【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 `! j5 [4 o$ D/ ~+ H* s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  y  H; Q4 Q/ i" gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 i; h5 b4 Z4 r/ A3 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. l' |; ^/ \  [% L2 |' i% TThe sky is happy down to its soul
' B# [2 A/ i, M; B9 N0 qWith the moon kissing it every night
  v4 ]) D: T8 s6 @Seeing the sky content with its love
7 Y. ~" w) \$ K. U' H( dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 O7 y0 e& M7 ^0 N( @7 F' k( REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ j1 H. ]" |+ CI love you I love you with all my heart
' P7 e8 z2 F0 t- `' X4 c9 W  fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) n* r% P+ B# t1 L7 f) NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 G! S- Z0 K7 i0 k: t! b, }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) F# h9 \" h2 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 K! T# b4 m! a% z$ k& ]) TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, J1 Y' {) m. @& `# D, b9 B/ [  tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. j& J, _7 V( `6 \: ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ u4 K6 h7 G9 }# }, y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) O& }. j/ N5 N5 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. L9 e( x- O9 n2 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! D/ @0 T6 t( Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 @% H) f- M: M" o$ [3 g0 R) f$ r/ i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* _% f8 I2 q( z9 B5 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: v% `: {( e$ V; a1 i+ ?" p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 z6 l& F  D8 {! `/ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 m  e1 D2 @# S' ]( V# v+ Z+ j. t8 h9 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ s% k* \4 I6 g  o0 W4 s  ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 C! y6 p# e& A4 R. g5 g, z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' J+ O, M9 x$ _. S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, }# }& D% t! u: n0 h) A6 n4 ?7 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 D8 b. v" d) s% w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 `6 }( H! l5 J5 t5 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 I  s; F5 t) e( K0 F* Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. }& U7 Q1 o3 q0 K: ^) T% T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% V- E) ?. n- G0 Z, F) a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 F) I$ m$ W# x3 w- w/ k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ i& I  k, \( O9 f( q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! Z, D/ g  Z- ?4 B; N6 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 {5 L- G3 Q8 [& L% h8 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: p7 Z# x* }- k3 @/ d, ^3 l3 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 G# D* K/ C3 j, ~' V+ F8 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 Z/ e0 O( O( N6 H/ n  s3 o. h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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, d7 E2 V! G' S' _  V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 K# T/ q0 Q1 p% C2 Z1 K  E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>