【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( E, @6 S2 T) a; f; }5 R! lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# O/ H8 T: Q" B3 B! ?" d" i3 }The sky is happy down to its soul
7 }0 D; w1 ^9 ^/ @9 w  S6 BWith the moon kissing it every night
. v0 Q: a# W" o- XSeeing the sky content with its love
3 Z& v/ M- i, j% c) ~2 u( A0 S0 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, j! V- U+ \, O7 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 X5 }# z3 a. Q# t; _: j3 R" zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 n+ A8 L9 ]5 a4 Z* CI love you I love you with all my heart
/ _  T1 Q) v! i4 f8 t& NNothing can compare to my love
# {- e# k' @* I2 [' |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" H0 D/ t) [" t: Q3 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [8 j  _1 d* n# N0 x$ ^. \4 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 D/ T6 P8 [* x5 Q) \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ u# g0 E$ i. ?& M! M3 F/ ?8 r1 ]0 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ b8 k9 k7 k) }. `% A9 p: vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 n3 v% {' l2 B3 ~9 E( |+ {& x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: Y* K/ A0 z) ^: b: L8 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- T3 X; }$ Y5 G6 R9 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' E- t$ ^4 e( r4 D+ H5 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 I: \2 S) {- j7 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. r- ]' }+ U, ^( h/ Y  _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ c: F; o! C" h. L2 ~" [- K* [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 l- x; X# L. E% [3 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* J% l& ~# K0 j5 T  i" h( G6 _<P>你无需担心</P>
2 J4 \7 ~1 m( B. y- `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ L3 D$ S9 b. D$ J: m% O! R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ @3 Y6 Z, o) [+ H. w9 g  C* W0 T4 r& m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ s" U) Z7 e1 g2 i! m$ u/ E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ N) b; f8 w8 v' v2 ^; S! Y# p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% Q/ C4 \8 d/ n; Q0 K. s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 T6 W0 `9 c0 U# b/ W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) m+ W' Z. i% K3 o9 L9 n# b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, D5 D2 h4 L: a4 w2 v4 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ {: t) l9 t* ]/ l: J1 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, \' ?( a2 T( T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 r; A  G! `. v. u1 n4 c/ ~- N* H+ Y* e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, W6 `/ M  L7 G( b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& O6 b4 D4 B' \1 K8 C8 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
) }; Z$ s# j) ]* h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& G7 g  }. K; ]- n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( [9 [8 Q/ h4 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: b/ ]& v& p8 u" f: t; Z0 C) O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 v* l6 ~5 c* e3 T! d7 z1 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% f& c+ I9 W- P( l; z4 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 r. k  ]* N" ?" v$ V+ w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 c' j3 `& Q4 Z% ~( S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% C+ Z& \9 a; u; e1 g( u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>