【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 a0 I! F' i' d8 v0 d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# N; K7 U3 A1 Z$ ^& oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( H, {+ Y  Z. D3 k1 F; m- lWith the moon kissing it every night
4 J% u6 p. k7 G) DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 m8 J* z% z" S4 p/ YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* O$ C2 ]) a' L7 D: l2 {/ v! UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- \  M6 i9 C: w8 B( dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  R! y0 K* I/ Q$ W& c' d. D# s" v! t7 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 @& |: y8 G6 N  DI regret not dying
6 e7 z" w8 X4 T2 x% ?% u. `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ h- B* i- D, I' Z. ?4 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 E' \: M7 `9 h( m6 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; p; q. o/ }* |( W4 h, I* K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- l* }3 h/ Z/ l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 C. }$ s2 }: {& n7 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 |2 |7 a: i; ?+ i3 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ?% B4 G6 R% H* h) [& D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* z/ Z4 `: x- i1 A8 o0 B5 C. A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  A! P1 F7 s6 X7 H6 ?* X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) ]9 W3 @5 t6 X+ {<P>你无需担心</P>
( [7 K$ v. ?& W, o7 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ M/ N4 s! u0 z% c' M& W/ E" |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 n7 E: q* L8 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: ~6 r/ C# v. y* `( N3 B. p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: i; L- ~, j1 Q. t" \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, F1 H6 x* ]/ s8 X  j2 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, p' p1 @; \' R+ N, f) J* ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 ^5 b0 ]% w: R8 x$ R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Z, s6 V  |! r5 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( V4 D) r) s& e/ O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, j+ _! {+ N+ i/ I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' w. w5 e7 e' H. E& `# R1 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. x6 h5 E. x2 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ J0 V* Z) k9 Q6 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) `3 D% O+ }% ~- v2 I7 h& @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 Q6 A( i' _3 G. o; S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& f' w3 l, h7 V/ _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) h8 ]( ?8 m7 A; q/ e. w! `% ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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