【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ v4 E- G- b) C1 q1 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 F  `* j* n0 c+ \! Q  uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% K' T+ T# z7 l; U! C) e3 m; xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 @: j1 `( `" r7 h4 p9 wWith the moon kissing it every night
" O5 x+ x- F- P1 \Seeing the sky content with its love
6 Q9 u- t; L' yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! n8 A6 a% m+ D4 c3 [/ u5 I6 ~5 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% p! o0 A8 H5 P- zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# H, i& N5 ~( Z9 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" C1 R8 `$ O# N) |" MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* V9 Y# p" Y" II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  [# H. |' g# }# V  Q1 k4 A* i. ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 U& y5 |* S$ u. wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. A3 [, ?2 m  p0 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 o5 p9 K$ p( k5 M7 M. F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 g1 `# b3 W. V3 z. d' Z) w' F. v( s9 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! x1 }2 g$ P5 Z7 x% n( F  P7 V# Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 e5 I$ l( c6 ?" ^& ~' D0 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 L5 @" d  d* t$ r. o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" M5 u2 b: ?" a& g8 f# K4 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 q* ]1 b% Z' v& t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m+ S# l' ~' L& g" [0 h8 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ {% Y( `4 b  @$ j3 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; a+ ?" N. M( Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 K) O& t, \* c4 ^; C% Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 k7 ?# U% e0 o; f/ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 U  k4 s4 d+ h9 z+ k" e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 }) H' W5 U0 \- C/ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% P$ y* b- ?! {9 `* k$ }$ `  @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 x3 F6 Z9 z/ p, R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 Q0 \+ A) q8 X/ `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' U, T/ O0 L1 L7 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  @8 L- z: O, ^. z# i) w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& T+ ?/ H2 Z5 \% x+ F, c# [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, n4 B3 d5 f) Y  t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 `3 O7 |5 u" y: S7 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ q0 N3 t2 f0 V* C0 t) j  b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>