【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 b0 g8 x: q9 k9 ^8 w3 I3 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 T% h  l6 C2 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! m2 |8 h  R1 N- xThe sky is happy down to its soul
- H  c' o! y8 o2 I, yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' a, M+ Y5 f! B( S) E5 M2 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% ?. k+ U# ^: _( i) XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  ?' L1 U& s7 T( ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; Z* e( q/ ^; u" k: |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 z" X% L' l( u7 \  y9 d$ |8 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# u9 r* v1 @% v4 k, f* _! UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. L4 j/ ^0 s& C5 ]% G' `' X! f# CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  d5 l0 u/ g$ |- `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' C6 x/ B  {1 l7 q' F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& U1 ]9 S( m7 C2 g2 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( o4 R3 e( h" y, F# l. A4 ~) n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, R0 e) G9 ?9 n& h- X6 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ J0 W6 N2 ]4 w% Y- D2 O1 y. A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 Y* q% ~" c, r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" W7 f7 j% M0 m4 e) Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 v6 m3 |6 E- L' T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% P6 ?" H+ K* W: b  t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ G* ?0 U6 ~; u+ \. L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! N3 v8 d2 ~4 @1 t' U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ R. z' F. ?$ I" l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 U! J- a4 P( F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Z+ e+ h. z+ q( u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" _, h" S) O! B2 N8 T- X# ]4 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* p! `! D8 P( N6 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ _+ R; S+ \7 ]! s% a. L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' U5 M, O5 d0 x( [) ^5 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. U. t" j: o  ~3 z<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 d6 j  n& M2 U; x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 m# C0 _/ b! C5 f1 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 l  s0 T& P# V, |5 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: A* K; _) j+ L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ N  a+ d* p% P" Z- I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>