【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) L' R) j$ M' C2 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 ~8 O2 I6 r! J4 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 [4 I4 a% ?/ J. C/ kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  @! i$ |, r3 P# i# G, `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% p' g- T/ @2 S" k' @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 X" e, z# F" a# T$ B; eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ r2 u  j( K# ^# z7 K7 MCan I entrust it to you?
- q6 A. Y8 g+ z( k# iEntrust my love within your heart
2 X) c: |* L" q& lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 n( b( {- H* ~' r1 e7 q% MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 o4 p; l! h0 u$ y2 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 ?. Z6 `& n- ]7 V, ?7 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" G! Z. V9 S, T5 oEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. R# V; T' ?- [/ xEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 Z0 N  N" p/ w0 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 o. A# n6 f0 m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" `* v: w5 y" y9 D5 B3 q% y& s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ r/ ~3 v9 _) b: B/ O0 S; O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; `/ L& j# H) S- j% U0 X* s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 }/ U0 `/ r' T+ H2 v* Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
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0 Y& }3 D+ p2 J- W) Z: T0 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! z' \0 o5 |# B4 V" W& j+ k- l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' a- u' X! w  s5 A7 w  a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" e& |7 [; e. n/ x0 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 c1 e2 x: \6 `- _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 a6 n. B2 k$ ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% ?* H' n& _4 e" Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ ~# Z% X. Z) [<P>But I never did </P>
& ~: g( i% m" B  p. p<P>但我不会 </P>
! T# F2 f0 @( |) d. V( [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# @0 J! t3 v5 P) \/ \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 `1 q7 E' I9 V1 S* P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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. s3 m5 Q1 z: m2 d$ ~% g  n0 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 V: w. Q" }( T( B/ N* L. k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) \9 k# @: R9 Q5 h. H+ V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' u% ]) H1 @) @0 Q2 A3 g! G7 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, \& V4 X  [; Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. s# v; [  A. _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 E. H. e  J2 v7 h: \- _' F8 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* F7 V; A! R6 W, p+ W4 e: j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 L) M9 R) z! U" ]1 b- d, ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# z. R, }* r& U" c; @( Z; O! k( n' M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ p! R; p, [, z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>