【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
. b; W/ K: F) OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( r/ z1 y& m  q1 y1 uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) @. Q* p9 w: }( W1 v: xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ i) Q& O3 N1 ^) l2 S0 h  jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  ^3 v# s: }0 Y5 S! n2 Z( \: yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, i6 O0 A% [* _  }" ^2 D, pI want to confess that I love you,
/ A5 P0 k$ g  _: n, c) gBut I never did
1 W0 A; N( w) j; z9 @2 u* uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, {/ r: \0 t) N6 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 {/ m8 S& Y! _( j! N, yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: B2 i* l# l  X! E5 m" S6 oCan I entrust it to you?
: K# y5 G1 j: P" ~' j& lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ h" B  i  g5 k/ L  f- iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 i, y$ f! W' x; d: PBut I never did
) E1 D4 |6 u' c! S. c+ XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; C- b2 n4 G2 i5 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ N7 ?% X; x, o# h4 q% U8 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ \5 x1 o+ Q1 |5 X. {, SEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; o  D+ z- j6 V  J& _% |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 E6 C2 e) H+ W, I/ \* b  L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 Z* S$ l# H7 d3 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* c2 X  C* K7 V4 F0 K0 ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 k4 g- m( b1 N+ `$ W6 n3 U7 A8 m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ i; r0 g! t& Q6 M% P6 j  V. F4 |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 m# W: }2 n- ~7 Y  s1 |8 \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# |* ?+ B$ h  ]) R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, m* h1 z  E" @<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. d5 u% p# ^/ [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) f- v" N( P9 w8 z, m) S; r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  `, S" g! C, T2 u$ n/ l7 x( i% A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ~1 U6 N- W$ s3 k* ]1 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 b5 o  g0 T4 v$ D. Y9 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: i; @* o/ _* I5 `$ C8 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 D7 G: o7 W8 u, j& j! |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. s- a  L; E  B# X7 x  E" ]  |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 F$ B' r9 n, h; F) q  l0 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# b6 H. c) D* b- [; B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 y! i# y( `3 R5 O9 v<P>But I never did </P>
2 H$ X% N* F/ C# n( a9 g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ C8 J0 x1 V- o0 x3 D! o4 u$ F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" S; i; y( a; {8 {3 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ ~' q7 H. k# f4 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ~6 i$ R2 P. V) q. ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 I. {9 ~/ Z1 {7 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ O* E4 q  @& K' G9 Z* `" S+ p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ?0 y+ @, u/ Z1 }' ?) c0 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- m0 Y6 [0 }* E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* K$ H" g. n3 B. |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>