【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& I3 p1 U  n/ x7 W; L; i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- K+ Y+ ^' H* B2 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 L8 _, M, M: @' T/ KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" E. t1 x1 r; V% W7 r! KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" i" `5 I  I+ b2 E8 u. a$ C! ISeeing the sky content with its love
4 b3 x  W8 Y' r# k3 h! J3 J0 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ F  L  b7 O! d( z/ GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 F0 R; j/ }3 W" j( H; PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 W  [" N0 S" F3 ]4 B' lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* ]  n, T) N, O& zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 O: m. o/ ^( {$ ~With such a tongue as yours,
3 F' I1 b+ k' {7 W# I4 ^$ @; M9 s, r2 X1 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 d2 k# D* }* p  V9 {% PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 |" D/ o" _2 Q% XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ]( F  V1 [0 |9 Z* o5 ^6 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 M$ E& `( \; ?  a# s$ b! ]  A) J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 G& t: T& c" w( y% z+ G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 _; q2 f  u' j  F' X$ {% R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) V8 v3 h) F3 s: j) n/ D5 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s( ]+ g; Z6 U$ m1 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! S8 t' h. N/ t2 G, E0 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ?, @) |) q! N<P>你无需担心</P>
* N4 q0 S* [: c$ z. T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 F$ {3 B4 s% ]  x0 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 J! N. [# @& K. y5 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 g" x/ s6 p! H1 S1 C% `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 O( j! e/ M) l( _1 W! t5 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) a* }. k! V! ^7 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" f( J# K. O" q; v0 [8 p) j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& z, R% E& c2 |$ ?+ z! O6 q  r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. @: g4 D( M4 S, A2 k# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- p4 Q* a. o1 U8 l0 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 w9 ?( I4 y8 B. r' G1 @: b7 O4 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* k+ d5 z. S! i' M7 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( b! B) M4 K; `3 C* W, I  p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 T1 B. s5 U$ I; C$ v9 ]/ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: V; l+ |9 a# t6 I5 M2 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 j0 f# T7 o' C. y0 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ e  M% _: H7 N* v  d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) b& E) r5 I$ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; a! e% ]; w+ Z8 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 z9 e. E" J3 u2 P6 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* T! W. ]2 t" R9 F  b$ d) g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 |; X9 w+ [. w( j, w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>