【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 ]5 W, h+ ~/ ~$ @* m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' t0 [' K1 }: u, DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  i1 o0 B! z/ v8 h' A- OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 }7 C! T( C! NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, B( ~4 k5 l; KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 Z6 O& Y8 Y& O" c# t1 HI really want to know just how much you love me
" P9 j4 [$ W! U4 f. DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 }# O3 s( P( H3 z  W% `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# q) r7 j4 x7 g$ i- u* jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 B; d9 o- ]$ R, I) @4 z# mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) t6 y. x8 c" b9 J9 K3 [I regret not dying
( ?/ r' l; D9 S+ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: X' h9 J4 \1 h5 x  I( RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 J; Z" P1 T- T/ W5 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% R+ w7 ^$ U# c6 U, x$ o) k5 x& j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 E+ ?& a' v" l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ F; O! k) |6 D6 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^% W# t+ z9 N2 m+ q: S, V$ g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  }& d1 e! }* i3 u: |" c7 \- f7 d" n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 V" u. p! a7 W+ Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" B2 C4 ~' H9 J. T0 W* O3 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ @. g. b3 h# s  ]: y$ v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 g' q% n1 [! r  e; w/ s8 t. t- |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ]  k* g; d9 U0 b/ x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 x, P' l% L- L& N: I5 D4 D% k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ y3 u4 J! l  Z# i+ B3 S! v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' g& a3 d: B- X0 K" S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# d: T6 k) I$ S/ [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 e: O/ C+ @" W5 ^5 Y* l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ?2 @' ^1 |. X4 L. u# w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# k( T8 L6 h: d8 Q7 S8 S  d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 n2 E# P' j- m1 }# i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ l! E9 K8 a, V% z: h7 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 H" |# g% W: J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 q# |5 w6 H6 O6 V9 N' \1 }5 R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 j4 ]* A5 y2 V% \/ Z7 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>