【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ z, N7 c9 M/ X8 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, y: o" C6 [5 V( i# i3 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ _! v. S. H1 H9 t( WSeeing the sky content with its love
0 {6 y, @+ K) Q3 T$ m7 K( lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 J0 q, X" h1 D/ ~0 w% n* l. r& vYou needn’t fear anything
5 O% o# R, X2 m2 w* G6 n6 X; rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 w& M2 Y1 u9 V; s! a( PEvery other word you utter is love
* l. x3 x1 l9 ]' n; xI really want to know just how much you love me
/ J3 x. ?2 h6 W, f$ a4 wI love you I love you with all my heart
0 m' P! C2 G1 y+ }5 \5 h2 _& ?+ zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% }- R2 F9 u7 O/ A4 b% }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! ?4 ]2 i2 v: i7 M: r" W3 F! b* NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 f3 `* y5 e, iI regret not dying
+ ^, [) b5 J# t  d. T3 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 U" s4 N' h& GWith such a tongue as yours,
5 q$ d- r# j% ?& x9 y3 Y! Y2 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. X- \) X# M+ L7 k# B7 L2 I! J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" u- x) _6 F0 f) N! c, V! _3 {/ T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. R9 @4 v' z9 ]0 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 q: T* \( L$ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# U5 B9 o5 u, Q( O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 f( o8 A: |* j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 v2 F4 X* e! ~6 i6 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) _- a$ E- J" |! f( K4 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' G1 |* T, W1 a! N& P' S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 t8 j5 T6 G2 L: w8 Q6 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% h, t( c5 k& X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& \* |# }4 B* h9 `& A, \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ c- j7 B: k! p* ~* _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* `% q) L& X; p1 i% g0 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) {$ Z  q6 s! ]; c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ~0 m: @& S& ^5 V1 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# N0 d+ Y$ ]/ c( Y* c/ ^5 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) d! p: _* A4 \! \) o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: t4 q$ [$ ]3 j6 N: \' b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 W. s5 L! h2 [2 q& \" r7 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 j. r# I1 |( E4 L* }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# o( C( o/ V; T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" T3 A2 u& N2 h6 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ @$ |4 r3 v" k. P% R* v' Y" Z7 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 O5 R, j8 v! v# X: ]0 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 d, z, K7 S. A; q$ u( c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% e7 j) A+ R, f8 w! y! L: b2 l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 `1 v8 D1 N) m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>