【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 B7 [; r$ f1 N: z7 K: z: k, v歌词我附在后面。
( p! p% A6 I: U  w9 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 ^* d% V# `8 ]+ d) Z! sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q9 d- d8 W9 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
! O7 ~% Q( L3 e$ {' N( N( SWith the moon kissing it every night
) r( |5 K% f& X' r. OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 d3 [: |- {1 C, ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; L* |/ {" {5 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" s- P% E+ ]& k! HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ S% [" i& o5 b) yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 o/ j  ]  u$ V  e  Z$ v# IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ~' [5 g; x: }* ~3 g! _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, q( o0 x& n) pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 ^! \- _  b8 S/ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! G8 Z. G' B2 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 a: j! }/ \) u7 U0 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 P! X% J6 K( S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 W- z6 I3 J: n: R+ S3 r7 l# h+ `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  F+ l8 q9 C) ?/ Z3 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 m$ p' C& b; g% G+ b) X- a5 |- u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: w! r) n5 p, V  Y$ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ~) Y" ?& m* C. _/ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 Q4 b# x0 x% L& M: m3 I<P>你无需担心</P>
8 l' l$ \- l0 ?4 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 F# ]6 g& R+ u9 [1 B, F, |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 j4 b2 O9 P: U; B  A3 ~6 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ N( _& e" c9 `0 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 {8 y& l' o# T3 M9 l+ J2 C- G0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' D5 I5 O' E# A" J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ R/ u7 I1 F$ I$ w; ^# h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* q6 y& ?$ i9 f+ A0 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 e* I0 g; q# q( n2 W# q+ Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ?2 t$ P" l0 F  M! e# }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) w6 r+ k* R2 ~" e/ D( @$ \' {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 R- @- E) @9 E: L. E6 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 i! j& N2 i5 t4 v3 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  V. s) Z" d' w! z$ m( U; P4 B. T! \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ T' h8 y) \( K9 N+ m5 _, W% w* }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" N7 N* l% o+ M# h( {3 V5 W/ E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% p3 ]" Q" Y% E6 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: R" N- Q( L+ c, m+ l9 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>