【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 L7 l3 D1 }0 ~9 PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ \' ^8 }0 w: g. I4 U! X& r7 m3 A$ w) sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( `" l" S; H; Y( R1 qWe meet and talk everyday,
3 ~' b# K4 m  |6 F4 ?3 hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' Q+ O: b* R: M/ o7 E$ W" l' g- n* BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ k  y2 V" q- S4 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ w# u% o# Q7 o$ x: TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, O! D: B, x$ f8 r$ ]$ |$ x2 J% V1 [I want to confess that I love you,
; j/ g" ^# ^2 H* K2 D, jBut I never did
1 D3 q9 L: m0 u9 V9 a, K# tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- ]6 f. z, X% o  M' @6 S1 gIf today isn’t too late,
1 t" B+ ]/ ^+ h& ~% c5 C$ _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 m( E; ]1 a; t. X+ g/ vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 M) D- D& S& w9 R$ n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: {* P* G$ W1 |5 q- G1 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 B$ J8 ^* E. O. d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 r1 S" y8 d, t$ a5 O, ~, o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 k; g! g) a7 t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, I% T; j! t0 Q- z8 m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 @  G$ u" m# c. U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' \2 w2 m! I" L0 m$ Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# M3 U7 D3 }8 ~& r5 w) ]. o, U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 n3 q2 {/ G; X- h% Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ `+ e6 n) H5 W7 Z3 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; _4 |7 c% Z3 x) u& Z<P>但我不会</P>
0 k/ i7 a8 U4 J" b. v/ T* t, N+ {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( q6 W" I( t2 y$ }0 l8 s$ _, F0 j# m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: u$ r" Z+ u4 G2 G" ~& _2 [$ e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# ?" f  }$ c$ N; I3 j, K- A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 y! X3 U0 H% [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ k" R% e5 y, t0 R- C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 b& I) |5 `6 V3 d! e: ]- \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' k/ t& R: C5 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 N- U* j- q0 B% U, H2 h( {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- X( u* a$ O. {! n$ T& {) Q$ X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( C8 N" V! Y" X! X+ M/ p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# i& ~( ]9 Q" J) s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ f6 R- V4 D7 B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
+ i! w( g# A5 h! i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: O3 O- S% w* z, I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 T# Z. }6 w$ d* g" f/ E& |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: S  R5 @" }$ ^3 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 O+ f6 y. e7 Y. h& |0 x7 h1 N5 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 W; ^' y1 m) \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 N, S1 c  D+ O4 L, o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) F. R1 |4 m7 S: h" e7 H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 F- F6 U: |+ S1 W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 d( s. e3 c) \& d* v/ o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! V4 t0 K! a) x* z' \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>