【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 U+ W9 a7 B$ L1 aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! z( o. O/ f0 ^* y9 e: pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 \7 Z$ U8 s! k+ h. ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. r0 g+ n2 E, l7 r% C- F) S, ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 b* `2 P3 G( |2 Z0 H( NIf today isn’t too late,
8 N" N$ B! |1 H% X( X6 c5 f# gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ S  X) q" R( V# oCan I entrust it to you?
0 k) x* c$ q7 U  e; A6 Z  DEntrust my love within your heart
" M$ Z3 M# o5 a/ h+ f, kCan I entrust it to you?
" Y2 I0 Q# e  N- O+ sEntrust my love within your heart

8 Z, B$ _1 b6 D: I# j$ M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% b3 H" B/ l1 A% x( k# f2 O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 @# C+ g# W' j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* Y& X+ a9 u8 i' T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, A, z. A6 k7 E9 f* Z: [- k0 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) z  `* B3 q( G3 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! \; R+ b; y' @! x0 Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  D2 r0 c# }% t" ~' o0 G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 Y) D. q3 @! i, W6 r  [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 Z  M3 Z2 Q8 q6 p, ~/ X$ F, _' B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ }" i4 G1 h2 h) }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( v2 Q4 ?6 V( n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 \3 X2 g& D9 j* Y: Z! \/ y0 k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& T4 H: }8 P  ?% J% R, w% L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, v9 }. |4 m% d0 @* N* _3 R, r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ _! s2 c8 B3 ?; @2 s, V. P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& Q5 X. K& q! _5 j, ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ N. Q' g- \0 `$ m7 T3 s5 W. D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ o$ T2 ?; K0 P. a, u# L: W7 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& {" i- ~4 H/ M3 z; ~' S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  W" E8 I" \9 i) Z. X' B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: i: ?* D: V6 b: u2 j; T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 I; f* z" ^. @* @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* ~+ S4 @0 `% M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  l: S1 u5 y9 M6 K+ ~/ k, r/ N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 U; D% y; B: C4 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 V4 V" P2 M  D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ u& n  w" X+ Q1 N$ r2 R9 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- X, k' A9 ]* @! a4 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& h2 F- F; t# b0 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' A# E9 G7 x1 H: b) \7 i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- L7 _8 p: `+ V1 o: V3 e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, [9 k% `# g, M. |' ~' P/ o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 E+ z3 T( c; t, Z) I6 e" S& \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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8 K! O  m$ X" J  k- s- U$ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ n& ~/ {! Q2 G: G, u" {1 O7 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>