【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
5 d8 o! c: I; t
  J7 Q+ x+ I$ b
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 S! E% O8 b# H5 L, A6 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 c0 w, Z6 J) RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& R4 u- a! p: a& b. JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. ?) Z$ \8 L& Z& fSeeing the sky content with its love
. W5 l4 x# R, Y1 m4 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. t* Y& V7 u4 HYou needn’t fear anything
" h$ o2 \% A+ U2 Y& R. ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ }9 p  d8 i2 Y- t, t: R/ a) pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ n" u6 n9 f% Q% J3 e/ N0 oI regret not dying
$ s7 F! B9 A! `6 N4 l7 n& rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 [8 L& |+ {  I  o; M/ ?With such a tongue as yours,
2 j1 ?3 n" f# u. H% x  R5 l: VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 I# ?6 f2 J2 g. [; \$ YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 L2 s6 q( P* d* V) R" VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( `! u! ^: L8 U2 A/ y) H$ V3 Q
2 B( z: v( [5 e, \% H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" N/ u' o: p" W- G( B: M% R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 Y6 b; o5 o) ?7 n  a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ [; o- x% z5 u3 Q( S- g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ H0 O; D! V1 K5 \/ g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 X1 g* o% M1 r+ l  D! Z1 x, ]! l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. T; w! K2 E& Q' A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" t& D0 f! w8 h' m/ V! h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( u9 V/ N" L& \( V3 n5 {. \% u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: e+ j/ O5 L6 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 I# q+ \' K# v: m" I) O6 c' D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ Y9 q: b1 E- E$ t( w* z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 f" @. D( X, ?" I$ c8 Q7 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! {: x9 _6 Q! K5 w2 N  {# V. m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 U4 I+ ^* m* X; |3 J! A# O% ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; \; D! N4 L- g' C9 D: k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 V+ g0 |* L. Y' E2 k+ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* Q3 p( q  w' @% U* v4 m4 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 f! ^2 }& K5 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  h1 U% x6 c3 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; N0 y" }$ C3 m& g( C# z; P5 |9 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 y9 o0 n3 z7 j# F; a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 L: V5 e- @: e7 h7 p4 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
' O! l! C. B' c; j+ y3 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( v4 c& P& C; h3 Q( [9 R: w: X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ q/ S: V+ O6 f4 n9 ]7 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% I: Z& M/ y5 Y; u& f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 O' }" V, E% C" y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: V. I5 ?: r' J& d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 F4 H; i: K2 Z6 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 H" |' m; X; b1 y# ^4 A4 [. @- i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>