【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: R# N$ P; X! Y2 {# h歌词我附在后面。
4 k  R; H/ |# v4 r2 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 F$ V9 P& x" ^! F" NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 J& {% E, h2 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- L6 I6 l+ {& ~) ~7 j0 c# @The sky is happy down to its soul
+ _$ Z+ P+ ^! d2 y/ ^4 ^' t% t7 oWith the moon kissing it every night
2 w- r: L; O: ^$ {$ ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: L' P( c7 J$ Y4 V$ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& t% ?7 d+ y, iI really want to know just how much you love me
/ z& Z7 I/ i$ B9 r4 m$ V) A, KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& u( ]/ e* T" _4 f6 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- h3 w6 K' w1 B$ M% XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" n! _9 U) F" v1 Y2 C1 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: K6 q' M( j' Z& s9 zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) H: N( @% o# R0 z$ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, W0 ?6 W/ L- ~! ]: p4 d1 e; g0 B$ H4 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 B2 E8 I4 T6 H/ c2 [5 j% r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 u: a+ B' p* B$ Q' Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- ~( w: A$ W5 _9 O+ }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 d5 @' B8 [6 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 W1 _3 V, d7 J5 G7 V/ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ u1 `( x( h- Y) [) M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 V, E  D' q7 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' t% t# f0 H* d. Q0 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: m: v; b1 X6 E8 F9 V; r  W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ a) S5 {0 L7 h9 h9 g  r6 p% [<P>你无需担心</P>
5 k$ B6 ^& Q' P# Q8 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: z( p2 e- J) [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Q" X) V. E  _9 z3 X  ~2 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; {$ Y1 f7 m0 r9 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ?" v8 ~; G2 q0 x- M7 N2 y0 N# v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. S6 ^8 j. q5 D4 K- H" {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 v# W1 x+ A6 b& S4 e; v+ y5 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* C( e) }: d5 k: p8 g' F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! N* h( H+ I/ h  Q! }! t0 H! ^! A, X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' _$ C8 W  Z8 E( q* o+ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ]$ r/ ]9 T8 |+ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 w$ [2 }3 @  P7 d& F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- J( T; t/ r  h6 j3 V+ @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: S) u4 `4 y# v0 I+ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; O0 G, H% Q0 \) x! u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 t0 t, C. q1 j* c4 h! }3 y5 m* @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! \& x& T8 Q; K8 W; d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: J# k; ^5 e6 L  g: g. T$ X* Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 {! v; ]( ?9 L' X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; A% ^& {7 s# t" G* _; U8 v2 V% V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: T$ ~1 G2 m& S0 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 e0 X( ]1 e) i4 k% ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 y" o$ s5 E  q6 l1 C# d7 o! i5 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- b- i( L" d8 O( u1 r9 d2 L( M" {8 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 W- H" v3 |7 E" o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>