【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 U# A& K9 ~1 u( k! Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ _2 a4 w% X4 a' J* B( |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ q; t, R# Y, ^  l2 d& oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ [# w2 W5 C* q5 g7 T) d% qThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ ~) B0 O4 X% u2 V& L, n5 X. |4 G; \3 k3 w& eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 n' |+ o6 f# T3 I8 i7 N' {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 o' J1 ~$ Z( R. H* E4 PEvery other word you utter is love
" V/ c, @& n3 Q7 P3 c  WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 [# M6 Q) ~. m+ ~9 mNothing can compare to my love
% c6 X# G1 D1 K9 y+ WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- z4 t8 e+ w+ r9 [5 |; LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ \% F2 [9 e! C5 Y7 I4 u+ AI’m still filled with fear
0 k' m5 B" E  G5 |7 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 ~( D3 b/ G2 }8 K. a5 S9 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 k! w7 h* f6 W7 UWith such a tongue as yours,
+ Z6 W- s5 j, |9 E8 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 w" y( S! o+ @- d/ d0 w* v0 S6 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ O9 U- m6 m/ W* G; g; f. F  J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! G4 `1 X( I- T# ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( C$ U6 ]; w6 J1 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& ]; v  I: ?7 `6 m) e+ I: ^$ u6 X" m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: x/ E5 v2 B1 F+ {/ B: d6 R. B9 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ m4 E6 i. Y3 c  \* x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  J, H; w3 T6 M  Y+ B4 k) m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* f/ @# u. @7 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  H6 g3 K1 F) v) E' B$ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& Z9 k$ m6 r: }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 A' h/ V0 y* f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* S4 R( W6 }* c- X3 K& _2 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% a+ a; z$ h& S: R; V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. T/ ?0 }! w6 m% ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 v8 \8 K2 c3 j4 r  H3 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 f% M  L: @) V7 x7 M8 T) [' M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 M* n( C0 `. Q; V, L; B3 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
& F5 O1 R4 {3 Z4 {' J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; t( A% W% c; Q" c) n: s9 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  h; q$ T, S3 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' W& q; }$ Y9 \: H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 }7 @0 W/ Q2 r3 [( y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 ]; e; {7 G) i. h8 r# Q4 x我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>