【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 M% t! Q. j  [7 H" ?: yFrom the first moment we met,
% P: w% n- b, B# CI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ @8 }9 F  l# TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 {6 U  o% m8 |/ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 L! O3 ?6 g" a* W% eIf today isn’t too late,
6 C3 C2 M- |4 D0 X5 I6 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! O2 l) `; j7 S6 ?3 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 Y9 f( y3 d* ^7 {6 [- U/ ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 F4 `, D+ `! _- r4 u4 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 A+ p- v* Y0 q  ^+ pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 |2 W7 l5 I0 Y4 @If today isn’t too late,
% f- ^& M/ x, d% M( p( AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! A+ U% H9 J5 c3 J8 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* p, H5 L, f2 VCan I entrust it to you?
+ ^- o3 C% U2 O3 L. T+ q. cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; r3 b8 U2 f$ K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) |( `$ C  v4 x  R) I1 G8 d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( v" O; Z5 J, {8 k8 b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 b$ @, q$ }3 V& K  _: M- s$ M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) ~1 ?  Y4 E% ^1 r9 }* v! P5 l" s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! p" W& g3 |$ `- E' V" I6 J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. G, Z! z# h9 g) r0 Z4 ~* Q1 T5 X8 y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! N& D) y; J- j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 Z$ w! j+ B+ B  s8 \. A6 _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% O* q) l  u# J7 a6 z* x7 b9 Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 f0 o2 L( y( o0 B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  H% s8 I' ]! O4 N& U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 s! |- Q* r/ e( d6 s& S! B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( O, t- B6 a( T! t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# }  M& g; N! t( q2 a1 K7 o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: w6 A" S( X; D4 m( y$ U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* w8 s- R8 \) E, i6 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, i  F* O& C1 b, f6 n" Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 m6 \" Y6 r% M- U9 x3 g0 ^) h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* l& r/ ^  N" c; j3 Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. Z2 X" D/ _" b& o+ t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 E- M; B: S$ V5 w$ t3 R<P>But I never did </P>
: J' g# m  ]/ E% E' l6 l, R<P>但我不会 </P>
* i7 ~8 _& k1 y  v& {# y4 q( ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% h6 K/ U( }  x; B) z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ ]+ U& z8 f) t% J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 r. J, `  {  L% ^" v- h& b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: O2 v/ G3 X; c9 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ e2 \# }% P% _; v4 b8 P, A! r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 v. t5 H: l! P3 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) w5 A; m! }# E/ J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, r* S7 w" k6 t' ?* ?/ w4 e1 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 H  P1 ^/ G! f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' N. F; m6 S; w5 Q5 w3 @: U% Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ s1 j% P- U6 N" \! {0 a* L/ O  D0 n+ j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& [# m' m2 p6 n2 m6 s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>