【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ Y: ?0 O: s8 d% LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* b# a0 k4 l4 `1 [3 g* |4 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! e! H/ A7 t2 ^! d* [8 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* W- z6 p% l/ i- ]6 y9 [' K: ?) K; h* FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' D+ A* D  E& a% {* }Every other word you utter is love
! R# g: `+ O% i( i% k" AI really want to know just how much you love me
& a2 V- A5 j' O  hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 U+ k" x7 Q) W( m  E( VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- m/ Q' X$ S8 C/ @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: e9 L0 S. i# P  k2 J: TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 A: i/ v& e3 S+ A1 S; F7 z9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 x+ H7 M6 k4 U, |I regret not dying
4 |* L  ^. Z% A& U* k( @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' ~9 }' W) K6 ~! F, j3 |' m" LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" M9 c1 e5 z) E* ^8 C! h1 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( K' i6 Y" F$ w* ?# B% y' a- S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ y9 `3 [  ]3 X$ j- P# t1 l3 V% Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! d9 o6 g' {+ X/ v7 X: x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: D0 {6 r* r, Q- ]$ l( s4 H- a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" V" ?7 W7 j% e. c4 Y% O6 K  l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; n5 m7 V# y3 n: b/ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 K& J6 K+ R4 O: k/ L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ n# r- b) i! _! k3 s0 T' I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 z, X0 h* a. _. s6 W2 T7 m4 s, K  s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 g# U6 t; H4 {0 e. c  x, }$ Y, B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' }: @" J; w/ s2 D7 M6 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! A4 J4 t# T! p$ j. q; @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, L  l: S* L: B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 d% ^% e3 E$ m% t; D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ \0 U6 B5 _- p: A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ^& h, ~/ N3 ^& `3 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 J: R( k8 G2 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ O& h0 j2 @2 S8 ?* V7 _. r3 S" N, y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; r' N0 C, H" ]7 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ j& z2 [- G! h" M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. M: ^: G% ?) a  S" y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. t5 T' b- L* w$ @& w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( o4 |! `; b1 S+ }, `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; u4 B$ `' d! ~& i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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