【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 F* u: z; R! B8 o3 r! s* VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; s! O1 [* |5 R7 Z3 T) ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" G2 Y* u# t- o! QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 U8 F1 f6 e7 I9 z% i) @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 o/ |) w& S  p6 O+ T" ^; b/ [Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! m/ I: f( r& y* g% e2 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ r7 t+ f* Y+ w  tBut I never did
% K7 R; |1 ]- b' U& w1 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 V6 F5 F) b/ `If today isn’t too late,
$ T/ x; }8 ~5 F  M! WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* ^3 B0 I, S+ w( _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 D7 v% y6 S$ K$ ^* I  e) P: vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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6 d6 j: O; g0 L5 f2 R& {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 B( I" m/ o& P# G5 |/ ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" L& r  [+ V$ ]8 V) b+ o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- M0 t9 e' E3 q" i- h" P8 ?$ R# }- x5 y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 L: I; N) }! a) J$ W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ Z  r6 U9 |! a# A/ |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! d8 ^" G0 |% }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, s/ i# r7 f6 B& E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 k% L+ P" {0 p( `4 m6 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  ?/ a4 r( ]2 L' w, M& L* D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 S% L" `2 w8 }2 L7 z* ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 q3 U) h! C: R% |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ m9 e$ }% P: s; k/ J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% {+ f/ S: [6 X9 L4 U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% S( [, Q& F4 G8 `/ L! I' a  c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( _9 [9 N, T2 }" j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( R; a' c# c) }0 b4 f5 a! I5 t! k; W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. m5 M. K) o* F! v; ?4 I. ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  V) C5 J( U. j; e3 S; `2 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* i$ N( c6 [/ f+ x* A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" u4 j3 x: s8 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  T1 B7 ]6 N0 x+ [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' T0 f  ~3 r3 u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  H, {4 ]( Q2 C- E0 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 V: r+ I% k0 D4 K" o. \<P>But I never did </P>
0 @! D6 b9 H+ J( e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" _. d1 B1 J, }8 x( A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 G6 i3 P; m6 R  O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 r! H6 B" ^5 g2 @: v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 j7 T; Y1 g& c1 @- A6 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; `) t- o  _% q9 G  r* h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% y/ V! ]* T' _$ _8 f5 M2 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! D: S( v- Z) h- h) I4 X* i$ C2 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ K" J7 h* v; c$ b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 L+ L1 y* y) U( f/ n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. Z5 j" t/ V' a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; x0 V  M- v+ ^1 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, F4 _, q7 T" c; \' C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>