【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( R" H4 _4 n1 r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. E. O8 ?8 q; NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ v& n6 H; S, i! [) Q$ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  i  D( ?6 v5 o* |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 x5 w. x7 H! m5 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 Q! \* [# Q$ n0 `) WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( w. Z/ U# t  v6 P" a8 f4 v- t0 ~Every other word you utter is love
' i4 F/ k1 ~6 R4 b# V. WI really want to know just how much you love me
2 ?& L1 |. f3 B0 a. v( nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Q% |# q% K: t2 x! i" CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! n1 ^3 Q: I9 w" D1 H8 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% Q, l8 e" U# C' t' {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! k$ A* T% j2 s' |; n9 C1 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. {8 Y" W9 S. z6 _# LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; O' r' \* K# E8 l- ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& }4 |- U! ?1 _. g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' M( s' z5 x& P2 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 w: s5 s5 f5 W2 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 x. _! E3 S. t/ P. S# y* ]4 F& {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; d% p( x5 t8 H; @, I/ a, h/ T4 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' P2 ^- B; I  m" C# a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 t3 J9 ?" D/ f! Q- x/ w) F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X" ~# k& }% W; P5 q1 E<P>你无需担心</P>
( A) j8 l3 _) f+ G6 U; g7 y  y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- B' R. B/ N- {' Z# ~& x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 C, I+ z# w. @7 w9 I2 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: A# U" l) }7 b. ?; r: H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ f6 Z; F# t8 O& X/ B3 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 M, z5 G6 G+ r  Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 H4 u! A/ v$ x/ B( a  [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) k/ _9 x6 u( p) t: U; v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- V9 n" _: B, l$ T( S5 Z1 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# s2 W2 F( E5 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% _4 y( @+ J( w7 S9 A6 O& k; x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" {; ]5 r# z( w, T: a0 y# m& m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* L( P7 D. K0 T5 P! A& F- s- U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( o( {' b. a0 u# S8 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% s* S9 u! x2 [2 D3 L5 |) h6 r5 ^9 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- E4 K$ s7 v7 f/ @) X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 L2 a% F* @$ A" G( ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& @/ u3 U* o" ~2 |2 E" c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; o2 W) u0 y- k  A1 |: Q9 M' F/ s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 Z; N/ D: J6 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 v  i1 s* I. _4 u4 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 v# W7 Z- z, F! O1 S5 t! L我请你剖开它
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! ?; \# f7 k% g. @9 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>