ x' [# I- |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ {3 e; d6 S3 b. b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ~6 S; v% H0 @* o6 k% @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 R6 U$ L6 Y; K$ u4 q. A, e2 s  ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 V  J2 G; M7 z" K7 ^) p+ C. t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  J- Z- t8 e4 u- T" W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 H8 `: T8 n4 B4 Q3 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ y/ q  o1 x; g7 E0 {0 A) z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 w# ~4 T& l/ E9 b3 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 w, e( @8 Y4 C! X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" h$ ]! c; D! F. R# O1 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: _" w3 O, d) [: Q* u* r! t- ]0 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- f2 I& H: D7 J9 r' I0 G4 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ L7 n, K2 D" q' I" ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. }1 b4 @/ w  T4 ~6 b4 h: y: i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 k, V5 Q0 L% w; ?# E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 N5 \+ [5 w. b- r  v/ q, F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>