【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. A2 E; \  z3 O9 U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ t, A' p( z- J7 W  s+ ]; q) pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 _. R" j' j( r# NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 r. m- d4 I% h! EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 p: p4 K$ R# s% z0 ?* j/ eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 I7 b) \$ r; w6 L5 l8 C* BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 Y) G; j$ S) C! e' d. b/ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" t4 f+ q. p6 M- G0 t# _; rI’m still filled with fear
- ], Z# U" E9 c; _5 a9 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; N' ]9 C7 d; o, y6 b4 {3 ^! HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* D$ D1 h& _8 p: e. y6 EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 e7 @5 f& o0 k2 f$ g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) W+ i! a3 d1 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ T  x8 H2 ~0 ]: v) I: J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 E/ _* {8 k" a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 Q5 \! ]( \+ b# c( T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 J' ~5 C$ y0 g& ^& C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 q0 Q* D$ p1 w- h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! D4 T# k0 |& U& a0 R5 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  K' C6 P" `2 D+ o6 X- s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ C& R# @8 K& ]- |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' {2 [' n1 b; V! ~' W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: L8 y+ A1 d& J9 T, J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 q# M% |0 S' }8 u% {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% L( K) q: A- \0 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! n( G3 F  L% W; t# x+ t' x6 e* P9 ^; p% ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( X1 W7 n( e2 b4 S: l6 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) N. E" g6 V& {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  c/ G' d( n' z' U$ {4 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 t3 Q( t, _% v2 l" R1 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 r: R' ~( ^/ {8 Z; u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 e& o  V& r: u9 i( t6 @+ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( `1 [0 g. x% P  Y% S9 p4 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ {9 d* s. A/ }- ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 K& F: u1 l9 [3 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 s0 o4 }' m& T4 P" M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. M* u3 y8 j+ M2 g- x( i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>