【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 E" p" i5 b' a1 @9 L& TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ `$ d0 j8 y1 o. a5 {) A8 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- w) n: D4 [% v) u5 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 c+ f/ b' F7 @( H4 `Nothing can compare to my love
3 u$ H7 q4 u' m6 j/ G$ h3 I, C5 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 R9 G/ y  L# ?; @: s- @I want so much to see inside your heart
8 ]+ J' Z1 t1 m  ?% I: f" ]% F1 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 B6 x( Q$ l/ ^. u3 vI’m still filled with fear
. ]- Y" U& Q7 U+ S* x* [  m/ sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 {! x# |% B. l" H6 T( uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; z! h$ j3 W) t( g. R" S* t! m6 ]* m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  z3 F" Z6 p: s- H. U/ N& ~" Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ?& ?( d7 q0 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; ~9 f& n+ x! y& d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 Y1 W* O: r, \3 a: r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! G- r2 _$ C  Y- M8 Z: v+ I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* |  |  D: g+ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; \2 n0 p1 G7 E- s7 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 J6 F& Z5 @% c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 W2 U7 @; f' Y1 m! w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) @; ~3 L0 B! k: ?+ |$ G7 l  o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 k' h  E! p8 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ K: W" Q% A" u! O/ g) x: h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- n' o. ]* @* y& I( I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 j  v5 G2 P$ }5 c) P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ~3 C+ c0 f: s- d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& A" ]1 t& h7 I% W1 F2 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  T$ s: k! g2 N, V# U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! A: {; a$ H& V# }/ Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  i  i4 v+ Q0 B* e" {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) l/ F) m" A6 r2 P" W- p( d# p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& N; W& t$ _* u, |9 O  o<P>I regret not dying</P>
, o. Z+ a+ C, N  Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ?4 w. X. t. k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 M( q* L8 M' e# ^+ N) Y* D. V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: m# c1 c6 `: p0 `9 y  r; S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 J6 T0 U$ q, [: e+ k1 Y& z: |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) i+ R1 B9 r8 e  A# K, n8 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 r9 Y/ F/ d( A( s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 h, G' g6 i9 k" \& i0 n% ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* a5 W) c: K: P7 `) J2 ?: Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>