【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! m9 q5 W- c# F$ y1 h& `- t! y. XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 Y7 T2 o2 J/ _; m, w0 v% b& OThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 ^" a& e1 C1 e& mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 i) ?5 P+ P* F: o5 g: jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& z# ?, N! e! O8 q* p) iI really want to know just how much you love me
  v& Q/ [$ {, B% d; M/ e- V; RI love you I love you with all my heart
+ x* T( D  p9 b2 `Nothing can compare to my love
4 j, Q( n6 H. BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 ^" [/ v5 g; [! ~% A! G, B2 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% r8 S# O5 k) V& \& X4 eI want so much to see inside your heart
  s  p1 m* j; x; p9 U2 c7 K5 R  Y7 S  sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Y5 w! J& ^+ uI’m still filled with fear
2 z! l/ G% j7 ?& j$ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( V( i/ `) n' h/ \! @# s5 g' lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; t9 o  C3 |8 ?  [With such a tongue as yours,
8 W/ `# h) r8 C9 M2 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: u& T% U$ _1 Q' `. l$ l/ ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 t, C) i6 h- J2 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i* B3 D2 ^  K& Y5 F: E. {0 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* T! l  n8 x& v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 \+ @& @; y7 B& @3 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, l! n: p: K* I7 K- I9 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 M: [4 M( j1 T4 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 Q: Q" F' Q6 m; P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& a) H0 _& a* B: T* q. {4 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' w! B1 M/ N8 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ^9 A, S' {) t- A; X9 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, L9 I! B* _  s, W2 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! |' R5 Q% `! W) |. v3 ?( @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% q$ Z8 v  e( U! X3 |1 n/ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. [8 g7 |! ]3 k6 W8 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) Z7 G6 W/ W! O9 Z$ p2 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% h* U8 g4 U$ ]6 I7 K3 ^6 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 j: ?4 q: v% q5 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' [2 ]; ]9 d/ S# d  O% a6 h. N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ t- {0 q' l# F0 }6 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! z6 M, z! }. o' R' G3 z- X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 C) Q5 Q' j! ^3 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 u; A3 c; k( j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( u0 `- o, l% u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- _5 b  U" Y" Q! i; v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 K" c$ R% C5 B/ I: T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, C3 I8 _1 ~! p5 C9 X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) W5 J3 g5 e% ?5 X) N6 O2 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>