【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) [3 w1 K, ^$ x4 [% l9 E0 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
& e$ h  c: x6 s8 n' I/ }7 I4 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d1 I8 {/ B+ b' a9 `: k: P  r8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. w& b% S( v& d5 X  o  f; y; K& BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! v+ U! A( L# d3 p9 ^* jI really want to know just how much you love me
( D" D; I% o3 X  gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 v. y  G9 I9 [6 @3 }4 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 X; K; J3 H5 R7 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n6 g- m! s9 T- w0 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 `# i) `% c3 M+ {* @I regret not dying
, s" ~" F6 i6 d# j/ x: v* ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' O* y$ `1 C+ y0 u7 }" @' wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" u7 o0 K: c0 |  E$ xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 E' ~# T! ^" Z- x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  o3 H2 A; N, _: X' Q# X" F" v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 y1 q; h$ j# y5 ^1 ~' Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 W0 S4 T" Z& u" Q0 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& ~& }9 y+ P0 G1 R" p! e; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ c0 o0 ~% c! G% _7 G6 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 o1 H* g4 Y2 L- K; p7 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% K2 L! K$ o9 g, `3 u- p<P>你无需担心</P>
* e1 ~- B; a, Z1 L" X- r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 S6 X2 |& a, B7 ~! X, L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 O2 }( w3 r! r" I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' |4 P6 }8 J0 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) |& B0 j: c9 m" b4 U8 H9 x) ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 f4 H6 Q; a' C2 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 a) Y+ K" _$ y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" \+ n  X1 m# r. |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 j# E7 J2 m9 S+ O/ Z9 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ]- t3 X9 K3 q, ?" N" m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. B$ G2 s' p- V6 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ~. _2 a# S) ]" j5 v# w1 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, A! v  D5 t% z8 u8 j/ p1 ?" W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( a/ k$ L! }! x6 w2 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 W. H5 e2 k' s% u7 t% n$ I# C: o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: `) q& X% X3 J' P; v1 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' T& \$ f2 n9 T: m  [# N. X' E$ ?, x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ N- i3 W: S2 D  Y& F: P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 J% V. z$ m4 e+ @* c% ?* S+ | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" _, d& ?8 c9 {* R% X) q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>