【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! k+ c! B3 M% m- S) g' ^' ~9 |" e歌词我附在后面。
2 {, i& B- Q9 R/ t; PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 D' y4 U. N# V( I3 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, {" c7 |7 d+ W  V7 i8 X/ |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 P% C; q& h) O% x# q+ E# a1 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- S; `7 E+ `+ CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 m' C0 @1 d! V; T. |You needn’t fear anything
( b0 D' ]# E3 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' h) b* {9 [) o# A5 h7 k7 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ B( f) K, s9 b; k( G. S- Z7 s, E1 ?( BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% ~4 d- i$ N& b% _- y- E( TI’m still filled with fear
& X6 ]; R8 Q% r. `4 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" h2 z2 ~& c* `3 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ K/ z5 e" W8 e/ C) H8 p% QWith such a tongue as yours,
& q% s/ x! \! A3 Z: K4 s. H7 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; k- ?1 u; l5 P+ V* tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 O; \% x& C1 Q" G+ @  I  m5 Y9 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! `+ ]1 ]9 ^' ?% q. ^) v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ^2 C4 s+ B' k% @& T' e" L3 @, i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: I9 W* y9 x: i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, }; r8 L' s. J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 x* X/ C& j: f9 @/ _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# K7 M9 b5 I3 ~$ T  {$ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% Q0 A# {/ X' u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 M& n( P( l& a4 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 i3 i+ O4 M% N1 y2 k! K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 t4 W$ G3 r+ \2 J. X4 j% u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* h- U7 k3 x2 B, t+ n4 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ~; q3 J2 N5 L, W) \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ p7 d* K2 W2 n, x) v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" w  z# G- _' E" t. M) O* L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ H/ E7 e! j" j* y& ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 |1 \: r' ]! T: b2 i; r: Z; k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& k9 h3 w* e- |% j9 J, m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& v/ [' Z' |' P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* S! X0 Y: |- T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: I( M0 |6 }7 X* r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 u( Y6 v3 c3 p- N/ J4 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 Q: ^% F2 r: E6 k2 h# A7 k7 E4 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ w9 ~* |6 `" o: Y) t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' W& i  Q. s" w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" a* F! M' v; e% a我请你剖开它
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1 e- C+ j! v+ v" ]- T2 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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