【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 z4 _. L- t! u1 g* @8 Y我另将歌词附在此。
; |! J' k/ i2 j; gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* q: @+ W3 ?( J+ j( ~9 r* w& MI already loved you with all my heart
6 o! g: O: z' @2 oWe meet and talk everyday,
% t$ z1 u0 N( `, P1 pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  e- h, w0 g. b) Z) TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 V$ A* ~: h; h+ `* w0 E: _I want to confess that I love you,
1 P5 m' m+ n! A7 R* GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 P0 p" U1 J- t( I# D& P) u7 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ P8 q1 X0 t' A7 WCan I entrust it to you?
! ?; f; ^+ O& R( G* R" V6 yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" v$ G2 _2 W2 h; U+ ?! X+ q8 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 A% _: G+ u' K  ]I want to confess that I love you,
- Y8 `) E- V& o* WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 y1 r7 W8 C4 B) `) g5 s- B0 I/ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# Z  U+ y3 E, L- ^2 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ V+ z$ o$ G) ]. ?; n9 ]$ YCan I entrust it to you?
- G. b2 W" ]- ~* _Entrust my love within your heart
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# }# O" T* S" _; j$ X- V8 a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; ?* `, J8 [& N6 V, d& p, V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# c2 k2 \! Z$ T+ e4 s8 I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, F* y" n4 N. h  m: y0 Y! [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ \9 K- R# o# g0 G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 ^5 _% p0 f0 q' i% Z5 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% _; E1 ^1 Y+ j1 w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( v% J- G# F, n: S4 {( ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ~+ ?: [. k1 D, D% `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 f7 N+ I+ Z5 w. K, j* m& e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ P$ c( Z1 \- Y8 r% f% }8 s! j* v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# o1 F& ~# l+ q$ C8 V9 L, s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) G  K" D$ T% p. Q/ M7 {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' E, ~3 X+ ~1 i* C! Y! q; R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 j3 `% |4 N/ K1 k3 A6 r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 [: B, @" A9 R7 H/ z' z, K0 D& d- p" e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% v0 V$ e" b+ A3 z* I' m" @- {  e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ t" q$ L2 b6 `4 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' l& I5 R" j# T5 m! M; p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! s6 l, O0 \( L, U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; m9 |7 i0 u9 b, k9 ~7 ~% K2 g. K" }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( i0 z1 h, ]3 F2 f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% l3 F2 q6 L. ]5 P1 L  ~. ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  ^! T# {8 k4 |; F0 \$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ Y# v9 e) D8 X" B7 O: @' B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: E& ^" }$ p% a& u8 n; b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" @$ a6 i+ j" P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, H/ ~: z- p5 @. c) `" I3 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 V0 w( J0 E1 q; Q+ F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* A3 Z. L6 Q9 H' R# s, q9 T/ N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ [1 O. a1 Y* Q3 q5 ^) y8 n$ r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 K% m3 s; G2 p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>