【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. b9 _$ n1 v' {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ E  C* x( f) Q! ^& R, M1 Y3 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 D& m5 @' t( b; I% H3 T. sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Z8 I( y8 n. U7 ?) Y7 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 W# M0 X4 E6 I! W$ @: j; N0 QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ s" D' B: y9 b/ ~6 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 a( O" O' l" O( f) `& eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- k7 u9 P9 P7 f3 H8 ]8 EI want so much to see inside your heart
8 Z( |. E: E' y% o- c' E4 J0 c  TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. {' n  a9 I$ Z% CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 k9 d$ a3 M, r4 X" j/ _8 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% `1 |* p& G7 h6 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, {; u/ T$ @( C( K% @3 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! P& o) g# Y! x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 o" D  `6 j: B6 W+ ^( p! A' ?$ |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- s0 ^0 |. Q' c4 D* y: r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ _% Y! q  x1 E" w; ~: B. X; O- p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: n9 k/ ?, e" k) ^1 Z  ]# i6 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 C1 Y6 M7 f; M. ?% u1 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 z# o: o* v. Z$ w6 ]# [* Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# F+ Z& A& j% t  G! e<P>你无需担心</P>
% Z+ _, ^1 V+ T0 u7 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- @9 L" M% M) i. c: A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 l, S* Q9 t3 c. s4 v( f3 @" F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 ?, h( [( H9 h; R+ A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 j. _# O4 v% X1 r; Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! K+ A8 ]' Y3 C8 G8 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' _  |$ {8 y* b5 \7 V- J% E; e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Z/ S3 p6 P4 e( A9 q& g2 |0 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, q& f" a4 ?& L1 B3 Z  D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ~7 X: O9 P' i; L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: l  G* n3 O  \  g9 s# S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ~* l' o; W6 u: S9 \' \+ r+ d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Q$ K2 r( J+ Q! p( e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 v+ r6 E* {: ]6 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! @- d/ e& i1 k$ Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 U& R$ @! a$ r# O. s: l% U* W8 U7 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ }  a% Q6 B5 Y$ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ U2 i/ t% i  c6 E8 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' C  V& \) _& T; I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J3 k( I4 E8 z1 v6 H8 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ a" x" f: i; P% l0 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. P% e; `" w! j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 j9 v" c9 _7 n2 I& V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" @+ q; b9 z6 M, E. [: q: L1 B, j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>