【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
: c( _( s; A) @  c8 A  AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' G9 C; B: M) g/ N" t$ B; H9 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 A" K( [  {: f# h. ]: x* NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ _6 J  r, r* j+ x2 y+ @% AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: Y! h5 b( N2 |6 M: ?1 @. }; U- FNothing can compare to my love
1 v$ i$ z1 c: [# T5 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 p# k5 Q4 f. _/ p" wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" ^  d9 I8 g( s) FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 M# p9 l/ p3 v7 I8 r% qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Q3 Q5 i- G* i6 e  mI regret not dying
- c" D8 L- }3 m& ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) x7 `) P: h2 U) f3 MWith such a tongue as yours,
2 _3 ]! f, e! QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' }2 [6 r0 E8 ^# j% J  K) T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 y: }: `7 {; _- r2 p0 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! r4 C) ?2 o, V$ C' O( b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( p3 M4 J" ]) z. Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 H& M! Q6 E7 R: j# K4 d- N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ Z1 K: R: I- x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' c( \2 S: S3 J% Q/ \. H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) r1 q3 K. Q9 W# r% D5 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 L0 U( M: \' C( q% t, ^% a& e<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a0 U2 Q, \/ l. U1 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& o: \: g2 R& |7 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! y3 {8 a, C$ v/ N  l7 T4 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( k& ^9 ~3 P$ A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- T) [) t: N+ `8 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ d1 k* `9 {* P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* T' @/ O2 E0 ]4 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 n0 l9 E: }; j' n3 f) _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 M2 m+ C7 e" F, ^: C$ B. d5 _- b/ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- C$ G! A/ n% n% A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 L0 Q" E* }  J2 M  F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: O. Q8 x: A$ }$ _* Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 F/ |( a9 \. G; C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ ^/ I; ^* J) u! W6 `) m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ C& @! z" F' m9 X6 ]4 v+ ]" ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! M( E( p! X0 ~4 v5 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 a: Z) |* H/ w! n. X% \7 u$ n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- l7 p6 x6 Y5 b$ X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 p, l; P  l7 d3 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ?1 b% o/ P5 H/ K- d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* Y/ k( |  L6 Z5 S我请你剖开它

% D( _7 D* T7 {6 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( u, Q  M$ v% X' ?2 {; K7 _6 R0 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>