【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 r$ H  _0 A$ k5 {$ ?1 g) T6 }" F) _The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 S9 Y2 Y) I& ]+ r$ \8 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( R+ @! h% k- D/ L9 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 K0 J0 x1 t, S! WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# K6 g1 g- G* K9 l2 Q6 j" r. jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! n, }. {) e% tSeeing the sky content with its love
, E+ T- Y; j" NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 @- [3 C+ ~( Y, v; K) T$ S) o; b1 HYou needn’t fear anything
2 J/ i2 j) i" B: s. rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: R* A- W/ }1 T) {) E/ O1 L7 H  rI really want to know just how much you love me
  \8 f; _. h" W& s9 H9 M. T, u# tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 Y+ N8 s- b% X  R* ZI want so much to see inside your heart
& i, h0 ^4 i9 x* a4 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 x$ a7 h9 e5 w) tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' n! H- |% o, A6 s8 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! y6 R! _" @  Z: {7 O# k/ }5 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 D; h9 h' R( u5 S' H# |* aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 G: J' o' c' z. j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; k) I6 Y# L( s8 H' L) a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, G7 e8 t5 H) m4 W$ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 `+ c$ m% |" Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 O- g0 E0 P$ |( k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" T" W- L3 b/ m/ X" @3 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 k7 F3 R" a( c$ G+ A; S. C  e% D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 l/ E' o1 Q2 P( X5 G' V' @. a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Q& K( F9 l: k% f# d9 U$ L+ L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 T' o3 }5 ~( l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. f' T3 \( K5 _7 W" l+ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 G/ M3 x9 r0 O$ k0 m& Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 p) J3 C5 r& g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- g# n' K9 E* w' o' ~% I5 W1 K6 s+ g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 y4 F7 M; x/ g/ E; }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' s1 h6 X) S+ X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; S: [. k3 @7 ^+ }6 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 K+ A" d5 }& d. C1 z+ P+ S$ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 h8 H) q5 X+ q- h% j1 G- @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 _  X; {' a+ k0 d4 m2 t# [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 C; H& V! k! R5 N0 \; W& }3 _" s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 ^8 i  X9 z3 g* I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ N, e/ s  n0 N1 Q8 T* Y9 o: z# q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) N; l+ B- v, Q" L" _  \8 M1 f2 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 M$ ]; b# G. B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: n1 ?6 X9 ~0 B: I" O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" K, e8 C- J0 N1 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" o  L' n5 c/ s5 N$ Q& B7 p& \* [9 ]  u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- g; w5 S9 K. |$ L9 J+ _  G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. w- |# }1 ]% H. y+ C  h% ^6 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  V2 _, q8 t5 e) S4 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: R  I2 X# C0 H* b5 V5 p$ i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ [. Q5 Q+ b, y+ z# z$ o" }' i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 V2 t* P* M$ q我请你剖开它
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) v! ]7 B) y. e8 e! M) ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 v* _3 T1 }( L6 R! |$ _2 V2 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>