【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% V- D1 W* A4 n7 V我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; D, }# U  \0 ~. L& O/ SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 l0 K8 R; L, F$ b: vI already loved you with all my heart
9 B# {4 w$ V9 ~/ L! C# N" _4 wWe meet and talk everyday,
. E! e0 i4 k7 i7 c( ^5 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ q. K0 K7 ?) U5 z/ p9 v5 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. r9 z0 z, N8 ~8 nI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 X1 k8 z: H' O: t1 `1 Q, {! c0 ]/ WWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ h3 Q. {3 m/ W0 i/ I/ j3 dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! h2 n! F0 K2 ~2 L0 V( d$ N  {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 L/ o. Y. c8 s5 B/ ]2 yI want to confess that I love you,
; G9 A0 j+ G; z4 u- G# D2 D# OBut I never did
6 p7 W- A; L/ i" I) o* d3 g) oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" T6 }7 B2 k  G( C- g$ |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 c, }6 p2 Q! E$ z4 v4 g- d' _  iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 H+ \) l1 J8 [2 OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ s8 w: T7 G; N/ ~- i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 G3 |( x( V  H: u2 }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 B1 X' T3 Z9 Z' n6 [$ H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% B2 X+ K& A3 H- @  k; f1 X3 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" |6 V. Z: U+ A: _( s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& b" P9 I1 I& ^0 E2 Z, }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" d1 W+ j& o$ O, |1 i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ H2 [4 A7 D+ F2 u- E/ J; {, y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) e4 u& B% [8 p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 s1 f$ {4 ~, t$ Q4 I# l) W" G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, G- U. V! d7 `' t# z% D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% k  x! v5 u$ p0 `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* g. r1 K8 f" D! v9 E. Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  k$ D5 H( i# f  p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 k  D$ m2 o3 J. p! m+ ^+ u) M$ @3 n! R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 E9 B5 K/ Y6 Z/ s+ r9 p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 f# b' e8 ]1 m, l7 k. K& B* a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 p( d6 M& |9 @8 B+ g7 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 @3 s! T) [4 J# U5 N* i. e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& Y$ H; ?; P1 F7 d$ _+ X6 E, D7 b<P>但我不会</P>
" m+ s! A  M/ x' i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 t! i2 s8 l% J. V  |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# n8 p  O" i; B0 ?: K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 O$ a4 E; I7 Y8 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  V( b0 V: c2 X7 G7 n! i& C7 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  o* o. `  Q3 k6 ~# |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 ]6 A. f! z1 O7 w5 W8 S$ {2 }8 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" E) F+ X# j: H- f$ C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% x2 r; i: B* R* v/ A+ t$ F! l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 Q  N, Q4 X3 e0 h6 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. w5 ~( r! l0 V5 N- F9 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% C8 g- |0 Q, i- [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, \4 ~+ B- d  H1 J& \/ D: s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ?& q% |$ V2 g5 n4 @( a! p; w% P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  M( `) \8 n  P" l4 q* [  I3 U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; b% l- b7 w5 U9 a; _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  o6 }+ L0 N7 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>