【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 V9 D" ]  W3 c. DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 k6 j  j- `+ F6 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 o; ^4 ^5 ^' M6 d  l  UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; W7 y5 y! y7 E2 PYou needn’t fear anything
. [7 k+ i# W, tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 b, a$ i4 r& h3 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% F0 K- {: O7 Q  \; Z& qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 }0 S/ m7 L& l" L2 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: B( K& A/ A1 n3 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 n) q( Y" A6 \8 B  \8 N& MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! ?: R0 D3 y; QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 l3 {7 z, A/ F+ d: @* MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# u) g, g8 y0 m' y& B) ^  n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 c. g% b- {* K8 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ v2 N$ E+ c  a5 o+ k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; R2 s# |" D7 ^) V1 U- ~% z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: w5 c+ v  c- C- s. O+ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' [4 G+ g/ h# g& M2 G( H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* W1 [: h5 r% Q* ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! p1 w4 W; f* X- D  p# }/ c/ h' ~7 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 A) m. p1 k, b0 h/ P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ X$ ?4 p* G7 S) F! b2 C& K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 v! x6 k/ @4 ~% q5 {6 F8 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& K2 Y# [/ F- b/ ]! N6 b$ `. B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! \0 z5 b6 F/ k7 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 U* K) z3 {" @. v9 T2 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. Z3 c' R' N1 w* ^0 e" O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 d$ z2 O  M! V3 J! j! B& ^* ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 D% z# K: ?7 `6 u1 @2 d! n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ S9 T" W7 e$ b# d& A' w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 ]5 Q' P6 {1 l* Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( A" L% T( u% o3 h2 y7 J5 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: w/ t2 p7 k) ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& F1 f4 H" u6 v( h6 A( l8 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ `; {4 a; o- J6 `: R8 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 j, k9 V! d% V3 P. D  `+ c' G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 O) F( S, \" r8 h/ j7 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" \6 A; X3 o" n: x' [; I1 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; ?& H" `! i0 O; P9 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 R/ G% M8 A5 F0 B" ?  l& k& P: t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>