【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* f/ j. x% d3 ~' F1 \/ X9 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 D4 P  \# y1 W! q  q, K& FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 B3 F" s3 n( _. Q0 [  {) iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ c" ?  z* K! C4 v' ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# N3 z+ q, y) E+ s1 [2 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, l5 U% o. s5 M- WYou needn’t fear anything
7 T2 J1 z/ Z: z6 @. O/ p: [/ MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; t4 c; D5 U$ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ x  |3 a( L6 i  W; u0 M+ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 X0 D$ @+ [; w0 }, Z# q* YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q9 a- ?# t) t+ @! d$ d  \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- {1 d1 q7 K$ r# s" BI regret not dying
! B8 C! L/ m0 E9 s6 L; KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' C4 D4 o5 `, i' u8 H! UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! @+ ^% P. c+ w( l8 W% uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 x$ {" h% `# {, M3 m; Y8 y* j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  i$ D$ c$ r8 \- ]3 c5 g7 P4 V8 Q" E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) C4 i7 A+ |; k! ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% {# A3 M3 C+ e# n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 X% J: m  J5 U: l6 J! L- V( K" f! f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& }" M( u; M" a; j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- y/ x+ X. R1 |9 M7 x6 n+ w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 t; m) a+ l9 i2 W. q/ X3 q& T7 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ?$ ]; L& d0 ^% F0 o# C& g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" L4 z6 ~. k. T; _$ p7 M; _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& N2 n) e* o( u1 Y, l0 S" K& d4 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ b, I1 ~  H8 n! B! h' r9 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 i* Q% M8 D, V. R7 h% }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ P6 B4 Y8 q: g# g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* P9 Y- w$ a" V' k! u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ~5 ]8 q2 y0 q1 [% [# C& P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 s  X' X2 s& H) Q% R<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 v0 E: T! n' {# L' p+ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- D+ A, |1 N1 v$ z5 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) G# U: }0 C: V, ?+ g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ]. @) a  z1 D0 }4 L9 ^! N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ?) x9 J8 V: k' \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! P$ r1 _& z' \* w: z# o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: [  U# f3 m4 m8 ], o( F" X! v1 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" H1 M8 M  N: S% [# q: [/ d5 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' Y) ]- H' b- G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 R7 i. U  h# |9 \& _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' L7 `- ?; q! }$ @7 k& K  e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. o5 o! R" c4 \6 A# R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>