【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& k. ^& L8 `7 S. Y0 j( Y# h我另将歌词附在此。
. @4 E5 X8 u1 \. ^/ \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( i9 m7 h! n- u) YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 I( s! o+ H- E- S% eFrom the first moment we met,
4 J  [0 f+ X& N7 U2 I& MI already loved you with all my heart
6 L) G& h4 C7 |" B1 zWe meet and talk everyday,
- a! R# e3 J6 M, E+ f( MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 X" L. {8 g5 s9 \1 r& w7 v0 FI would probably know how you feel
( {4 A* s  N8 D$ K6 _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 g" S: ?% D% o" T' P  r: ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! I5 s  W' t% l/ Y+ FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! x7 S$ ]6 a' N$ S" HIf today isn’t too late,
- N2 T  i# ?+ U/ ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ e  o% f/ v' t) f* M& \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 }+ f% E( j' ?9 |, J: ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; O4 J( c3 k' i$ g8 `But I never did
- y% B! B0 J# |- J* DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 |4 a5 i& ]* S4 g1 b9 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* _. }* [6 M5 }+ ]Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: V; ~% k' a1 R. g/ WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( k$ P3 i. j9 L" K$ @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ X% _# t4 z( l; W: M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) b: Q1 R( [  s5 P$ g" B, Z! C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ z) k5 `* B4 f5 A! i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* b) I8 o4 V8 W. x/ P! q9 p  `5 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  O# S* c& W' R4 r; E% j+ N7 X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( W* V2 K& t2 `: E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, Y/ r& k- V9 c2 J& n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 W7 m3 z" [- m6 e9 S5 X: T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' B( b+ r' a7 F+ j5 Y" u( b; ]9 |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 K5 ?# C: J- F' Q* E: K( |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 O1 z8 L! W$ l2 O/ V6 ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 S# D: q& F6 [" R# d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 N) j6 n% ^" d% `5 i. A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 z1 e& u. L5 `: U& s. O) ^2 B6 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' s- g3 w( Z# V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( d4 l) C' I- M0 L  K: `/ o<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# Z5 l& U. u3 `  W* d+ |$ Z' j: S3 k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 |, R- Q' Y7 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# ^: ?) ~5 d4 F# m<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ {' `( K0 B' U3 v. p) A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: v: j7 R1 s$ L  Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' k5 w; a( h) i! ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 ]. J# J# E8 K+ N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' \! h& P- ^- W, ~1 w3 Z! p# e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& p7 ]5 b- M) ], D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  ?$ Z8 ?" l3 p, \& F" O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 k8 n4 c1 p; [8 [7 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" T5 _- C# K" c. Y( f4 ]) p8 M% \<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 T( e' a' Z6 h; T5 m1 z" _% B7 y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 l0 a- I7 n0 i- W1 n  u! A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>