【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" _' {" I8 }% z, _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 k/ M2 ?" y8 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 T) d5 V6 z" ~  r5 x' YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; {  P" f& Z- y* G( p* [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ z* S. s4 R4 U! p% t9 CSeeing the sky content with its love
5 p8 v) X5 u6 ~* O3 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 w7 @# W$ O5 `0 y& _: h0 ]: CEvery other word you utter is love
* ^! S- |/ P5 u9 N8 K  UI really want to know just how much you love me
2 i* W, q- U7 \8 k3 qI love you I love you with all my heart
/ g* x  s% Q2 n) F" UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: V6 B8 a3 T6 E& _2 W* S$ dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 N' Y0 d( ~9 M1 ~" ~' f$ `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; R; ]4 ~! R! Z: R" q; WWith such a tongue as yours,
$ _" c8 t* h7 M4 n0 b+ sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ o, m2 [1 R7 T0 s; T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# i. O3 s4 S8 D' q0 a* {3 Y6 |- w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 L1 W6 \  E2 U$ r! G  [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* K5 d8 v# W! @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  Q5 G7 e7 o& e. L: f. b7 ^: x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' N2 l1 h/ A9 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: g6 x0 n2 b2 M7 _& o0 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. C/ E9 k( \+ F+ x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ j/ b3 ?, N/ ~1 d  T4 ~( `9 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Q: c) ~' m) X* f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# d6 F) }* y6 W) ?) r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- J( V) o8 S" ?/ A% {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 e2 F6 f9 i$ {& u' o) Q3 x) P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) n: v% P' _5 O" q  s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ^5 u8 a) r) _' X  X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ O, r( s# ~1 x& N# H9 _- [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% m# F% k% C2 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 \( E3 j* o! Q6 p( N! ?- z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& J9 ^8 s  v+ d% v- n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) s8 u$ ^* d6 m( B2 K9 b, Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! g5 o4 w* k9 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ Q& d1 N  A- H! n( s. m0 h, E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 v- ?* r, `' e& o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 @7 V; ]% q6 v. T6 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  T) u% U* }2 k3 A* u/ g7 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>