【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: W/ a: `4 P4 L1 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: [8 C2 v/ N1 [' vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( _5 A( f, s( c9 I3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 U5 E# i+ S$ S$ t5 y1 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 E& y, Y# E+ f, v3 hEvery other word you utter is love
8 @* j+ k3 {: X" x, cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, W  P6 \) K* @$ l* rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 l+ F" C$ n) L1 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! h# e. V7 i9 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 V5 W6 M+ c  m8 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# \/ l* _; [0 E3 u) i! GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( H& i5 r* s' k3 n+ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ x/ M: V* f7 A" BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' ~' h* P9 G1 D, D  n" t" O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Y3 i) y3 o2 [- N( T4 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 a: l. p$ x) }) |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; w. s" j" u7 C% H1 F% [* W$ l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 a+ O6 a- `" u9 @! R0 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ K# J9 y' j9 L, f- r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 X+ D( o7 y$ T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ^# _  N  ?& j; b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; q, e0 N! I6 ?' ]7 D" R$ V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 ]7 W+ C: S6 a  W" l- s; `9 ~: S9 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% v6 h. q. A9 D8 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ^9 j; `: `, b* Z1 Q0 A  U: w0 }7 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* D. q2 |4 B! U9 q<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ~1 }% L: S) g( Z/ i6 \2 T" S7 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ M1 E9 C' [5 j  _% A2 N; J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 a5 S6 C2 [) ~  w! v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, |; ]8 F& t% p1 N0 y3 G( w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' ?0 I  S8 Z$ q9 K+ M* v: m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- s+ J: e9 P+ K( ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' l& P4 e$ l& r( ^/ x/ y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' f) Z  ~; y( K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 b+ |7 O. g3 d3 g- f" q, A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. K* X8 s- N* ~: A! r; x9 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 u0 t4 m+ B1 D# ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. V" ^. @+ }9 W6 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 [' ~# x" I& \0 T5 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ I0 `' r% m9 q- F# W3 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* Z' `  z: H/ f) {# v/ }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! C4 n. J3 s" y2 G5 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 U# ^  Q0 j% S/ R! z& u7 e; u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- q2 E. M1 v# u* b$ f- ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  h2 y7 ~- y' z! \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ~# p& V( Q# S5 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% @' Q! k" \/ }: S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ?. k5 \6 F3 g" ~# q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' ]; {# @8 Q9 G- r8 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, N5 v- y+ z. F+ Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 k: S2 V8 l- n; D; U# _9 z2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; O$ J; m8 l/ J9 i6 G3 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>