【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ~: v+ X1 l3 i; S' E0 R3 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: r. N, D  E7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
" |( z7 r- J6 d2 h  O8 aSeeing the sky content with its love
, ~* C' y6 P6 h4 W7 e  L9 g: N0 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& d- H8 q4 j/ w3 v" sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 p; r: U+ i' i) P; [  @) nEvery other word you utter is love
) k+ z  S# r8 Z8 O0 W9 dI really want to know just how much you love me
2 o" V- T2 C; XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) c& }- O4 N7 _- M/ P& s$ {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& d" K' |" G% d: mI want so much to see inside your heart
, O, F3 ^7 i+ g5 S. m9 H+ UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ]( S: ^$ N6 W2 OI regret not dying
5 A* i: @+ i* U0 D, ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 t% t3 ^+ a0 z  U9 f/ ~- l( l9 VWith such a tongue as yours,
* Y4 _8 s! t8 L8 U0 R2 h% w: eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 `" S/ u3 L$ R, u  M1 K- O- d1 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ X9 Y; e) J- C1 V- s# W% S. k$ D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 ]$ f2 t; S7 Q4 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 G4 i/ C+ D" U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. P8 Y1 ?5 f9 C6 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& J$ L& }6 Q) v, X: t4 H* V& H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ D" s; j: H; P, H; o3 j* W" K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* w1 r% D; X& F3 u2 d: q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 h/ p4 }3 ~; w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' R6 B6 _+ b% b3 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  N' R! |( {' y# V" U0 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- b; V* W7 q9 p. J- k' W' m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 m5 }# q. @6 Z/ g8 v3 z/ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% j3 y- ?: s1 G6 ?# `4 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 c& m4 f( V! G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 z: v) U: {2 U* H& \+ ~' q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ k1 ^6 e* V4 c6 {" Z3 j2 _" H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 e6 R( i7 F# N7 u7 n2 d) ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 \) l+ a$ y, m; U: x1 I2 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 F2 ]* r8 O; N- w7 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ h" p- `+ ]6 c* L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( Q, {4 f( B( H: d8 {% @" G& {* O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 w: ~8 T/ L  O* j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  C- c: a6 E8 X" w% [, c# N7 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% p: p+ S/ t$ M( k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Q2 Y: ]! P+ i& _' I4 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ~( Q8 l" U7 r, l8 J+ p# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* r& k5 r$ o) i1 Y! o" ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 M) e3 Q2 F$ B7 ]6 C! M1 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 N0 v# A' {) W, ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' W, S4 l$ N' }: Z( O" c. a+ X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( V  J# f  }0 ]9 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 u  Q$ q* N# W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ u  _9 e0 u# h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>