【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 x2 M5 `' a1 F/ P$ ^5 s+ |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 k. A9 c; d9 c& b- N5 Q4 e, ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 G$ t4 c& u& o( |& USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. }$ r0 f( h: L$ k- ~% R, U* a  VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( D! r0 Q3 ~. T5 ~7 y% SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- q7 ?, V: M  N% K- eI love you I love you with all my heart
% g: L& y0 P2 X- x" h6 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 i9 E0 G/ x' M+ `! X7 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# i, {; y6 P# z* ]+ q- QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" Y9 [; S, a4 k2 {6 u7 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N7 F5 l1 E* {% j, a& U$ `, aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 |( G: O* w1 G: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& y3 z$ y7 V6 s( M9 N+ t3 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 q2 ]% `# c2 |% F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& A! i4 o" U' d0 e' m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 y3 x$ n1 e& N5 G( F, m  N/ ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 [7 a  q  y; l1 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: A1 t' E+ K) I. _, X' S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" `  W; c4 {$ O3 i# y% l0 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 P+ ]' z+ J& e9 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) i" T( T' v0 V2 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# Q' n' i$ k6 c. b<P>你无需担心</P>
1 A- f5 C- J2 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 }5 ~% z* u$ T/ B; g, ]4 }8 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; j2 C/ {. q- [( y3 Q0 M1 q' V2 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) n! x8 x1 F5 G" c$ `- _/ q8 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 \2 z5 h* D' O5 S& W2 ]3 `' C% I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( D& H9 G9 h% v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 F; f+ Y0 b: i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; P! C5 F/ u- Z( C! O, H! W& C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# b5 W4 z" _) x/ z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- S4 @, q7 \" n. Q/ t  e3 M- O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% k: T1 h2 X3 I* |* _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* Z5 z/ t# w: S& C" q, J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- X* {- @4 c' L* l/ [! r8 S2 k3 e# c* Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! {3 V9 G7 f' F( U<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: e, s8 E: o, k+ R- S* u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 O+ V9 w! P1 h& r7 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& f& p! q" n3 H$ W; k/ o  b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 X. M% X0 k. K; D  c* i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 d. _4 O  e/ d$ f" t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 B" d8 E: `' W( Y+ l0 K我请你剖开它

8 _& ]+ U# e; U$ V' I6 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 x2 g* i5 v6 q. i* ]' y# g" \) Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>