【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. ^# g7 Z; w. j9 j$ K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 A; O8 [4 d. k$ }7 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& J8 R) ^1 R  T" W- c& ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( N- V  o' {5 t/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  ^: o' Y/ T; U2 j- ^% ~* ?( P$ ySeeing the sky content with its love
- }. @" m+ B, N3 U: R/ G8 p* qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& H6 l0 q, b) w, n2 l, jYou needn’t fear anything
& T8 \/ X& d) G# |% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 ?4 t2 ^$ G: F& DI really want to know just how much you love me
' `' ^, M* s- m# B/ oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 l% D5 q, |! u4 S2 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, X7 ~& A. s) L3 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, I' n1 _+ u$ l- t8 t: f8 ^7 n) nWith such a tongue as yours,
' |* T* b. E: I$ h% K; v- F) E( l& IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 V8 |6 w6 I0 h- f9 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# i3 u6 p: O9 y- k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ]% g0 ~1 X% l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 a, N# p( H) E  l2 r1 o+ C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 a/ a$ d3 ?( ?% P+ A1 c! a: U3 C6 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( G7 t7 W" p! F. z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 ?* u+ K) {# T1 Y. W<P>你无需担心</P>
) y% `- j; l/ ~/ A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ Q9 G- q% C# ^$ _, @! H0 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 L, t9 r, W3 e. U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# K$ Z7 P) u( N3 E! J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& m( @5 k- |. y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" E# f, y3 G/ v. r3 u& B' C3 d' f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# b9 v, K8 I; e9 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% y" Y# ^4 p) b8 o5 w; W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 R+ |' D6 _) P8 W( x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ^3 W0 `1 f9 H) ^+ f* R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 O3 P( H" j' ]- k0 [$ k5 O7 ?% z- z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  k% `& K9 u9 f: U5 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 Z& R0 a4 ^- L<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ Z* a3 k2 D, l% I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; x& X2 Y6 A( L9 U6 d! ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 G1 [1 l# p- g/ @7 v  B+ m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& N% x; }$ A' ~( m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  B3 B2 s) k! G% `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- l+ m( M* c) v& H* Q4 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ U) y9 h1 ], R6 k$ ?% F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) Z% C5 }) V- j/ T7 ~+ w5 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 ~( r/ m/ z5 c5 {, Z' f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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