【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# O  d4 g5 S4 @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  o/ h* a& S0 v) P( B* o- gFrom the first moment we met,
! U& s5 S; q' p, p$ NI already loved you with all my heart
8 c! Z: Q$ t. V  V* JWe meet and talk everyday,
7 y9 G5 d! H# ~' ~7 U3 YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ o( \# Z. z3 GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 e  u9 y8 N7 T9 aI would probably know how you feel
1 L0 i9 ^( `) [$ d* vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% N" ^. U) V2 W7 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( G( ^) {' y! w7 {5 b% `If today isn’t too late,
% s5 R6 H; B- l) yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 O$ e1 K# H6 p2 p0 WBut I never did
4 S0 v' i) h, Z$ h6 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, q/ ?: k6 h* p1 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- R7 a9 w" d+ m7 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 T1 I% S( f) |Can I entrust it to you?
1 k$ Q  j4 x2 }" s& B% }+ P+ UEntrust my love within your heart
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7 i" e. P. e7 y7 k8 g1 S/ B8 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% d( U& s0 N: @* ~: _( L- @7 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 D' n7 \* x) g4 C& p: Z! \' n5 c4 i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, ~$ I5 a/ F# {( Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 m/ B$ B4 ]1 S5 V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* ]2 e1 h% [* c# I2 v# g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 S4 H+ f0 \* T' V7 h$ `: _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 x% g0 W5 _( G6 S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  N6 |( B; h  N! e! ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 o3 l& t: f( M! }; i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( F. N+ s  y5 O* X% o! f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  ?; F/ ]4 l# h9 f) L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ N8 I% {) Z+ e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ \. K" k, @& ?  g0 x( C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' U2 e$ m5 z( d* Z7 n8 Y/ |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! h* {0 N. J- v  m" [  t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 l3 i1 j, K7 m) d8 a: w  n$ d$ Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) H* e# F' a7 p% U$ N4 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 l" t( K) [$ s, g- H( `; v7 `2 u) a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- V% J. i9 `8 s/ y! v: `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ A" `1 w, T7 ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ ~7 D4 \) {4 ]1 [! |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: V" q; f  L3 z$ c$ x: {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. `+ @& H) b: C8 F+ U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. p0 F9 c* g4 b  K* s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* ]5 `. ^7 k  g6 i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ M. Q+ J3 x2 }) X) ?/ z% ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ?7 Q4 z' D7 X' Q4 G- O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, x- _! E( @0 H9 d4 r4 z4 j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! m" {+ J) P9 V, E7 J$ P# n  m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 W9 w/ U: T) W$ O# Z, N$ H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# s. A: O+ g$ W: z# I6 |% B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>