【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 h  w2 T% J$ _+ h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; y0 m/ P2 o" V# \4 X0 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; G8 n' S" [& G. u3 s7 T$ TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' `! y' ^/ r" q+ ?' rThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 O6 G) s/ _, d* y& d4 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 S3 n8 C9 n& z( d4 W) |3 a1 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" o5 {1 u$ Z" ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& v6 B9 t8 d( ~: g$ H  a# uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! _; u5 l3 |$ ~+ A' y! oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# J. ?& {  U& F% N0 w* X( CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 _  p2 E6 T9 P% FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* h6 V0 O6 P2 F- v+ @I’m still filled with fear
7 T8 I1 s- [# [8 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 F$ K3 y( r( j( E% XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 t* k) t( e, N- o% G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Y  g! o# k, c; u5 W% e: F% Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 S) ^0 ]4 g. P* ^% F9 V/ l) M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& ^# E, T/ e/ N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 O# E% C  E! H. m9 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% k4 @+ `0 ~3 B: o- s& l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# f- S8 n' g9 g9 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" v$ K, }& f7 C4 Y5 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 y" U. i  O0 x# Q3 X5 p! T+ C5 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ]1 C! X1 O) r4 p, u5 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 U4 i" B! N9 u! A' L<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ^+ K8 r/ P" Q1 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 M: ~7 [0 T) o& }4 v- W% y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, A8 h" O( i5 Y3 }3 k5 m. Q" Q1 h0 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 V8 ?2 `% T, m' T9 g" V3 g& t6 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, S! @# K9 e- W  e  E( Y7 g0 l0 ]3 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 O) G( R/ ~4 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' E# {2 w' I* T6 w$ b. a5 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) T6 n9 a' B5 s% C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  D* [& _- n: l8 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }) r9 W9 H! z+ G( \0 t' \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( W8 [3 n7 V) K) y' i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 n4 I4 @  j" \% h0 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 J/ q1 d9 y" q9 w7 e4 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ L  v* {$ D+ `0 |2 ^: T) V7 H& V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ y1 J; N# i- ^& G; B& x) T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  k, Y8 I6 N. z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& S* ^: M8 a: I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 J3 |) Y; S3 @- z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ s! a, N# W3 M7 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 \6 z$ f8 p: t$ R* ?; [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ j) X3 ?* d  f3 l$ ?0 j8 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>