【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( W) ?+ A( g! X( x: RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! B. u8 R% w) ]( w% jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. i* ]" m( e7 S/ |) f& BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: v  r$ b. l, D9 J) uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: v1 H9 _( B7 t& @2 J  A( e2 [You needn’t fear anything
( I2 U  ?$ s2 |" NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ W6 i- N+ N% vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% ~- L8 P( M' g2 c  J0 h: g) `I love you I love you with all my heart
, L. B9 L4 H; [* {$ W- INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 m/ g+ h# o% M: Z; V8 sI want so much to see inside your heart
' S; w1 \* D% q3 W- z+ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' T2 H3 r  B" k" x; EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 V$ U1 m# a2 h( K! PWith such a tongue as yours,
  N6 Q# n6 w, e* `) X7 F( b# c; |! E6 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 q6 g: o' \' X3 w* {5 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 `& C" m) i5 u+ e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 B7 e) U; |. {, J. ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) P, Z; L1 U+ M. @" W+ x( N, Y7 f. f" o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l# [$ D: X1 }! z8 U+ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  j& ?  U4 u* h$ x+ {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; d5 s) Y- |8 S: g; d  Q3 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% _  ^4 X& N! {, A. K% O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) @+ {+ o. C, {3 ]" w, d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* p$ O( f7 f4 ]( E4 c+ \; W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 a4 w7 h& C0 ~% |9 Q7 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ?3 I4 H# d, j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) W1 X1 q( S* R, S6 H) p+ a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 F1 J+ @4 p8 @4 g" t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 V, S; F% U; X$ y2 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; R- _( \% v" V% u) B5 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- q+ Y& ]0 I6 o/ i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 r- A2 Y0 L+ S( f8 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# t  S2 I* i/ z) m- U4 Q0 T* q; J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ s1 z% b: B( [! h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 ~' |) l) N, E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& L: m- U4 L% T9 S- T& u! k; R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 p, I3 T) [4 H, A" D% `9 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* e( T1 K3 ?. X1 U( C  n, C4 }% Y& _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 b7 D8 r3 n% k$ U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ S2 D' ^) t6 @5 @7 t$ W4 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% r( X. Z/ L  W/ j- S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* D) U% k- ]- U- l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. u; U* }( }' Y3 l0 U' G% d$ u; l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  J* S8 {# p+ Y# V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- d# Q' o7 n$ N5 R6 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: X5 c) c7 R* g; |$ [2 W2 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. S2 R9 t) {$ L8 w( l6 a. H我请你剖开它

' \) V% ~, T5 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# _: a7 y" D8 ^3 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>