【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ I7 y" [+ C" l" M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; O( n0 R: B8 z. u, u' S* H$ bI already loved you with all my heart
, y# }% B. {$ G( P2 f; {We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" P8 S; V5 C5 Y3 l  k' J+ cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: H& y" f' V% c- p9 z  wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 }8 {) S+ q+ h! }$ M, pI want to confess that I love you,
' u1 G# ?/ t" O6 j; LBut I never did
. S8 p- Z! ?; IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 e" v3 Q  I/ ]# q# V. T3 B( ^  OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  g  C& Q  u' A# EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 l1 s* }' L& Q8 ]0 s+ ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) b( ]' V, O( n2 CLove… just the word love
4 s3 h% M( v3 N: H6 e; [* }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. }% O; g3 w* ]$ O1 wBut I never did
: H7 z/ |, J2 ~: Q' b; S. D9 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% F1 M5 X, Y5 T7 A7 t" s5 z/ mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; O9 x- `& \8 WCan I entrust it to you?
/ q/ U3 a* e- l( e6 R1 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ r) Z3 Z) _' e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! ^; d$ [; n' E/ D$ E7 O2 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 O& Q7 x/ u. g9 r2 b' a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" B, z3 T8 p" A+ r  L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 @* n. E' b- g" }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( c6 O/ }6 f1 q, w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 K4 Z$ [1 g2 _, f% {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 I3 Q7 R( N, P& j; v5 C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) k! b, n6 {6 @$ y4 Y. N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. R, K+ B7 o- l1 G3 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ ?/ V! i# K) _  y" z# N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 s( c) {7 K: }! N$ b4 S& @1 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ K& e3 k; X2 p+ N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 g4 o  S1 [9 z( H/ L4 d$ o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* X7 B% p" Z' q9 e* M) A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 o' f$ w8 p6 L0 L& \, F6 N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 Q9 {$ Q: S% y* I<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' _! ~3 L7 w7 t+ l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 P! p) l: O( \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' j4 e" X; M& w6 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  U, e) b8 _/ Y3 q0 y5 y5 L2 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. `! V1 `# e$ ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 {5 h9 h  A, J* O# \6 S$ R$ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 D3 s  d( L% T% {( Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% }4 k- B) J( h0 M; ^- _! `$ Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ [4 K( X0 [  q9 R, i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! p9 Q0 d' [, h- W( v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 U' F: |! t6 {! B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  r( m% d6 b1 j8 B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 O' E) }" l" t/ ?# V/ F2 o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>