【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
1 g5 A; c1 n+ U1 \* w/ f) |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" V3 ]7 H" v& e. h6 g7 L0 sI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; _% H8 G* F8 M- VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, n1 N+ [; j( g, u2 b+ RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 K& k& N' o# WWhy is it so difficult to express?
' s! D& p  P6 u; Y" P) ?I want to confess that I love you,
& X- ]7 I& N- z- n) G; X3 Z+ ?But I never did
2 t$ V7 D- q- W2 q! zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( q8 o) q; i$ f  o9 t. \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% J/ k4 D  A$ l4 Y+ uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. F1 o9 R$ {; [3 q3 |6 s% \' D# mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 o# S1 }: k3 r/ N( A3 x* ?0 j7 WI want to confess that I love you,
) t3 i' ?- M2 S# {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 T% x& N" `, f/ PIf today isn’t too late,
: G; q. g" o3 }& A4 II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, c2 Y2 P* t6 B( L: d# V/ _+ p& YCan I entrust it to you?
$ |5 a. g1 K" C5 S: QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 g$ ~' q+ z) a$ UEntrust my love within your heart

* K0 t/ ?$ K# ~; K8 C. o$ l[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 J+ M! Q9 M4 t: M( R1 e7 @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 t; t1 Y& d5 j6 L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 G7 A* L3 C( ~; g$ B+ N0 l5 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" R' |- d2 [2 H7 G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% E2 e1 V5 B6 K2 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" m/ [7 R4 s8 d( K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 y& ~5 z# P1 [. X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  C# z' y  u0 h8 E) V  W& [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: O) M9 E  Y/ F8 c  R: x+ h& t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 m6 Z# b) H# s: |# |* w$ ?! Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 N4 J' A; R2 n/ D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 i" t3 l2 m& j( `6 k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& V  e7 H  R/ o: g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% ^$ L+ g$ _6 k% U- V6 b0 F: g" d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ \  \. [0 N: |9 }" }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; B, _/ V4 V8 R, k* L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 ?! \+ [2 v( K9 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* o) M' y# {& o9 k$ z& Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ R  z/ z* N& E- o! {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 X/ j# x( f- P0 r6 p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 z5 t- v2 \* I) U5 D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 M+ U+ y/ a' R9 }  V: H( p5 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 h4 j( g1 F3 Z/ p% T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ j. I8 B3 |- Z: q( c* I* P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 i7 y* b1 V% R; |8 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& N% Y- ^. z+ ?- }2 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 `' y' s9 e$ w! M/ N0 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 F: D0 ?! ?: j3 U' L0 g2 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ `- [% }8 @$ _* ^! |& O* g" f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ r1 ?% K4 J2 e. d3 w9 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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; `% K! W, b* M3 s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 G9 M; R2 V  j1 H; @( u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>