【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 k% A* n3 O# J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 N# \$ u5 I! {1 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. I4 M! @! S3 W' b6 e( ~9 P" `  Z1 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  ~# @8 e7 a1 [' IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: N( w  ~7 S% [/ ^" \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' n4 ?0 e' Z  z9 t9 X  LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 \) b# \- q7 F$ c1 S) I. v  z' o3 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 x# C8 }) @3 x4 W* X2 A% kI want so much to see inside your heart
$ c$ |. S- n6 Q9 Y/ J: n4 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 b, [+ s6 L. QI’m still filled with fear
- ^' p& |3 y  t6 O  {  {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ x7 ]( o6 k$ g1 U9 j0 J4 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 @& O9 `5 U2 p: \" gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 C0 N; {: N: F: pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: d! V4 \: ^; p: l& Z! Z* |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Y! T& J, ?8 s" H! r/ p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" a) ?1 g! B* o/ S  [1 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- p* m8 m( F) w; J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 g4 a& b( m7 ?2 S; m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( U' P7 P7 ]  E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' I- S$ R1 D6 k  E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* T% X) C9 {& B# G! ^7 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) F1 j3 G( Z% J9 D) I* O8 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 Y! @; p- q  A: O2 h( x' s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ a) I7 r7 s# G7 {; s7 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# j5 t- d( M" {8 C* H5 t. O1 i5 X& i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. c* b# s: n4 K4 b4 J( R0 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ v0 K" X5 b7 c. c/ S" F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" [! y( |$ ^. R/ ?# C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 H5 i9 @) }# {/ k$ `: X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 x9 @8 Z8 J& D2 u8 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }1 G5 w5 E+ `" b6 j4 ?/ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" [- A( Q- w* [( X: p  ~6 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" O8 G% Q/ i) ^# Y8 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ~! L; S) T  Y0 ?! Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 M/ L) P. Q' h% ]- J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 i: p! ?  l" \" f7 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. \- ?: h8 V  i" A; ?, J: d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' a! a# a# x- z6 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# z0 o5 c6 s/ W1 {! k) q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 e. V2 `! B% _2 j. e, z$ Y% D/ Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 j2 T) w# C0 e8 L! p9 Y$ \! A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' i8 g* X) N* E& z' R/ f% o+ r" q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>