【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& K( @% \# d$ D& @& R0 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ~1 B8 Z& V) s8 L% @4 u% i4 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 H+ \6 _. s1 C5 ^" I, m, uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ s  S/ h1 ~6 L3 J1 x0 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
" k) y- I4 i% T, BWith the moon kissing it every night
( r# m2 E* S0 ~. e4 V$ A1 r! H. ZSeeing the sky content with its love
) I& {! ^1 _! Y, x- TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  b& s( U; t3 g4 U, z, C6 IYou needn’t fear anything
! \. h& ^" Q9 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ P4 E5 S6 u4 l+ w2 C. ]I really want to know just how much you love me
" b3 n; r& A" @* }1 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% U$ j/ C; F6 U1 [0 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ U8 }5 r# Z/ p; i- S5 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# F# T, y& A, I" S* y* [  d% cI want so much to see inside your heart
' Q5 _6 c8 o! e! ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' S- i7 |3 C. e% G& TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) p+ r6 D' s% Z5 N* `) q6 uI regret not dying
( O6 T* ~# B+ C1 E" p) ~: iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( A% U/ G  e2 `/ `* Z* f0 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 c$ ?. e2 A' f, h: eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ F0 o4 V. n# {/ K" C6 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 R% c) K8 P5 w2 Z5 ^9 j0 z: G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ ]* F# u2 k0 T1 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 W2 g2 h- v, }: ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 U: B+ J5 p# B! C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 U2 P% q9 ?& P2 J6 w& _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  k2 X! }2 h5 S) O9 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 `6 L) w- {8 S7 ]0 V3 W5 H5 A; U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! N) a$ R2 J3 @8 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ~" v# p) r& e  o2 {9 c6 |! a# x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. _; G# t+ _2 L: s4 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ~6 H! L4 V  w1 V% t# l- U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" d* g: |/ d! L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! O) E1 `  t* j: p, B. n+ x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 k; X+ b- N$ G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! \' s# U. \6 D( u! M5 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 ?, }+ o6 ]* _' E  ]  @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 V' ~2 x0 S/ T% ?+ u8 g4 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ^. y% j: N: n! o* C/ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& D) ?4 k2 u/ l( d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ l  y+ @& M# A  F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 H% K3 d, m6 S( E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" Y) x: K! \3 _' Q5 `$ ?+ J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" K7 `- {# J0 \+ y& p. w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; `  L7 K) U" `9 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; T0 Y/ V8 h. M$ A( f) t% @* H% o* C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! K) V. @4 A" {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>