【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ J. E" y# u7 n" GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- {1 w4 ~0 X/ l2 ?1 |( K' f7 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 [/ K8 w/ v! ^8 d3 z% m: d9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
2 A+ @2 {' \* y0 j4 FWith the moon kissing it every night
! t0 S5 l. W; |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 O& T( m- D1 J6 ^You needn’t fear anything
2 E7 {, s) L4 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( e9 [! T. m/ m; |4 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ]0 U. s# Q' ?+ R& q4 Y, p0 sI want so much to see inside your heart
. ?# O3 {" f) z  M6 @$ g( ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( ^' P# ~$ f! G" B1 \3 v* L, z# ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( C3 z/ d" S+ e+ GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, R  [; g' y) i. U& ~* mWith such a tongue as yours,
7 P% O8 M* b$ T6 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- W% t8 M: A6 b6 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 c8 x9 M7 ^) r) V$ }/ uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" G; U1 I+ |& ]2 y; B2 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 e0 C& v( N" i; a3 Z5 O5 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 D  I4 J) o2 J8 ~% I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ e; Z" o8 K2 f) K0 D, W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% n4 Z2 v  z. J: C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- c- [7 A$ m1 T1 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( @8 R4 E! _! H7 F* K9 ~3 O$ Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ a: T- G7 x, h8 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. n' p4 t2 B  Z0 J2 M+ u/ E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' o7 X* Q9 b8 m$ g/ U1 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; J- B6 A( p/ n% q4 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( n1 l9 z9 F- C% Y. I1 _5 T5 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( }6 c- l" ~0 }6 f" @! |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 n( V  l! V& y2 U6 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 j. P0 t; V* [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 @  U, Z# h, w- z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 a0 _6 x  `0 ~* U+ ?% [& v" O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 j5 [5 x9 S% |4 {0 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' P( K4 n% I% @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 E' w0 {+ f& E% C- O: R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* W1 Y4 s: f& r* R$ d& Y, `& x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 V  D4 }) F$ a3 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: r$ V1 N# t4 M' }3 x# M, `2 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 b, `6 F+ {9 Z8 \$ A% X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 D" G* `$ ?& t2 j1 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 }# d& l( |& {2 o/ q! D; U) _& S. b0 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>