【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( x- R# e# P+ V) p6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# E: o3 [) G/ s3 u+ I) H9 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. r8 |( s( R7 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ?8 A2 M- Z/ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% A: {; \4 g- P1 d& ]# LWith the moon kissing it every night
6 [9 y0 w7 W9 i( V4 L. s4 {1 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
+ o/ U) p1 v4 q8 e7 H6 ?9 ~* yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; h) h" r* Y7 P. g6 s0 @You needn’t fear anything
: j- [. O' L: z9 ?0 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' m3 O) }5 ~) a3 d) b6 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 E) D  e/ H" q# M8 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  [( l9 Z7 G, G! l( `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- @9 i7 y" |, a; {  E" yI want so much to see inside your heart
8 g) N+ Z* S& {( @. H0 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ?7 a* G- w# ^/ e: k. nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 {0 U" A9 m: `& wI regret not dying
) {( X- D# V' O! AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 [. q# ~! k4 C0 K' [% _* o. UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& `' ?( j. ?: M, D+ Z! v% ~4 n6 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; ~3 n7 v  z) S4 [2 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 i3 d% E' v% z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* y4 O. _# L0 \% a. z( }! j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  c3 v; B" f  L% R4 }5 ]  ~) {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( Y7 |5 D, ^4 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: {/ M% Y8 N7 h2 k# c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# a2 W+ r2 U" T5 k6 z% {# m! _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 y$ n! o; L; ~1 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" i6 w- P( W$ ^4 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% L' }  p( n# }3 ?8 m# \6 Z+ o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ d& u' N, H( w5 k) E- f" c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! w) D; A( G6 P; M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; Z$ }4 ?1 ]6 w3 n, g* D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( S2 c' B; n( O6 o( ~/ V2 u, o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% U9 B& r  \! h# r2 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 e6 S; s/ M# P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' F( F" f. l! }5 T' y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& v: k9 A+ Y, @" E. N/ W; I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& S5 z& E6 T" d0 q$ ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 D" G' e9 M- N2 V/ ]2 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: R" }; a; s* g8 s! D2 O9 ]9 Y7 f0 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' W: f; D' x' |; L" u! _9 B/ o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ P1 Q+ F2 [! c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. r  j  l9 V5 G6 J# I0 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: a7 U/ s6 W3 m! \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. }. W1 p3 x' ]1 y; m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) m0 z9 b9 e# K0 E6 n% Q( h1 l$ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ C/ `& [, a& r% ^0 N8 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>