【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' U! Y* e; S0 w! m( [5 ^我另将歌词附在此。
6 U2 y" Z9 T! h! eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ s& Z  i- b5 \% ~: EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, \! o& c# g3 b: ^0 y7 @1 SI already loved you with all my heart
0 b+ x" R5 x3 K0 |0 sWe meet and talk everyday,
9 W" F- l* ~# O' s1 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 }- G8 k' R5 l% \4 l% T; xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. l2 c1 r: h& ?Love… just the word love
7 J: f3 T- z8 x6 E3 k; _# VWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ J+ d- o+ j4 n, \- yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, s( {: }9 ~/ |% B$ a4 i+ s- S9 Q( |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  S1 _& F& g& k* g7 X" Z/ II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% Y! z' l: m8 R6 mCan I entrust it to you?
' f, _5 Q) |: Y0 W# g% j8 JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! q( I7 s0 R: ~  }4 Q1 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 ?- I! p4 z. D! }- ^! C/ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 {* B- j3 ~' `3 _" ~, n% m: }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ r' b  L0 p' w$ H& a- K/ ^Entrust my love within your heart

+ Y6 E& p+ }* G' |. G) t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 C/ l) O  c- {0 J* Y" f! A9 A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! S7 ]3 Y% M* b2 [0 [# g; q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" |* c1 D1 F- @& }$ u+ r$ j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ ~2 P1 a. G) u4 B( U( M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ O: j' `! A( B( O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 O% A' R5 u/ ]7 ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- g) w" a6 P# [4 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. B, b9 p/ V- T5 r* `& n5 }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 @2 f, b+ j+ r# D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 |% |. H8 T  U5 o. W6 M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 R( s- {, K$ T5 ]/ A9 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 _8 N+ f$ l, V) {9 z6 W; y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% h# N( d4 R; R% J: D. }' r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 l( N/ L) d$ X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" t" J5 D. _7 ]. L0 W7 P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: J: }+ f) O& @4 z$ }1 j<P>But I never did </P>
$ {/ [; U+ o# y3 g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# A( r! a) u+ o/ K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, W6 K; b$ G8 @. `# ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 Y- x- M2 I9 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* X* l5 z% c) q; v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 t0 r$ X. j# _$ \$ F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 y% i+ a3 E. C4 o( a* f) [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) [- a' s; M9 J5 H( J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) u+ u% ~5 |! a1 S, o! Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! l8 G6 t- `1 C3 u$ K' d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- V* X+ ]" `5 @$ s# s$ V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; O# ]+ S# x: ]' a2 ~9 a( O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( _' O; X5 r5 ~) y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! J: e- _4 @; u; p' E' T& H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: Y. H7 B, ~- e4 |" {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>