【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ N2 ^3 L: [+ ?; p( xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& W" ]& X6 E' v* {+ SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; i. l3 j- X. O, ~' dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 }" [+ x: c; g) zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ^' T$ |7 m/ }. P1 o& G. _/ D! zYou needn’t fear anything
: D- b+ S3 O* p, L/ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( _9 ], j5 i8 nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& p9 H: p$ K3 p0 R2 k# B& q& xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) }$ R0 N# {4 J, mI’m still filled with fear
  G6 F  }, w$ s+ i4 n* Y9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ~4 C4 ?5 \8 C0 B8 @I regret not dying
( G+ x3 n4 a6 u7 g1 J! p+ jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ?: x+ T/ V: r8 I' jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, s% |+ e$ y' q2 b. `( h$ D" m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 o3 f' T6 s; @6 t7 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ q  a  C5 L, s7 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& @4 x+ F* z) X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 m: a3 d- w5 A2 n7 V' v- H5 E7 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' c' m/ F0 I7 q9 G( a/ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& j" \- G3 e  ], M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) p+ q8 U# p' ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ o9 K; t8 r- X& A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 l9 i2 ~4 ]# `- [. v" C2 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# L: x! G% L4 z  w. [) q8 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: c5 ^: C( L" @& f/ j" {* s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 v$ M% ^- h* ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 G. o( C* s4 _" N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 l4 T3 {- g  v2 o6 z2 [+ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- U- A& A% G# j$ H. E: q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 ]5 z' J  U5 d" q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ?7 k0 @  X% H+ s/ ?1 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! K. J* q) Q! t  w! W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& a; W0 W+ B8 |( b+ R4 w5 n0 _4 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& p  q- v9 O3 l' |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* C! S2 Q8 G8 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- m! P) Q3 I: C1 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% f; C; c* `2 i3 E% P0 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Z9 I) e4 E5 d; N6 X9 N/ f5 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 ]3 i4 ~4 I$ R8 B6 B+ i  z9 |  f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. Y2 {& T* c8 `% s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# u# m/ }9 c# M: ^, J1 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ w; J, o7 l% m+ U+ F7 G  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 G$ O* p9 G, W9 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i8 m- a2 R" g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>