【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
0 h5 Z$ @0 m, aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. l+ ^! Q0 q6 BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 M5 `) l; a7 c6 OFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) p4 i, d" S6 J1 C& R. E, _* SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& _4 j2 D8 b4 \5 tI want to confess that I love you,
! m1 t4 n' G/ \/ _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& S* }8 {$ D' C& e0 u9 |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% z8 ^# P; C( DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ `- X% j' q" kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 `: Y5 x+ H8 X7 v  X" E5 A; E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- V' k" Y3 u& b8 A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: b" k1 S2 ]& n. X# t; o! J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( }. R( I8 u, v& b, X2 [/ c2 k# h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, @, i( D7 B# Z; P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 e: I4 q# U8 R0 s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, Y/ ~2 O" f- y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, y0 {7 A( ^$ r, Z7 E- t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 W' Q5 N9 ~5 I9 q( O; W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: P& N( E0 Y- B" X9 D& F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% Y7 t& n) b/ W9 A% I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" v, d8 A9 S5 l: u# r! s$ m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) i( N: [6 W  ]0 A- n! M/ @0 T0 U7 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 S4 U! ^' T+ J5 I, k8 W7 w% K5 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 Y" t5 t; J7 \& `( x* H6 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( J& Q8 ^$ b5 I+ s1 o9 n7 o& m/ L/ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. m" d2 h! {; Q& }- G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- U+ ~) n- p& ~% A' i' P2 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( v  o# v" L. p. S( U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 m, s8 _$ h1 ?7 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 I. b1 K# \6 h. I) E$ b7 Q" J<P>But I never did </P>
& p, D) o- ?# |; Y( F<P>但我不会 </P>
4 E! y& j+ h, w9 M! u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 C" B! y$ b9 i- u0 C" a) k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ Q- X. m9 c* a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, l" R" |5 B* C" V, b: I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ n% X, t, N3 P5 [1 N( O3 X5 O4 C& f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% w& z+ x9 w, S5 r  a, f) U3 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ?( I! x: y! y  F2 `2 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! z$ _# y# \" M0 {( K: l, t) d6 ?, g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. y$ P' g( y8 C/ j+ w; V: |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ]! V! T/ z' S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* y7 O' Y0 X  x3 ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 h6 g5 {* i3 f1 @& q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- R+ r# Y' G/ F5 p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) |! |! i5 H% }! e9 M0 \* y: F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! B2 M/ z( [6 M4 V! d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, o' U8 m) f6 x( O& ?, a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>