【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) T0 F. N' l( m6 {9 l% c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- X' u. r/ e8 p( Y! n- e# vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 k8 j# F  v: _( hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 e$ W6 Z1 Y2 B8 y9 ]3 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; Q. ^% V" s  D  E% M2 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% e1 m0 H" @$ H. Y+ mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' V3 ?# j0 R0 Y8 ?% Z) \: i% WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  k/ u3 K4 y, P  T( z6 F- v: qNothing can compare to my love
3 X% g: X4 x1 L1 x4 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 @  x8 e. z+ n9 |7 p  cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. D% {; i& b4 d+ h* R: q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 ?4 L$ Z9 r5 N) m9 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 U% K6 l2 m% b2 H% P- S3 B# ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- G/ \2 W9 Q5 R1 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' f% W; `6 `( ?- [+ M. u' p# j7 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Q% ~9 c1 I5 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& j: n2 i* E! F8 h+ B0 m0 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( v; w' i* P% F' K5 m# H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 t6 v! n2 J: n$ |8 T3 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Z$ h8 O; U* p) w& h0 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  f& l9 V6 |( a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. {- t: Y) U3 T! I3 l8 x5 {; {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: A& S0 t# g9 ]# M. g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 m2 o; B5 s  _- g. ~; n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' c% ?2 P6 ]6 X: _( J, I. z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- j' c. |- n! m5 H7 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) Q6 ~# l: c9 G" E: z4 O; ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* y) U/ ]6 C+ S' ?8 i6 i1 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# f' e: O* C6 B6 D! h+ c2 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" Y- t2 {$ @  [' }$ f! Q6 q8 ^- w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. Y% X5 s- F3 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! x/ j/ p) B8 [  h8 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 ^5 {- O. X# E  m0 |. T6 C& c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 P- p5 H3 D  b4 c1 d3 i9 z  m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 g- ?# ]% H* Y$ M; r1 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% o' f: P: Z: @2 B$ s0 l/ A8 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- W4 |. ]) m" ~+ F; w9 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, d5 E) w9 T+ v: m) H! b% w+ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! y; l) Z4 D" Y6 z# e  J. L我请你剖开它

6 z. b+ q" B  P( t: j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>