【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" ]2 n$ @& O5 J3 ^歌词我附在后面。
% J! D- J! }1 ?1 S% W* vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' e, {9 R3 b3 V1 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 f0 H, j1 u- I/ f3 l( xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 Y3 b- ~! R$ T4 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% f& h# U6 e  I8 x* q' q" S0 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. a$ s- X  H3 b5 wI really want to know just how much you love me
- F6 e8 F1 h# ]: ~I love you I love you with all my heart
  s( N* u; F( {& F) p5 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% J4 E% m4 L7 e0 V, DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) @1 {) b) E1 G: A5 F! m; i# `I’m still filled with fear
3 N: B% d/ W' AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ^7 t2 y& i7 h) b& eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 x. G( a) \/ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Z4 T, X/ F" _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 v( n3 ]( G# Z+ L: F/ N+ X0 h, g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, g( C. Z4 `( ^5 A9 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% T9 h' P, U4 a  T  e2 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ s$ m4 G: S% ~8 ]; R6 b7 y) J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  o% B- \8 @! ~) d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ L) h: [* N& f  y) M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" \/ [7 i3 R4 U8 B/ ?6 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 y0 F: m* B) F# H: _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 T, `/ E* y! k5 U: m<P>你无需担心</P>
% G  @# e9 X7 O! X( m) c; N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: l. d' O- c5 u9 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ]& p! c8 j7 X# C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 W' R7 z: M) `3 ]0 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ]9 j- w* Z* {( P! g% F9 S4 ?$ k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 Z1 T# X) S' B6 a2 v9 N$ Q& I1 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. z3 A1 z0 x* [5 G2 V8 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, q3 j1 K9 N; H/ w4 J8 z8 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ]9 _- ~  ^1 T4 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ G9 i$ S9 a6 e* f$ L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ k7 P! ]- Q8 Q1 ^3 P5 ^3 h0 b! a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 N9 ?1 J4 `% O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 _6 ]' J+ N; h+ I! _( R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 t* W) C  g1 H5 Z+ b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 a; Q% m" o( k1 m7 _, @6 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 t- f9 G" F6 \. a- i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 B% k' V- Q; J1 ]4 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) x3 S; ~5 v0 k3 M9 e3 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>