【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 x/ `( \, e8 }6 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 w& J  m" a' r! L# R6 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! @7 ]( m8 r9 E5 i! I& }- l6 VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 L. z! D( h- m. L3 c6 k9 ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: C: j) t2 M( {7 PEvery other word you utter is love
0 t" G8 H6 V$ Q" c2 q3 hI really want to know just how much you love me
' a" ~# X3 D* K: C) [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# Y4 K3 j& Z% zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 }4 q/ I# T, p7 o9 Z4 S' _( WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ?1 e! {, {) V9 |With such a tongue as yours,
2 T& M0 G  s2 h% _( h( w, D$ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 w6 Q( ?: S! l1 T1 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ D) v7 m. Z  d# u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 W1 L" Z7 r7 s3 r7 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; g) Z4 |: L4 u# p1 y/ o# l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 }; p# r8 @, q0 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ K0 h+ J$ \: a$ X% ?) f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* W2 u- I, u5 e+ x& t, B3 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 F; ~" }$ c6 j5 _& r4 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! ]0 n$ s1 y' _1 d8 o6 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% H% a3 Z4 n# n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ x; f( i8 q7 M$ v* K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 r; b# m0 }, [0 G: z4 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 {9 Q* ?# X, l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 t, Z2 A' P9 x) \# ?" E9 Z: O* O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 ~1 K9 E# J$ O+ E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 W( J, s  n, g& [7 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ V2 Z7 ~: P' L) m7 S9 ?- u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 j# k6 y; T; Q9 U2 U1 }" X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 J& j) R4 V) z* S3 R9 I1 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' C' M- B+ b' B: `, F4 v% O4 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 h# ?% D8 T* ?0 B5 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 R5 x; x, D3 m6 J  p  R- d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' s: N% _8 j- }" j) Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. A+ V/ l! `' S5 d, s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- c. u, @+ U( s6 J+ X- k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  U  f7 D- w8 Y/ O7 h" L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 B- a+ L0 f$ S" g  p# R- }8 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" D3 j( ^' c# h0 m; Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; |8 [( N# O7 @3 {- T0 x6 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  G9 C1 F2 d. R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: H  K+ G+ F3 {8 j2 H8 Q  D1 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- }1 X( l& R) ?  \. `: u1 \# s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, `" g2 N+ b, F9 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. @4 k, ?+ s; ]! \/ C5 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 I( m9 d/ H  F7 G  [9 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" E  s# A1 v% d1 B* L, v7 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>