【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 Q' a% k! \4 F! J# eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( e) N: l' M3 j0 z1 _& f; {! c8 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* `2 |* J, j. l6 p7 v: X  I& RWith the moon kissing it every night
0 Q$ N2 w& Y( P, d) f2 S+ }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 |. T0 n9 G, @7 QI really want to know just how much you love me
' p! u- L7 k! u' n% xI love you I love you with all my heart
4 z, b- f; |  HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 o4 l, Z; k4 q. [7 M& F- X0 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& m! i: V9 s+ }# CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* s# x: ~( S% J4 jI regret not dying
: F1 @  S$ |  rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 A' `+ _: C+ y' B% o  V! \6 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 D  X) k$ m$ R5 p/ _5 w, c6 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) }6 k9 }8 E, T6 W; @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ d$ ^6 ?" ~' G& ?0 t- j+ }: C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) f9 ?  ~3 r: ~. w2 R" G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# p% I! o- u+ B1 u2 r1 ?! y$ N/ I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 M' f/ Z- r% F* z0 }  ]  l9 v; R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 D9 L5 X7 g) A5 Z0 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% y6 i' ]  E) W4 Z! J, ?) U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% j2 Y- l2 }* ^# Z8 k' _3 g! x- W$ S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 G% |5 S/ o- D$ V# [2 @) K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 o7 Z8 F+ s8 r3 I' @3 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; l; e, k8 c9 R) d! U, `# G7 e/ p! a  j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! w" u, |; \8 R% E% h" ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  C9 I: z# ]: f4 H- L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: C9 t/ c. }2 W" S$ h: e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' p1 `* ]# H. d+ a% d  @1 M1 p: k& n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; ]& v8 W* a6 k' _3 H$ {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* L: i! V8 x0 }. G7 C, V1 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! ]" T  n  W/ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; L0 E+ `  _' M' r4 q) U/ @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; e( c& X" C  A6 U5 i& t: o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 }3 `3 z; J0 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 K4 a# J! a8 c2 V1 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 }; k5 y7 @) E# M1 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ {9 N8 f$ e% |. i, o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 b+ |- T$ ~4 w+ U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 E, t7 n: H2 x1 x7 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ v0 y2 X/ {7 ~8 b/ k/ ]. Q9 P) X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- P9 F1 x6 q+ A" _  l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 E8 q9 E, G% F( `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>