【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, x0 E% p* ]% c& E. YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 F/ s. A* x8 D' {1 lWith the moon kissing it every night
; \9 E1 N( f8 ?# T8 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 _  Z$ t2 t) G. }% ]: j' mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 U* G. f2 u* g8 J! N3 U0 W6 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ X) z& l2 A2 I/ y( g% }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' M9 O4 [# V" S! R1 c. q$ ]I want so much to see inside your heart
& e8 ^6 K5 A) Q. UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; \: b4 l$ C, \' ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ P/ C6 \3 `0 |& Y( `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 G  K: C9 B6 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! V. x7 Z/ O( g( d# U, H8 Q) \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( S# _+ Q+ q* n) l  w+ E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' i4 _# J* z' I" {6 m6 b' Z# h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( _" s5 m( T/ E, k& O5 ^* d2 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ U& G7 S+ e2 Z/ w( C. s0 M  Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" {' u6 b! B+ `( W3 D( g% h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* n9 b! g* F9 [2 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, u$ W2 v3 G/ d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. n3 \0 x' y# l, O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 `9 m: L4 \8 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: \  A. ?. W9 `' p7 P, i; L7 X9 ~+ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, l5 @/ v( s9 ]7 @# O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 f$ x7 `1 o- i% [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, U# @. A( K( }$ |& C. \! a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, ]3 n5 C; v- n* n: q/ A& l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ Y2 J6 J" j, E4 [9 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 A( @, ]& p; C. p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ^, O& m; T+ Y" K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 I$ u1 y  E: q1 B1 c6 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& l# d  E) S$ S8 {* ~0 t9 K3 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 n- J8 z! e& U1 ^: S. f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& q$ }0 B" n& p, v0 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' n* `1 P; Y. P5 v4 X3 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 b3 F9 O( T) |: j  Q  X: j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Q4 ~. i' r% n* V( ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; B; S9 `0 B; K1 e/ P: {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 _/ j: K6 _  p9 e# L* k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( F; e0 j# L# M5 U$ c3 M* F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' T; B  T% A1 M! N% C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  I: R; Z& p9 y2 E6 p6 ?' z7 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 e3 j+ ~7 J& b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>