【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ P5 N- b: ]3 G# [3 P6 h# Y1 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! S( m3 D' E; ?' Z3 x6 ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 t0 i/ `+ @$ [' M/ sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 \8 B* g+ Y$ nWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 g0 _8 F# B" J$ y2 ^2 L& s9 F( `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ K2 C# @  A7 [5 x! u+ y* KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 @3 b) |5 s- _5 oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. f# }4 \" g+ FEntrust my love within your heart
2 k# }+ b1 h+ Y0 M3 ]$ i+ yLove… just the word love
# U  Z/ v+ F9 d4 _  N- wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 T  f- X1 z: g/ V+ `+ `: d# PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" \' Y. Q$ e# M4 I+ c2 yEntrust my love within your heart
5 i% w! i7 [% T% I) T$ NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' Q. A  I2 i1 L! ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 @+ j0 T3 ?6 I$ j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( C( F; x. _  }% O5 e+ l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 X/ s! X/ ?. M9 L  P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; W" J% q) [$ N* u7 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' }$ V$ @4 c; l8 t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 f$ _$ l: K8 y$ B; e/ ]+ ~+ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. V  b9 O$ O) U1 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- {2 a7 D9 n8 a3 G3 `, N' N- G2 D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 c9 f8 |% [; T* V1 x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; Q5 x& Q7 s" d- L8 A- T3 J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 X1 j/ a* q+ M' }. @- x5 f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ?! }4 e% z; ]/ i: [, E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. g3 N% p. i9 t! F. M) Z% a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ p$ S+ D$ p% ?5 W7 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. z8 \: J' J# R, P6 k! l4 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- b+ l+ {  ]1 r, y6 t2 l+ B8 ]3 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- N4 b/ q: ?- X; p$ A$ E/ W3 ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 {! ?; C3 K0 m  u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 _' n9 _! B1 H! {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 k+ X' N+ s9 X/ Q, E# S5 b9 Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: e/ A/ o% @5 }" v<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: E3 s# r7 U( \! a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% ~! v' q# `  @" Q* Q& n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 S5 V& V* G  V" ?1 O7 X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 l; \( D9 k6 [5 d% |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ?4 ]- V9 R* B% b* ]* C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 K% N4 Z9 p, D& z( p! j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 b# E# j6 ?9 M% c, R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 `  i$ E+ f9 E" o% `4 G' T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 U, j# ~$ a! b$ u" ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 @* d( P7 J3 I2 l# T& [5 Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ o: D$ q; j8 Y( g7 U$ K- U% a% J7 P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 K: Q- P5 F4 v3 f4 v, q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 t' e2 f5 S. Y, I" v0 N! y5 X2 U( _4 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 C' \+ }  }" }6 }: k- _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>