【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% c* C& H9 Z9 B+ W+ @; P$ Q我另将歌词附在此。
, X. e: Y4 b9 {, w" vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 _/ r2 X+ B: j0 f6 xI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 F# u; ], F* AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" ^) `/ ?  d( [9 c5 _3 wI would probably know how you feel
% c% K1 G0 V" O. Z- k/ ELove… just the word love
7 S! w* P; e3 D; I2 {5 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
) g. z8 v/ U: v! E* G3 HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% T, R7 j7 i  p( Y6 Y! [/ rIf today isn’t too late,
/ {7 C: c6 r* X# I# L) _/ V; WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 K6 Y- j) w: A# J" \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" f- N9 y8 X* f8 z8 {# ?0 ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  H. O/ H6 u* u9 E: @; D7 r+ t: a4 |5 TIf today isn’t too late,
0 p: G' U$ Q" RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ s* ~6 ~( c  E& P  QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 }  Z6 p: b) w; K, v0 SEntrust my love within your heart
3 }1 M5 ]- n( o$ TCan I entrust it to you?
, x/ T& T, B4 gEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* N( v( r1 u, Y/ C) S: P/ I+ {2 D" L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 P) |& R: A) t2 n2 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( W: R, p% l- n$ Z* M% r( A5 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: h* `% n8 z5 J0 l! X1 l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 e" ^, R- H; K4 l! A6 N. w' `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: ^! Y. n, y# E' t2 p, C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ ]# ^# b5 @& U2 l3 `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 A/ }& I+ L9 ]5 f8 t9 ~1 H4 a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; r9 [' ?% b  G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# l3 l( G3 C% x: K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 y$ M7 B; B/ y! F2 R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 K! f2 J. |) e: b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 j3 S3 n5 c  g5 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: {( h- I, W( k5 w4 k" d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- C' W5 k6 L9 V6 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" n! i9 U# h; r, D. n0 n* U* T# H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 ?# e1 w6 o  D3 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" Y% G/ N7 S/ \# q$ M& t* a5 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 f1 U0 p  [, B% T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# x; ~( U$ [' W: ]5 i! h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! S8 i: ?/ g: w) f# D& t% f# P' F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 F8 F" W* Q7 C& q% C/ o  ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 i0 k9 e& X9 p' q4 i. s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 H  R" S. ^" \' b' l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. X5 r& [0 d% }, U- L8 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 P0 v2 f7 B9 K0 ^; M- E" D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 o; E% s( A. p! [. O$ P. [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 h- v- [9 Q' u: p3 r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 [. R1 F( R7 f/ h+ p2 D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! A0 `7 A1 Q8 y! @+ e* Y1 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" x: Z( e9 [6 a9 g: H3 H! L* L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 [! A$ L7 ?9 u2 l3 R: o/ T. A) V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 v& n- ?$ i) _/ Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 ~) D$ k3 w6 R4 x% d3 y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: ?9 u9 V5 O( d" i/ e, H; u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 u, o0 S1 z; G/ n. C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>