【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% B' c* s7 R% s7 r) F5 x" n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 B8 U7 I7 _6 R/ v- a6 q6 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ h& \7 d# ^6 u* c# c- vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- V' Z2 X& R. Q5 H4 z$ RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' e+ @& A/ R3 n) \. J5 `2 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  ^6 T5 H0 C% s  F  A1 p0 p  [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ P- E/ [& x: E7 mNothing can compare to my love
! S1 Z7 B  X4 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 {: u, u+ N' ~( LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 [2 ^- `& M. r. C- j6 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 _$ O3 N% [6 P0 H& BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 n3 @4 j& Z1 K) N. J0 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" G) V* h6 K) E; ]3 V0 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( o" n* P9 j& T+ O, J& L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! f9 f! _: \8 q* v  ~! b0 |7 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 L. g2 z# q  W% x  K6 V# O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- v3 m& R) R7 L' D7 X- ]# D1 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ?. q; U2 c; h* X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ W% j( ^- K8 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. M6 d7 Q+ Q2 z2 l- c9 q/ e& o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 S' p: i6 ]! n* s' k% b" `8 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 s9 o- X. `+ C4 u% k! _" v1 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- H; q% q2 r0 b3 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ s% N6 t7 |" {: o' C9 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. c' f4 m$ @$ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 s: f9 r* r/ [& w' k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 H# d; W) Y' W0 F, `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( M. d: F& _4 f# c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 h5 J% i  W% P9 N" n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 h7 C1 Z; V, V; M3 u2 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& q' F0 r) P4 z$ U8 Y: b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 J" @$ H, A$ B1 B' j& l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ s' G, `/ J" [3 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 P% k$ |( m+ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ]1 W8 G/ O3 b' k& V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 G4 S7 U' w, @+ W" }+ c7 x3 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; Q" k8 L( p1 t9 K% p. w# ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ D) I& o2 @- [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ q' g/ J% B# x. w+ W0 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>