【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 X$ L6 N. t6 w$ a1 K" sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) K, D( A6 i5 r+ |6 T+ Y) v# ?The sky is happy down to its soul
/ z% l$ b1 F& T/ P8 F0 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ F* A) B6 Q) Y5 \) d8 Q) YI really want to know just how much you love me
7 V- k8 |8 o' ^4 |  p$ h* g# P) u0 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 a) \4 s6 u7 d( c: iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 r- m4 p1 Y; x4 FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 H" G" Q4 N+ f) ?0 l) }! p4 v1 l4 w2 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 U  e9 d& ^9 @, i/ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 |) B8 T3 T6 l! d; u/ L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 |' L! X* `! v* f2 d$ @" l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: @  V6 ?; E. o) K( k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 a6 V: {7 p4 `. @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 m- m9 T9 S5 Q0 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) a0 e3 h) a: |* h. b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% Q8 ?9 X+ D0 [3 J# z% U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( J/ K$ c1 c8 Z- \1 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# b5 `) w& \4 \9 E" H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, ?! f& R- f0 H% C! ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 M8 {# o  x* I' X) l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 `1 z$ ^6 ^" r6 m% o1 I6 g) t! {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 X- _0 R. e! r9 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ l  b* k* J/ x7 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 n& I2 y6 E4 _# M* `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  g3 Q2 o; C* G* e0 V: H+ g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 i+ l( R/ G4 x2 K$ X7 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 a; ]' E2 A. Z7 \2 ^. P1 U7 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( U: g. w8 r/ P  }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; n, q8 K1 Y* R+ H0 b) n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 S6 A9 @- e  B7 a% `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* U: \1 T! [8 y4 Y! u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; n' }! c1 p! V  n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Q% \: S5 }; n# C' y9 O; s7 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 N4 Y& v! f1 X& P. B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 b! q1 Z5 D9 l/ z  z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>