【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# U1 `5 W8 G% L( D7 @4 K% K5 }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" L( L/ X8 `, T  ]! VI would probably know how you feel
0 M1 R2 n: B: M2 r$ A" L  J9 B/ OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 @* p: z4 W& U3 ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% V0 W  l  m4 W$ ~* A+ OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! I9 K7 r% C+ CEntrust my love within your heart
, G. o; U  w/ j* w- K  vLove… just the word love
7 \* q! b! u+ v4 c0 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
% r/ C* l/ m( @- d+ D& JI want to confess that I love you,
: P; O, R$ d/ sBut I never did
$ M" c4 [2 ?: S* C; QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# r) z  o7 m& a) w  r* ^& lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 m0 `8 M% j7 ~& v) }0 Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" P# O" E$ X, F& D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& e1 H7 e, N; ]) b  Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) t; A) t% D8 S: B8 w( _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 p1 T- J0 U7 h. X9 B" }; o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 A, y# g9 w" _- j. J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 M3 s1 A. {8 g8 w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) D& Y' g/ w8 L* b' h3 y. {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% `4 d3 l+ i! F- B0 o, F% f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 p. Y, n# ]4 l2 i; ?% x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 u& X6 ^" F# v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 b" |) o# M' H& e! S9 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ ?! e& B" T7 q: ~; z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ ?1 n' k/ @9 _* |# }) s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: L2 @0 c" n* f# j* a3 N<P>但我不会</P>
$ H  Q$ B; Z: k- p! y" |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: Y! o! ^& X! X# {7 {  y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' X" n( B% \, ~; D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( d( V7 q4 q9 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& P" U. Y6 b  @. N1 Y1 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ S# U9 h$ l( W- E$ H8 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, @3 x. ]4 ]$ S, V4 K/ L, r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" g: X/ K2 v  L7 o1 T$ @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" ?$ c0 Z+ [% n$ s6 b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 Y) f& z1 H: j1 R& y; D8 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, C: f' e. _0 r. O5 ~( {5 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ C; C" l! q9 @1 P8 @4 H2 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 q( U* M- j& a/ [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. I8 L3 v0 Q. }) c% z, w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- e2 y/ s- h: D8 R- N6 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% P& y* c5 T, V' C, O  v5 ~  p9 z. q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( p6 P. b4 v! x% o) G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! L; y+ u. i% l4 n- t; `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 d. C3 U2 E! j" P! c3 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 n3 ~* F! \$ l' P" x9 @. k% n% S9 W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 v1 ^" ?2 Q* [* v! `1 P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. Y( K  n, R& o2 ]1 }8 Y, r- a1 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>