【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ?6 [* o/ Q5 n" O8 a4 }1 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 j  Z; S5 i% D; BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 \% z# t0 e% c* Y* h) K: VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 V- x$ a% q3 ^! |1 J3 p' WSeeing the sky content with its love
+ b. Q! H7 x1 l+ H- i! I# J$ k3 S% o' uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ Z* W3 }6 I! u6 q% X; V# i6 r' k* ~, a, ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ j) e4 k0 R: ^6 h! c; N5 a3 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ D( x2 e1 I1 [# T9 T: nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ {) u) M" n) Z* jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 p3 @0 n% B7 I$ E: q. ]2 F$ T. kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 Q7 y5 d; {' SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# C" p' ]" e, v* G4 @4 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# D8 ?8 V3 U% Z7 q) V% ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' c# R9 j/ F8 d$ z8 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* o' `8 W. g5 K3 y! H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 [7 Q5 a* W8 \: Q! _$ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# J: F4 P: r! @+ W  u! I) s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# H/ ^7 ^3 B5 o8 J+ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, f: k( m9 e7 Z; ^# f1 J9 b4 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 h. [3 n, z4 B6 n/ i9 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 E: K& q* y6 r5 M* H( H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 @; f& [: Y4 a6 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Q  w& j* |0 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ \2 f! {7 X' H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 F3 p  d% g6 p+ y6 \6 E+ g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' S/ q8 v8 U8 N4 P9 u* a' I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 e. J, Z* I# Z3 m8 j! E3 t3 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 ?$ q4 e+ }- P, n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( D: S; M. u+ c/ H; r! y% A- E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# B, d5 A0 i& Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( l* m$ r' n+ t  H  v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* _# R" A( f* Y( t8 e4 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 h! t+ ]8 J. V* w8 w* ~) z& J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* k$ B. {$ G1 }6 o" F4 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) V/ h& }, S2 ?8 j: l8 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* |4 g) m7 u' w3 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 O( h2 A8 V5 H. `& T# Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' ~1 m6 Y5 j/ u4 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* N4 w2 K% v6 m9 X. N, w5 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# {% H, `7 u' u& b  ?8 E9 g% _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# n& v4 [! P  q- c6 T2 Z- P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>