【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 P( F2 E0 n( z: c3 I7 b( c; V" \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* C7 c7 T. q1 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ n* o- s. b' a) sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" j; m& ^# S* X+ q9 _  F' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ]4 r! |9 X" z; LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" j+ P7 A) w) u4 g  N% CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: W, g! i% S% k9 \& g; wNothing can compare to my love
/ D3 F4 G- s, t: I6 O3 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 H% F- B4 @; S' {8 S* n5 s) NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  {+ k# f+ z+ r8 l- kI want so much to see inside your heart
: L2 m# s7 d. B1 t) gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( p! B0 N- j& M- t2 V$ r' [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 M$ C1 j2 E" ^0 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  p9 g% n0 L% O, |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 u+ C1 U( _! I! e6 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 }$ a* `6 J& X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D! s* ]% j0 \' F$ V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 e) a- W! J3 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 v4 o  n# G$ y- T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 S: `- c" C; d$ t6 p( B1 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# O( ~, b- s! F/ N3 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, q' @$ @% E' D6 C+ @; |3 u% L  R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- O/ C+ X9 W; z& p& L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: o( i- m: s; _3 T6 d/ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) M; O+ N5 X4 ]9 P/ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, p6 ]7 p  y6 p  [5 Q3 F, z. R* Z" U. ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 c# X3 r( ?$ }! i9 x3 x) s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 S; k9 R7 O- e: ~, ~- F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 ]/ i' j2 |) c9 h* a, T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 \) B1 W3 [$ P$ Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. s) [$ ?: `4 w3 c7 J& I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* [* G% H8 B5 W! H1 E! L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( B$ C3 @" T* E4 A5 o& p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ?  I/ k# k- k& {! C7 j$ }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; o" h0 g- n1 B( r8 i- _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  E: j4 V" O* ~! W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ L6 {# G0 S# y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. F* q8 e1 }) C) u" ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 d3 L' L; B: v' C5 S" h, t1 Q; K7 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ y1 u6 f" o* Z. b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 Q+ t5 i2 s  ~; K5 P8 z- \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>