【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, q7 }2 _( _2 j* p0 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 E; q- e# D$ W: F/ [2 ]! H+ V3 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* t! N- w& t) h; ~! jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: @2 ~7 `: a. aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; w7 R5 n$ M8 X; D- m" kWith the moon kissing it every night
+ y, `2 B. V' {4 o4 o% aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 b0 g5 o7 m" Q" o  E8 L. _& G" _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Y7 E* ~: p3 W0 r4 k* U. tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 s" V1 E5 e' ?9 b" c! jI love you I love you with all my heart
+ `! l. }+ J/ PNothing can compare to my love
; W8 l3 W# h6 O) m% gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) P& G' g: z% g9 S/ ]5 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 Y) N( k9 t* rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 h  g: c+ |1 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ w) O; z; G3 Y( J/ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 Z& E( R, T) s) cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 a3 r' R1 m8 X+ W" F, T; V8 V: H% a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 a1 W0 j  }2 {6 ]3 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 U5 m9 p: {+ C& I0 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: i2 }, Q: x1 Y4 r5 G. l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" d& Z/ ?7 h' j# m* ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* E, j8 ?  p5 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K* k8 z  L+ j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% K* {9 V! ], X. B% O# z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ~; a( w, z* ?2 G' K/ C<P>你无需担心</P>
7 ~% u$ Z$ G: E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 c. }) B, ^$ Q5 j3 T9 P5 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. R$ d" [1 m; Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ?9 e8 p. A, L8 r. h  m9 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: C& e, p, q2 W! m. K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' t: p5 t7 `; e: j* b0 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- Z9 h0 w' ~. F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( m, ^: J4 z9 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, I( u% H: [  i5 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 d6 J8 \2 [2 Y' V. C4 O4 P' O; p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 U1 a7 _6 ~! Q" p) F8 L: s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# i' P2 J/ z+ S$ x: }4 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) b1 L9 A  K' t* ]' Q8 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 p0 Z+ q! i% }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>