【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' ]/ P! k: h+ D( q' h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* u& K% B. S8 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  o' d  ~+ q) S% e% ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# D; u2 w; y: N6 ^" r; L: @  Q8 @The sky is happy down to its soul
8 |. w. o  B% j$ l5 p/ ^- I/ PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( b* V- C4 l' v8 L, X1 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 r- Q3 D6 W4 w% Q% }" TI really want to know just how much you love me
) M3 R7 g% f+ k- @: O7 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( @1 N" K" H/ h3 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- \+ v% j) i8 `' K  UI’m still filled with fear
* B0 [% B( x- D, Q9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: _3 u- b1 s8 ?- X7 c) g% ZI regret not dying
, l& {; T9 g# Q; b6 U3 z+ i+ ?, m6 F7 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) o' T, G1 d2 V9 F! }/ PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 U4 V  f( y0 ]% D! r# ~2 s: JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  M( \5 _  r5 O) w* i9 ^0 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- i* t4 ]* T$ J/ \  h9 a3 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ Y2 a8 _  [4 Y7 P, Z' o6 b( U! t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 l# k* l# p; [. ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' b3 }/ i" J" }9 p  c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( n( `# ^$ }6 o# R' p& h4 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& I0 v( c  C: V, ^; P; E8 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 \, q5 I% G7 \6 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. O& J: a9 X0 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 T( ~) B+ n( S8 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: K) j' d% C3 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! r' S* D- D6 G8 o0 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; G( z% i, S  I$ F: i' n% d6 ~* E# h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. h: T4 G+ R+ U6 O& _9 B( E, ^* J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. E/ k5 g6 W# L8 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! c1 I6 h& r) v# _5 r* o5 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  F6 `# }) a2 {) |3 x5 y/ S# D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 d+ y9 }6 Z( k9 v6 R/ h& t9 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 F5 U3 j$ Q  g- R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ }1 f: A. q! h: j  B# @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( [! R  d1 r, a7 c# m) F+ C) E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 q, Q% ?9 p. x$ s  W6 p6 N# j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. f7 o; T* A1 o) b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' N; v* ^- \9 H6 I4 V" f6 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ c& S6 w! W* B' O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 N( G4 v: B  e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 O% c3 A8 x2 w9 [- x1 j8 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>