【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 C0 Q3 h- V7 c- _0 O& i! yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" p; F5 J0 |0 U4 Z2 t7 ?! l, EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 ]8 F+ h3 W( v% y3 KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 i, z5 C" Q& H% G) U3 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 G; Q! O* b( fEvery other word you utter is love
+ `! ?' t$ c; F" `8 L- ^! VI really want to know just how much you love me
: P+ c4 H* Z0 b. u: `I love you I love you with all my heart
5 b. A4 D8 Q2 ^! f9 I- G/ eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; V) Y+ Z* j9 d6 J% ~8 M  U' S! }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' O4 A6 O+ k3 m2 F. b  UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 y! G+ P2 E; {, D: N  ]9 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  L( o4 e6 H9 |' W: m& uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 M1 q9 ?& P! L# B2 x& m2 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  F1 l( w# l+ J$ B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 o: D& |3 _2 u# q" e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# C% V3 R$ U  g, c* y  _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 c! D. Q; Y* \, k  i9 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: u1 v' m5 }/ h, P6 {. |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, _5 Z! ^$ ?- ~8 w6 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& P8 V) _. G9 \2 O& H# m1 I<P>你无需担心</P>
* @, _5 [! N8 o2 Y9 j; u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. |; ^" A, s3 D+ n: \1 V5 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ t/ B* [4 _# u3 P; D+ |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 W6 y. ^* Z0 e/ }" ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% ~$ r% Z! Y8 [& G- f5 G1 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 t! g" B1 Z: C, s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 X* ^% q4 b" n+ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- j$ S# u& \( ]0 I: ]" ?( H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! k6 l  {" B3 y2 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% P; X4 f6 T( O% X, M. p/ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ D. f) x* R" z( Q1 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 p9 x0 E# B( h& y7 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 p0 K! N- Z* n; h) Z  G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 N. }* G4 a  B" @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 j7 |3 p, }6 n% [3 H8 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) D: N- u3 @! Z: i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 H3 t7 ?* d! Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ }: f% d# P. ^3 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' D7 X7 ]8 j1 d1 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( z! P* U3 o1 |4 W" Q. T5 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: _5 H7 {' d/ I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>