【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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3 c1 v6 ?) R) }4 D2 [/ w$ D我另将歌词附在此。
2 h$ Y/ e( T8 ]  L) T  v  y- C7 C: T: nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) E0 ]9 w% I6 f  TFrom the first moment we met,
* k$ @( D/ H$ T0 X8 y, M4 FI already loved you with all my heart
2 J4 z1 F1 P+ J- w2 o4 YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 Y* o. I' T! l3 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 y/ y1 {) X3 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ |1 X% f5 A0 ^3 }# z1 u5 B  |9 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ o9 u7 P; f+ R3 m, J, D7 J, gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  D) G" a* f  l, b, {+ ]/ ~Can I entrust it to you?
& S- |9 l+ N/ m5 GEntrust my love within your heart
8 _8 X8 e6 v; e2 a" f) k* CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( h1 o- v; ^( M7 ]9 X# M. K4 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& n3 s" l: _( B" B, i, F' @( oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 h. X2 {6 Y) x' oEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- o, \' a3 y; K7 `5 Q8 |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! _5 D6 o7 {: s6 A) i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ A, C: p, N, x8 d/ e  {! \  W. X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 J: w" @) E" p! d: ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* f* h  D+ m. {  Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& a. Q1 f; }# Z2 e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ h( d; V% ~, Z* p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 o0 I0 t5 Z3 M  {9 P1 Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ T- l& v4 L) }5 `9 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. }, ]/ g7 }. z0 N* V  O; G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 H8 ?6 n4 T) o# e6 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* \8 V/ P3 e) Z  {( ^( p; B  B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# P( k1 C5 z. ~( Z4 A. D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: ?- K, t$ b1 @8 {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( q7 V! r* t, s5 T3 g: T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 R$ Q, y# [. B$ W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ Z  ^6 s/ [& V) g$ l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. l$ K  U; C) X' C' L# m) q; W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ M8 o5 O4 \% [* ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 s/ z- D# M2 x3 P. A% g/ L, o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ V3 a& p. I+ G3 w1 o' v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; n9 V4 n5 z( n* e0 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) i% d1 O  S) L! e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 m9 u  P7 b2 T7 g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 l* M/ |  K2 @/ C" y$ f. |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) }1 y& ]- ~2 K: W3 O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ J8 v: V$ U5 y" \0 L; P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% G* G9 e, `2 @0 n, X1 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 M6 t. R# j9 l  }. D+ H; ]6 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 |1 V" |/ g2 z3 J1 p$ V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 }! _$ h* U. F4 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 [, M9 S" E) k# M: r1 u5 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 l  d' h/ l* \' ~9 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# ^4 q- Q) o0 ^# A: `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 C2 ]+ S0 w- G( K4 x* j! u5 P3 V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ l( j7 F) ~' P# C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 \( z- i1 l: h4 g7 E9 r$ l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>