【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# F- _- N- `' u2 k4 }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 Q! F1 q% P& |% G" l/ x# @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( V  o2 q$ R$ ?) \6 z. M  NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 s. X4 _4 t! U& D" [  vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 y5 s2 V% X1 E+ KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# E4 `/ W) u) B2 G4 d- a& M# TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! ^1 l) `/ C& H3 B# U- R* S0 V7 TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" X$ k- }# \" w  e2 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 A8 K) x4 \+ D2 c) b/ o! xIf today isn’t too late,
( J/ v, g0 U% a& g: NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; B/ }  f3 A& f2 ?$ ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ H& k  t9 j+ Q4 cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 z8 x8 A% S4 G  z$ A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, s9 W! o% z0 p, w* ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  A7 U! f7 i. f, r  }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& b/ N; h/ G  ~+ o: b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 I1 K3 ^: j' j) L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! A4 y' Z# @  T1 a7 y- a$ U; N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- M8 U$ N( |7 |$ |& [. V, c4 p, L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- H6 Z% N8 \; N, B0 m) ]4 b1 X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 N/ X% r5 L0 f% Z0 ^. Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  N% z6 m$ J$ l" I. @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 V8 u) {. Y/ F* Q2 m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 k; M2 C8 U9 m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 o+ @4 ~/ f. b$ W2 H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' o* O7 N0 b6 n3 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' s- A$ r; Y2 B' l. J: u8 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* J0 t+ o3 E+ u7 m+ I" ~+ T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- D$ T8 j# n! ]6 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. m6 f0 g/ A! u1 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 I, p, S, z% U9 m8 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 w: Y, y) a* t9 _2 z5 }" O7 \8 I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 \7 h. j4 {4 y' Z6 M- f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! T+ ~& \0 t: |3 T7 Z* T8 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) R. i' }' ~: v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ |1 @9 X1 M* u) M! a0 }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 g0 b, J8 i$ D* t# x% m- K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; b  |; W# K* v1 F8 c6 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 O! t7 E: B* e! W5 X/ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ X3 [; L9 j2 o/ }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 g% c8 N2 x$ a$ [' e6 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 Q4 F7 I  ~4 s! p$ ?2 ]' j" L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 b1 R7 c' a2 g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- R* Q& }$ J* O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( V) h& N( \. y% l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>